The Guardian's Kitsune
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NarutoxHarem
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''Normal Speech''
Inner Thoughts, Dialogue, or reading passages from books and scrolls
(Quick Notes and Messages or Echoes…Songs you go to Youtube and play. )
(Dark over lapping echoes)
''Boss Summons, Demons, Dark beings speaking, Demonic/Angry characters Speaking as well as extremely Dark spells and Magic.''
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Story Start
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Things had settled down after the rescue and escape from the other world of Metamoor It seem like it was going to be quiet in Heatherfield for awhile. While Will's problems with Astral Will could be glossed over with some explanation. Irma on the other hand didn't have that sort of luck when it came to the astral of her self.
She was forced to go on a date with Martin due to the Actions of Astral Irma. Irma had made it clear she didn't like the boy in anyway as more then a friend, an annoying friend by her actions; though that didn't halt his interest or pursuit of her at all.
During which the two arrived at a Museum at which Irma witness a Metamoorian creature. Later that night her and the other Guardians arrived at the Museum only to come face to face with Cedric and Elyon with the latter trapping him in painting. (From an evil and logical common sense point of view I would have immediately set fire to the painting.)
They learned more about why Elyon was turned. Though the revelations were twisted by Phobos's lies to shine him in a benevolent light.
They also met Elias, a painter and another victim of Phobo's cruel tyranny. Trapping the man in his own painting when the man dared paint Phobos as the monster he truly was. Getting a hold of the Last Tear the girls were able to make their escape.
All the while Uriah and his gang was caught sneaking around the museum by the security guard after having a run-in with Cedric and passing out in fright. They were able to get off light with no jail time thanks to Judge Cook, Taranee's Asian-American mother who imposed a series of punishments which included 200 hours of community service.
Finally came the weekend and the girls were ready for training. Well not really ready as this was yet another thing derailing their social lives, but when Naruto put it bluntly that unless the girls also had a healing factor they were unaware of and ever got in his place then they wouldn't be coming back; with that said they decided they preferred being alive and having to adjust their schedules then being murdered in cold blood.
Saturday, 9:38 A.M. the girl's arrived at Karmine's mansion. Greeted them he sent them to the back where Naruto was swimming. The five girls walked into the back and gendered at the pool.
Cornelia, the tallest of the guardians was dressed in a long white dress flapped around her knees in the wind, while a heavy white jacket was pulled tightly around her upper body.
Will chose the typical choice of attire for herself. Which consisted of a black T-shirt with an unzipped, gray sweater over top of it. A pair of dark blue jeans, some socks, and her only pair of shoes, which were dark crimson running shoes with white highlights.
The very slightly chuuby Irma was clad in a red top and blue skirt. Her wavy brown hair reflecting nicely on her pale face.
The mocha skin Tarenee was wearing a Fuscha Top and dark khaki pants.
The preppy Cornelia was wearing a jean skirt and light colored cream top with a pair of converse.
The Lithe Hay Lin was wearing a Cream color top, lime green skirts and blue and green stockings with rose red shoes.
''Welcome!'' Karmine shouted from the din, his voice carrying outside and echoing for a bit.
Suddenly a figure sprout out from the water. The figure rolled several times in a ball before landing and cracking the marble flooring that Karmine had installed around five inches of length and width along the pool. The marble was supposedly to match the flooring and such inside the mansion.
''That better not been what I thought it was!'' Karmine shouted from inside the house.
''I'm pretty sure it was,'' Naruto said yawning and slowly wiping the water from his eyes. He was unaware of the five staring and gaping girls. The pool was actually composed of fresh mineral water that Karmine had ordered from a spring. Pure drinking water used to fill up the pool, but hey since the K-Master was donating million dollar checks to every orphanage and legitimate cause he could find he felt like he was allowed to spoil himself now and then.
''For heaven's sake that was expensive. You need to lay off the deserts if your body weight could do that."
