Chapter 21: Big Chill Surprise

Hey everyone I'm back with a new chapter. This was based off one of my favorite episodes in the Alien Force series, but I made my own changes to it that I think you'll like. Also I'm happy to say this story now has over 50,000 views! Thanks guys, you rock! Please Review and Enjoy.

Through the streets, a car was racing through it out of control.

"Slow down!" The passenger said.

"I can't! The brakes aren't working!" The driver said as he swerved to avoid crashing.

As Drake was walking out of a store with snacks, he sees the car heading towards him.

"Whoa!" Drake yells jumping out of the way. "What the?" Drake said looking to the see car driving wildly. "They need help." Activating the Omnitrix he slams down turning into Big Chill.

On the highway, the out of control car was about to run into a truck when the driver swerved out of the way.

But instead, they ended up falling off the bridge towards the water.

As they screamed Big Chill suddenly flew in and created an ice ramp and grabbing the car from behind allowing the car to come a to a stop at the bottom allowing the two of them to get out.

"What is that thing?" The driver asks.

"Who cares. It saved our lives. Thank you." The passenger said when Big Chill turned to the car and took a big bite out of it.

"Hey! What are you doing?" The driver asks but Big Chill just hisses at him before flying away.


The next day at Monster High, Drake was in his room brushing his teeth, but when he spit for mouthwash, he felt something in his teeth. Reaching inside Drake found he had a piece of metal stuck in his teeth. "How did that get there?"

In library, Hex was stocking the shelves while Hope was practicing her magic looking around she saw Gob, Bonesy, Skeley and Deuce asleep at their chairs,

Smirking she uses her powers causing all 4 of them to float into the air.

"Gob…GOB!" Gob screams waking up to see he was flying.

"Whoa we're flying!" Deuce said as Bonesy and Skeley dropped their jaws in shock causing Hope to burst into laughter.

"I can't believe it took you all that long to notice." Hope laughs.

"Charmcaster." Hex said ordering her to put them down.

"But look at their faces." Hope pouts when Gwen and Raythe walk in and when she sees them she uses her powers to lower them. "You take the fun out of everything Gwen."

"And don't you forget it." Gwen said.

"You do realize what you said, right?" Raythe asks.

"I do and I immediately regret it." Gwen said when Drake walked in.

"I cannot stress the importance of flossing." Drake said.

"Okay clearly a change of subject." Gwen said.

"Found this in my teeth. I think something might be up with my powers." Drake said holding up the metal.

"Look Drake, I'd love to help but I gotta keep an eye on Charmcaster so she doesn't try to mess with any more students." Gwen said walking away.

"Any advice Raythe?" Drake asks turning to him.

"Uh watch what you eat." Raythe shrugs before walking away.

"Thanks a lot, really." Drake sighs.

At the Creepateria, Frankie, Cleo, Clawdeen, Draculaura and Lagoona were sitting down talking when Drake walked up.

"Hey ghouls." Drake said.

"Hey Drake, what's up?" Clawdeen asks.

"I don't know. I need your help." Drake said.

"Something serious?" Frankie asks.

"I'm not sure. The last time I used my powers I kinda blacked out." Drake said.

"But that doesn't make sense. You remember nothing?" Cleo asks.

"I remember slapping down on the Omnitrix but the rest is a blur." Drake said.

"Sounds easy enough. What if we just followed you and tell if you anything happens." Lagoona suggests.

"You sure you ghouls can keep up?" Drake asks.

"Easy." Draculaura nods.

As the sun was setting, Drake was on the outskirts of Monster High with the ghouls nearby.

"You ghouls remember Wildvine?" Drake asks switching to him.

"Yeah from the camp." Frankie said as Drake slammed down on the watch but instead of Wildvine he turned into Big Chill and flew off into town.

"Big Chill?" They all said confused before they followed after him.


At a drive-in, Big Chill landed and walked up to the speaker pressing the buttons when the ghouls caught up.

"I guess even aliens get hungry." Cleo said when the waitress came out, but when she saw Big Chill she screamed in horror throwing the metal tray up in the air which Big Chill swallowed in one bite.

"Very hungry." Clawdeen cringed as Big Chill ate the speaker.

Making his way to the support beams Big Chill froze them causing the support beams to collapse allowing him to eat those as well.

