Hey everybody this is my first ever fanfic so I would appreciate it if you tell what you think about it.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything related to Naruto and all rights are reserved to Masashi kishimoto.
Warning this is a Naruto x mei x hinata fic, not sure if i should make it a harem fanfic tho but if i feel i can smoothly add other girls i might give it a try. Several changes to canon throughout.
Unknown location
It's been a week into the war and rather than place us on the frontlines, they have us doing guard duty" Suigetsu complained loudly as they walked through the Stoney hallway.
"Shut it Suigetsu baka ...Sasuke kun was in a vulnerable state, it was necessary we watched over him" Karin said loudly while waving her fist dangerously at suigetsu's direction
"I agree with Kari-" juugo said butting in but was cut off by Suigestu
"Of course you do, it's obvious your just scared of her" Suigetsu said pointing an accusing finger at juugo
"Regardless, sasuke is our leader and what we did was the right thing " juugo said idly looking at the ceiling.
"You three stay here, I'm going in" Sasuke said as he walked through another hallway before arriving at a door which he pushed, slowly openly it.
"That's when-" the occupants of the room immediately cut their conversation to stare at the new visitor
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"What is he doing here?...and why is my brothers corpse here?" sasuke said in a threatening tone already feeling his anger upon walking into the chamber. He had been away recovering from his eyes exchange making him miss the battle and now this was what he stumbled upon.
"Nice to meet you again Sasuke kun" Kabuto said smiling brightly making it seem like he didn't notice sasuke's tone.
"He is the ally we discussed about earlier, he has been supplying us with the needed man power and sadly your brother falls under that category, besides one would think that you would be happy to meet your dear brother again" Tobi answered easily seeing no problem in what they were doing.
"Oh and sasuke I would appreciate it if you and your team head towards the battlefield to support the others, it seems the enemy is more troublesome than we anticipated " Tobi said
Hardening his gaze at the man sasuke said nothing before turning and walking. Stopping halfway out the room he glanced at Kabuto before slamming the door shut
Bang!!
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"You should keep a closer eye on him" Kabuto who had been watching silently said.
"Your input on how I treat my subordinates is unnecessary but noted, now then as you were saying" Tobi said changing the topic
With Sasuke
"Yo sasuke everything good" Suigetsu said noticing sasuke's more threatening aura as he stepped out the hallway.
"Prepare... we'll be moving soon" sasuke said ignoring Suigetsu as he walked pass them
Meanwhile with the Kages
"Hokage Sama"
"Hokage Sama"
"Huh...what were you saying shikaku" Tsunade said regaining her thought while she discretely looked at the occupants in the room who were staring at her confused.
"Raikage sama suggested that now the enemy is sending out more of their major forces it would be a good idea for the rest of the kages to join in, so far everyone else has agreed to the plan, that is except you..." shikkaku said
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"I see no problem with that...besides what sort of leaders are we if we hide while our subordinates do most of the work" Tsunade said a bit happy that she could finally ditch the boring meetings and battle strategy planning
"Let's show those youngsters how a proper battle is handled " Onoki said with a cheeky smirk
Some hours later
With Onoki and gaara at the battlefield
"Summoning jutsu (Kuchiyose no jutsu)" second tsuchikage said loudly as he slammed his palm into the sandy below creating an array on seals on it.
The sand began rising as a coffin arose with its lid falling open instantly
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"Finally, looks like he managed to groom the brat nagato" Madara Said stepping boldly out of the coffin
"If I'm not mistaken you are..."Madara mused in surprise seeing a somewhat familiar person
"The user of the reanimating jutsu has a keen understanding of war" second tsuchikage said
"This chakra" inoichi said confused about its sudden appearance , glancing at another point in their chakra detection field he slowly gulped before warning gaara and the tsuchikage over the threat nearby
"The second tsuchikage didn't we seal him away" gaara questioned confused
"No this chakra it's not him..." a sensory ninja nearby said frowning but then Madara slowly walked out standing idly staring at them all
"Madara Uchiha " Onoki said announcing the identity of the new foe
"But then who is the other person ,the one in the mask" gaara said worried
"It does seam like we are at war...Their head bands says shinobi, but their uniforms are from all the five nations "Madara stated while watching closely. 'Must be some new form of soldiers' Madara concluded
The second tsuchikage suddenly started twitching "I'm Kabuto " he said making Madara look at him
"Speaking to me through a puppet, your a sneaky one" Madara said feelings the little respect he had for the man who revived him dwindle
"Your re-animation is quite special Uchiha Madara, You are now even more than you were in your glory days" second tsuchikage said
"You know what I was like during my glory days" Madara questioned moving his gaze from the shinobi below him to look at the second tsuchikage
Before the second tsuchikage could respond a large amount of sand moved their way causing them to jump off the rock swiftly away from the attack.
