Random-ish stuff on the side

by Ohirume

Basically a mish-mash of whatever's on my mind. Parodies, Pokémon Trix Omakes, Yu-Gi-Oh! cards written like Vanguard cards, deleted Pokemon episodes, etc. Check it out if you want. Your call. Relevant tags: Yu-Gi-Oh!/yugioh (Cyberse), Vocaloid (Remote Control), parody, Cardfight Vanguard

9. Comment response (04-29-20 – 06-24-20)

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I am so sorry that I cannot offer any help beyond saying that**

Ohirume: I … have no idea what to say here!

Yugo: Let's just jump on in.

Seishin: *Monty Python and the Holy Grail's The Knights Who Say Ni/The Knights Who say Ekke Ekke Ekke Ekke Ptang Zoo Boing Arouza Voice* NI!

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From Guest (Trix chapter 48):

(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)

I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCK!

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This will be a response to the comment replies. (not every singe one but a good chunk of them)

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First off, thanks for looking at my comments.

Ohirume: *smiles* No problem. I always enjoy getting feedback on my stories.

Seishin: And these responses can be pretty fun too.

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*Looks at inspiration list.* Well, might as well add to my bucket list than, along with other things.

Seishin: *Roger from American Dad voice* Yaaaaaaaay.

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*Looks at reason for personality glitches.* Okay...that's an...odd reason for their inclusion. Personally I would have made it so Ash doesn't want to turn into them because they are alien to them (pun intended). To me it would make sense why he would choose a pokemon form because they are creatures that he's actually familiar with rather than a creature that isn't a pokemon. Another reason would be because there's no reason to use them for training. As far as I'm concerned, Ash uses the Omnitrix to train his pokemon as well as Bork and Misty's pokemon (to a lesser extent). So, why would he use the creatures that aren't pokemon to train his pokemon? I'm not saying that your reason for the personality glitches doesn't make sense, it's just that the reason for them is a little weak.

Ohirume: Weak as it may be, my point still remains. The aliens are overpowered compared to Pokémon. They could do some serious damage if left unchecked or if they got into the wrong hands.

However, everything you said is also true. The non-Pokémon are just too freakish in the eyes of the Pokémon world.

The glitches were mostly included to give Ash another reason to not want to use them. Because, in all fairness, 'they look weird' isn't that good of a decider.

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Also I was going to say this in my first post but forgot to say it. Don't make this version of Ash too over powered or flawless(Mary Sue).

Ohirume: I have zero intention of making him too powerful.

I know you said that your trying to make him feel over powered, but I also feel that he should at least face some losses in the story.

Yugo: … That was a typo where you meant to put 'not trying,' right?

Not a lot mind you, and definitely not during the final match of the Pokemon League (or at the very least have Charizard or another pokemon fight). Maybe have him lose a battle against Gary, or one of the few Gyms left; just something that does't feel like hes a perfect battle strategist. Now normally I wouldn't be saying this, but after the destruction of a certain galaxy far, far away, I can't help but think that something might go wrong.

Ohirume: Okay, you have a point about the 'don't make him a perfect strategist' part. But unlike the Ash's in some other stories, he earned his intelligence.

Faux: Trix has had the Omnitrix for five years and Calm Mind was one of his first three non-Pokémon forms. Once Power Integration happened, he became a lot smarter.

Yugo: And don't think this means that he gained all of that knowledge solely because of Power Integration. All it did, in this regard, was upgrade his mental prowess. He wanted to learn all about Pokémon and now had the ability to remember all of it.

Seishin: As a comparison, think of Ishigami Senku from Dr. Stone. That villain-faced protagonist has a photographic memory and researched everything he knows now.

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*Looks at reason for OC team in the story.* That's understandable. While I myself am not a writer, I can imagine it being hard to make an originally bland episode actually good. Though personally I think you should've kept the Sebrina arc of the story, adapt it to fit better in your's, and have Haunter actually be caught. But if I have to be honest with myself, if you actually did keep it, there would a chance that it would just be a lot of patting.

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*Yukiro: Constructive?! They dissed my sense of humor!*: You alright there dude? You want some more salt with those fries. *Sips coffee with smug expression.* But in all seriousness, there's nothing wrong with breaking the fourth wall ( there's a reason why I like Deadpool 1 and 2), but it needs to work in a specific way in order to be effective. I would say more but, that's it.

Seishin: *grumbles* Says you.

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Now is it possible that I'm being a bit generous with my scores...maybe. But honestly after reading some terrible fan fiction and watching Saberspark's What the H*** videos, I think my standards have been lowered. And if you don't know what that is, just look it up. They're some of the funniest video reviews I've ever seen. I'm also the type of guy that enjoyed Venom and King of the Monsters, so take my opinions with a grain of salt, again.

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I'm glad you liked my idea for getting Ben into the story, though looking back at it I have to agree that some changes would need to be made. Having this idea taking place during the Orange Islands arc is a good idea. Of course, the reasons for Azmuth's kidnapping would have to be altered but more on that later.

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I can understand having Ben become pokemon seem a bit off putting, but I really don't think it's that much of a problem; mainly for two reasons:

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1. Ash already has forms that aren't from his world, so I don't really see a reason for Ben to not being given the same treatment. Now if Ash never got any of Ben's aliens in the first place and only had I forms, then maybe I would've agreed with you.

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2. This is probably the more logical reason behind this concept. Think of it like this; Ben is traveling to a completely different dimension. Not an alternate timeline, not a parallel universe, but an separate dimension with it's own multiverse. Thus, it would make sense for him to gain the DNA of the creatures local within the dimension so nobody raises an eye. For instance what would make more sense, seeing a Lucario in the Orange Islands, or seeing a humanoid crystal creature that doesn't have any data on it, has the same intellect as a human, can speak human languages to a T, and can't be captured in a Poke-ball in the Orange Islands. My point is that if Ben were to travel to the Pokemon world to save Asmuth and it just so happens that Asmuth has DNA from pokemon, it would make sense for Ben to use it to not draw in suspicion for the people local to the dimension or any of its universes. Also you could have it were Ben turns into pokemon forms, it's in more populated areas (unless there was a need for one of his alien) and have him become his aliens in more rural/forested areas where it's less likely for someone to see them.

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Though looking back, maybe Ben having every final evolution and most of the legendaries is asking for a bit too much like you said. How about this; give him every pseudo legendary (9), a 3rd of the starters (1 starter for each region), sprinkle in a few fan favorites (5-10 (maybe)/ Lucario, Zoroark, Scizor, etc), and to top it all off...one legendary and one mythical. That would give you a total of 24-29 pokemon forms, which would be lower than the amount of aliens that Ben unlocked, both on screen and off screen.

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Also, if you're afraid of making Ben too overpowered, then I really wouldn't worry about it. Ben is, in a way, already overpowered even without the pokemon forms; what with having Atomix, Way Big, and Alien X as forms in his Omnitrix (assuming that's the problem). Or, if it's because people might get confused on who is who (which could be an issue but nothing big), you could have Ben take the form of shiny pokemon while Ash gets the regular coloring (this idea is still raw in my head, but hey it's the thought that counts).

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As for Ben and Kevin being Ash's mentors, you make a good point. Truthfully, I wanted Ben's gang to provide more than just be there for the plot. Then it hit me like hammer on a nail; Ben could act as a Grandpa Max figure to Ash. Yes, Ash has his mother, Professor Oak, and his friends, but none of them actually knows what the Omnitrix is, or what it's capable of. Max in the original show, to me at least, who knew what was going on in the show and was a figure that Ben could look up to (mostly because he dealt with aliens in the past). That type of figure head is something that I feel like is missing in the story. If you made this with Ben and Ash, it would work. Both because they both have Omnitrix's (which would strengthen the relationship), and because it gives Ash a figure head to be inspired by and as an example for how he should be. Maybe he's going through some tough times down the road and Ben tries to comfort him; have him doubt himself that he would never be like Ben and wonder if he's worthy of actually wearing the Omnitix. I think something like that could work out well.

