Ohirume: Alright readers, it's that time again! First, I would just like to thank all of you so much for your support and ideas.
This is, by far the longest holiday special chapter I have ever done, and I couldn't be happier about it!
Although, despite all logic, we aren't doing any songs in this Special.
Seishin: Blasphemy!
Yugo: Enjoy!
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From buterflypuss (chapter 33):
XD
Gem: What does that mean?
Omega: *sigh* It's an emoticon, Gem. Their symbolic ways of typing out facial expressions.
Gem: Oh. Why didn't they just do what we did?
Omega: Because our method is moronic.
Ohirume: *sigh*
Omega: Exactly.
Seishin: Wait, I use emoticons now. See? :D
Yugo: Only because you're as self-aware as you are.
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From Supertoe (chapter 33):
So, I'd like to know who is Soot's mother?
Faux: *frowns and ears droop* It's not a happy story.
Omega: Although, the second chapter does actually show where she is and gives us her name.
Ohirume: One thing I will say, however: she's another OC. You're not gonna find a canon counterpart.
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Lycoan wolf entity (chapter 33):
(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)
Thanks Omega for pointing that out, I realized I forgot about Grey Matter just after I posted my review.
Omega: Eh. No harm no foul.
Seishin: *relieved sigh* I'm just happy Wolfy wasn't upset about you-
And don't call me Wolfie.
Seishin: Aww. :(
Omega: Ha.
Okay, since Erica is already over and done with, (missed opportunity by the way) I'd say the Veridian city gym battle would be the perfect opportunity for Frenzy Plant to make an appearance.
Illavera: *raised brow* Erica?
Faux: Grass-type Gym Leader from the Celadon chapter.
Illavera: Oh, right.
Mizuro: Wait, I thought her name was spelled with a-
Seishin: Well, I can see the connection Wol-
Yugo: *glares* Yukiro.
Seishin: *grumbles* I can see the connection Lycoan. But, why would Trix have chosen a plant monster in a burning building?
Gem: Maybe to fight in the Gym Battle?
Luke: *deadpans* Yes, because a second monstrosity appearing out of nowhere and suddenly choosing to partake in a Pokémon battle wouldn't arouse suspicion.
Ohirume: In Lycoan's defense, I did consider having Frenzy Plant appear to help fix the Gym. But I couldn't think of a way for Ash, Soot, or the others to explain its sudden appearance.
I also considered Frenzy Plant fixing the Gym overnight without anyone knowing. But I … Why didn't I do that?
Seishin: Don't you remember? It was because Erika would end up questioning it too much and you thought it would be too nonsensical.
Omega: *deadpans* Since when has too much nonsense ever been an issue for you?
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Ohirume: Yeah … I typed out all of that above stuff before starting the kangaskhan chapter.
Btw if you ever need suggestions on fights with the aliens, you can ask me. I already have a few Ben 10 crossover stories. So...yeah.
Ohirume: Can do. Thank you for the suggestions.
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Lycoan wolf entity (chapter 34):
It's Armodrillo, isn't it? Please for the love of Arceus do NOT have the name be something like, Dig, Earthquake, Bulldoze, Fissure, Magnitude, or Tectonic Rage.
Ohirume: *chuckles* By the time you read this response, you will have already seen that you were correct in it being a Talpaedan and that the name isn't any of the one's you mention.
Seishin: All true, but one thing I wanna know. Watchu got against Ground-type moves, man?!
Omega: *sweat drops* And he's the one who tells me not to antagonize people.
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From buterflypuss (chapter 34):
Good chap
Ohirume: Thank-
Seishin: Chidori!
Omega: Merry-Go-Round Olsen!
Olsen: *Psychotic laughter*
*DOUBLE SLAM!*
Ohirume: HA! Halo 3 Bubble Shield! Nice try, freaks!
Seishin: Ow. *slides down*
"Faux": Wow *knocks on dome from inside* this thing is tough.
Ohirume: Well, yeah. It can stand up to any- *flinches and turn around* How did you get in here?!
"Faux": I didn't. *points ahead*
Faux: *waves* Hi.
Ohirume: Oh, you're a copy.
"Faux": Yup. Also, Link Attack! Thunder Ace!
Ohirume: *deadpanned* Crag.
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From TheSilverUmbreon (chapter 34):
when i read clefairy's guess
I IMMEDIATELY KNEW IT WAS BIG CHILL
Ohirume: *chuckles* That, in fact, was her guess.
Seishin: But now, here's something to think about. Is it just another Easter egg or foreshadowing? ~Ѧ*
Omega: What the **** kind of emoticon is that?!
Seishin: Not really sure.
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From Johnathen Youngs (chapter 34):
Who's that alien
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It's armadrillo
Nuevo: Uh … yeah, it is. You, kind of, answered your own question.
Seishin: -_- That isn't what happened. It's a reference to "Who's that Pokémon?"