Gaara narrowed his eyes and tensed as he watched Madara land on the ground making everyone tense.
Staying in the air the second tsuchikage observed as the battle progressed. ' why isn't he doing anything ' kabuto thought watching through the eyes of the second tsuchikage as madara stood looking idly at the crowd of soldiers who stood before him
(Writing this battle is impossible, honestly I doubt I can write anything as thrilling as the actual fight so I'm just going to skim through it real quick :3)
Taking a step forward he began walking towards them, those few steps immediately turned into a full blown sprint
Many nervously shifted their feet back, while some mentally convinced themselves to stay put.
"Do not look directly into his eyes!" Onoki warned.
"Ahhhhh" members of the army screamed psyching theirselves as they too charged at madara
Running into the crowd of soldiers madara began his assault ,laying waste to whatever stood in his path.
"Sensory types! watch lord Mu!" Onoki said loudly
"Wait "
"Gaara you and lord tsuchikage must recover first, we would handle the rest" Temari said stopping Gaara from doing anything else
Bodies
Bodies
Bodies
The advantage the shonobi alliance had in numbers seemed meaningless as madara was disposing of their soldiers as if they were nothing, with the number of dead bodies increasing at a frightening amount with each passing minute.
"You want to dance too?"
A ninja struggled within Madara's grasp on his neck. He cursed at his failed attempt to strike the legendary Uchiha.
Tightening his grip madara suffocated the man quickly,
Hearing the strange sound of whistling madara twisted snatching the flying weapon that sailed towards him, spinning around he stuck the tag on a nearby ninja while kicking him away towards his comrades. Madara then threw the kunai back to where it came from surprising the ninja as it stuck him in his head.
Trying his best to peel off the tag the ninja was unsuccessful as it went off igniting a large explosion which killed a few and injured others close to him.
Ignoring the huge explosion that occurred madara dashed into the next group of shinobi's near him prepared to dispose of them quickly.
Suddenly a powerful blow of wind infused with charka blew Madara off his set course , causing him to fly miles away.
"Do not underestimate me!" Temari yelled and prepared her fan for another blow.
Madara got to his feet and wiped the dust off his shoulder as if the attack was nothing.
Seeing this, Temari glared at him and gripped on her fan tighter.
Madara went through a hand seal, then he announced "Katon Gouka Mekkyaku( fire style: majestic destroyer flame)" and with a gentle breath, a massive flame surrounded the shinobi alliance.
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"His jutsu is enormous "some random ninja shouted while backing away in fear
"Water style:wall of water" the water ninjas announced as they quickly rushed to the frontlines using their jutsu to defend the others.
Staring in awe many watched as a single persons move weighed down on 12 others even when he was at a disadvantage they were still finding it difficult overpowering him.
A clash between the two opposing elements died down flossing the entire battlefield with steam making it difficult to see a thing
The cloudly steam covered the battleground so quickly, no one could see what was around them.
Shielding their eyes from the steam the soldiers of the shimonoseki alliance had little time to react as numerous fireballs penetrated the steam consuming them.
Meanwhile at the allied forces HQ
"Tsuchikage sama and kazekage Sama are battling a powerful opponent, his identity has been confirmed to be Uchiha Madara, I think they would need some help" inoichi said through the link notifying Tsunade and Ay, who were currently heading towards the battlefield about the newly acquired information.
"What?"Tsunade said confused. 'So then the man in the mask was just a fluke' she thought frowning a bit
"We need to get to them immediately" Ay said firmly while boosting his speed.
With sasuke
"Are you serious sasuke, what if he betrays us and tries to take your body, you know that's all he's after right?" Suigetsu pleaded with his team leader to reason
"Suigetsu, don't underestimate orochimaru " sasuke said plainly shutting him up
Glancing at his comrades hoping that at least one of them would see his reasoning, Walking pass suigetsu the others ignored him as if he wasn't even there.
Sighing dramatically while dropping his head suigetsu cursed before he continued walking with the others.