"Okay we might have a problem here." Frankie said as they all nodded in agreement.

Flying up, Big Chill ripped the metal burger off the statue and ate it like it was a regular burger.

"Well at least he's only eating metal." Lagoona said when Big Chill ate the head off the statue too.

"Okay we have to do something." Cleo said.

"More." Big Chill said before flying off.

"Quick follow him!" Frankie said as Draculaura turned into a bat and flew after him.

"Big Chill! Drake! Wait for me!" Big Chill turns to see Draculaura flying after him. "Please I just want to talk!"

But instead of stopping Big Chill turned a corner towards a giant brick wall.

"See ya." Big Chill said before flying through the wall causing Draculaura to stop in her tracks.

When the others caught up Draculaura turned back to normal.

"Drake, what's going on?" Draculaura asks worried.

On the outskirts of town, Drake was laying on the ground asleep when he started to groan waking up.

"Ugh what happened?" As Drake picked himself up he noticed a giant ditch in front of him.


Back at Monster High, Drake was loading up his tray with as much food as he could.

"Whoa, you sure are hungry today." The lunch lady said surprised.

"Yeah not sure why though, hey do we have any pickles?" Drake asks as one of her tentacles went to the kitchen and pulled out a jar. "Thanks." She opens the jar so Drake could take one, but he ended up taking the whole jar.

"Uh you're welcome." She said not sure what was going on.

Sitting down near the garden, Drake saw him mom showing some of the students how to take care of the flowers.

"I'm not really sure gardening is the type of activity for me." Jinafire said.

"Nonsense Jinafire, gardening is a very relaxing activity." Mary said.

"Yeah, give it a chance it's really fun." Venus said planting a small tree before using her powers to make it grow in size.

At the base of the trunk, Twyla appeared before resting her head in the shade and taking out a book.

"Hmm not bad." Twyla smiles.

"I don't see it. This is boring." Ben said digging in the dirt.

"Oh stop complaing and keep digging." Kai smirks.

"Come on Ben, give it a chance." Drake said getting their attention.

"Whoa, sure you have enough?" Ben asks looking at the portion of food on his tray.

"Have you been eating alright?" Kai asks.

"I'm fine I'm just hungry is all." Drake said taking out a pickle and eating it before eating everything off his tray before chugging down the pickle juice.

"Wow, you sure like pickles." Jinafire said.

"Yeah, I'm gonna go see if I can get another jar." Drake said getting up and walking away.

"What's up with him?" Ben asks.

"No idea." Kai said.

Walking out of the classroom, Julie saw Draculaura, Frankie, Cleo, Clawdeen and Lagoona sitting in the main room with worried looks on their faces.

"Hey ghouls, what's up?" Julie asks.

"We uh ran into a bit of trouble with Drake yesterday." Draculaura said.

"How so?" Julie asks.

"He transformed into Big Chill and he disappeared on us." Frankie said.

"Isn't that what Big Chill does?" Julie said.

"Yes but that's not what we mean. We're not really sure what's going on." Cleo said.

"Well try talking to him." Julie said when she saw Drake eating another jar of pickles. "There he is." She points.

Looking over they saw Drake put the jar down and walk over.

"I'll leave you ghouls alone." Julie said walking away.

"Drake what happened?" Lagoona asks.

"I don't know." Drake said.

"Why did you turn into Big Chill and fly off?" Clawdeen asks.

"Big Chill? No I programmed it for Wildvine." Drake said.

"No you didn't." Frankie said.

"What is going on?" Drake asks confused.

"Well that's not all that happened." Draculaura cringed.

"After you transformed into Big Chill you flew all over town basically eating anything made of metal: speakers, support beams, metal statues. The list goes on and on." Frankie said.

"Eating metal? Ghouls this is starting to freak me out." Drake said nervously.

"You don't remember anything?" Clawdeen asks.

"No, all I remember was waking up in a ditch this morning. I'm scared. What's happening to me?" Drake asks.

"Don't worry Drake, we'll help you through this." Frankie said.

"Absolutely." Draculaura said as Drake smiled before his changed to a trance like state.

"Drake?" Lagoona asks as he activated the omnitrix and slammed down on it turning into Big Chill before flying off.