Mizuro: Wazzat?
Ohirume: Something from the canon series.
Mizuro: Then, why aren't we doing it?
Ohirume: … Y'know, I'm not gonna blame you for not knowing that. I suggest you look it up real fast.
Mizuro: *shrugs* Alright.
*elevator music*
Mizuro: Okay, I see your point.
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Lycoan wolf entity (chapter 35):
Armodrillo. I ******* knew it. The only part I don't get is why Ash had the Pikachu body parts for an alien more associated with the ground rather than one more associated with electricity like Buzzshock or Feedback? It doesn't make much sense. Btw I really wanna see Feedback at some point in this story. Maybe give him an over energetic personality glitch
Ohirume: That, uh, wasn't really the point of the glitch. If you remember, Ash said that the last time the glitch happened, he ended up with mightyena ears and a tail, and received Quick Attack/XLR8. And, like this instance, the mightyena and Kineceleran and species are not connected in anyway.
The 'new form' glitch is actually tied to Power Integration, a process which adds the non-human, unlocked DNA from the Omnitrix into Ash's human self. Allowing him to still be able to fight without transforming. Think of it like a weaker, but more versatile and continuous version of the Ultimate Ben 10,000 thing.
Anyway, the concept behind the glitch is that the newly unlocked DNA causes another of Ash's forms to "leak" and add on these features for a short amount of time. Which form leaks is completely random, but I will restrict it to Pokémon more often than not.
But I will admit that I chose the pikachu form for completely unjustified and biased reasons. Put simply, I read and looked up a lot of Ashchu/Ashachu stuff when I was younger. Which is also part of why I had Pikachu touch the watch in the first chapter. Heck, that's what got me interested in fanfictions in the first place.
As for Feedback … I'll think about it. I've been going along with the forms in a way that keeps Ash from receiving something that's too similar -in terms of ability- to what he already has. Hence the reason for his weird preference for not letting Pokémon touch the Omnitrix. As the story progresses, I'll gradually cut back on this preference.
Although I do really like the idea of something with an over energetic personality. I'm not sure what alien will have that yet, but I'll be sure to use it eventually.
Seishin: Uh, wow. (·_·') Can we move on to the jokes now?
Yugo: Doesn't seem like it.
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TheSilverUmbreon (chapter 35):
so armidrillo
Underrated, but not hated as much as frankenstrike
can't wait for the likes of wildmutt, rath, upgrade, alien x, and maybe some of the weirder aliens like gutrot, goop, crash-hopper, jerryrig, and pesky dust
Ohirume: Huh. Did not realize the Talpaedan species was underrated.
Omega: You wouldn't.
Ohirume: As for the others.
Wildmutt would be interesting. Especially since no one would be able to understand him.
Rath is … Rath. So the personality glitch and name are already set.
Upgrade I am heavily considering.
Alien X would be kind of hilarious. Again, personality glitch is set. Or, should I say, multiple personality glitch. *snickers*
Omega: Ugh.
Ohirume: But, I am very on edge about most of the Omniverse exclusive species. I did enjoy some of the concepts from that series, namely the multiverse non-sense, but the aliens were a bit iffy. That's also why, if you've noticed, I've been using the Original/Alien Force/Ultimate Alien designs.
Omega: And, once again Rob used all of the comment space to explain way too much.
Seishin: OH, COME ON!
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From Wizzer96 (chapter 1):
*read the title and crossover with*
"you've got me curious..."
*finish the first chap*
"but now you have my attention"
Seishin: VICTORY SCREE-
Omega: NO!
Seishin: :( B-but-
Omega: SHUT IT! I had trouble hearing for a week after the last one!
Gem: Wait, what's a victory screech?
Omega: No. No no no no.
Seishin: ALOLOLOLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
Mizuro: LOLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
Ohirume: LOLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
Yugo: LOLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
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From TobyFreshCut (chapter 35):
(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)
I really enjoy this story. I've been trying to figure out names for some of the other Aliens...oops Non-Pokémon.
Seishin: *Snickers*
Here are some I came up with.
Ohirume: Alright, let's see what you got.
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Stinkfly - Bug buzz or Gunk Shot.
Ohirume: Makes sense.
Rath - Rage
Ohirume: I like the idea, but I can't go with that. Rath named himself in every continuity.
Pesky Dust - Dream Eater
Ohirume: Gonna be honest, I forgot that the Nemuina species could do that.
Cannonbolt - Rollout
Ohirume: Perfect.
Goop - Acid Armor
Ohirume: Also, perfect.
Wildmutt - Odor Sleuth
Ohirume: Makes sense.
Upchuck - Spit Up
Ohirume: Makes sense.
Water Hazard - Hydro Cannon/Pump
Ohirume: I'd probably go with the Pump.
Omega: *sweat drops* That's another Andromeda species.
Seishin: That didn't stop Armodrillo/Hammer Arm.