"So how do we do this" Karin questioned ,so far they knew sasuke killed orochimaru and there was no other way to revive him other than the re-animation jutsu but that requires a soul, obviously sasuke wouldn't go that far so then what other means does he plan on using
"After i defeated orochimaru I got a little interested in the seal and decided to study it" sasuke said crouching down as he pulled out a scroll from within his clothe.
Sasuke continued ignoring the skeptical look Suigetsu gave him "Apparently the seal also acts as a safe haven where orochimaru stores a piece of his soul"
"So it's like a save point in a game" Suigetsu said dumming down what sasuke explained
"Okay... how do you plan on activating it" juugo who was quietly listening said. Seeing that sasuke stopped walking the others followed along
"With this...when I raided orochimaru's base I took him prisoner, normally storing a live human body would cause some problems so I placed him a comatose state using genjutsu" sasuke said pulling out a scroll from his clothe which he unwrapped dropping on the floor he proceeded to touch the symbol and poof a body appeared out of the scroll shocking everyone more.
"Oh kayyyy" Suigetsu said awkwardly
"Now then" sasuke said pulling out a syringe with some black and purplish liquid in it. Wasting no time he stabbed it into the mans neck and then stood up backing away.
"Was that..."
"The toxin orochimaru injects when he gives the curse seal, all we have to do is wait and let it completely consume his body weakening it enough for orochimaru to access his mind" Sasuke stated watching what was going on closely.
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Minutes went by with the man thrashing roughly while the substance ate at his body and chakra system claiming dominance of the mans body
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"Interesting... who would imagine that it would be you who would facilitate my return" the man said slowly standing up from the floor . Making suigetsu 'eep' as he jumped behind sasuke using him as a shield.
Feeling the fear radiating from all the other members of sasuke's group, orochimaru couldn't help but flash a sadistic grim.
"I need your help"
"Don't bother explaining I've been watching everything the whole time" orochimaru said cutting sasuke off before he could say a thing.
"There's much I don't know" sasuke stated walking towards his former master
"Yes...Your still a child" orochimaru said knowing that his comment would provoke the uchiha
"Your wrong" Sasuke said sternly while thinking about the few memories he had with his brother
"I want to know who started everything...I want answers"
"Well then we would be leaving"orochimaru said walking out of the abandoned bunker
"Where to" sasuke questioned skeptically
"A place your very familiar with" orochimaru said walking out the building with sasuke and his team trailing behind him
Turtle island
After being defeated by Guy, Kisame is retrained by Yamato so Aoba can gather intel. Aoba peered in Kisame's memory of killing a cipher team per his assignment when their capture by Hidden Leaf Ninja is immediate, later killing his superior to take his place among the Seven Swordsmen while learning the Fourth Mizukage Yagura Karatachi is controlled by an unmasked Tobi.
Before Aoba can see Tobi's face, Kisame bit his tongue to regain consciousness and breaks out of his restrains to create a water dome around himself.
Seeing that there was no escaping this time kisame reflected on his life as he came to terms on what to do.
Having joined the Akatsuki because Tobi promised him a world without lies, remembering Itachi's words of how one finds self-worth at the moment of their death.
Kisame smirks as he made handseals creating water sharks , he intended on killing himself thus taking away the reputation that one would get by claiming they killed an S-rank criminal ,but that failed as a smokey spear pierced through him from his back, before it quickly exploded.
The group had little time to react as they were immediately consumed by the smoke, Jumping out of the dark cloud of smoke the shinobi scanned the area speedily.
"Be on guard everyone, we're not alone here" Gai weakly ordered getting into a sloppy fighting stance.
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After several minutes of nothing the squad of shinobi were becoming very impatient waiting for their opponents to make some sort of move
"Something's not right ..."
"I agree" coughing loudly Yamato and B said in unison as they dropped to their knees.
"I'm not even using chakra yet I'm getting drained for some reason...anyone else experiencing something of such?" Motoi said sounding very irritated. Seeing the others nod their head confirmed that he wasn't alone.
"I think it's the attack earlier ,its somehow affecting our chakra system " Yamato said coming to conclusions since all of them were experiencing the same thing.
