Chapter 17
Here's some explanations, Talimer and Qui-Gon being friends isn't the reason Qui-Gon's was a maverick. And also, I edited Chapter Three so it no longer says that Anakin's uncle was killed by Master Windu.
And I just started writing a rewrite of Fall of the Chosen One, here's a preview of it written in italics.
Padmé Amidala was losing a fight for her life as she was giving birth to twins. Obi-Wan Kenobi, Yoda and Bail Organa were the witnesses to this bittersweet event. The three looked through a window to see that the Medical droids are operating.
"Does anyone know who's the father?" A medical droid comes up to them and asked
Obi-Wan knew that he shouldn't answer, instead he gone to the right, to watch the birthing alone, he wondered about the twins, and his vision of his future son. If this was one day ago, then he would've said that he didn't have enough of a heart to take care of the twins, but now, he was all for taking care of them, he would adopt them, one of them if not both of the twins.
Padmé gave birth to two twins, Luke and Leia, as she named them. Then, Obi-Wan is allowed to go in, which he does to see the tearful face of the Senator. Obi-Wan kneeled by the hospital bed.
"There's still good in Anakin" Padmé claimed, and then died
"Obi-Wan!" The Jedi Master heard a chilling voice exclaim immediately after Padmé had died. He knew the voice to be Darth Vader, formerly Anakin Skywalker, the one he failed to defeat in Mustafar, Obi-Wan quickly cringed
That's the end of the preview, now let's go to the newest chapter of Yoda's Reformations
Talimer Skywalker was pacing around his bedroom, fearful about what was going to happen. He knew Naboo to be his newly-found niece in law's home planet, but what could they do?
Then Talimer realised that this cruiser and the fleet must go to Naboo for safety measures. He walked out of his quarters, the door sliding open.
Talimer gone out to see his nephew, Anakin Skywalker, standing there.
"Hello uncle" Anakin greeted
"Hello nephew" Talimer greets back and started to walk towards the command central, but is stopped by a hand on his shoulder
"Is there something wrong" Anakin asked
Talimer sighed, he didn't want to answer, but he had to, so he said "The Traditionalists are probably gonna take revenge on us by invading Naboo"
Anakin immediately became concerned and replied "Well let's go!"
Talimer and Anakin ran to the Central Command Station, to see Adenan overseeing all operations going on. Adenan was currently on the right side talking to a Clone Trooper.
"No! No! I said that the main circuits would be concentrated on defence!" Adenan exclaimed at the Clone Trooper
"Yes commander!" The Clone saluted and left
"What happened?" Anakin asked Adenan
"Some guy put the main circuits on the turrets" Adenan answered
Anakin ran towards the Clone to tell him that Adenan's order wasn't needed and they should keep the main circuits concentrated on the turrets. Adenan frowned slightly at that realisation.
"Happens" Talimer chuckled, Adenan groaned in reply. Talimer then became serious and told Adenan "There's a chance that the Traditionalists might invade Naboo, or at least blockade it"
Adenan walked to the middle of the room, to Admiral Yularen. Yularen looked at Adenan as he came forward.
"Go to Naboo" Adenan ordered
"Yes Commander Kornen" Admiral Yularen went to tell a Clone Pilot that exact thing.
A few seconds later, all the stars became lines as the Cruiser jumped to hyperspace, and Adenan felt that the fleet that was behind them had followed them. Adenan smiled because they were actually on the orbit of Malastare before hyperspace, so they got there in just a few minutes. That's when Anakin came back from tracking down the Clone and telling him that Adenan's newest order was unnecessary.
The luscious green and blue planet came in view as Anakin smiled. Adenan mentally cheered since it was similar to Chameta, which, over the years became his second home.
But then they saw three Republic cruisers on the orbit of Naboo. That's when Padmé came to the Central Command Station. She was wearing casual lavender clothes, and holding Luke and Leia, who were looking around from Padmé's arms.
"Good morning, Uncle, Adenan and Ani" Padmé greeted
"Good morning" Adenan greeted back, then noted "We're on Naboo"
"Naboo?" Padmé asked, in surprise, not expecting to go to her home planet
"Hello Padmé" Anakin greeted and continued "We need to go to Naboo, it seems the Traditionalists have blockaded it!"