Ohirume: Well, there's a reason the figure head concept is missing in this story. Because it isn't needed. Trix is already mature.

Classic Ben got his watch at the age of 10. He was cocky, a show-off, and a little selfish. He needed Max's guidance to balance him out and put him on the right path. Remember Ben 23?

Yugo: We were also going to put Mad Ben as an example, but he was just a power-hungry brute. 23 still tried to use the watch for good but was a little too arrogant. Luckily not to the point that he was beyond help.

Ohirume: Trix got his watch at the age of 5. He was already caring and put others before himself. Though, he was also an idiot and very hyper.

Faux and Gem: *glare at Ohirume; sweat dropping*

Ohirume: After getting the Omnitrix, everything gradually changed. His mom and Professor Oak may not have known anything about the Omnitrix, but they didn't really need to. Trix was never under the threat of otherworldly attacks.

Trix was already on a decent path without the watch. Delia and Samuel helped make sure that he stayed on that path and didn't let the watch go to his head.

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For Kevin and Gwen, I was thinking about them and decided that maybe they should be saved for later. This is mostly because I couldn't really find a good reason for having them appearing other than for fan service. I guess you could have Kevin be a pseudo omen of what could happen if Ash abuses his power, but that's that could either be done later, or completely scrapped as it's not something I'm concrete with. Thinking it over more, I feel like the more logical companion that could come with Ben would be Rook, since he technically is Ben's current partner and would be the more logical character to travel with him. Now you could have all four of them appear at the same time, but that's a bit reaching for my tastes. Oh, and if you're wondering why I haven't mentioned Gwen that much, it's because I couldn't find a good place for her, or anything mana related into my idea. Maybe introduce her and mana into either the Lucario movie or gen 4, but that's all I've got.

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Also, who's to say that Animo or any Ben 10 villain has to originate in Trix's world. *wink wink*

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Yugo: *sweat dropping* That's not the point. Animo's gimmick is mutation and he favors live specimens.

Ohirume: *frowns* In a world where all forms of animal life and some plants have sentience and mental prowess that's on par with humans, letting him in crosses all sorts of moral boundaries for me.

And do not use cloning as an argument. That's creating new life. Animo's thing is mercilessly and painfully warping life.

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*Looks at origin of meat*...Okay...points for creativity. Though considering that a certain bird has been stated to have been hunted to near extinction for food, your going to have to make some workarounds there. And yes, I was the guest..

Ohirume: Remember what Soot said about that ancient Pokémon Almanac recreation? There were some dark times in Trix's world.

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That's it for now. Although after brainstorming a bit (he he) I thought of way to have Ben 10 villains to appear (That would obviously be a what if scenario if you decided to actually include Ben 10 villains into the mix). Thought I think it's best to save that for later.

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NAH, I'M BULL**** YOU!

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(RAW not 100% concrete)

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Orange Islands Villain: (Set Up)

So, if we were to rework my original idea into the Orange Islands, we would obviously have to rework why Giovanni kidnapped Azmuth in the first place, since you already have plans for Mewtwo. I did some thinking and came to a conclusion. Giovanni uses Azmuth's knowledge for two projects. One of them being his own design of a less powerful Omnitrix (yes I know it's kind of predictable, but hey it works). Reason? Power, that's why. The second project is basically a less powerful version of Azmuth's dimension hopper. Why? Simple, to expand his organization. With the portal, he could have an inter dimensional Rocket organization under his belt, and if his half fell, their would always be another Rocket organization to be the center of said organization. While testing it, his men find Ben's world and decide to basically hire people to work for them. Keep in mind Ben would probably be either in at Galvan Prime or already in Trix's world. During this, they come across Animo, looking for a job after either escaping prison, looking for a job, or by coincidence. After looking at his records Giovanni takes an intrest and has his men organize a meeting between them. In short, Giovanni will fund his experiments if he captures pokemon for his Rocketrx (*sarcastic tone*creative I know). It's a win, win situation for both of them. Giovanii gets the DNA, and Animo gets somene experiments. Also just to clarify, the Rocketrix wouldn't just be used on him, it would be only for high ranking members (though it would be cool if Jessie and James acted as the the test subjects for a short period of time). Also Giovanni would have is own, distinct version; having more than a handful of forms, and having the ability to turn off or destroy any regular Rocketrix so no one can use "his" weapon against him. For the Drowzee episode, you could have the reason for hypnotizing the pokemon for their DNA, and have Butch and Cassidy have beta Rocketrix's (final design in Johto. Also RAW). You could also have Lapras' herd be tied into this as well; Have Captain Crook be hired for Animo, and *el gasp* actually succeeding (2nd part of statement RAW). Also, if your wondering why I titled this as a set up, it's because this would tease who would be the main antagonists of the Johto region.

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Which will be relieved at a later date. *Insert Papyrus laugh here*

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Also, what I'm about to say in the following paragraphs was going to be in my cons section in my original post, but I forgot to say it. Please don't have any of your OC's respond to this or make it into a joke. This is directly towards the author. I what a genuine, artificial response from them.(THIS NEEDS TO BE ADDRESSED)

Ohirume: *blinks in surprise* Um … sure.

Omega: *smirk* This ought to be good.

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Soot's origin:

No. Just...no. This is probably the one thing that I think is actually OBJECTIVELY flawed with this work of fiction. I genuinely HATE her origin. The levels of just it being wrong are through the roof. Seriously, what was wrong with Ash just finding her egg? Also Please don't give a half baked excuse for this like "He was in I form" because that's not going to fly with me buddy. I would say more, but I feel that I'll stop right there (for both your sake and my sake).

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I know that I could have worded that better and deconstructed it, but I'll do that another time. Why Well the first reason has been stated above. Second because this post is long enough. And third because I'm afraid that either I'm going to go ape ****(figuratively and literally) in both this post and real life, or you will delete my comments and/or ignore them. I really don't want that to happen. I mean I highly doubt you'd do that, but the possibility is still their. And the last thing I want is to come across as someone fueled by hatred. Please...don't ignore this.

Omega: … woah.

Ohirume: *stares before nodding with a frown* I see. I'll await your follow up.

And, for the record, I never delete or edit comments. I'm not petty or self-centered enough that I would just ignore what someone has to say and pretend it never happened. No matter how much I don't like it.

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From Just Some Guy (Trix chapter 48):

(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)

This post is just made to clarify some things regarding my original post.

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So, in my reply to your reply, I had mentioned at the end of the post of Soot's origin. Now, do I think I may have gone overboard with my response? Yes. Do I think I was potentially being a little over dramatic with my comment? Absolutely. I wish to apologize for my behavior, and that no bad sparks are created from my post.

Ohirume: *sad smile* It's okay. I'm not mad.

*glances down sorrowfully* Still, I admit that it hurt to see that last part of the comment.

I believed that I could handle criticism. But I guess that mainly applies to the constructive kind, something Yukiro can pass off as a joke, or something Omega can jovially use to mock me.

Seishin: *glances at Ohirume sadly*

Omega: *sighs*

Ohirume: *perks up with a smile* You're 'cons' section in the in-depth review was a lot easier for me because it was all justified and reasonable. I really enjoyed seeing it.

I was anxiously waiting for this follow up.

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However, that doesn't mean that my opinion has changed. I still find Soot being Ash's biological daughter just a weird decision. I just don't see the reason for why you decided on this concept in the first place…

Ohirume: *soft chuckle* Yeah. I hear ya. It's not a choice that's easy to justify.

Still, I have my reasons. Albeit, heavily opinionated and biased ones.

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1. I think the "Ash randomly finds a rare as all **** egg or Pokémon" concept has been played out like crazy.

It always just seemed too convenient to me. I still enjoy the stories that do this and a good number of them are really well executed.

But I didn't want to be a part of what's become a cliché.

Yes, I understand that the multiverse concept makes it so anything is possible and nothing is really unjustified. But I wanted something more original for this story.

I added the 'Phantom Child' cover-story as a means of referencing the concept. That and it's more believable in the eyes of the public.