NRG - Blast Burn
Ohirume: Maybe.
Omega: ANDROMEDA!
Seishin: FIGMENT!
Omega: … what?
Big Chill - Frost Breath
Ohirume: Right idea. But I was thinking Sheer Cold.
As for my reason, imagine a Necrofriggian saying that in the same style as "Big Chill."
Echo Echo - Hyper Voice or Echoed Voice
Ohirume: I was almost considering Round. But I'm starting to warm up to Echoed Voice.
Chromastone - Hyper Beam
Ohirume: I was actually thinking Power Gem.
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And some I can't figure out.
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Swampfire
Ohirume: Oh, well- uh … Yeah, I got nothin'
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Ohirume: Okay, it's been over two weeks and I finally found a good name.
Seed Flare!
Honestly, I'm a little ashamed of myself for taking this long to think of it.
Way Big
Ohirume: Meteor Mash.
Reason 1. To'kustar.
Reason 2. It just sounds awesome.
Humungasaur
Ohirume: Um … Growth?
Omega: Ew.
Ohirume: *sigh* Yeah. I know. How about Dragon Dance?
Seishin: Meh.
Ohirume: Dragon Rush?
Faux: Better.
Upgrade
Ohirume: Conversion.
Ripjaws
Ohirume: Crunch.
Jetray
Ohirume: Hmm. Signal Beam?
Four Arms
Ohirume: Either Close Combat or Bulk Up.
Spidermonkey
Ohirume: If I can't find something better, Spider Web.
Omega: That's a Pokémon move?
Ohirume: It caught me off guard too.
Seishin: Oh, wait! What about Acrobatics?
Ohirume: Huh. Maybe.
Clockwork
Ohirume: Probably Future Sight. Mostly because Roar of Time seems over the top.
Brainstorm
Ohirume: Taking the personality into account, I'd probably go with Parabolic Charge. If for no other reason than the fact that 'parabolic' is four syllables long.
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Omega: Well, that was … a lot. Are we going to tell them how many of these will actually appear in the story?
Ohirume: That, we will not.
Seishin: NO CAPES!
Yugo: Wrong reference.
Seishin: NO SPOILERS!
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From Wizzer96 (chapter 35):
(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)
Mmmm...a relatively funny story with with the same characters but new personalities and points of view, i really enjoyed reading it. Now:
1-i see that you may have pulled the "giovanni is part of the ketchum family card",
Seishin: Told you they'd figure it out, Robby!
Ohirume: I never denied that. I just said, "Does the term 'spoiler alert' mean nothing to you?!"
may i give you nice idea? Since you alrady said you've been using saphroneth world building (which involves a mix between real history and pokemons)
Ohirume: Wait, I did?
Omega: I think they mean my "Origin Year 1998" comment.
Ohirume: Oh, right. That was actually the year that episode aired in the U.S.
Gem: You ess?
Yugo: The real world's version of Unova … sort of.
i suggest to make giovanni the grandfather from delia family line; the reason is: giovanni is OLD, he probably started his business during the caos from WW2 and hasn't stopped since (technically the pokemon world in the kanto series is still 1996), and like all the bosses of big evil organization he's scary and give the feeling of danger to anyone who sees him, which gets handed down to delia when she gets REALLY angry.
Ohirume: … Huh. Gotta admit, that's a new one. I am going to heavily consider that.
2- this is a bit (A LOT) personal but... Do you plan to maks mewtwo a recluse again?
Gem: Recluse? *looks at mewtwo* Since when?
Mewtwo: *shrugs* Beats me.
Faux: That's actually how you were back in my world. Well, the masculine version of you.
Ohirume: Also, in the canon. Again, "male" version.
Because like many people say its never good to run from adversities, its best to face them with a friend or family (i have an idea for the family part if you want to follow this retarded idea) . Yes, he's been created with an already completely matured mind and body, but damn mewtwo is young, like, he's still isn't technically 3ys old.
Ohirume: Good lesson and sound logic.
Still, that's not for another … thirty-ish chapters?
Seishin: *shrugs*
Ohirume: So, I have time to think it over.
Regardless, I would like to hear what the (I have an idea for the family part…) means. It may give me some ideas.
Yugo: Twenty bucks that it involves the feminine mewtwo.
Faux: I'll take that bet. Afterall, they got together in my world.
Laura: Yeah! X and Y have really gotten better overtime. A little Z is just the cutest thing ever.
Mewtwo: *raised brow* Huh?
3-DONT YOU DARE make ash abandon pidgeot,
Ohirume: *flinch*
i understand and respect butterfree cuz it was mating season and his instinct were driving him to find a mate (you also made ash "keep" him which im super happy/proud to see another person who has a tad bit feelings for our poor little husband)
Ohirume: Thanks. But seriously, how have so few people thought of a concept like that?! It seems obvious!
Yugo: *sweat drops* Rob, you practically stole that concept from Ashes of the Past … minus the transceiver thing.