Meanwhile, Talimer was contacting the other ships, ordering stuff that Anakin couldn't hear. Anakin, Adenan and Padmé went to the hanger, they saw yellow and green Jedi Starfighters, and they also saw the Twilight. The ship was grey, and Adenan recently repaired it, so it was all shiny and looking brand new.
Anakin activated the ramp of the Twilight, and the ramp went down as Anakin walked into the ship, Adenan and Padmé followed Anakin.
Adenan took the co-pilot seat as Anakin took the pilot seat. Padmé sat on the back seat, pushing it left so she was between Adenan and Anakin.
"Well, judging from the bond me and Faro have, the battle started" Adenan told Anakin
"It did" Anakin assured
The Twilight flew from the docks and out into space, where the cruisers were gunning each other and ships were flying and exploding everywhere. Anakin quickly sped to the planet in front of them. It was easy.
Anakin flew into the atmosphere, and then went down to a distance where they could see all the land. Memories of the time they met assaulted Anakin and Padmé, as they smiled in remembrance.
Padmé looked forward to see a house near the lake, she recognised it as her lake house.
"Adenan! Land there!" Padmé instructed
"Ok then" Adenan replied and took over controls, landing the ship on the grassy plains near the lake house
The trio went out with Padmé holding the babies. Adenan was awed at the sight before him, the clean and smooth sand, with waves coming from beside that, and there was also a house.
"So, what now?" Adenan asked them
"I actually don't know" Anakin answered
"Why not head towards Theed, the capital of this planet" Padmé suggested
Anakin and Adenan nodded their heads in agreement as they started walking towards the city. Meanwhile, Master Chi and Faro were fighting Traditionalist Clones, slicing any that came to them.
"Are we still gonna be on war, I really want peace!" Faro ranted
"Well, we must fight to have the peace you really want Faro" Master Chi tried to motivate his Rodian Padawan, as more blast shots headed towards them.
All the Clones stopped shooting as Mace Windu came forward, Master Chi and Faro stopped fighting as Mace's purple lightsaber activated.
"Master Windu!" Master Chi exclaimed and continued "You have nerve to commence this battle!"
"I do. Anyway, I just need Padawans' Sheekano and Kornen's bond to say that I kidnapped Padmé's family" Mace replied
"Wait… what?" Faro asked, as he transmitted what he just heard to Adenan through the force
As Adenan was walking with the Skywalkers, he sensed what Faro transmitted him through the force, he widened his eyes in realisation of what just happened.
"Did the Traditionalists really go that low?" Adenan asked himself, in a volume that everyone heard
"What?" Padmé asked Adenan, confused by his statement
"Your family was kidnapped by the Traditionalists" Adenan answered
"What?!" Anakin shouted
Anakin quickly picked up Padmé, who gave the babies to Adenan, who held them as well as he could. He still hadn't had enough skill to hold babies, but he was cautious this time not to shout.
"No, you didn't do anything wrong" Anakin read his Padawan's mind and answered "Just don't lose the babies while using Force Speed", Anakin warned and Adenan understood the implication
"Can't we just use Force Jump?" Adenan asked
"That's in another dimension" Anakin answered
Adenan would have face palmed if he wasn't holding the babies, and he almost did, but Adenan managed to make them stable on his hands using the Force.
Adenan and Anakin concentrated in the force, and the power granted them high speed, which they used to go to Padmé's parent's house in three seconds.
"That was fast" Adenan commented, as he saw a medium sized house. Padmé went through the arch that led to the house and saw a off-white house standing there, Anakin and Adenan followed. Adenan saw a sign that said 'House of the Naberrie family', Adenan assumed that was Padmé's true family name.
Padmé immediately knew something was wrong when her nieces, Pooja and Ryoo, didn't come out from the house to greet her.
Anakin sensed Padmé's concern and put his hand on her shoulder as Adenan easily opened the door, which made him confused. Adenan went into the house to see entire house messed up. He also saw two children tied up using ropes. Adenan immediately activated his lightsaber. The two children got startled.