"Oh relax I'll pay for the damages. You should be mad at whoever installed it because if it was authentic it would be that easy to crack."
As the two were having their verbal back and forth, as the owner lamenting the immediate damage to his pool the five guardians were having reactions to the shirtless and dropping Naruto. The common amongst them were the rose red or deep blushes on there face. The girls finding a different direction as they were trying to vanish the thoughts and images that there traitorous bodies were reacting too. Well maybe except Irma who adorned a blank stare a thin trail of drool from her mouth. One by one the girls tried to regain their composure. Taranee tried to think of things such as Basketball or classical music that was less intense. She would have succeeded to if her friends weren't projecting more 'interesting' images.
Hay Lin being a more 'flighty' sort of person was able to recover but found the ground rather interesting and soon followed her in this was Cornelia.
''You girls okay?'' Naruto asked with a raised eye-brow.
''R-Right...'' Will responded looking wide-eyed. 'What were we doing? Right training...we came here for training...delicious training...Aah! Oh no they're corrupting me too!
''Yeah.'' Irma said dreamily.
''I'll be back in fifteen minutes. Just let me shower and get dressed.''
Getting dressed in black basketball shorts and a white t-shirt Naruto led the girls to a small meadow. ''Before I decide on how our lessons to begin I need to see what you girls are capable of. All five of you come at me at once. It's a simple exercise really. All one of you need to do is land a single good blow on me.''
''Sounds simple enough.''
''Sounds kind of easy.''
''Just one of us right?''
Naruto nodded, forcing himself to hide the mischievous smile threatening to spill out. The girls were going to be in for a hell of a chase. Two hours later part of the lake was drained, half the meadow was torn up and several trees ended up being destroyed. The Guardians laid scattered about groaning and tired, meanwhile Naruto sat on a blanket and taking a sip of his newly brew tea. Not a single hair on his head had been moved out of place.
''W-Water...need water.'' Groaned a parched Irma.
''I can't feel my legs,'' Hay Lin whimpered.
Naruto shook his head and chuckled. Maybe he should have went a bit easier. After finishing his tea Naruto cast a healing spell on each girl. ''I've finished my assessment. I'll begin with you Irma. Quite frankly you tired out the quickest at the half hour mark and I was quite disappointed at that.'' The girl deflated at this. ''...But!"' He helped up a finger causing her to look. ''Your movements are quite fluid and quick, second to only Hay Lin in comparison. We'll just have to work on your snacking habit and getting you to exercise ...I assume the rest of you girls do something.''
''Swimming,'' Will answered despite being sure Naruto already knew that and after her Cornelia declared 'Ice Skating' and Hay Lin adding skating with a bit of her family's martial arts. Though when Taranee mentioned dancing the girls were quite surprised and clamored around the embarrassed girl, asking questions before Naruto broke them apart to continue his assessment.
''Now everyone the raining I have in mind will improve your physical prowess. Speed, Strength, and Endurance no matter what your trade is. A powerful body can pull you through when you find yourself low on magic. Unfortunately mental training can't be done like physical can, but one has to work with what they can." He then turned his focus to Conerlia wise. "Cornelia, reserve wise you seem to have the largest reserves which means you have the most potential for impressive physical force because of your element. Also because of you're hobby your also light on your feet, flexible, and quick. You have a lot to offer close range wise so maybe adding in some long range skills can make you better rounded. '' So far the Guardian was liking the praise she was receiving. But all good thing come to an end. ''That and you share a weakness with Irma.'' Her eyes widened in disbelief. She had a weakness similar to Irma? How on earth could that be possible?
''Like her you also need physical training as I doubt strength you would last long against an opponent with superior strength and I say that because of the other weakness you and Irma share. A source...If you're taken into the sky or say a castle composed metal your element would be useless until you mastered it to such a point you could manipulate metal. So it's safe to say until then you need something else besides your power to fall back on. With training and practice it would be possible for Irma to draw water out from air itself and since you're all technically still beginners that'll take awhile.''