Ohirume: Oh. Right.
bur she was forced to serve a flock she didnt want just because they couldn't evolve their pideotto in pidgeot, which even as a child made me mad when i saw the episode.
Ohirume: Wait, Pidgeotto didn't want to leave? I need to watch that episode again.
4- you seriously need to put this alert: WARNING! FLUFF LVL:DIABETIC...i almost died multiple times from the sheer cuteness of some moments,
Seishin: *wild laughter*
i especiallly loved, even if a bit sad, the charmender arc, i felt like snuggling my cat after that (which i did).
Ohirume and Illavera: *soft smiles* Aww.
5- the inheritance concepts is hella interesting but; is it set on just soot or will others appear,
Ohirume: Maaaaaaybe.
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Faux: *sweat drops* Uuuh, Wizzer. I have ancestral inheritance.
Yugo: They mean in Trix's continuity.
Faux: Oh. Right.
i know they will probably all come from ash is one way or another but i really want to see more of them
Ohirume: Well, this is still only "Season 1."
(especially their power-characteristic, seriously scar as zippers, how cool is that!?)
Ohirume: I know, right?!
Seishin: You seem awfully proud of something that you stole from JoJo.
Ohirume: *glares at Seishin* You know for a fact that I thought of that before even hearing about Sticky Fingers! It was just a coincidence!
Regardless, Yukiro is right about the concept rightfully belonging to JJBA part 5.
and... Wait, isn't mewtwo basically a mew with human ineritance?... Oh ****.
Ohirume: Hmm. Not sure about human inheritance, but they do have a Yvel of a lot more than pure Mew DNA in them.
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P. S. Congrats man, you received your first fan-threat about your characters :)
Ohirume: *shrugs* Eh. I've gotten worse from Omega.
Omega: He's right. By the way Rob, you can't write to save your life.
Ohirume: See?
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From RT89 (chapter 13):
Awesome and hilarious, looking forward to the next chapter. Question though, if Ash goes Dragonite will he be jumbo or regular? Guess i'll just have to wait and see.
Yugo: Good question. Unfortunately -as you're already well aware of by the looks of your later comments- that question gets answered in the first scene of chapter 14.
Ohirume: Sorry. Still, fair question.
Seishin: :P
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From RT89 (chapter 18):
Minor annoying typo on line 9, you put Squirtle twice instead of Squirtle and Bulbasaur. I'll admit, the outer characters insertion is a little off putting but you're making it work, somehow... Great chapter.
Ohirume: What? No, I d- *looks at Line 9* SON OF A GLITCH!
Omega: Hah. I guess your "proofread and edit once before posting" policy isn't as good as you thought.
Seishin: *snickers* Which, probably, should have been obvious.
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Faux: What's an "outer character"?
Omega: *sweat drops* He meant us, furball.
Seishin: (·∩·) B- but I'm an outer character too. Why wasn't I included?
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From RT89 (chapter 25):
Too many adjectives to put in one comment, excellent chapter. Please for the love of God don't have made the Pikachu village episode even more heartbreaking, this was a better ending of that episode and I'm still fighting tears.
Ohirume: I- wow. Thank you, RT.
Omega: *snickers* What do you know? We actually found someone who enjoys this ****. Talk about poor tas-
Ohirume: *Death stares at Omega* Finish that sentence and I will set up a Deus Ex Machina so complex and idiotic that you will end up back in the Promised Neverland in the body of a fully aware infant.
Omega: *Wide eyed shock* Understood.
Ohirume: *sigh* Sorry about that. To answer the other thing, I already having something planned for the Pikachu Tribe chapter that I've been planning since before publishing the first chapter and has been in development -on the side- since … I think Ch 23: Saffron.
And I am excited as all #### to get to that point for real.
If you can actually guess what it is, I will be speechless.
Seishin: ',:\ Since when did we start using hashtags to censor curse words?
Ohirume: Since I couldn't find a larger version of an asterisk.
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From Guest (chapter 34):
Earthquake
Gem: TAKE COVER!
Omega: *groans* No Gem. They were guessing the name of the Talpaedan. Look at the chapter they're commenting on.
Gem: Huh? But Trix already gave it a name in the next chapter.
Ohirume: I know. But that's not going to stop people from guessing before reading it.
Seishin: Sorry Guest. Its name is Hammer Arm. :3
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From buterflypuss (chapter 36):
good chap
Ohirume: Thank-
Seishin: *dragging* Hey Rob, look what I got!
Ohirume: *Flinch* What the- Why the Yvel do you have a Futurama Killbot?!
Seishin: *smile* Because they're hilarious. Also, this. Mizuro! Come in here!
Mizuro: What's- *stares at Killbot in shock* Is that a Killbot?!
Seishin: Yeah. Also, pop quiz! Who's the Fire King Monster card who searches for a non-copy Fire King during the next Standby Phase after he's destroyed by an effect.