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2. This world's idea of Inheritance.

This world because Faux.

Faux: *smiles with a raised paw* I have Ancestral Inheritance!

Ohirume: The concept behind Inheritance as a whole is a sort of toned-down fusion or hybrid Pokémon. They still look mostly normal but have a handful of unnatural powers.

It doesn't occur naturally in Trix's world and only exists there because of the Omnitrix.

I thought up Inheritance long before Trix or Soot existed in my mind. Heck, Faux's the real reason the idea exists. But I still chose to give it to Soot as well. Though, under different circumstances.

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3. Not going overboard.

The idea of an Ash Ketchum truly fathering a Pokémon has actually been done before.

But most of those other stories are centered around harems and/or … PokémonXHuman stuff. It makes me cringe.

Although, I don't completely hate the idea. I just wanted to see the concept played out without making it too cringeworthy. At least, in my eyes.

And I'm not even the first to do this in a reasonable way. If you want to know what I mean, it's a five chapter, T rated, Pokéshipping(AshXMisty) story that finished back in 2006.

"The Honeymoon's Over" by Antithesis.

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Ohirume: I don't expect everyone to agree with me on this. But Pokémon Trix is my story.

I'll still take opinions and ideas into consideration and I won't argue with anyone's personal opinions.

But there are just somethings I'll decide on that I can't completely justify.

*bows apologetically* I'm sorry to anyone that this upsets.

Now how would I have done it? Simple:

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(This isn't me asking/demanding for this to be a retcon in the story, just what I think would have been better.)

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Once Ah gets the Omnitrix thing happen, similarly in the first Ben 10 episode. However with testing one of his alien forms he comers across a pack of mightyena. He was going to try and scare them off until the Omnitix runs out of time, or has low energy. Being defenseless, Ash only uses the only option that he has left. Run. But not before one mightyena claws at him, leading to the Omnitrix gaining it's DNA. Having been cornered, Ash decides that the only option left would be to fight; using the Omntrix to turn back into the alien form he was previously using. However instead of that form he takes the form of a mightyena. Confused as to were the boy went, the pack find Ash in the mightyena form and decide to help him out, mainly because they believe he's either hurt or he was abandoned by a previous pack. Have no other option (again) Ash decides to go along with them. They take him back to their home where Ash meets Soot's biological mother, who I will refer to as Dust. So basically, Ash is stuck with this pack for a good 2-3 weeks. Why? Well when the Omnitrix was starting to turn Ash back to normal, he starts fiddling with it, causing it to go to lock down mode. Why for 2-3 weeks? To build a relationship between both Ash and Dust; not as a couple, but as good friends. This would be significant, since she isn't really considered one of the more social members of the pack ever since she lost her mate shortly after laying her egg. During the last few days of the lock down mode, the pack come face to face with a hunter, sporting both a houndoom and a banette. In short, they defeat the hunter, Ash experiences what it's like to be in a pokeball for the first time and gains they banette DNA when the hunter's banette claws him, and Dust sacrificing her life to save the life of Ash. But before she dies, her final wish is for Ash to raise her egg as if it were his own. Ash leaves the pack and takes the egg with him, he finally turns back to normal, and finally returns home and eventually spills the beans with his mother and Professor Oak. Now how would Soot gain her banette inheritance? One day, Ash fiddles with the Omnitrix (again), leading to him accidentally using it to implant he banette DNA into the egg, leading to her haing shuppet powers, since shuppet is the pre-evolution to banette (This would be similar to what Ben did to the Highbreed. Yes I know it's not 100% like that, but it could work). Also, banette and mightyena can't be breaded together.

Ohirume: *looks up thoughtfully* I don't know. It doesn't work for me.

Mightyena are Hoenn Pokémon first and foremost. An entire pack in Kanto just seems too convenient in my eyes. Ash only met Soot's mom because she was at Professor Oak's ranch.

What's more, this concept would mean that Soot never even met her mother and that Trix would likely see Soot as little more than a pet or a trained Pokémon. Their bond wouldn't be as strong or meaningful.

That and Trix wouldn't have matured to the point he's at.

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Again, this isn't something I'm demanding to be officially part of the story, just what I would have done to make it less weird.

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That's it for now, again sorry if I came across as a little pompous/arrogant (using "we" instead of "you"), or just being mean. I still have ideas in my head, both for how to shape the story after Kanto, and potential forms either Ash or Ben could take. But I'll only post them if you are 100% fine with this so I don't come across as annoying (like in previous posts). Still looking forward to what you have planned for Ash and the gang, and hope that your going well in our time of crisis.

Ohirume: Thanks. And I'm doing well.

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From RT89 (Random-ish chapter 7):

Definitely interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing that expand.

Omega: *sweat drops* You're not the only one wondering where it'll go.

Ohirume: I've been trying to do it like I was expanding on johnymike98's concepts. But, it's not always easy for me.

Yugo: Not for a lack of trying though. Mike just gives us the reigns a lot of the time.

Ohirume: *sigh* Yeah. 'Start from scratch' creativity isn't always easy for me. As in, the real me.

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From RT89 (Random-ish chapter 8):

I know I might be the only one reviewing here. but I think everyone will agree with this; THANK YOU! It means a lot to see my reviews responded to and worth sharing.

Seishin: No prob Diablosis. The responses are a ton o' fun.

Omega: *glares at Seishin* Yukiro, what did we learn about obscure references from Reclusive Dork?

Seishin: Not everyone will understand them.

Ohirume: Yvel right.

Diablosis is short for Number 89: Diablosis The Mind Hacker.

They're a Yu-Gi-Oh! card and I am not even remotely ******* joking about the name.

Mizuro: Coolest part, there's an entire Number series in the game. It goes from 0 to 1000.

Omega: What? It only goes to 107. Number C1000: Numeronius and Number iC1000: Numeronius Numeronia aren't part of the regular count.

Mizuro: What's your point?

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From Guest (Trix chapter 48):

Just to let you know some annoying adds are appearing on your story can you find away to get rid of them

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Klipper

Ohirume: *eye twitch* I am well aware of these stupid, ******* eyesores invading mine and countless other stories all over the website and have been aware of it since the day it started happening. It started at around midnight of April 28th, 2020!

I'd stop it if I could!

Yugo: As you can see, Rob is well past annoyed about these ads.

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From Just Some Guy (Trix chapter 48):

HAPPY 1 YEAR ANNIVERSARY!

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Just popped in to say that I hope you're doing good and that you're working hard.

Ohirume: *wide eyed* Wait, what?! *looks up Trix publish date before smiling brightly* HAH! Holy ****, I didn't even notice. *looks up happily* Wow. To think Trix's story is already a whole year old.

Omega: *looks at readers* I am so sorry, everyone.

Ohirume: *glares at Omega* Yukiro.

Seishin: *pops into the area … literally* Yeh?

Ohirume: You have my permission to get a Butter Sock.

Seishin: Oh, okay th- WAIT WAT?!

Omega: … welp. I'm ******.

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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 49):

good chap

Ohirume: Thank y-

Seishin: *runs into room frantically while carrying a cardboard box* GUUUUUUYS! YOU NEED TO SEE THIS!

Omega: *deadpanned glance at Seishin* What?

Seishin: *Marlon Webb Watermelooooone vine voice* IT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING I'VE NEVER SEEN!

Nuevo: *raised a brow* What?

Mizuro: Is it a watermelone?! Or a bananana?!

Seishin: WE'RE GONNA FIND OUT IN 3! 2! 1! *removes lid*

Gnome: *jumps out of box* Ooo ooo ooo ah ah! O ho ho he he ha.

Hola me ol' chum. I'm g-not a g-nelf. I'm g-not a g-noblin.

I'm a g-nome! And you've been GNOOOOOOOMED!

Seishin: *stares at group before grinning*

Omega: *facepalm*

Mizuro: *glares at Seishin* **** you.

Ohirume: *groans* I am so ashamed.

Nuevo: *sweat drops* I don't get it.