"Okay this is not good." Draculaura said.

"I'll say, all this running is exhausting." Cleo said as they chased after him.


That night, at the Metal Foundry, employees were running out as Big Chill grabbed metal beams and ate them.

"What is that thing?" A security guard asks as three of them spotted Big Chill.

"Stay out of my way." Big Chill said turning to them.

"That's not how it works Monster, come down here and surrender or there's gonna be trouble." He said.

"I warned you." Big Chill said before breathing ice at them freezing one of the guards.

Taking out their guns the security guards aimed to fire when Draculaura flew in as a bat and turned back to normal while Lagoona sprinted in behind her with Clawdeen.

"Wait don't hurt him!" Draculaura yells as they fired at him, but Big Chill turned intangible.

"Some people just never learn." Big Chill said walking through the bullets.

"Please don't hurt them." Clawdeen said.

"Don't worry, they won't feel a thing." Big Chill said freezing the security guards in place before flying over to a vat of molten metal and chugged the entire thing down before flying off.

Trying to catch up, Frankie and Cleo look to see Big Chill flying off.

"Drake!" Cleo calls out before they all lost him again.

"We're gonna need some help." Frankie said.

"On it." Cleo said taking out her iCoffin.

At the ditch Drake found himself at that morning Big Chill landed at it before spitting out the molten metal into the ditch.


At Monster High, Kevin was on his laptop playing a fighting game on the Monster Web.

"Wow, who knew Monsters could make such awesome games." Kevin smirks when a hand closed his laptop in front of him. "Hey!"

Looking up he saw Ben and Gwen looking at him. "I need you to come with me."

"Sorry Ben kinda in the middle of something." Kevin smirks.

"Cleo just sent a school wide text asking for help." Ben said.

"Something's up with Drake's watch and you're probably the only one who has a way to find him." Gwen said.

"You assume correct, but what's in it for me?" Kevin asks.

"Week of no detention duty." Gwen said.

"A month." Kevin said.

"2 weeks." Gwen said.

"3 weeks." Kevin said.

"2 weeks and 4 days." Gwen said.

"Deal." Kevin said standing up.

"So Kevin how do you intend to find him?" Ben asks as Kevin took his Plumber badge.

"Easy. The Omnitrix gives off a very unique energy signature. Cross reference that with the Plumber network and there he is." Kevin points. "A mile outside of town."

"Perfect." Ben said texting the ghouls as they climbed into Kevin's car and drove off.


At the ditch outside of town, Kevin, Ben and Gwen arrived to see the Ghouls waiting for them.

"Where is he?" Ben asks as they climbed out.

"Down there." Clawdeen points as they looked to see in the middle of the ditch a hug cluster of metal was laying there with Big Chill on top of it.

"Well that doesn't look good." Kevin said.

"Drake!" Draculaura calls out as she made her way down with Frankie and Lagoona.

"It's us your friends." Frankie said.

"We want to help you." Lagoona said as Big Chill stood up.

"Go away!" Big Chill roars.

"Negotiating isn't gonna work. We need to calm him down." Gwen said.

"A free hit at Drake? I'm glad I showed up." Kevin grins as he grabbed some metal changing his body to metal. "I'll knock some sense into him."

Running towards him, Kevin throws a punch, but Big Chill turns intangible dodging the punch before leaping at Kevin and biting his metal arm.

"Hey! Cut it out!" Kevin said as he grabbed some stone changing his body to rock causing Big Chill to stop eating him.

"Yeah Big Chill seems to have an appeitite for all things metal right now." Cleo said.

"You could've warned me." Kevinn glares.

"You didn't give us a chance to because all you wanted to do was punch Drake." Clawdeen glares back.

Gwen shoots a beam at the metal cluster but Big Chill flies up and blocks it before breathing ice at them.

"Look out!" Gwen said creating a shield to protect them all.

"We're trying to help!" Ben said.

"I don't want any help!" Big Chill said as he flew at them until Cleo shot her bandages at him tying him up.

As everyone ran to the cluster Big Chill broke out of the bandages.

"Stay away from there!" Big Chill yells about to attack when Ben pulls out his Proto tool and blasts Big Chill making him crash to the ground.

"Sorry Drake, no hard feelings." Ben said.