He moved on ext to Taranee who shifted nervously.
''Taranee...you have a tough challenge ahead of you. I'll put it simple. You can toss a coin in the air or drop in down a mountain or in an ocean and nothing would happen to it. If dropped in a fire hot enough the coin will melt. Fire needs control and can't simply be commanded or work in unison like the way the other elements can. To be honest all of you girls can benefit from physical training and learning a style of combat that suits you best. With such unrestrained power like fire we'll be focusing on control more with you then anything else.''
Naruto moved down the Optimistic Guardian of Air. ''Aah yes...quick, feisty, and can hold her own. You know some hand to hand combat and light on your feet. Your light stature gives you plenty of advantages and I have more ideas on how to train you then the others. Wind happens to be my primary element.''
''Wow, really? That's so...spacious.'' Hay Lin declared.
Deciding it was best not trying to decipher what the word meant Naruto continued.''Wind is actually one of the best elements when it comes to offense. Despite it's difficultly to master and lack of the numerous offensive techniques compared to Fire or Earth it doesn't have a supply weaknesses. At nearly all times Air is around us and can be becoken to your command. A style suited with using your opponent's strength back at them would be something for you to learn.''
At last he came to Will and paused. ''I don't have any element. So what can I really be trained in?''
''It's simple really...something I learned during my captured. The heart you bear and the Veil are intertwined. That's why in comparison with the other girls you don't seem to have that much power as most of it is feeding the Veil and keeps it from shattering, but I know a way to quickly awaken your potential and allow you to discover this power even while the Veil is being fed.''
''How?''
Naruto sat on the ground. ''Chakra...originally in my world it was thought that once you reached a certain age it was too late as the coils in your body have already formed. I've learned that from my travels the human populous in general share a lot of the same genetic features. That being the respiratory system. My flooding a bit of my chakra into your system I can alter your genetic make-up slightly and develop chakra coils. When Karmine first told me about the procedure I thought he clearly lost his mind, but then if I was going to learn how to use other forms of energy like Mana or Chi then the crazy method had to hold some merit right? Oh by the way this may or may not be the mos painful thing you ever feel in your life. I think there's 128 points I have to develop. Yeah I'm pretty sure, so whose first?''
All five girls shared a look and took a stepped back.
From his chair watching TV and eating Cheesecake Karmine was startled by a loud high-pitched scream. ''Huh? So he's doing that huh. Damn I feel sorry for the four girls who didn't go first. They have to watch then experience it. If that doesn't scare one shitless not much will.''
One again the girls had found themselves sprawled out on the ground wishing the day would end.
''Hey girls if you're that soar why not run it off? At least that's what I think that's what you're supposed to do. Let me check my manual!'' Naruto said, his supposed manual actually had the words Icha Icha the Instructor Volume 3 on the title.
''K-Kill...m-me...''
Naruto rolled his eyes at the Guardian of Water who was being over-dramatic. 'If they think this is torture wait until I bring out my Kage Bunshin to start training them.' The blond thought as he cooked his Ramen on a makeshift stove composed of rocks, wood, and a fire created from a match.
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Chapter End -This is the end of this chapter. As always improvements and changes. What I want you guys to see is how I used to write in 2012 and see the changes and improvements of not only my writing ability, but humor, and understanding of many things.
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Things had settled after the rescue. It seem like it was going to be quiet in Heatherfield for awhile. While Will's problems with W.A. could be glossed over with some explanation Irma didn't have that sort of luck.
She was forced to go on a date with Martin due to the Actions of Astral Irma. Irma had made it clear she didn't like the boy in anyway as more then a friend, an annoying friend by her actions; though that didn't halt his interests or pursuit at all.
During which the two arrived at a Museum at which Irma witness a Metamoorian creature. Later that night her and the other Guardians arrived at the Museum only to come face to face with Cedric and Elyon with the latter trapping him in painting. (From an evil and logical common sense point of view I would have immediately set fire to the painting. It's a damn shame when an average person is smarter then half fictional villains/evil.)