Mizuro: Oh! Uh- who was it?
Seishin: Time's running out!
Mizuro: Wait, I remember! It's Fire King Avatar Barong!
Killbot: SOMEONE SAID BARONG!
Mizuro: *eyes widened in shock* Wait what?
Killbot: *Miniguns fire*
Mizuro: AHHH! *runs around frantically*
Seishin: *chuckles* Bet ya didn't know barong was a synonym for cannon!
Killbot: SOMEONE SAID CANNON!
Seishin: … worth it.
Killbot: *Miniguns fire*
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From RT89 (chapter 36):
Enjoyable chapter, can't wait for more.
Ohirume: Thank you, R-
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— — — —HHH— — — —HHH— — — —OOOOOOOOO — — — - OOOOOOOOO — — — — lllllllllll
— — — —HHH— — — —HHH— — — OOO — — — OOO — — -OOO — — — OOO — — — -lllllllllll
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— — — —HHH— — — —HHH— — — —OOOOOOOOO — — — —OOOOOOOOO— — — — —***
Omega: H- how long did it take you to do that?
Ohirume: Longer than I'd like to admit.
Seishin: IT'S AWESOME RIGHT?! :D
Omega: … Maybe. Still, it could be a little less crooked.
Ohirume: *glares at Omega* I'd like to see you do better.
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Ohirume: If the word art is overlapping in a weird way, you might need to decrease the font size in the toolbar.
A.K.A. the list just below the story's description.
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From buterflypuss (chapter 37):
good chap
Ohirume: Thank-
Seishin: Toilet on a stick!
*crash and splash*
Ohirume: *looks at Yukiro; voice distorted by porcelain echo* You're running out of idea's, aren't you?
Seishin: *snickers* Technically, you're running out of ideas. But you did think of this. JOHNNY!
Ohirume: *pulls toilet off head and raises brow* Wait, which 'Johnny'?
Johnny: *points dramatically* Candy Man!
Ohirume: Oh, the Narmak one.
Candy Man: Sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar!
Sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar, sugar!
SUGAR RUSH!
*CRASH*
Ohirume: Why was there a table here?
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From avatoa (chapter 37):
Nuevo, you have no idea.
Seishin: Nuevo can't come to the paragraph right now. Immediately after you, the reader, finished reading avatoa's comment, Rob transferred everything he knew about Teen Titans Go into Nuevo's mind.
Nuevo: *rocking back and forth in fetal position* Waffles. Fart jokes. The. Fart Jokes. Baby hands. Fart Jokes. Smile Bones. Fart Jokes. *grabs head* WHY ARE THERE SO MANY FART JOKES?!
Illavera: Nuevo, calm down!
Mizuro: *glares at Ohirume* Why the **** do you know this much about it?!
Ohirume: In my defense, I tried giving the show a chance. I just kept watching the episodes in hopes that the writers would wise up and make it better. They never did.
*sigh* And now I have to live with all of that in my memory.
Nuevo: SOMEONE CANCEL THIS ####### PIECE OF #### AND PUT US ALL OUT OF OUR MISERY!
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From Guest (chapter 36):
Really good story so far.
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By the way are you gonna go all the way to the aloha region or let ash get a legendary pokemon because there are some pretty neat pokemon in between here and now? Also are you gonna increase his party limit more?
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Klipper
Ohirume: I hope to take this thing all the way and am well aware of how much happens from Kanto to Alola. Galar/New series is still on the fence, though. But, as you saw in the Kangaskhan chapter, references will be made.
I'm still debating the "Legendary joins Ash" concept for this story. Mostly, because it's been played out like crazy.
Heck, the only stories I've found that seem to do it well are the ones where a single legendary joining him is the main premise, Ashes of the Past, and Ash's Just Reward.
Gem: But you had Mewtwo join me.
Mewtwo: *nods* Yeah.
Faux: And Laura joined me.
Laura: Right.
Ohirume: Guys, we're talking about Trix. Not all of you.
On the matter the party limit, doubtful. As you saw, Ash wasn't too fond of his limit being increased behind his back and I doubt he would ask for it to go up any higher. I mostly did that to keep Soot on Ash's team without cutting anyone out of the line-up.
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From Guest (chapter 36):
P.S. will ash meet Azmeth while he's on his kanto or johto journey? Will he add legendary pokemon to the omnitrix? Will he get the Riolu he encountered in Sinnoh?
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Klippar
Seishin: This first question, as well as the one in the comment following this, are answered in the Halloween Special. Namely, EmporerWolfgang's comment from the Scissor Street chapter (31).
Yugo: Trix is definitely getting at least one Legendary and/or Mythical form. If he didn't, it would be completely unbelievable. But you'll just have to wait and see which one(s).
Ohirume: As for Riolu … I have something in mind. Again, wait and see.
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From Guest (chapter 36):
Oh all most forgot will he encounter Vilgax some later
Omega: Check previous comment.