"Whatever is wrong with him it has to be because of this thing." Frankie points.

"Then let's smash this thing up." Kevin said grabbing some metal before leaping to the top and smashing the metal causing some green goo to shoot out. "Ugh maggot goo." Kevin said as they saw a dozen blue sphere objects rise from the metal.

Everyone watched in horror until one opened up to reveal a baby Big Chill.

"Aww." All the girls said.

"What is happening?" Ben asks.

"You've gotta be kidding me." Kevin said as Big Chill looks up at the babies and smiles before changing back into Drake.

"Ugh what happened?" Drake groans as the baby Big Chill flew around him and nuzzled him causing him to chuckle. "Where did you little guys come from?" Drake looks up to see everyone looking down at him. "Someone want to fill me in?"


Back at Monster High, Drake was sitting in a chair with the baby Big Chills sitting all around him.

"What?!" Drake said shocked.

"Yep, these are your kids." Kevin smirks before looking at a tablet. "Necrofriggians, that's Big Chill's race lays eggs once every 80 years or so. The babies will stay with you for a few years and then go into space where it's cold and feed on solar plasma. Guess you better use this chance to start bonding, daddy."

"Knock it off." Drake said.

"Guess this explains your pickle cravings." Ben said.

"This day just keeps getting crazier." Drake said when 5 Baby Big Chills look to the ghouls while the others fly up and fly around the school.

Draculaura watches to see a baby Big Chill fly up to her. "Uh hey there." Draculaura said when the baby flew up and nuzzled her. "Aw I like you too."

Lagoona was laughing as a baby Big Chill was trying to keep up with her. "You're a fast little one."

"No. No" Cleo said trying to push a baby Big Chill away but the baby flew in and nuzzled her causing her to sigh. "Oh okay."

"I wonder if I can learn about aliens from studying this one?" Frankie asks holding a baby Big Chill in her arms with interest.

"Hey give that back!" Clawdeen was chasing a baby Big Chill who was wearing her amulet. Leaping in the air she caught the baby. "Look if you want something stylish, I could make you something." She offers causing the baby to smile.

Not being able to hold it in anymore Kevin burst into laughter holding his side.

"What's so funny now?" Drake asks.

"Baby Big Chills are born from one parent and when the eggs hatch the babies go in search of a mom to help their dad raise them." Kevin laughs getting everyone's attention.

Drake looks down to the one baby Big Chills in his lap and then to the ghouls one thing was going through Drake's head…who did the others choose?

In the Home Ec room, Jinafire was drawing designs when she heard a door open. "Huh?" Looking up she saw a baby Big Chill sitting on a stool next to her. "Hmm where did you come from?" Jinafire examines it closely before it nuzzles her causing her to smile.

In the school gardens, Venus was planting some plants, but when she reached for the trowel, but it wasn't there. Turning around she looked to see a baby Big Chill holding the trowel in its little hands. "You want to help me garden?" Venus smiles as it flew over.

In the music room, Ari was humming the lyrics to a new song she was writing.

"Hmm something's missing." Ari said when she heard a small dinging noise. Looking over she saw a baby Big Chill playing with a Triangle. "Well aren't you a cute little musician." Ari walks over. "Want to help me write a song?" The baby Big Chill squeaks happily.

In the library, Hope was reading a spell book to herself. "Not the spell I'm looking for." She said turning to the bookshelf. "Where's that other spell book?" She asks when she looks up to see a baby Big Chill flying down with a book in its little arms before handing it to her. "Oh, thank you." She said as the baby smiles.

In the Plumber base, Julie was laughing as another baby Big Chill was playing with Ship as they ran and flew around the room. "Well you two seem to be good friends." She smiles.

Finally, flying through the halls, was the runt of the litter. A very tiny Big Chill baby was looking around when it saw Gob looking at it with interest.

"Gob." Gob said licking his lips.

Panicking the baby tried to fly away but fell. Looking up Gob was about to get it when a pair of hands picks it up. Looking up Gob saw Twyla holding the little Big Chill.

"Here, eat this instead." Twyla said handing Gob a candy bar as he took it and ran off. "You okay little guy?" She smiles.

Squeaking happily, it nuzzles Twyla in thanks before she put it on her shoulder and they walked down the hall.