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From Guest (Trix chapter 49):

(This comment has been split up as follows. Not for length, but for convenience)

So Mankey finally evolved this was defiantly the right place to do it

Ohirume: *shrugs with smile* Yeah. It seemed better than his evolution happening alongside Charmander's. As in, literally alongside.

and it Seems misty has a better understanding of her pokemon now.

Faux: *sad smile* In a sense, yeah.

The two stupid wannabe gym leaders are probably going to the big house I mean come on wanting to become a gym leader for fame and fortune that's just stupid there more to being a gym leader then that.

Omega: Hence Soot's delusional comment.

Are we going to be seeing more of Janine by the way sounds like you have something big planned for her.

Faux: *raised brow* Koga's daughter? We haven't seen her since the Fuchsia Gym chapter.

Ohirume: *blinks in confusion* Where did you get the idea that I had something planned for her?

Can't wait for the next chapter were Charmander finally evolves hopefully he listens to ash this time.

Seishin:

So are you going into the 8th generation now.

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Klipper

Ohirume: … I'm starting to think that I've been misinterpreting what you mean when you say 'going into 8th generation.'

If you're asking if I'm going to skip to the "Pokémon Journeys" storyline or have Trix suddenly journey through Galar, then no. I'm sticking with the canon storyline.

If you mean including the concepts from gen 8, then … let's just say patience is a virtue.

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From johnymike98 (Trix chapter 49):

Happy anniversary

Hopefully you guys do good and how is that chuggaaconroy pokemon binging going on

Ohirume: Thanks, and not even started.

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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 49):

love it some new theme with real one

Faux: *confused stare* What did you s-

Ohirume: *pushes Faux aside* Thank you.

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From RT89 (Trix chapter 49):

Another great chapter and once again an improved from the original. It looks like you set Misty up for a hard look at the opposite side pokemon training.

Yugo: Oh yeah. Big time.

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From Guest (Trix chapter 49):

(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)

Now this... this is what I call a great chapter. Some nice action, Mankey evolving into Primeape, Ash being a total bada** (even though he pails in comparisson to other fictional ones (Lobo)); this is probably one of my personal favorite chapters you've made thus far, and that's coming from someone who never saw the original episode.

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9/10

Enough said

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*looks at comment reply and blinks rapidly twice* Well this is...unexpected. To be honest I'm just glad that this hasn't completely derailed you from making this story. I stand by what I say, this is easily one of the best fan fictions I've read (granted it's not much of a challenge with all the awful ones).

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As for your reasons for Soot's origins, they are mostly logical and over all respectable. Although I do have 2 problems with them. Nothing major just something worth pointing out.

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1. I can understand not wanting to use I's, as you want to try your hands on new ideas to make your writing feel fresh and new. However, I's themselves aren't a bad thing, it all just depends on the execution of said I's. Like you said it yourself, there are some fan fictions that execute I's well. So why am I telling you this? Because sometimes it's good to just use a I and make it your own thing. Now I'm not saying to not come up with original ideas, because that would be absurd, but I fell like a good writer should know when to use a cliche and when to make something new (says the non-writer). Also, and this is just me, but I rather have a cliched story that was told really well, rather then a story that takes its original ideas to far, thus failing to subvert our expectations (Insert obvious Star Wars reference here).

Ohirume: Okay, fair. Clichés aren't Inherently bad. I mean, technically Faux's a cliché.

Faux: Wait, really?

Yugo: Really.

Ohirume: But the thing with Soot is just something I wanted to try. Like how Ash got the Omnitrix at the age of five instead of ten.

By now, I can't take it back without doing a rewrite.

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Faux: My concept can't really be that common. Can it?

Ohirume: Well, part of it is. Namely your identity and species. I can name seven stories with that premise. Four of which are in my Favorites. The only original thing about you is your Inheritance and Aura Transmutions.

Faux: … geez.

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2. As someone familiar with Antithesis' "The Honeymoon's Over", your comparison is kind of flimsy. In that story, both Ash and Misty become human, eeveeloution hybrids,

Yugo: Actually, that wasn't until the fourth chapter. It was full-blown Eeveelution each time before that.

meanwhile in your story, it's indicated that Ash boinked a mon...when he was 5 (unless I'm missing something)…

Ohirume: *ashamed groan* That is … accurate. And literally nothing I ever say will even begin to start justifying that.

But here we go anyway.

Omega: First, we will verify that Trix was in Pokémon form(s) when he kissed Yena. And yes, her name was Yena. That was revealed (sort of) back in the second chapter.

Yugo: Second, kissing. Omega may have just said it, but I'm clarifying anyway. Pokémon reproduce through a mouth-to-mouth kiss. As in every species.

Ohirume: Don't ask on the ones that don't have mouths. Because I'm still figuring that out myself.

Yugo: Be it intentional or accidental, it doesn't matter. Compatible lip contact equals egg. This also means that Pokémon don't view kissing in the same regard that humans do.

Ohirume: That concept rightfully belongs to Colb-a-nater's "Inner Strength." Difference is, I expanded it to every Pokémon species.

Gem: Third, there's the thing that Ash and Electra's brother talked about in the Pikachu Tribe Part 2 chapter. Pokémon mature really fast. As in, some species are usually meemas before they turn two.

Faux: *raised claw* Fourth, Power Integration hadn't happened yet. Trix had no idea what the Yvel kissing meant to a Pokémon.

Ohirume: He was a canon personality Ash Ketchum at the time. He was dumb.

Faux: *glares at Ohirume* That's not the point I was trying to make!

Ohirume: Finally, Trix mentioned back in Butterfree's goodbye chapter that Soot was an accident from training. He was serious about that and the fact that he is clueless when it comes to romance.

Laura: *chuckles* Yeah. He still hasn't realized Pidgeotto's crush on his braviary form.

Seishin: And when Brock freaked out a bit in response to Ash saying that Soot was an accident, Soot followed with *Deadpanned; Soot's voice* "Oh, please. It's not that big of a deal for Pokémon. How do you think daycares work?"

Illavera: *looks at Seishin in shock* Okay, that is just creepy.

Seishin: *Looks at Illavera; Illavera's voice* What do you mean?

Ohirume: *glares at Seishin* Dude, cut it out.

*Looks back at readers* Anyway … that's it.

Trix and Yena accidently kissed during a training session.

I'll explain the details of how Soot's Inheritance came to be another time.

Now granted, I've gotten use to it and while it's not something that I would have done, I will respect it.

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By the way, is it possible for you to ignore that last portion in my response where it was just a incoherent rant whn you respond to the comments, please? It's not something that I'm fond with and I think it's best if we just ignore it and move on from it. Seriously, if I could go back in time I would kick myself in the balls, and tell him t delete that portion. There's also no reason for you to apologize, if anything, I should be the one apologizing again for how rude I was. You have your opinions and that's fine. The important thing is that we respect each others opinions, no matter how much we may disagree with them.

Ohirume: *sad smile* Thank you. I appreciate it.

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That would be it but I've decided to give you ideas for possible names/forms for Ash and Ben (mostly Ash). I'm not posting anything on story ideas yet because as I said in my reply to your reply, I'll only do it if you are 100% fine with it. Keep in mind some of these aren't really personality glitches(I know that this sounds a little hypocritical on my part, but I couldn't come up anything else).

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Thrash/Outrage(Wildmutt)- Has dog like tendencies.

Ohirume: Makes sense but Odor Sleuth and Bite would also work.

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Close Combat/ Helping Hands(Four Arms)- Always ready for a fight and when fighting, treats it like a war(mostly because of his race's reputation).

Ohirume: Definitely either Close Combat or Bulk Up.

Helping Hands sounds like it belongs in that Alien Buddy … whatever crag show that classic Ben hated.

Seishin: Super Alien Hero Buddy Adventures.

Nuevo: *groans* Oh, ******* ****. Who came up with that name?

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Bug Buzz(Stinkfly)- Having pseudo intelligence (higher than human but much lower than galvan) with a hint of cowardice (I could have gone with other options, but they would have been repulsive to say the least).

