Hey everybody this is my first ever fanfic so I would appreciate it if you tell what you think about it.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything related to Naruto and all rights are reserved to Masashi kishimoto.
Warning this is a Naruto x mei x hinata fic, not sure if i should make it a harem fanfic tho but if i feel i can smoothly add other girls i might give it a try. Several changes to canon throughout.
In Naruto's mindscape
"Tell me,why do you choose to resist ,despite knowing there's no hope for your existence anymore" the shadow taunted the fox as he dodged slap's thrown at him.
"I am the mighty kyuubi no kitsune, the strongest of all the bijuu's. If you think i'm going to be destroyed by a weakling like you, then your sadly mistaken " kyuubi responded then reared his head back as his mouth opened wide, throwing it forward with a mighty roar.
*Raaawwww*
A large amount of fire flared out his mouth like a flame thrower, engulfing a large portion of the room.
Laying on the floor under the water Naruto watched the ongoing battle, he couldn't help but think about what the shadow had said to the fox.
"..."
"What drives me,all my life i have been ridiculed, abused , lied to, yet despite all that i refuse to give up, for what purpose ?...acceptance?, no no no ,to prove them wrong ?" Naruto questioned himself after hearing what the shadow was telling the fox
" I see, so it's your pride that keeps you from giving up" the shadow man said dodging more fireballs the fox spat at him, as he threw spears made of a more solid version of the black goo substance towards the fox.
"Deadlast"
"Dobe"
"Demon scum"
'No!!, It's not about them anymore, it's about... fulfilling my dreams,yes!! and making them regret what they did to me' Naruto thought feeling a little better now that he came to a suitable conclusion. With the yin half gone all those stupid sentimental feelings towards the 'village' had dwindled down to nothing, he now worked on a policy of good for good and bad for bad.
'yes, now I have a clearer image of things ' Naruto concluded standing up in the water with his feet planted firmly on the floor.
'Now then how do i stop that guy' yang naruto said trying to come up with an effective plan to finish off the shadow
" Everything started when..." He relaxed himself as he let his mind recall everything from his last visit by Mui to the current day.
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Feeling the release from the shackle reaching him Naruto smirked as he got up chuckling mentally 'I see so his work was to weaken me mentally and physically so he could get in an obtain easy control by absorbing my essence '
'But still, considering the fact that i still don't have access to my chakra, i'm assuming my chakra coils have been eaten completely, and the fact that i'm still feeling the effects of whatever that boy did to me despite the fox chakra constantly killing foreign substance in my body it's clear that i have to go after the source of this situation to end everything'
'Muku... after all he's the one who put this thing in me, he would know how to take it out'
'Muku had a good plan, but he was stupid as he attacked my yin half, and because of that felt he already had obtained control, only seeing me as a minor obstacle in the plan. He obviously did not know that currently most of the control in our mind was already in the hands of the yang half.' Naruto thought feeling a bit happy that the shadow underestimated him as this had given him an idea.
Watching the fight Naruto began formulating a plan while watching for an opening.
Some minutes later
The shadow man had eventually restrained the fox and was bragging about it.
Seeing a good chance when the fox tilted its neck to fire a beast bomb at the shadow man,Naruto quickly set his plan into motion
Forming a huge arm made out of the black substance the shadow man used it to grab hold of the weakened beast ball the fox fired at him.
His victory was cut short as multiple black chains with spikes flew out from below the water piercing and wrapping around him,constraining his limbs.
Frowning at this, he tried to move but it didn't work. Things were looking bad for him now with the sudden release of chakra into Naruto's system, the fox had gained its yokai back and Naruto would too seeing as the seal is broken. But his chakra was still null as the muku placed in him had already eaten his chakra coil, only leaving necessary points meaning he was making use of the yokai gained from the fox. The fox didn't need chakra coils as he is a being of chakra, he could simply use Naruto's bones or flesh for constant chakra flow.
Naruto slowly stood up from the water as if nothing happened to him. Walking towards his prey Naruto ignored the looks of surprise on the shadow face.
"H-how" he stuttered confused, he had just killed the boy how was he still alive and what were these chains,why couldn't he phase through them
"Only a fool would be killed in their own mind" ignoring his question Naruto said plainly dissing his now dead yin half.
Growling lightly knowing that Naruto had already figured out his plan,muku tried to come up with a plan B quick.
" Still you really had me fooled there, acting like you're the one in control when your just a simple servant here to prepare a room for your beloved queen" Naruto said with a bit of humor while watching as the shadow began struggling.