They learned more about why Elyon was turned. Though the revelations were twisted by Phobos's lies to shine him in a benevolent light.
They also met Elias, a painter and another victim of Phobo's cruel tyranny. Trapping the man in his own painting when the man dared paint Phobos as the monster he truly was. Getting a hold of the Last Tear the girls were able to make their escape.
All the while Uriah and his gang was caught sneaking around the museum by the security guard after having a run-in with Cedric and passing out in fright. They were able to get off light (no jail time or such) thanks to Judge Cook, Taranee's Asian-American mother who imposed a series of punishments which included 200 hours of community service.
Finally came the weekend and the girls were ready for training. Well not really ready as this was yet another thing derailing their social lives, but when Naruto put it bluntly that unless the girls also had a healing factor they were unaware of and ever got in his place then they wouldn't be coming back; with that said they decided they preferred being alive and having to adjust their schedules then being murdered in cold blood.
Saturday, 9:38 A.M. the girl's arrived at Kuiinshi's mansion. Greeted them he sent them to the back where Naruto was swimming. The five girls walked into the back and gendered at the pool.
Cornelia, the tallest of the guardians was dressed in a long white dress flapped around her knees in the wind, while a heavy white jacket was pulled tightly around her upper body.
Will chose a typical choice of attire for herself. Which consisted of a black T-shirt with an unzipped, gray sweater over top of it. A pair of dark blue jeans, some socks, and her only pair of shoes, which were dark crimson running shoes with white highlights.
The very slightly chuuby Irma was clad in a red top and blue skirt. Her wavy brown hair reflecting nicely on her pale face.
The mocha skin Tarenee was wearing a Fuscha Top and dark kaki pants.
The Lithe Hay Lin was wearing a Cream color top, lime green skirts and blue and green stockings with rose red shoes.
''Hey OH Company!'' Kuiinshi shouted from the din, his voice carrying outside and echoing for a bit.
Suddenly a figure sprout out from the water. The figure rolled several times in a ball before landing and cracking the marble flooring that Kuiinshi had installed around five inches of length and width along the pool. The marble was supposedly to match the flooring and such inside the mansion.
''That better not been what I thought it was!'' Kuiinshi shouted from inside the house.
''I'm pretty sure it was,'' Naruto said yawning and slowly wiping the water from his eyes. He was unaware of the five staring and gaping girl. The pool was actually composed of fresh mineral water that Kuiinshi had ordered from the spring. Pure drinking water used to fill up the pool, but hey since the K-Master was donating million dollar checks to every orphanage and legitimate cause he could find he felt like he was allowed to spoil himself now and then.
''You blond bastard! I ought to permanently dye your hair with orange and red next time we travel just to fuck up your week! You know how much that cost me?''
''About the same you pay to eat your weight in cheesecake!"' Naruto shouted back as he opened his arms, eyes still closed, and taking in the sun and still unaware of the girl's presence. More focused on drying naturally and trading insults with Kuiinshi. It wasn't like anything dangerous or harmful could possibly happen while he was on this property. It was pure and utter Suicide for anyone who lacked godlike power to show up at this time as they would be interrupting Kuiinshi's weekend 10:00 A.M. Cheesecake Bonanza and that was never good. Just thinking about what happened to that one guy who did...the nightmares had finally began to stop coming. But what was this odd feeling that he was being watched?
''I'll pay for it already. Damn man, instead of yelling at me why don't you go do something?''
''You mean like...''
''You better not even finish that damn sentence! Thanks to you I now have new messed up images in my head!'' He responded with annoyance.
''No body told you to be noisy.''
''You told me to a check you ass-hole. I'm going to murder you in your sleep. Watch!''
''Tch...jokes on you dipshit. I have three trained assassins to watch me sleep in case that would happen.''