Ohirume: One thing I want to ask, though. Do Guest reviews intentionally show up later than logged in reviews? Because this string of them didn't appear until December 9th, despite their date stamp being on the 7th.
Seishin: We're not complaining. We're just … confused. ',:l Especially since this has happened like … five times now.
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From Guest (chapter 37):
Good story
Ohirume: Thank y-
Seishin: Monkey Wrench! *yeet*
Ohirume: *dodges* You do realize that this isn't one of B.F.P.'s reviews, right?
Seishin: *shrugs* Maybe. But there's not much else to do during a response like this. *points to side* Also, I already hired Rolf for the next hour.
Rolf: That's my horse! *Fish slaps Ohirume through a wall. Yes, fish not 'glitch'*
Ohirume: *sits back up, shakes head, smirks* Okay, this is gonna be fun. *picks up shovel* THAT'S MY HORSE!
Everyone except Ohirume and Rolf: *watch in varying degrees of confusion, shock, and intrigue as Ohirume and Rolf beat the ever loving Yvel out of each other with random **** that they pull out of nowhere and somehow emerge unscathed*
Rolf: THAT'S MY HORSE! *smashes Ohirume with the hat of discipline*
Gem: *flinches* What kind of dance is this?
Seishin: It's from an incredibly eccentric, amalgam cultured country.
Ohirume: THAT'S MY HORSE! *Hits Rolf with potted plant*
Rolf: *glares* You dare insult the son of a Shepherd with the potted shrub of ridicule?! And during the honored song of Rolf's village no less?!
Ohirume: What? *looks at plant* Oh, potted lily. Okay, I'm sorry about that. Please, give me a few minutes to get the cupcakes.
Rolf: *crosses arms* Rolf will wait.
Seishin: Nobody really knows if his homeland is supposed to be based off somewhere specific or the writers where just trying to be as random and hilarious as possible. Either way, they succeeded amazingly.
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From Guest (chapter 37):
Your Deadpool-wan-be may give you a head ache but at least he isn't the masks level of insanity.
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Klipper
Seishin: *aghast gasp* D:
Yugo: Uh oh.
Omega: Oh. Now you've done it.
Yugo: Yukiro. Just calm down.
Seishin: (ಠ_ಠ)I'll have you know, Klipper-
Ohirume: Yukiro! It's Christmas! That means no insulting the reviewers!
Seishin: But-
Ohirume: CHRISTMAS!
Seishin: ›:I Fine.
Ohirume: *sigh* Sorry about that Klipper. Yukiro gets pretty sensitive when people say someone else is crazier than him.
Although, it's partially my fault. I forgot The Mask existed when I described Yukiro back in the Fourth of July Special.
Gem: *Looks at Seishin with raised brow* Wait. You're not mad about the wanna-be thing?
Seishin: What? Of course not. That's literally what I am.
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From Guest (chapter 22):
The dragon scale is to help Misty's Horsea to eventually evolve into Kingdra, Metal coat to help Brock's Onix evolve into Steelix much earlier, don't know what the dusk stone is for though.
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Klipper
Ohirume: *snickers* Nice job on the Scale and Coat. The Dusk Stone is for later. You'll just have to wait and see how much later.
Omega: Where's Yukiro?
Ohirume: He's still pouting about the not-as-insane-as-The-Mask thing and he was planning to insult Kilpper during this response.
So, I locked him in the basement.
Faux: Basement? … Wait, what?! You locked him in the lava room?!
Ohirume: Call it payback for July fourth.
*Meanwhile in the lava room
Seishin: *pouting with cross-legged and arms crossed while on fire* If I were in a better mood, I'd be making the 'everything's fine' joke.
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From buterflypuss (chapter 38):
good chap
Ohirume: Thank y- … Thank … you? Yukiro?
Seishin: *grumbles*
Ohirume: Are you still upset about that Mask thing?
Seishin: I don't like being called milder that something else! Seriously! That's my whole thing!
Ohirume: *sigh* You really need to get over this. *eats handful of gummi bears / talks with mouth full* Dese comments get borin' wit'out yo nonsense.
Seishin: Well, I did switch out all of those gummi bears with the amazon sugarless kind.
Ohirume: *Eyes widen in shock* Wait, what?
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From Lycoan wolf entity (chapter 38):
Okay so Frenzy Plant is Wildvine with Eye Guy's terrible pun quirk. ***** it I'm making a list just to keep up with the amazing story.
Omega: *eye twitches before taking a deep breath to calm down* Okay. We all know I'm not that nice of a 'person'. But it's Christmas, so I'll let someone nicer respond to this.
Ohirume: The thing is, Lycoan, you won't have to worry about making that list. Because I already did.
My Fanfiction account profile is actually a profile on Ash.Similar to your account now that I think about it.
Yugo: *nods* Yup.
