I know that this chapter is actually way too short. I might change it later on when I do the revision after the story is finished but for now it stays like this. I'm honestly not really satisfied with how this turned out, same with the last chapter. Well, Shout-outs:
Exposer: I totally understand your point. I wasn't satisfied with how Chapter 5 turned out but decided to leave it like it was. Like I said above, I'm planning to revise the whole story when it's finished and then hope to make this chapter better.
Enjoy!
The Light Fury
(In the forest, Toothless is wandering around searching for something. He uses his smell to sense where it is. He walk further and further into the forest until he spots a white female night fury laying down in a part of the forest. The dragon turns around and spots Toothless, angry at first. Toothless gets scared but then tries to gain her trust and walks closer to the dragon. They stare at each other until a snap is heard and the dragon shoots a plasma blast at a tree. Hiccup and Astrid arrive at the forest.)
„Wow, she's beautiful." Fishlegs awed from in front of me.
„Yeah, she is beauty, she is grace. She will punch you in the face." I remarked.
„What?" Fishlegs turned around, confused.
I laughed. „You'll see later."
Hiccup: Oh my Gods.
(Suddenly, the dragon spots the humans and shoots a plasma blast at them.)
I could hear several people shriek.
Astrid: Uh, Hiccup!
(Astrid just about manages to push Hiccup out of the way of the blast and they get thrown far but still survive the blast. The dragon is about to shoot another plasma blast but Toothless stops her.)
Followed my relieved sighs.
Hiccup: Yeah. You know we're friends! No need to kill us.
(However, the white night fury gets scared and flies away from them. Toothless tries to approach her by climbing the trees. But then the dragon fires a plasma blast and flies through it, turning invisible, also making Toothless upset.)
Hiccup: Wow!
Astrid: Another night fury!
Hiccup: Oh not quite. It's more like a... bright-
Astrid: A light fury!
„And there you have the name of the dragon." Tamina stated.
Hiccup: Yeah. Yours is better, probably.
Toothless in Love
(Scene changes back at Berk with all the dragon riders.)
„Where is this?"Astrid asked curiously.
„That's the dragon hangar. It was built about two or three years earlier when Berk's dragons were increasing in numbers and needed somewhere to live."
Snotlout: What do you mean, gone?
Hiccup: Vanished! Into thin air.
Fishlegs: What do you think?
(Fishlegs shows Hiccup a drawing of what he thinks the Light Fury looks like.)
Hiccup: Uh uh. Stubbier ears, no dorsal plates.
(Hiccup hands the drawing back to Fishlegs.)
Fishlegs: Okay, got it.
„What am I doing? What is this card?"
„You've been working on creating dragon stats cards to have every information available at all times. It's quite a collection by now." Tamina explained.
Eret: Ha ha. What a night.
(Toothless appears and pushes Hiccup. Lots of saliva is sticking out of his mouth.)
Hiccup: What-what's gotten into you? What is all this... slobbering and panting?
Astrid: Isn't it obvious? He's in love!
„Urgh, what happened to me?" Astrid asked in disgust.
„You found your girly side." I replied, which earned me a punch.
Hiccup: Trust me, relationships are nothing but pain and misery.
(He directed it to Toothless, but Astrid hears it and punches Hiccup.)
Astrid: Ugh.
Hiccup: What did I just say? Am-am I not enough?
(Toothless walks away and spots two Deadly Nadders who are showing love for each other. He gets excited and runs closer.)
Tuffnut: I think that's a no.
(Toothless watches the Deadly Nadders.)
(Fishlegs shows Hiccup another sketch of the Light Fury.)
Fishlegs: Something like this?
Hiccup: You know what? Just trace your Toothless card and make her white.
(Hiccup hands the drawing back to Fishlegs.)
Fishlegs: You could have lead with that...
„Why didn't you say that from the beginning?" Fishlegs asked almost in time with his on-screen self.
Astrid: Can you believe it? Toothless has a girlfriend!
Hiccup: I never took you for a romantic. Like, ever!
Astrid: But it's so sweet. I mean, look!
„Urgh" Astrid gagged at her on-screen self's behaviour.
(Toothless flirts with his own shadow on a wall in the same way the two Deadly Nadders were. He strokes his face on the wall and pushes his head towards it.)
Tuffnut: Oh. Okay. That's just sad... and weird.
Ruffnut: Yeah, you better do something.
Snotlout: Seriously? I'd rather shovel poop all day than watch that.
Hiccup: Alright. Let's head back to the woods and see if we can find her.
(As Toothless hears that, he quickly looks at Hiccup and shows his excitement by running around.)
Tuffnut: Ah. Good idea!
„Yeah! It's Tuff-time!" the male twin exclaimed, standing up in his chair.
(Tuffnut walks with Hiccup with his arm over Hiccup's shoulder.)
Tuffnut: Right. Let's see.
Hiccup: Uhhh...
Tuffnut: Shh. It's boy talk!
Hiccup: What?
What do you say? I personally think this chapter turned out a bit better than the last one but still isn't as good as it could be.
I'm honestly searching for kind of a beta reader to help me get the chapters to where I want them and to proof-read the story. If you're interested you can either tell me in the reviews or dm me. I appreciate it.
See you next time.