"Well that explains why the enemy hasn't come out " Aoba said calmly
"Bastard's!! waiting for our chakra to be completely empty before attacking "Motoi shouted in anger realizing they had already lost the battle from the start since all of them had been within range when the attack hit
"Relax bro, loosing you cool would only lead to ya doom. Ya gat me fool" B rapped before coughing violently making others stare at him briefly
"He's right ,loosing our youthfulness would only weaken us" Gai said loudly making the others groan loudly
Minutes later
'Still no sign of the enemy at all' Yamato thought glancing at the others who had already passed out, his gaze stopping at Gai for a while, Yamato mentally sighed. 'The only one who would have been helpful in this situation had he not wasted all his energy on kisame'
Coughing loudly Yamato dropped to his knees. ' all I have to do is buy enough time 'Yamato thought trying to keep himself up, but it was obvious he was at his limit from the way his body shook before dropping down completely
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"Well that took longer than expected "an unknown voice said loudly from within the bushes as the visitor walked to where the shinobi lay sprawled on the floor
The new visitor who appeared to be an old man around the age of the third hokage, tanned skin with spots on his face and wearing civilian style clothing which consisted of a grey dusty long sleeve linen shirt and a shabby brown short. For some strange reason the man was barefoot
"W-who re yo" Yamato said weekly feeling his energy depleting quickly , he could feel the mans chakra and frankly it was a lot. He couldn't fight the man in his current situation should the need arise, so all he had to do was hope that by some crazy miracle this new visitor was on their side
"Just some stranger here to pick up a package" the old man said smiling lightly before taking his time to observe each of them, seeing what he came for he walked to his prey as he gripped the head of B with his finger tips glowing blue,showing the use of chakra.
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"Chakura no shohi (Chakra consumption)" the old man said as red chakra seeped out of B's prone form into his quickly
'Impossible' Yamato thought as his body went limp with his eyelids slowly closing
Madara vs five kages
Shikaku telepathically communicated to Genma to have him, Raido and Iwashi to perform the Flying thunder formation technique to transport Mei to Madara's location.
"Since everyone is alive ,I guess we aren't late" Mei said trying to show a bit of optimism
"Living long was well worth it...imagine being able to see this day" Onoki said smiling thinking about the fact all the kages working together to stop one enemy.
Noticing the injury of both gaara and Onoki Tsunade decides to heal them
"Thank you princess Tsunade" Onoki said
"I'll heal these two... raikage, mizukage buy me some time" Tsunade ordered as she focused on her task
Effectively dodging all the attacks both kages threw at him with ease, making it look like a child's play, the onlookers stared dumbfounded by his power. Sure tales of Madara Uchiha and Hashirama Senji were popular among shinobi,but witnessing Madara's raw power was something else.
"He's capable of so much destruction"
"Yeah, there's no way for us to jump in"
"You guys come with me...I'm going after the other one" Dodai ordered making the hokage guard platoon follow him as they chased after Mū.
Watching as the Madara fell into Mei's attack after getting hit by Ay. The kages hoped that at least the attack would have done some sort of damage to madara, but that prayer died the moment the structure of the Susano'o materialized standing boldly
"Lightening style teleportation and larva style Kekkei Genkai "madara said accessing their moves
"This won't be easy" mei said glancing at the duo getting healed by Tsunade
"He counters me even with my speed" raikage stated getting irritated with how unfair the it was even with the fact they had an advantage in numbers
"More speed I have to increase my power to crush his defense " raikage yelled psyching himself
Immediately madara attacks them with the Yasaka magatama but the attack sadly fails because of Gaara's shield of sand and Onoki's rock Goldman acting as a shield
"This war is now a battle to protect each other!". Ōnoki declared firmly
"A two fold defensive wall of sand and stone huh...quite impressive " madara praised as the Susano'o raised its blades hand up dropping its sword down shattering the remains of their defense
Gaara using the sand as cover tries to seal Madara, but that failed sadly as the Susano'o slashed through the sand pyramid,destroying it.
Meanwhile the other Kages watched how madara responded to gaara's attacks closely trying to come up with a new strategy.
"That's it" Tsunade said before telling the others her plan.
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"Water style: hidden mist Jutus" Mei said making hand seals as she blew a large volume of thick mist consuming the battlefield
"Let's do this raikage" Onoki who was on the back of Ay said seeing that their plan to obscure Madara's field of vision had worked
"Right!"
Disappearing out of view shocking Mu the raikage and Onoki appeared beside madara, throwing a good punch
"Super weighted boulder Justus!" Onoki announced
Already knowing the move Mu appeared in front of madara hoping to take the attack but sadly failed as he too received the devastating blow shattering both of them into shatters
Madara in surprise watched as the attack broke through his Susano'o hitting him clean straight through its form sending him flying away.
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Feeling the immense chakra Immediately all the kages turned around to look at the top of a nearby mountain, just in time to see a vortex materialize from thin air puking out three distorted figures.