All of Trix's Pokémon. Including Soot, her inherent abilities, and everyones' ability and move set.
Everything Trix can turn into; Pokémon and Aliens alike. As well as the abilities and move sets for the Pokémon. And the species, Ben 10 counterpart, and even personality glitch of the aliens.
It even includes all of his abilities that come from Power Integration.
Ohirume: All listed information is up to date with the story and gets updated every time something developmental happens in a new chapter.
Yugo: As for Omega … you might to go check the Labor Day special.
Ohirume: Thank you for the kind words and I apologize if Omega was at all off-putting.
Omega: Sorry.
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Ohirume: Now, on to the deleted scenes. And, as you will see, the Gringey City chapter -and to much lesser extent the Kangaskhan chapter- underwent a lot of construction.
Seishin: Humph. ›:I
Ohirume: Oh, come on! You can't still be upset about Klipper's review!
Seishin: I can, and I am!
Ohirume: *annoyed sigh* Klipper, I am very sorry about him. As you can see, he's an infant.
Seishin: *sticks tongue out angrily*
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Muk – 1st scene training:
Why: I liked the glitch better
Where: after Clefairy uses Dazzling Gleam (The non-Pokémon upload glitch(couldn't think of a shorter name) didn't exist.)
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Pikachu smiled, "Congratulations, Clefairy."
Ash smiled, "Nice work. Practice on your own for a while." He hit the symbol on his chest; switching back to his human self.
He blinked in surprise, "What the Yvel?" 'I was going for Dragonite.' He pressed the button on the side again. But nothing happened.
Ash's eyes narrowed, "What?!" He slapped the watch rapidly.
Soot noticed and blinked in surprise, "Is everything alright, dad?"
Ash sweat dropped, "Uh, not sure. I can't change or anything."
Soot frowned and jumped down from the table. She ran over to Ash and looked at the watch closely, "I wonder-" Soot looked back at the table, "Vulpix, come over here for a second."
Vulpix blinked in surprise, "Um, alright." She jumped down and ran over.
Misty frowned and looked at Squirtle, "Is everything okay?"
Squirtle raised a brow, "How the Yvel would I know?"
Vulpix looked up at Soot, "What do need me to do?"
Soot pointed to Ash, "I want you to touch the watch."
Pikachu and Clefairy blinked in surprise, "huh?"
Ash flinched and stared at Soot in shock, "What?! Soot, you know how I feel about that!"
Soot rolled her eyes, "Dad, stop being stubborn and think. Last time this happened, what else couldn't you do and what came from it?"
Ash's eyes widened, "You think it's-" He looked down at the watch and smirked. He looked up at the fox and held the watch towards her, "Go for it."
Clefairy and Pikachu's eyes widened in shock, "HUH?!"
Vulpix glanced at them apprehensively, "Uh, sure." She reached a paw forward and placed it on the face of the watch. The device started glowing yellow.
Alert!
Everyone, except Soot and Ash, jumped in alarm. Brock flinched and looked over.
Vulpix flinched and jumped back, "What's go-"
Capture mode is already in use. Please standby for further capture.
Everyone stared at the pair in surprise. Ash and Soot grinned.
Brock and Misty ran over.
"Ash, what was that?!" Brock asked in alarm.
"What the Yvel is Capture mode?!" Misty asked; also alarmed.
Soot smiled up at them, "Put simply, it's how he gets new forms. The yellow coloring shows that the watch is adding something new to his list."
Pikachu's eyes widened in realization, "Oh, right. The same thing happened when I touched it."
Misty blinked in surprise, "So, you're getting a vulpix form?" 'Gotta admit, that'd be pretty cute.'
Vulpix's eyes widened, "Wait, what?"
Ash smiled, "Not exactly." He held up the watch; it was still yellow, "When I scan a Pokémon, the yellow glow fades after a few seconds." The watched became green again, "Like that. But that alert meant that it was in the middle of uploading a new form."
Brock raised a brow, "Uploading?"
Ash nodded, "Last time I got that alert," he shifted to a sly smirk, "I ended up with Quick Attack."
Everyone's eyes widened in shock; except Ash and Soot, "WHAT?!"
Brock stared in shock, "Y-you mean-"
Soot grinned, "Yup. Dad just got a new non-Pokémon form."
Misty smiled brightly, "Well, don't keep us waiting! Let's see it!"
Ash smiled sadly, "I'm afraid it doesn't work like that. Even though it's done uploading the form, it'll still take about a day for it to show up on the watch."
Soot sweat dropped, "And, before you ask, it only does this with the non-Pokémon.".
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Muk – Carrying Soot:
Why: Seemed like a bit … much.
Where: before the scene change
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Ash rubbed her back, "Just relax, sweetie." He smiled slyly and held her tighter, "Also, consider this punishment for possessing me without permission."
Soot groaned.
Misty snickered and pet her head, "Aww. Who's a pouty little puppy?"