"Hahaha you finally understand, but it's too late for you to do anything" the shadow man said trying to put on a brave act, but was failing as he was a bit worried feeling the tip of the base on his chest.
"Really ?" Naruto said giving him an evil grin which put everyone on edge as he stabbed his hand into the shadows chest, moving it in slowly until he held the orb within his grasp.
"Because the way i see it, this is just the beginning " Naruto concluded as he pulled the orb straight out of the shadows chest smiling as he watched it glow brightly giving the world a good view of it.
Naruto tightened his grip watching the shadows facial expression change into that of pain, smiling he squeezed it tighter watching as it shattered releasing thick white mist which danced in the air for a while before it quickly moved into Naruto's nostrils and mouth.
The chains binding the shadow fell into the water as the body of the shadow crumbled into a heap of the some black sand now that it's core was destroyed.
Staring at the boy who now had black tattoos appearing on his body with a worried expression, kyuubi who was now free of the binding was beginning to fear that now Naruto absorbed the shadow he would be a lot harder to kill.
Stealing one last glance at where his parents were previously, Naruto's eye focused on the kyuubi staring at him firmly he said "so are we doing this or what"
Cautiously walking towards Naruto the fox stopped to stare when he saw him making hand seals before slamming his palms on the water . The water rippled from the impact of his hands, then suddenly the whole walls in the room shook and a low voice whispered " Hunt down Muku".
Naruto was sure that the fight with the kyuubi would be hard, so rather than fight the kyuubi and hope his body would still be okay to fight Muku, who was probably waiting for him outside, he sent a command to his brain, thus the voice that echoed.
Getting into a boxing stance, Naruto hardened his gaze as he focused on the bijuu in front of him.
Meanwhile outside naruto's mindscaoe
"Where are you goi-" Ryūzetsu was about to question before quickly noticing his eye. 'somethings not right' Ryūzetsu thought.
trying to pin point the location where he sensed the enemy. He paid no attention to the sounds of explosions nor the pain in his body as his mind was on one thing alone.
"Naruto kun it's not safe" hinata said in a worried tone as she cautiously moved closer to him.
"Yes tsunade Sama and the others would handle him, there's no need to get involved " Sakura said when she noticed he was looking directly towards the boy who tsunade and the others were fighting.
staggering towards the battlefield Naruto's body began to release steam as the chakra of the fox attempted to heal his injuries,but was failing.
"he can't hear us" kurenai said already noticing that he was somehow was unconscious.
Glancing at the single chakra tail 'could it be possible that the fox has taken control' kurenai thought with a frown knowing that if that was the situation things would be a lot harder for them.
"So what, you can't just leave him like that, you have to stop him" Ryūzetsu shouted at them when she saw the defeated look on their faces.
"Be quiet please" Sai said calmly moving the blade closer to her throat which made her gulp in fear.
"I agree with her... kurenai sensei we have to do something" hinata said with a bit of determination.
Meanwhile with Muku
Standing on the roof of a damaged building was Muku who had been dodging attacks by these four for quite a while now. Earlier he had been distracted when he stopped sensing the chakra he imbedded in Naruto.
'Apparently the attackers had others who had taken the opportunity to free the binds of the boy while i was occupied' Muku thought annoyed as he dodged punches by kakashi.
sensing killer bee coming from his back Muku's arm snapped backwards, dislocating from his shoulder in the process as he grabbed bee by the hand and threw him into tsunade who was about to punch him from above.
Seeing her attack was going to hit bee, tsunade withdrew her fist and instead tried to grab bee.
Slamming into tsunade all bee could do was brace himself from the impact, luckily he didn't have to do much as tsunade cushioned his fall
"the hell is that" yamato muttered shocked from what muku had just done. Yamato then went through sequence of hand seals before shouting "earth style:earth spear jutsu" which fired three spears made out of earth at Muku.
seeing the incoming attack kakashi quickly jumped backwards , making hand seals quickly "fire style: fireball jutsu" he fired a huge ball of fire at murky
A blushing bee quickly stood up from tsunade trying to regain his composure as he apologized for what happened, not trying to seem like a perv.
Ignoring him tsunade turned to stare at the combined attacks of Yamato and kakashi with hope that it at least did some damage .
"Hahahah nice trick" they heard a voice say in the smoke.
"What?" Yamato said in disbelief, they had been trying to land solid hits on the boy, but he had constantly avoided them and what made it worse was the fact that sometimes he wasn't even facing them, so then how was he still able to counter their attacks
"this is getting annoying" bee said getting annoyed as he charged into the smoke with lightening coating his body
"I agree" Kakashi replied as they watched bee run through the boy who dissolved into black smoke and reformed immediately as the attack ended
'His abilities are really becoming a pain dealing with, not only does he have absolute control over his body but he can also somehow make himself tangible' tsunade thought trying to come up with a better way to defeat the boy.