One wearing a white mask with patterns that resembled the sharingan and the rinnegan combined together, the mask strangely had only one see through hole which was at the left eye. Finishing his dressing with the traditional akatsuki black cloak with red clouds that have white outlines.
The other was the weirdest of them all,he had dark purple eyes with strange ripple like patterns in them, wearing the same outfit as the masked man, has orange hair with piercings on both sides of his jaws, cheeks and one through his nose. Completing his attire was the scratched rain forehead protector
The last and final person was a reanimated itachi Uchiha who surprisingly looked pissed.
"Hmn" madam muttered standing up as he watched his skin fix back to normal. Glancing at the new visitors madara stared confused seeing that obito did not have the Rinnegan, meaning that nagato was still alive.
'Impossible...' all the kages thought ignoring the fake madara and looking at the orange haired man.
'The eyes of the Rikudō Sennin.'
'Madara isn't meant to be reanimated yet, damn that kabuto' the masked man thought angrily gritting his teeth, luckily his companions couldn't see his face because of the mask but he was certain they felt the brief release of anger
"You weren't kidding when you said there was going to be a huge surprise " the man with the piercings said while idly shifting his gaze from the enemy to the fake madara skeptically.
Deep within a camouflaged mountain made of paper two figures, watching the battle closely
The first one is a man named Nagato he has pale white skin with straight red hair, a sign of his Uzumaki heritage. His hair is parted so only his right eye is covered while the other is visible . Linked with the Demonic statue of the outer path (metal throne thingy) he has a number of chakra rods embedded in his back , limiting his mobility.
The second a woman name Konan, who has short, straight blue hair with a bun, amber eyes with lavender eye shadow, and a labret piercing. She has a large light blue paper flower clipped on her bun .She wears the Akatsuki cloak and her Akatsuki ring on her right middle finger.
She uses orange nail polish. Her headband is on her right hip; instead of the standard sandals and leg-warmers, she wears a pair of blue pants that also functioned as her shoes, with white high heels.
"Shouldn't we be concerned about the fact that he isn't the real madara" Konan questioned looking a bit worried at her childhood friend
Normally she would have been on the battlefield, but considering Nagato's condition she decided to keep watch and opted to send a paper butterfly to watch what was going on.
"Now is not the time for that, once the plan is completed he too would face judgment " Nagato said in a stern voice leaving no room for argument
Back with the kages
"Let's begin " the piercing man ordered once he saw the approaching crowd of more allied shinobi members along with Jiraya.
Going through handseals quickly the masked man finally stopped as his visible eye mutated into a Mangekyo Sharingan and immediately the earth trembled making the shinobi's below them stop and stare into the distance where they noticed the tailed beasts suddenly appearing roaring loudly.
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Trying to gather their thoughts on how they were going to fight seven biijuu's, the allied force wasn't spared any time as suddenly before them there was a flash of gold light and then a more people appeared
'No way'
'It's over now'
Somewhere near the battlefield
"Just how far will they go to quench their thirst for power" the figure questioned frowning a bit as he watched the battlefield
Suddenly dark mist arose from his body as what looked like two exact replicas of his figure pulled away from the original, moving a few distance away from him their shape speedily reconstructed back into a more solid male structure with hair growing out from the pores of their head eagerly.
The one by the right now having blond hair with red highlights and the other by the left having blond hair with black highlights.
"Tsk insolent flesh bags toying with the laws of nature, they deserve to be destroyed" the feral man with blond hair and red highlights said in anger opening his eyes as he glared at everything
"I agree a suitable punishment should be given to whoever is responsible for this act" agreed the clone with the scar while eagerly looking at their leader
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"Oh there would be...Sato scout the surroundings for anymore threats, leave no stone unturned , terminate anything that stands in your way" the original ordered sternly
"Hai" the replica with the scar said as his form crumbled into black dust which got dispersed by the wind
"You... prepare the grounds" the leader said making the feral man smile widely
"Gladly" the feral clone said giving a bloodthirsty grin
"It's about time we join in" the man said smiling as he turned back to survey the land mass behind him which was heavily occupied with corpses of Zetsu clones
Okay just to clear up a few things...Jiraiya is still alive, he also didn't infiltrated the rain village which means he doesn't know who is pein and that is why the summoning pein is still a man.
If your still confused ...when Jiraiya invaded the hidden rain village or whatever they call it he killed one of peins path ,the one that summons and so pein has to replace him with the female