''Hah! Like assassins can stop me.''
''There all attractive young females and scantily clad Kunoichi outfits. Two of them are knock-out look-a likes for Kasumi and Ayane.'' (From the DoA series.)
''Damn! My only weakness! Sexy female Kunoichi or sexy females in general now that I think about it. I'll just poison you with cheesecake.''
''I will beat the hell out you if you do Naruto. Don't you dare desecrate my cheesecake. I'll tie one of your fangirls to a bat and beat you with them I swear on my love for cheesecake I'll do!''
''Alright jeez I was kidding. I didn't think you'd get pissed off so much.'' Naruto finally opened his eyes to notice the Guardians were there.
''Huh...well this is awkward.''
''If an Orgy occurs, must definitely stay the hell out of my pool!'' The Tentai shouted as he went back into the house.
''For once in your life shut the hell up!'' Naruto exclaimed, having enough of verbally sparring with Kuiinshi for one morning.
Throughout the verbal debate there were various reactions. The common amongst them were the rose red or deep blushes on there face. The girls finding a different direction as they were trying to vanish the thoughts and images that there traitorous bodies were reacting too. Well maybe except Irma who adorned a blank stare a thin trail of drool from her mouth. One by one the girls tried to regain their composure. Taranee tried to think of things such as Basketball or classical music that was less intense. She would have succeeded to if her friends weren't projecting more 'interesting' images.
Hay Lin being a more 'flighty' sort of person was able to recover but found the ground rather interesting and soon followed her in this was Cornelia.
''You girls ok?'' Naruto asked with a raised eye-brow.
''R-Right...'' Will responded looking wide-eyed. 'What were we doing? Right training...we came here for training...delicious training...Aah! Oh no they're corrupting me too!
''Yeah.'' Irma said dreamily.
''I'll be back in fifteen minutes. Just let me shower and get dressed.''
Getting dressed in black basketball shorts and a white t-shirt Naruto led the girls to a small meadow. ''Before I decide on how our lessons to begin I need to see what you girls are capable of. All five of you come at me at once. It's a simple exercise really. All one of you need to do is land a single good blow on me.''
''Sounds simple enough.''
''Sounds kind of easy.''
''Just one of us right?''
Naruto nodded, forcing himself to hide the mischievous smile threatening to spill out. The girls were going to be in for a hell of a chase. Two hours later part of the lake was drained, half the meadow was torn up and several trees ended up being destroyed. The Guardians laid scattered about groaning and tired, meanwhile Naruto sat on a blanket and taking a sip of his newly brew tea. Not a single hair on his head had been moved out of place.
''W-Water...need water.'' Groaned a parched Irma.
''I can't feel my legs,'' Hay Lin whimpered.
Naruto shook his head and chuckled. Maybe he should have went a bit easier. After finishing his tea Naruto cast a healing spell on each girl. ''I've finished my assessment. I'll begin with you Irma. Quite frankly you tired out the quickest at the half hour mark and I was quite disappointed at that.'' The girl deflated at this. ''...But!"' He helped up a finger causing her to look. ''Your movements are quite fluid and quick after Hay Lin in comparison. We'll just have to work on your snacking habit and getting you exercising more...I assume the rest of you girls do something.''
''Swimming,'' Will answered and after her Cornelia declared 'Ice Skating' and Hay Lin adding skating with a bit of her family's martial arts. Though when Taranee mentioned dancing the girls were quite surprised and clamored around the embarrassed girl, asking questions before Naruto broke them apart to continue his assessment.
''Now everyone I training gets a major training and or overhaul in physical prowess. Speed, Strength, and Endurance no matter what your trade is. A powerful body can pull you through when you find yourself low on magic. Unfortunately mental training can't be done like physical can, but one has to work with what they can.