Soot's glared again; deeper this time, "Keep that up and you'll wake up paralyzed from the neck down."
Misty flinched and looked at Ash, "She can't actually do that, right?"
Ash chuckled nervously, "Well, uh, not permanently."
Soot smirked wickedly and shifted her eyes to their inherent state, "Not unless I want to make it permanent."
Brock gulped.
Misty stared in shock and looked back at road ahead of them. She also took a few steps to the side.
Soot snickered and shifted her eyes back, "Smart girl."
Ash chuckled nervously again, "Don't worry, Misty. I'm sure she's just kidding." 'I hope.'
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Muk – Enter Bulbasaur:
Why: I thought the end result worked better for the scene
Where: Bulbasaur vs. Gringey Poison-types / Bulbasaur was pitted against all of the grimer
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"Bulbasaur, enter the fray!"
Bulbasaur emerged and glared. That turned to wide eyed shock upon seeing the massive army of Poison-types.
The Grass/Poison-type looked back at Ash in shock, "Seriously?!"
Ash sighed, "Yeah, I know and I'm sorry. But I don't have a lot of options. You're a Poison-type with Psychic-type attack and a sleep status move. Just be grateful they aren't Alolan."
"Fair enough." Bulbasaur said before glaring back at grimer, "Take this!" He formed a Hidden Power on his head.
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Kangaskhan – deleted Pre and Post chats:
Omega: Since when did we start putting these in here?
Ohirume: … Shut up.
Why: This didn't really work alongside all of the in-chapter comments
Where: Self explanatory
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Illavera: Kangaskhan … Kangas … khan.
Faux: Are you okay Illavera?
Illavera: I'm just- is that actually how you pronounce their name
Faux: *raises brow* Uh … Yeah?
Nuevo: And you're not at all concerned with how similar it sounds to Genghis Khan?
Gem: Who?
Nuevo: … what?
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*Insert Kangaskhan chapter here*
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Mizuro: You've seriously never heard of Genghis Khan?
Gem: No. Why? Is he famous or something?
Nuevo: Wha- NO! He was a ******* monster! That tyrant killed forty million people!
Gem, Mewtwo, Faux, Pike, Luke, Laura: WHAT?!
Seishin: Yeah. And to make it worse, kangaskhan's original, Japanese name was Garura; a mix of the Japanese words for kangaroo and ruler. That horrible reference is all English.
Even I can't make a joke about that without feeling like a total *********.
Mizuro: *wide eyed shock* Yukiro … just cursed. Like, actually cursed.
Seishin: *GIR voice* I know. I'm scared too.
Omega: *sweat drops* And he's back.
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Kangaskhan – another deleted chat:
Why: Did NOT fit with the ending in any way shape or form.
Where: Post chat
Mizuro: Huh. Y'know at first, I thought that that guy made Peter Griffin look like a good father.
Ohirume: *crazed laughing* *calms down* Wait. Are you serious?
Omega: I actually have to agree with the psycho. Griffin is apathetic, unsympathetic, abusive ************ who does whatever the **** he wants without caring about the consequences. Not even Ragyo Kiryuin can make him or Lois look like a decent parent by comparison.
Illavera: So, more like Stan Smith, then?
Seishin: Closer. But not by a lot. Stan's mistakes stem from total idiocy, ego, carelessness, and his inability to learn.
Mizuro: So, who would you compare him to?
Ohirume: Umm. I'd say he's like a slightly more arrogant Richard Waterson. Y'know, still stupid, but he legitimately cares about his kids … to the best of his ability.
Seishin: Which still isn't saying much.
Gem: Am I supposed to know any of the people you're talking about?
Ohirume: The fact that you just asked that means 'no.'
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Kangshan – telling Team Rocket where Frenzy Plant went:
Where: Right after Frenzy Plant leaves and Ash reappears
Why: I didn't like the idea of "Team Rocket finding out Ash can turn into aliens" as much as I first thought / Soot's reasoning was part of why I lost interest in the idea
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HEY! Jessie shouted over a load speaker, Where'd the plant thing go?!
Jenny glared at them, "As if we'd tell y-"
"Actually, that was me!" Ash shouted back casually; causing Jenny and Tomo to look at him in shock, and his traveling companions and Pokémon to look at him apprehensively, "That was a mutant carnivine form that I put together a few years ago after I got a little too curious about my transformations! I just made sure to remember how to turn into it!"
Jenny blinked in confusion, "I'm sorry, what?"
Soot glanced at her, "Everything dad just said was a lie. We run into these guys regularly and they think dad is the phantom Pokémon. So, we keep up with the ruse because it's a lot more believable."
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Ohirume: Thank you all SO MUCH for your support and happy holidays!
And, here's one more important note: This will be the last comment response chapter posted in the story.
But don't fret. All future comment responses and deleted scenes will be posted in my other 'story' "Random-ish stuff on the side" alongside every third new chapter.
Thank you everyone!