"Don't worry, I'm a Jedi" Adenan reassured the two as he put his lightsaber near the rope, the rope burned a bit until Adenan began undoing the entire rope through that ripped part
"Thank you" The older of the two thanked "I'm Ryoo, and this is my younger sister Pooja"
"Hello" The younger shyly greeted and went behind her older sister
"What happened?" Adenan asked
"Well, we were here, playing with each other, then this guy came in, he had no hair, he came in and then took our mommy" Ryoo recounted
"He also took daddy, grand mummy and grand pappy" Pooja supplied
"Oh, are you related to Padmé Amidala?" Adenan asked
"Yeah, she's our auntie" Ryoo answered, much to Adenan's surprise
Adenan rushed out to tell Padmé, Ryoo and Pooja ran after him, Adenan saw Padmé and Anakin talking.
"Master! Padmé!" Adenan called
"Relax Adenan, we're here" Anakin replied, and then he saw Ryoo and Pooja beside Adenan
"Uncle Anakin!" Ryoo exclaimed, and hugged Anakin
"Hello squirt!" Anakin greeted
"Ryoo, Pooja!" Padmé exclaimed, and continued "I was so worried about you both!"
"They say that Mace Windu kidnapped your sister… and parents, I think" Adenan reported, making assumptions, which were actually correct
"Sola… Mom… Dad" Padmé whispered
"It's okay Padmé, we'll save them" Adenan reassured confidently
"Where did they go?" Anakin asked the two Naberrie children, and then asked again more specifically "Where did the bald guy go?"
"They went out of the main gate and then this other guy came along and tied us up, he had horns on his head, and was brown skinned" Ryoo answered
"Great Scott. Agen Kolar" Adenan lifted his head up and whispered, as they all heard footsteps.
It was Agen Kolar, and behind him were Padmé's relatives tied up. Adenan was furious as he realised that the Traditionalists did go that low, he became furious at the realisation that they would stop at nothing to kill them. That made him overprotective of his friends, so Adenan growled at the Jedi Master.
"Agen Kolar" Anakin growled and activated his blue lightsaber
"Anakin Skywalker" Kolar sneered "I knew that you would want to save your pathetic wife's family! That's why we ban attachment!"
Adenan activated his orange lightsaber and exclaimed "Let them go!"
"You are in no position to make demands boy!" Kolar exclaimed back
"Or… am I?" Adenan asked as he charged at the Jedi Master, only to get Force Pushed back to the outer walls of the house they were in front.
Anakin charged at the Jedi Master, resisting a Force Push aimed at him and then brought his weapon at the Jedi Master, who defended it and a slow duel commenced. Adenan stood up, and then saw Padmé. Adenan climbed up the fence, which was pretty short, he then went to behind the duel and untied the other relatives of Padmé the same way he untied Pooja and Ryoo.
"Thank you, young man" A plump, brown haired woman thanked Adenan
"Your welcome" Adenan responded, and continued "We need to get out of here before…"
Adenan was interrupted by a scream "Kornen!", the screamer shouted
Adenan quickly raised his lightsaber and defended himself, he bit his lip as Kolar's strength was dominating him, but he managed to hold himself until Anakin swiftly kicked Kolar on his left shin. While Kolar was distracted, Adenan punched him in the face.
"Padmé! You and your family get out of here!" Anakin ordered his wife
"Come back alive!" Padmé replied, and ran with her family to a safe distance.
They went to a safe distance as they saw Anakin, Adenan and Master Kolar duel each other, with a brilliant show of blue and orange.
"Who's the young man?" Jobal, the woman that thanked Adenan and Padmé's mother asked
"Adenan, he's a student of Anakin's" Padmé answered
"Wow… times change" Ruwee, a brown haired man, and Padmé's father, noted
"Yeah, last time, Anakin was a student himself, and now he's your husband!" Sola, Padmé's sister, who had black hair and was thin, she then teased Padmé with "And you got busy!"
Padmé remembered her babies "Mom, Dad, Sola, Ryoo, Pooja, this is Luke and Leia Skywalker", she introduced, presenting her babies
"They're so cute!" Jobal squealed
"Yeah, they are" Padmé replied
"We're proud Padmé" Ruwee laughed
Meanwhile, Anakin and Adenan were duelling the Zabrak Jedi Master Agen Kolar as Padmé hoped that they will get out of this battle intact and alive.
Hopefully you readers enjoyed both the preview and the chapter! Tell me in the reviews how the preview looks, and if that scene is better than the original Fall of the Chosen One. Anyway, if you don't know Padmé's family, they're Canon, in a deleted scene of Episode II and you can see a small shot of them in Padmé's funeral in Episode III. NEXT CHAPTER: THE NABERRIES