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Hyper Fang/Jaw Lock/Fishious Rend(Ripjaws)- Constantly needing to chew on something, and wanting to lure opponents in traps to gain the upper hand (sort of like angler fish).

Ohirume: I was actually thinking of Crunch.

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Bulk Up/Snatch(Upgrade)- Nothing because Upgrade isn't a 100% complete megamorph (unless you give him a high intelligence but not talking smart like Calm Mind).

Ohirume: Conversion.

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Curse(Ghostfreak)- A less sadistic and non evil version of Zs'Skayr.

Ohirume: Makes sense. Although, I kind of like Phantom Force and Shadow Sneak too.

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Rollout(Cannonbolt)- Very clumsy.

Ohirume: Perfect.

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Hyper Voice/Howl(Blitzwolfer)- Treats everyone in the group as a pack (not herd) and acts like the alpha male.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Wrap/Sand Tomb(Snare-oh)- Has a superiority complex and acts like a regal pharaoh.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Bolt Strike/Discharge (Frankenstrike)- Increased intelligence, but doesn't show much emotion.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Stockpile(Upchuck)- Constantly hungry.

Ohirume: Either that or Spit Up.

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Double Team(Ditto)- Each clone has a separate personality.

Ohirume: Perfect.

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Mean Look(Eye Guy)- Likes to look at the scenery and nature itself, observe the opponents in battle to find flaws with their fighting style.

Ohirume: Miracle Eye or Foresight might also work.

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Max Strike/Judgement(Way Big)- Acts over confident due to his size, or a genital giant.

Ohirume: Meteor Mash.

Because To'kustar and because it sounds awesome.

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Ice Beam/Aurora Beam/Frost Breath(Arctiguana)- Likes to stalk their opponents as well as others to strike them.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Venom Drench(Spitter)- Doesn't talk a lot; not very neat.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Seed Bomb/Bloom Doom/Blast Burn/Flare Blitz(Swampfire)- Has a savage mindset but not one that he looses any intelligence.

Ohirume: Seed Flare. It's the only fiery sounding Grass move and vice versa.

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Screech(Echo Echo)- Every clone speaks the same thing at the same time.

Ohirume: Makes sense but I also like Echoed Voice.

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Superpower/Meteor Assault/Submission/Bulldoze/Earthquake(Humungousaur)- A genital giant, or acts over confident due to his size. Side note, could you use the reboot design for this form, or atleast a fusion of that and the Omniverse design? Reason why is because I think that the redesign is both the best redesign in the reboot, and is slightly better than the original.

Ohirume: I'm liking Bulldoze but I was also thinking of Dragon Rush.

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Psybeam(Jetray)- Constantly wanting to get the task at hand done as quickly as possible.

Ohirume: I was thinking of Signal Beam.

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Blizzard/Mist/Haze/Sheer Cold(Big Chill) Doesn't talk much and gets easily distracted by light sources (lamp).

Ohirume: Sheer Cold without a doubt.

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Power Gem(Chromastone)- Very heroic and would always protect those close to him.

Ohirume: Perfect.

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Thunder Wave/Extrasensory(Brianstorm)- Very intelligent, over thinks everything around him.

Ohirume: Makes sense but I also like Parabolic Charge.

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Close Combat/Spider Web/String Shot(Spidermonkey)- Acts very similar to Spider-Man.

Ohirume: I was thinking of Acrobatics. The webbing moves just sound lackluster.

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Acid(Goop)- Very reckless in battle due to his anatomy.

Ohirume: That or Acid Armor.

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Alien X(Alien X)- I don't really know if he would have a personality glitch. Also, since their is only one Alien X in existence (I think) would Ash have complete control of him, or would he have to deal with the other 2 personalities?

Ohirume: Judgement would probably make sense here.

And yes, extra personalities are a given and that would void the personality glitch.

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Magnet Bomb/Magnet Rise/Magnetic Flux(Lodestar)- Constantly trying to get people to give him attention.

Ohirume: I'm liking Magnet Bomb.

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Rath(Rath)-Rath (LET ME TEL YOU SOMETHING OHIRUME, WRITER OF POKEMON TRIX: TALES OF SOOT AND ASH, I HOPE YOUR HAVING A GOOD DAY AND NEVER GIVE UP WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE OF FAN FICTION!)

Ohirume: Perfect.

Omega: *eye twitch* …Masterpiece?

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Minimize(Nanomech)- Always looking at the bigger picture in situations.

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Water Pulse(Water Hazard)- Acts like similar to Bivalvan.

Ohirume: That or Hydro Pump.

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Overdrive/Thunderbolt(AmpFibian)- Acts like similar to Ra'ad.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Withdraw(Terraspin)- Acts like similar to Galapagus.

Ohirume: Makes Sense but I also like Whirlwind.

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Inferno(NRG)- Acts like similar to P'andor.

Ohirume: That or Blast Burn.

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Agility(Fasttrack)- Talks like acts like Blurr from Transformers Animated ( watch?vbFAw7dTY-T4).

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Acid Armor/Clear Body(Yes I know it's not a move, but I couldn't think of anything else)(Chamalien)- Likes playing mind games by going invisible.

Ohirume: Camouflage.

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Wild Charge/Thunder(Shocksquatch)- A more intense version Shocksquatch (in terms if personality).

Ohirume: Makes sense.

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Bug Bite/Megahorn(Eatle)- Tries to scare any intruders around his area that aren't familiar (Not the best, but it's the best thing I can come with without copying Upchuck

Ohirume: I'm liking Bug Bite.

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Autotomize/Gear Grind/Gear Up/Shift Gear/Future Sight(Clockwork)- Likes to think and talk about the past.

Ohirume: Future Sight.

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Crafty Shield/Iron Defense(Jury Rigg)- Jury Rigg.

Ohirume: This would probably be Autotomize or Shift Gear.

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Ancient Power/Rock Slide(Bloxx)- Constantly likes to have clear instructions, very organized, and likes to build.

Ohirume: This would probably be Crafty Shield.

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Gravity/Ancient Power(Gravattack)- Very patient and wise.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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U-turn/High Jump(Crashhopper)- Treats everything as a compatition.

Ohirume: I'm thinking High Jump Kick.

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Sludge Bomb/Steamroller(Ball Weevil)- Acts like a jerk (or at the very least like canon Guldo or abridged Guldo)

Ohirume: Probably Sludge Bomb.

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(I don't have anything for Walkatrout or The Worst. You're on your own with those two.)

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Charm/Aromatic Mist/Strange Steam/Sleep Powder(Pesky Dust)- Enjoys tormenting in their dreams people to get what he wants or just for fun.

Ohirume: I was thinking Dream Eater.

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Focus Punch/Dynamic Punch/Dizzy Punch/Work Up/Swift(Molestache)- Acts like a gentleman, bit will always put up a fight when necessary.

Ohirume: Probably one of the punch moves.

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Brave Bird(Kickin Hawk)- Very cocky.

Ohirume: Makes sense and I see what you did there.

Seishin: Welcome to the pun side!

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Shock Wave(Feedback)- Very optimistic.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Scary Face/Nightmare(Toepick)- Immediately tries to scare those he views as a threat. Sometimes he'll do it until they die. Doesn't talk.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Accelerock/Cosmic Power(Astrodactyl)- Constantly squawks after every 2 sentences and has a short attention span, or acts like abridged Goku (don't ask, I just thought it would work)

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Lick/High Jump(Bullfrag)- Constantly acts like a "cool guy".

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Buzzy Buzz/Zippy Zap/Zing Zap(Buzzshock)- Likes to goof off and pull pranks.

Ohirume: Zig Zap. I can't verify if the first two are moves that would ever show up in the anime. That and the names make me cringe.

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Mystical Fire/Sacred Fire/Fallout/Half-life/Gamma Ray(Last 3 are moves from Pokemon Uranium)(Atomix)- Acts very similar to All Might, or acts like Kronk.

Ohirume: The Uranium moves wouldn't really make sense. Trix's world is canon based.