Cornelia, reserve wise you seem to have the largest and most potential for impressive physical force because of your element. Also because of you're hobby your also light on your feet, flexible, and quick. You have a lot to offer close range wise so maybe adding in some long range skills can make you better rounded. '' So far the Guardian was liking the praise she was receiving. But all good thing come to an end. ''That and you share a weakness with Irma.'' Her eyes widened in disbelief. She had a weakness similar to Irm? How on earth could that be possible.
''Like her you also need physical training as I doubt strength you would last long against an opponent with superior strength and I say that because of the other weaknesses you and Irma share. A source...If you're taken into the sky or say a castle composed metal your element would be useless. Well let me put it in another manner of speaking. There was this one girl, my teacher in an art known as Earth Bending that did the impossible and Metal bend, but that's only because she had a truly unique sonar ability that came with being blind so it's safe to say you need something else besides your power to fall back on. With training and practice it would be possible for Irma to draw water out from air itself and since you're all technically still beginners that'll take awhile.''
He moved on ext to Taranee who shifted nervously.
''Taranee...you have a tough challenge ahead of you. I'll put it simple. You can toss a coin in the air or drop in down a mountain or in an ocean and nothing would happen to it. If dropped in a fire hot enough the coin will melt. Fire needs control and can't simply be commanded or work in unison like the way the other elements can. To be honest all of you girls can benefit from physical training and learning a style of combat that suits you best. With such unrestrained power which is fire we'll be focusing on control more with you then anything else.''
Naruto moved down the Optimistic Guardian of Air. ''Aah yes...quick, feisty, and can hold her arm. You know some hand to hand combat and light on your feet. Your light stature gives you plenty of advantages and I have more ideas on how to train you then the others. Wind happens to be my primary element.''
''Wow, really? That's so...spacious.'' Hay Lin declared.
Deciding it was best not trying to decipher what the word meant Naruto continued.''Wind is actually one of the best elements when it comes to offense. Despite it's difficultly to master and lack of the numerous offensive techniques of Fire or Earth it doesn't have a supply weaknesses. At nearly all times Air is around us and can be betokened to your command. A style suited with using your opponent's strength back at them would be something for you to learn.''
At last he came to Will and paused.
''I don't have any element. So what can I really be trained in?''
''It's simple really...something I learned during my captured. The heart you bear and the Veil are intertwined. That's why in comparison with the other girls you don't seem to have that much power as most of it is feeding the Veil and keeps it from shattering, but I know a way to quickly awaken your potential and allow you to discover this power even while the Veil is being fed.''
''How?''
Naruto sat on the ground. ''Chakra...originally in my world it was thought that once you reached a certain age it was too late as the coils in your body have already formed. I've learned that from my travels the human populous in general share a lot of the same genetic features. That being the respiratory system. My flooding a bit of my chakra into your system I can alter your genetic make-up slightly and develop chakra coils. When Kuiinshi first told me about the procedure I thought he clearly lost his mind, but then if I was going to learn how to use other forms of energy like Mana or Chi then the crazy method had to hold some merit right? Oh by the way this may or may not be the mos painful thing you ever feel in your life. I think there's 128 points I have to develop. Yeah I'm pretty sure, so whose first?''
All five girls shared a look and took a stepped back.
From his chair watching TV and eating Cheesecake Kuiinshi was startled by a loud high-pitched scream. ''Huh? So he's doing that huh. Damn I feel sorry for the four girls who didn't go first. They have to watch then experience it. If that doesn't scare one shitless not much will.''
One again the girls had found themselves sprawled out on the ground wishing the day would end.
''Hey girls if you're that soar why not run it off? At least that's what I think that's what you're supposed to do. Let me check my manual!'' Naruto said, his supposed manual actually had the words Icha Icha the Instructor Volume 3 on the title.
''K-Kill...m-me...''
Naruto rolled his eyes at the Guardian of Water who was being over-dramatic. 'If they think this is torture wait until I bring out my Celestial Bunshin to start training them.' The blond thought as he cooked his Ramen on a makeshift stove composed of rocks, wood, and a fire created from a match.