Turning her head tsunade's eyes widened when she noticed Naruto who was awake and walking towards their location with his focus being on the boy
"We have to keep both of them apart" tsunade shouted getting the attention of the others as they resumed their joint attack
Glancing at Naruto an evil grin sneaked it's way to muku's face as if he had found something even more entertaining
"Come to me, Uzumaki " muku said still looking at Naruto as he dodged their joint attacks
Frowning at this kakashi glances at the approaching Naruto thinking 'what's he up to'.
Stopping as if he heard what muku said, naruto's breathing became heavier as thick steam flowed out his mouth and nostrils. Growling like an animal two extra tails made of the kyuubi's chakra quickly materialized on Naruto who changed his stance and like a bullet he dashed towards muku leaving a crater behind him
Taking a huge leap out of the way of another lariat by bee, they had given him an opening and he wasn't going to waste it playing with them. Rotating his body muku turned towards naruto's direction as he let himself free fall off the building.
"Your not getting away that easy " Yamato said as he followed muku ,but instead of jumping off the building, he dashed along the sides using chakra to stick on the building body.
Throwing kunais and shuurikens at muku, Yamato smiled as some hit their target but sadly seemed to have no effect on his opponent.
Rearing his fist back Naruto threw a punch that would have connected to Muku's head,had he not dissolved into a cloud of black smoke. Quickly rotating around to continue his attack, Naruto failed to notice the remaining thread of black smoke behind him that solidified around his neck , swinging him muku tossed him into a nearby building breaking the glass and everything.
About to follow up on Naruto, Muku was forced to dodge a punch by tsunade which destroyed the ground on impact , the others took this as an opportunity to flood him with attacks and Jutsu's which he narrowly escaped.
Staggering to his feet the broken bones of Naruto slowly snapped back into place, mending themselves as an extra tail grew out of him ,grabbing onto the thread Naruto pulled it towards himself harshly .Muku who was about to land a painful punch to the belly of hinata was pulled into the building where he was immediately greeted by a fist to his face which sent him flying backwards.
Pulling muku towards him again Naruto followed up his attack with more punches raining knuckles on the demon and when muku tried to block he would start using his leg
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Muku sneered in frustration as Naruto wasn't giving him time and space to dematerialize out of his attacks, he continued blocking the attacks tho it was difficult as naruto was unconscious so he couldn't predict his moves(how Satori's ability works:its body can detect fear and bloodlust , which causes it to instinctively dodge essentially all attacks from opponents who have any fear in them or who desire to kill him. This ability, combined with its surprisingly agile reflexes, allows it to dodge all of the attacks from the entirety, here it doesn't work as naruto is basically unconscious, and fighting using instincts)
Seeing an opening muku took it,deflecting Naruto's approaching fist away from him, he kicked naruto's leg backwards making him lean forward immediately breaking his stance.
A hand came out of Muku's spinal cord grabbing Naruto by his shirt, tossing him into the tables and chairs in the room. Rushing, muku dashed toward Naruto kicking him in the stomach with so much force that Naruto puked out blood and was even lifted high off the floor making him break the ceiling of the room.
Wasting no time Muku jumped up leaving the team of shinobi's who just arrived to search for them. Grabbing the airborne Naruto by the neck, muku spun around throwing him through another wall, which broke upon impact.
Looking at the battered and bleeding body of Naruto, Muku chuckled loudly watching an extra tail grow on Naruto making it five. The body of muku began ripping to shreds, the bones of his shoulders dislocated swinging violently while elongating untill his hands could basically touch where his feet were.
His neck snapped breaking,it swung weird directions making the skin around the area of the adam's apple to tear open making blood to gush out as black tendrils erupted from where his throat was wrapping around his face
"what the hell is that" bee said loudly, saying what was on everyone's mind as they stared at the transforming boy in horror.
Moving his elongated hands to his face he covered it with his hands while moving his upper body backwards, he laughed loudly then quickly bowed his upper body as two black objects pierced through his back tearing the skin apart as they became huge black wings even a tail stretched out from his spine.
"Satori, the guardian of the box" Ryūzetsu who had followed them said as she frowned at what her childhood friend had become.
"this isn't looking good at all" kakashi said understanding the situation immediately.
The rest of his body followed along dislocating and getting covered by the black tendrils. Removing his hands from what seemed like his face, which was only a mouth with bones protruding and the tendrils seemed to change into black feather which covered his body.