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Smokescreen(Gutrot)- Acts like his original counterpart (I got nothing else).

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Night Slash/Dark Void/Dark Pulse/Leech Life(Whampire)- Constant craving of blood or anything that's red (same as how vampires are in Adventure Time).

Ohirume: Probably Leech Life.

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Avalanche(Rocks): May have bricks for brains, but has a good heart.

Ohirume: Rock Slide would probably work here.

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Octolock(Squidstrictor)- Very clingy to any of his belongings.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Sucker Punch(Gax): Very prideful. Side note , could you call Gax something else, like Vilthulu (made that one up myself).

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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That would be it, but I've got some forms that aren't really canon but rather requests of other forms on my part.

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Sludge Wave/Sludge Bomb- A lenopan that acts before thinking. Ben's form would be Sludge Hammer (Source: rzgmon200/art/CM-Sludge-Hammer-832742414).

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Double Slap(Slapback)- Every time he splits he loses intelligence while getting stronger (not to the point where it's completely drastic).

Ohirume: What about Counter? It responds to getting hit and hits back with double the power. 'Double' in more than one sense.

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Fusion Bolt (Shockrock)- Constantly goes overboard with power when battling.

Ohirume: Makes Sense.

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Wake Up Slap (Slapstrike)- Constantly breaks things while trying to hold objects.

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Horn Attack(Unitaur)- Constantly having amazing luck and mostly in a cheery mood.

Ohirume: *frowns* Uh, kind of on edge about the two Deefus aliens. Using them in general, not the names.

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Play Rough(Joker(not a Batman reference))- This one of my personal favorite fan made aliens, and I was wondering if it would be possible for you to implement him in the story. Think of a more sadistic version of Mew for his personality (Sources: kjmarch/art/Joker-74822673 / rzgmon200/art/CM-Joker-832722896).

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ASK/AK- A Sotoraggian that likes to get the job done as well as being a good marksman/gun wielder. Ben's form would be TenTen. Also, Ash's version would look like what would happen if you combined SixSix, SevenSeven, and Fulgore from KI, while Ben's version would look like a combination of SixSix, SevenSeven, and Animated Starscream(both have jet packs) (Source: artmachband196/art/SOTORAGG-794838045)

Ohirume: Well Trix is the one naming it, so probably Pursuit.

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This last one most likely won't happen, but hey never hurts to try. Right?

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Toxic(Overkill(5 Years Later))- A more sane version of Venom. Acts more like his movie counterpart, or a more sadistic version of Spider-Man an and less like a mindless monster. Now I now that the Klyntar aren't part of Ben 10, but I actually have a reason for this suggestion, as you could use him for a mini arc. Basically, a combination of the originals Ghostfreak and the reboot's Shockrock arcs. This isn't my idea isn't mine. If you want more info, all credit goes to Kuro and the Gang (click link for more info on the concept: watch?vUmtgNL_H_z4). Also some concept art for how Overkill should have looked like ( o-r-ash/art/5YL-CONCEPT-OverKill-Base-form-827340844). Again, don't think it will happen, but a man can dream, can't he?

Ohirume: Hm. I'll think it other.

The glitches you presented (all of them) do make sense and most of them may be used when/if Trix gets that alien form. But there are other factors I take into account … sometimes.

I usually try to base the glitches on a natural characteristic from the species or someone from the show.

Yugo: Like how Kinecelerans are impatient, Galvans are incredibly intelligent, and how Andreas wasn't the brightest. *puts hand to chin* Though, in hindsight, slow talker might've been a weird way to show that last one.

Ohirume: Overheat was done as an inverse to a hotheaded personality, Stone Edge's glitch hasn't been fully revealed yet, and Frenzy Plant ... *sigh* yeah. I'm pretty sure I half-***** his glitch.

Seishin: The Florauna is still my favorite.

Ohirume: My point is that stuff like your andromeda glitches may very well become the case. I'm just not sure if I'll make it literal or relatable.

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Before I go I have a question for you. Do you think it's possible for an alternative way to exist in order for the Omnitrix to gain predator DNA (Another fail safe, genetically modified predators with high intelligence, etc.)? It's an idea that's been in my head for a while, and it would be cool for Ben to finally use the predators agains his rouges gallery. Who knows maybe even Ash could use them (wink, wink).

Ohirume: Part of the problem with that is, how would he get the predator DNA? None of them exist in his dimension, his Omnitrix is very close to the canon in a lot of ways, and Ben's watch sure as Yvel won't have them.

Well except for Whampire. And yes, Anur Vladias are a predatory species.

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And that's it ( for now ;) ). I hope that your having a good day and a wonderful life in this time of crisisin this time of crisis (agian).

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*Looks at post* Huh. This is probably my biggest post to date.

Yugo: *follows Guy's gaze while sweat dropping* Can't argue that.

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From Just Some Guy (Trix chapter 49):

(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)

Me: *Realizes that Inheritance and Soot's powers mostly comes from the Omnitrix*

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Also Me: *Yells every Sr. Pelo screams because he feels like an idiot*

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Still, I can't believe I didn't put the pieces together sooner…

Ohirume: *blinks in surprise* Um … yeah. I mean, Trix has a mightyena and banette form.

*raised brow* Is that why you had such a problem with Soot being Ash's actual hatchling?

Seishin: *looks up at response to previous review* If that's the case, we might have gone a little overboard.

Omega: *following Seishin's gaze; sweat dropping* More than a little.

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Also, just to clarify the list of names and personality are there as possibilities of names for the alien forms and potential glitches. I wasn't trying to say that they all should happen (in terms of the appearance of the aliens); they're there as optional. I know this seems like I'm being a bit annoying, but I really don't want to come across as those types of people if you know what I mean. The reason for the forms after Squidstrictor and Gax are their to have potential new aliens to the mix, and to make the non transformations (Slapstrike, Unitar, Slapback, and Shockrock) canon, since I read somewhere that Man of Action stated that every alien from the original continuity exists in the reboot, so why not the other way around. Unitar and Slapstrike were only there because I just feel like they could easily be added as their own species, if you're willing to retcon some of it. As for Joker and Overkill, I know that they mostly won't happen. It doesn't help that you would have to ask the creator of Joker permission first, and you'll have to do something 5 Years Later did for the Klyntar(maybe you have to ask Kuro permission to use him, idk)They were just there because they're aliens that I personally wish to see. I'm trying to make sure I'm not coming across as demanding in these posts, or sound like an a** like in my one post.

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So I read what you said about the possibility of those 2 having similar DNA, and potentially have too similar DNA so the Omnitrix won't gain one of their DNA if the other already touched it. I'm just going to be blunt here; that is a very, very dumb idea. For one they have separate dex entries, indicating that there's enough differences genetically to classify them as their own separate species. Granted, both of the Nidorans have separate dex entries, but they do do have a few differences to make them stick out if given the silhouette. You could also say that they were basically what lead to the gender differences, since they were the only mons who had differences, and that gender wasn't introduced in the first generation. Also, we've seen the Omnitrix have the 2 different versions of Upchuck in it (you could retcon that but it wouldn't make sense at all). Another reason is that Mew and Mewtwo have entirely different movesets entirely (obviously), indicating that they still have a few differences to distinct them from one another genetically. On a side note, I think Mewtwo in the Manga was actually a combination of mew and human DNA (don't quote me on that though). I just really don't see why their DNA would be too similar. As for who I think it should be, I'm going with Mewtwo on this one. I can understand why it could be Mew, as I would be handy having a pokemon that can learn most moves, as it could be used as a form of training. The problem is with Mew's ability to transform into other mons, while gaining their moves, seems a little redundant considering that's the main function of the Omnitrix. Furthermore, since Mew can change its genetic code, how will it affect the Omnitrix? Would it gain the DNA of the pokemon that Mew transformed into, or would it be something else? I think it should be Mewtwo because, he'd probably be interested in the Omnitrix, but not in the same way Mew would be. He would probably try to get rid of it, as he fears what it could do against him. Only leading to him touching it, leading to both his DNA in the Omnitrix and activating the fail safe. You know, that thing that Death Battle forgot at the end of the Ben 10 vs Green Lantern video. Man that ending was garbage.

Ohirume: … Lets just say we have some stuff in mind.

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Anyways just popped in to give some clarification and to share my 2 cents. But before I go, my guests wish to share his thoughts on your story.

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Megatron: Ah yes. A great story with solid character development and great writing. Ohirume is a true blessing to this site, and should be treated as f****** royalty at this point.

Omega: *blank stare; slack jawed* I'm sorry. What the ****?

Buuut if I had one complaint...

Omega: THANK YOU!

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Megatron: There was no Megatron in the story!

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Megatron: 0/10, would not recommend.

Omega: *deadpanned* Really? That is your only complaint?

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Optimus Prime: The fact that Ash is biologically linked to what Earth would call a dog bothers me so.

Faux: *sweat drops* You do realize that Pokémon are just as sentient as humans, right?

Pike: *crosses forepaws* Kinda rude, Prime.

Laura, Luke, Mewtwo: *nod while glaring*

But hey! I'll take this over sh**** LeBeouf stuttering like a slagging mixtape any day of my cycle.

Ohirume: *sweat dropping* Okay?

Also, huge props to Mr. Ohirume for dropping the OC Team from the story. Because, not going to lie, they were a bit to-

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Yukiro: *makes random Jojo reference while breaking the 4th wall*

Seishin: HEY!

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Optimus Prime: AHHHH! Get away, FILTH! I'm going to scrap you!

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Yukiro:*sad whimper* Why do you guys not like me?

Seishin: *snickers before smirking slyly* Scrap me? I think a certain Hydraulic Press YouTube video tells another story. *sweat drops* I'd say the YouTubers name, but I'm not sure the censors will let me.

Yugo: Optimus Prime Crushed by Hydraulic Press (Transformers Hydraulic | SFM Transformers Animation) and that name was copied and pasted.

Hyperlinks and URLs don't work on this website.

Ohirume: I found out that the Private Message textbox format is different from the one in the document manager. I found a way to add in a URL by accident and had no way to replicate. Not even by copying and pasting

I had to give up for my own sanity.

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Optimus Prime: Just keep them out of the story for Primus sake!

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(credit goes to JOHNNYFLASH on Youtube for inspiration)

*Roundabout by Yes starts playing*

Seishin: Okay! That's it! Just for that, I'm messing with the Fossil chap-

Ohirume: *points two fingers at Seishin* LOCK!

‹-To Be Continued- -

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From lionel (Trix chapter 3):

Type your review here. Where is the ben 10 part punk

Omega: *sweat dropping* You actually typed in a fake default text? Dude, just … why?

Seishin: *angry pout* I'll have you know lionel-

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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 49):

lionel treat this more as a what if scenario rather than an actual crossover. The author is still brainstorming ideas for how to actually crossover the franchises together. This is more Pokemon than Ben 10 for now.

Seishin: *smirks with a clench fist* YEAH! You tell 'em Just Some Guy 777! *perks up and blinks in surprise* Wait … Just Some Guy? As in the anti-me one from the in-depth review? You have an account?

Ohirume: *Pulls up screen and blinks in surprise* Um … yeah. Apparently, they made one on May 19th.

Yugo: *raised finger while looking at Just Some Guy* To clarify, everyone's profile includes the date they joined the website. You probably already knew this, but still.

Omega: *blinks in surprise* Huh. What do ya know? *Looks at Just Some Guy 777* Well, now that you have an account, you're free to Private Message the ideas you were talking about before.

This'll have the added bonus of getting a response a **** of a lot sooner than two or so weeks.

Seishin: Though, be warned that the Private Message text box only allows up to 8000 characters(spaces included) per message. So you'll have to split up the ideas into multiple posts.

Ohirume: *smirks and rolls eyes while glancing at Seishin* Hardy har. Very funny, Headache.

*perks up and looks at readers with kind smile* But we are serious about the Private Messaging thing. Feel free to send over what you have in mind.

All you have to do to send one is click the 'envelope' symbol with the PM next to it. It's in the upper left on my profile.

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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 50):

i am really liking this story more and more day by day

Ohirume: *smiles* Thank you, Vegito.

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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 50):

Good chap

LAST TIME

*Roundabout by Yes starts playing*

Seishin: Okay! That's it! Just for that, I'm messing with the Fossil chap-

Ohirume: *points two fingers at Seishin* LOCK!

‹-To Be Continued- -

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CONTINUED

Seishin: *surrounded by red bubble; glaring at Ohirume* Oh, so that's how you wanna play it? *pulls out card* True Ride! Salvation Lion, Grand Ezel Scissors!

Ohirume: *holds out hand* Counter with Temur Charm!

Seishin: Roll for efficiency!

Ohirume: Wrong game!

Seishin: WHAT?! I could have sworn this was Paradox-Billiards-Vostroyan-Roulette-Fourth Dimensional-Hypercube-Chess-Strip Poker.

Ohirume: Nope.

Seishin: *looks down sadly* aww. *holds out card with smirk* I activate my Trap Card! Interdimensional Matter Transporter! I banish myself until the End Phase! *pop*

Ohirume: *grits teeth* I activate Burial from a Different Dimension to move Yukiro from banish to the Graveyard!

Seishin: *muffled shouting from underground*

Nuevo: I- What is happening right now?

Omega: *deadpanned* Absolute ********.

Seishin: *muffled* Buddy Call! Drum Bunker Dragon! Attack Rob!

Drum: Drill Ram Bunker!

Ohirume: Imaginary Gift! Protect!

Seishin: *muffled* Uno Reverse Card!

Ohirume: I Defuse with Kitten Yoga!

Seishin: *muffled* Crag, you're good!

Nuevo: WHAT THE ####?!

Seishin: *muffled* I activate the Trap Card Call of the Haunted and Target myself!

Ohirume: I chain Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your Call of the Haunted and prevent its resolution!

Seishin: *muffled gasp* Oh no! That makes perfect sense because if a Continuous, Equip, Field, or card in the Pendulum Zone is removed from the field before it's effect resolves, then the effect won't be allowed to resolve!

It's the only instance where the MST negates joke is actually sort of true!

Omega: *sweat dropping* Why are you suddenly over explaining everything?

Ohirume: *glares at Omega* Because yes! *perks up and blinks in surprise before looking at where Seishin's voice is coming from* Wait a second. Interdimensional Matter Transporter only banishes a face-up Monster.

Seishin: … Oh, yeah. *head pops out of the ground* And I was Locked. *looks down thoughtfully* Which is Vanguard's version of a Monster being face-down on the field … sorta. *faceplant into ground* Talk about a misplay.

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From Guest (Trix chapter 50):

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Great chapter today and judging by the looks of thing Charmander or Charmeleon now will actually listen to Ash.

Ohirume: Yup.

Speaking of evolution can you please not evolve Squritle or Bulbasuar it just wouldn't feel right for the stories to come.

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Klipper

Ohirume: *sigh* I don't know yet. Squirtle is out of the question because of the Squirtle Squad.

Bulbasaur, however … I mean, evolving him is the route Ashes of the Past took and it made a lot of sense. On the other hand, if Bulbasaur doesn't want to evolve, that's the only thing Trix needs to hear to get him an Everstone.

I just- I don't know yet.

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From Lycoan wolf entity (Trix chapter 50):

I just realized something, Brock isn't very committed to his specialty. Sure he's got Geodude, but Onix is going to evolve into Steelix, he's also got Vulpix, Electra and Zubat, he's also going to have Forretress, Ludicolo, Marshtomp, Coagunk, Chansey and that one Pokemon whose name escapes me that looks like a flower necklace. other than Sudowoodo and Geodude he has no other Rock type Pokemon.

Ohirume: *sweat drops with smile* Yeah. No kidding.

Yugo: Ashes of the Past makes that joke a lot.