"We have to end him now" tsunade said making them sprint towards Naruto, while others threw kunai's to distract Satori but he ignored them.
chuckling darkly satori dashed into Naruto who had just managed to get up from the floor. walls after walls muku used his body to completely demolish what remained of the buildings in the prison.
flying recklessly into objects satori used Naruto as a sort of human shield to destroy everything in his path.
"follow them, we have to find a way to get them down here" tsunade said as she ran outside following satori.
Meanwhile in Naruto's mindscape
Using a huge sledge hammer, Naruto slammed it with all his power into the kyuubi's approaching hand, upon impact the left wrist of the kyuubi shattered into dark mist that was absorbed into the hammer.
*Grrawwwrr*
The huge fox roared loudly at Naruto stumbling to balance himself for another attack. Taking huge leaps backwards to create a good distance from Naruto, he then inhaled a huge amount of air as steam escaped from it's mouth, then it fired numerous beast bombs at naruto while in the air.
Naruto who had followed the kyuubi was doing his best to avoid getting hit by the approaching multiple mass of yokai.
Gripping the hand of the hammer tightly it glowed as it changed into a huge two headed axe.
Throwing it at the airborne fox the axe sliced through a beast ball as it sailed towards the beast at an alarming speed.
seeing no way to fully dodge the attack since it was still in air, the fox tilted it's body sideways, almost evading the hit. But the axe sliced through the right shoulder separating it, only leaving behind a bleeding stump.
Crashing roughly the fox used the remains of his left hand to try and balance itself as it stared at its separated limb which was twitching on the floor.
"submit or die" Naruto said calmly looking at the growling fox who was shifting it's gaze from the arm on the floor to the bleeding shoulder.
He had no intention of harming it, after all the fox was the main reason why he was still alive up till now in the first place. But then it wouldn't have agreed to form a mutual partnership should he suggest it.
"Grrrr you insolent brat, i will devour what remains of your pitiful existence" kyuubi said loudly with rage in his voice as it used it's left wrist to balance it's upper body firmly.
frowning at this Naruto took a step as many copies of him materialized from nowhere, with each of them holding a javelin in their hand.
The Kyuubi launched forward, making some of the clones with the original leap away while the others that were slow to escape got squashed from his weight.
Swinging its tails wildly the fox attacked all of naruto's clones destroying numerous of them, roaring loudly steam oozed out of the the kyuubi's mouth as thick flames poured out engulfing some clones that attempted to subdue it
"Aaah" numerous clones cried out loudly dripping into the water as their body melted into oil.
Seeing their fallen brothers they watched as the numbers of the clones dwindled quickly as the fox brought its tails down on them , walking on them like they were mere insects.
Deciding it was best to keep their distance they separated into teams, one being close range and the other long range distance clones who were throwing javelins at the mighty fox.
Quickly moving his gaze from one Naruto to another when he noticed their change of tactics the fox was looking for the original. Luckily it wasn't that hard spotting the leader as he was standing still watching him closely, most likely trying to come up with a good plan.
Growling in anger the fox launched towards his prey.
Outside Naruto's Mindscape
Scrubbing Naruto's head into a building, satori focused on keeping his distance from the others on the floor.
Struggling against the hold Naruto attempted to get a proper grasp on satori, but was finding it impossible as satori now a lot larger than he was before.
Growling loudly in frustration, the body of Naruto suddenly exploded with a lot of kyuubi chakra leaking out,satori quickly tossed Naruto away from him as a pillar of dark red light blasted off into the sky, hitting the middle of the clouds darkening the environment.
"Rrrwwwww"
Naruto screamed as the remaining skin on his body peeled off, exposing dark red chakra that consumed his body with bone like structures of a fox figure materializing on his form.
Thrashing wildly, Naruto roared as a new tail made of the kyuubi's chakra formed from the end of his spine, gripping the top of the building Naruto was on all fours as he let out a mighty roar.
*Rrrrrrwwwwww*
Panting loudly, he opened his mouth wide firing numerous balls of yokai at the flying satori.
Finding it difficult to dodge the yokai balls, satori decided that staying in the air would put him at a disadvantage. Luckily he found out how wrong he was when he landed on the floor.
Watching satori land a good distance away from him on the floor, Naruto leaned his body forward as he shot off the building destroying half the roof in the process.
Boom
Staring with their mouth open from what they just witnessed. The konoha shinobi could only watch the level of destruction Naruto was causing to the environment as balls of yokai flew rapidly destroying everything.
Boom
Boom
"Naruto kun" hinata muttered lowly watching as a building hit by the yokai ball crumbled. 'So this is the power you hold' she knew that under normal circumstances she should be afraid of him but instead she felt admiration at his ability to hold such power and never give in to it.
"If this keeps up we won't be able to restrain Naruto" Yamato said getting worried about fighting a full biiju
"But what can we do, if we go in to restrain him the boy might use this as an opening to take over his body" Kakashi said staring at the fight with his sharingan
'This is the power of a jinjurikin' kurenai thought in fear as she watched a ball of yokai crash into one of the watch towers in the prison making it fall on some of the prisoners attempting to escape. Taking a quick glance at bee kurenai couldn't help but worry bout what he was feeling seeing this.
Getting no time to land a good hit satori was taking more and more hits from Naruto which seemed to be coming from all directions.
'such power...should never exist in the hands of lowly humans' satori thought with amusement as arms made out of chakra tore through the floor attempting to hit him with huge stones.
Jumping out of the way satori attempted to take a tactical retreat into the sky, but was not expected the arms to stretch far off the ground and grab hold of him as many more arms rushed to securely restrain him.
Muku struggled attempting to free himself from the tight grip of the yokai arm but was failing.
Willing the yokai arms to bring satori towards him Naruto walked on all fours towards satori as his body gave off a large amount of steam with yokai dancing off his body.
Satori was beginning to get more worried, it made no sense how Naruto was this strong despite his body already being this damaged.this has never happened before' satori thought upset about the fact that his new body was slipping through his fingers.
"Hahahahah such magnificent display of power, Uzumaki you truly are a worthy vessel...I shall enjoy my time in you" satori lamented as he shot tendrils out of his body that stabbed into Naruto who made no attempt to dodge.
Satori was surprised as naruto was still approaching him, pushing through the tendrils as if they were nothing.
Saying nothing Naruto stretched his hand making the tendril around it stretch before ripping apart, he gripped muku by the neck slowly lifting him off the floor.
Opening his mouth exposing total darkness ,Naruto dove in quickly biting satori straight at the jugular, ignoring his gasps, Naruto began sucking and swallowing the chakra and blood from Muku.
"W-what" muku choked out utterly confused as his body jerked trying to hold onto the little of its essence.
The rest of the shinobi stopped running and watched dumbfounded by what Naruto was doing. Draining Muku of his life force Naruto took continuous gulps of the demons essence until non remained, then he let the body slip from his grip landing like a log of wood.
Swaying Slightly they watched as the fox chakra slowly withdrew and Naruto stood back up on his two legs. He still looked the same way he had when they had first seen him, with his whole skin being melted off his clothes being torn allowed them to see his organs a bit clearly.
Frowning as he stared at the heart of Naruto which was beating rapidly, probably from the adrenaline that the biiju power gives off. Bee couldn't help but feel sad about the fact someone so young hand to experience so much of this
Turning to look at the surprised shinobi's Naruto swayed back and front as if he was going to fall down. His eye ball rolled from the top of his head to signal his awakening.
"what do you traitors want ?" Naruto said in an angry tone as he glared a them, which made them pause in surprise.
"Naruto we know your upset, at least listen to what Tsunade sama has to say first" sakura said in a defensive tone as she took a step towards him, but he took one backwards. Tsunade had explained to them that there was a possibility he would be upset with them since he didn't know about the mission, but this was different he was showing hostility towards them.
"I could care less what she has to sa-"he suddenly stopped then gripped his chest in pain as he puked a large amount of blood.
Silently watching as a large amount of blood poured out of his exposed rib cage ,the shinobi's felt fear knowing that if satori was dead and Naruto was still being affected by his Jutsu then there was nothing they could do to help him.
Biting his lip, blood dropped as he attempted to numb the pain but it was quickly becoming too much harder. Getting confused at what was happening Tsunade was about to suggest healing him, but the tattoos on him began moving round his body as if they had a life of their own.
Breathing harshly Naruto tried to regain his composure, but that ended shortly as he screamed loudly exploding in a mass of black goo which oozed out thick smoke.
They all jumped back to keep their selves safe from whatever the substance was.
...
Looking around they found the whole area where Naruto stood destroyed with the goo melting everything like some kind of acid, but they didn't see him around at all.
"What the hell just happened" bee said confused as he glanced at the other shinobi's noticing their look of shock
"hinata...scan the area for him" Tsunade who had been quietly observing him throughout his conversation with sakura finally spoke.
Clasping her palms together hinata concentrated hard as she scanned around for any thing, but there was no single trace of him.
"Nothing" hinata said confused as she tried checking again, but came to the same conclusion.