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From Guest (Trix chapter 50):

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Seems if Yena gave Ash some advice during there time together

Ohirume: *nods* Correct.

and also real live magic that's insane

Yugo: Maybe, but it's not anything new. Remember the episode "Hocus Pokémon"?

Ohirume: *puts hand to chin* Though, that is more alchemy than magic.

Faux: *raised brow* Is there really a difference?

Ohirume: *shrugs* I honestly have no idea.

also something tells me Ash is going to meet is multiverse counterparts sooner or later.

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Klipper

Omega: Not if all of you readers have anything to say about it.

Faux: *sigh* Our cameos haven't gotten the best feedback.

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From Wizzer96 (Trix chapter 50):

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the Ash and charmeleon part…wholesome.

Seishin: *double thumbs up* Yeh!

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always nice to see your story get updated :D. hope y'er doing well, given the current situation.

Ohirume: *smiles* I'm doing well.

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also, wasn't Pokestar Studio basically Hollywood too? give that Unova is based on America. There must be quite the competition if the anime and games are mixed together.

Yugo: *smiles* Actually Hollywood legitimately exists in Kanto. Remember the episode "Go West Young Meowth"?

Seishin: The Dub may have said that it was in California, but … the Dub also had an Officer Jenny call her growlithe an arcanine. Also the whole 'donut' thing in the canon primeape episode. *sigh* yeah.

Also, is the possibility of Ash getting a pokemon outside of the ones in the anime possible? would be fun to see something like a mimikyu in the squad.

Gem: Well, Trix does have Clefairy and Soot.

Faux: Also, Primeape and Muk stuck around.

Ohirume: If I do decide on Mimikyu, it won't be in Kanto. Too Deus Ex.

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From RocKHord (Trix chapter 50):

You must put some EPIC BATTLE to Ash,but not as trainer and watch how he fight but they cant help him.

Even Soot can't,he cant do anything for his dad.

Need something EPIC,he should be on the brink of he must save everyone.

Ohirume: We'll get to something like that eventually. A good handful of Kanto is pretty tame in terms of conflict.

Yugo: That doesn't mean that it all is, though.

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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 50):

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This chapter is fine. Not great, not bad, just fine. The highlights were definitely the beginning with Misty and when Charmander evolved. IDK, maybe it's because I wasn't a big fan of the original episode.

Yugo: *shrugs* Yeah, fair. That episode (namely Melvin) was a little off putting.

Ohirume: Although, does anyone care that I basically spat in N's face with that reason for why Pokémon battle?

Mizuro: *raised brow* N?

Illavera: Is that like a nickname or something?

Faux: *nods* Yeah. It's short for Natural Harmonia Gropius.

Nuevo: … No, really. What's it short for?

Thought I'm glad on how you did Charmander. Sorry for going on a tangent, but I wasn't a big fan of how they treated Charmander's evolution. "Boom I'm nice. Boom now I'm an a**", it just came across as bad writing to me.

Ohirume: *nods with smile* Yeah. Like I said before, I prefer the idea that Charmeleon became overconfident after fighting off strong opponents and saw Ash as inferior. Canon Ash had no clue how to deal with that.

Faux and Gem: *glare at Ohirume*

Yugo: Put simply, that didn't happen this time. The Fire-type still looks up to him. Literally, for the time being.

Though to be fair, it wasn't as bad as how Aipom was treated. Seriously I could go on an entire rant about that, but for now...

Ohirume: The Aipom one was a little weird. Though, it was all the Normal-type's choice to be traded off.

Ash and Dawn just went along with what legitimately made Aipom and Buizel happy.

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7/10, good chapter; the whole ketchup thing could have been a lot worse pal... a lot worse.

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Also just to clarify a few things...

1. When I give a chapter a 6/10, I'm saying that it was above average and not good. And to be honest, I was being very generous with my scoring for that chapter.

Omega: *sweat dropping while pointing a thumb at Ohirume* Still, I think you're giving a little too much credit to this idiot.

I would've given it a 3.

Ohirume: *eye twitch before taking a deep breath* Omega's essentially my own personal heckler. If someone says something even remotely supportive to me, he'll argue it.

He keeps me from getting a big head.

Omega: The only thing I'm technically not allowed to do is directly insult the readers.

... that lionel guy doesn't count.

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2. I'm thinking of perhaps doing a sort of retrospective review as a build up to chapter 50. I would divide each chapter by 10 and treat it similar to how someone would treat a season of a show. This is only something of doing and isn't really something I'll most likely do, but it's an idea that I have in the back of my head, just don't get your hopes up.

Ohirume: *shrugs* Okay. I don't mind that in the slightest.

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3. A few questions...

Yugo: *pulls up review before sweat dropping* This could take a minute.

*Why a mightyena? I mean.. I don't mind it, but I would've expected something like a lucario or even a

zoroark.

Ohirume: Because it's out of the ordinary. Lucario and Zoroark are already incredibly well known and would seem like the most obvious choice.

Also, again, Faux.

Faux: *grins*

*Does Ash in this story still have Aura or not?

Yugo: How do you think Trix did that sensory thing in Fuchsia?

* How are Ben and the others going to react to both how Pokemon doodle the noodle and where meat comes from in this dimension?

Omega: *sweat drops* "Doodle the noodle"?

Ohirume: *shrugs* I mean, yeah it'll be weird for them. But I don't think it'll be that hard for them to comprehend. There are A LOT of aliens in their universe.

If anything, the meat part will be a bigger surprise. Probably not earth shattering, though.

* Will Ash capture any legendary pokemon in this story? Specifically, will Ash capture a certain red and

white dragon from the 3rd generation? Cliched yes, but it would be intriguing nonetheless.

Laura: *raises hand* I'm right here.

Yugo: Trix's world.

Laura: Oh, right.

Ohirume: Capture is still on the fence but not out of the question. Scanning Legendaries is a guarantee.

We're just not saying which one(s) yet.

* Are you planning to add anything else from the Ben 10 universe like Mana in the story?

Omega: *shakes head* The Ben 10 dimension in question has no real connection to this Pokémon world.

*shrugs* It's another example of "different dimensions, different definitions of what makes sense."

* Have you read 5 Years Later By Kuro the Artist? If so, what do you think of the story as well as the designs of Ben's aliens?

Ohirume: *smiles with thumbs up* Yup. All nine chapters so far. Kurt really knows what they're doing.

Mon-Ki was pretty surprising, though.

* Are you going to replace Brock with Tracy, or do you have something else in mind? I ask this because

Tracy isn't really that well liked in the fan base as far as I'm concerned and the reasoning for replacing Brock with him was...idiotic to say the least.

Ohirume: Eh. We'll see.

* Is the gender glitch with Kangaskhan ,and potentially other forms, going to be fixed? And yes I'm calling them glitches because it wouldn't make sense otherwise. If the Omnitrix turns the user in a Prime example of the species, and that species just so happens to be 100% of a certain gender, then I feel like the Omntrix should change the gender of the user if needed. I'd understand if you couldn't because it could potentially change the rating of the story from K to T, but I don't think it would be that much of a problem as long as you don't focus on it too much.

Ohirume: Nah. I'm keeping that as is. I'm not doing Gender change stuff.

Omega: We understand that the canon Omnitrix may not work like that, but still.

Different dimension, different definition.

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4. Serperior has arms...well...kind of. If you look at the back of its sprite you would see two little leaves that could and have been interpreted as arms. Granted we've never seen a serperior actually use them, but that would make sense considering what it's based on. Truth be told I just wanted to share this little piece of trivia.

Ohirume: *pulls up screen before blinking in surprise* Huh. I never noticed that.

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5. There's some reason for my accounts' creation. One was because I was annoyed at myself for not saying my "name" on the top bar. If you've read a comment named "Guest" it's most likely me. Second was because because of the reason you said (sort of). The final reason is... complicated to say the least. While I finished one of my comments I posted it I noticed after a few hours it hadn't shown, so I decided to create an account to send you the message (after 24 hrs, and assuming you couldn't see it either). But come to my surprise, when the very next day it showed up, making me creating an account kind of pointless. I'll most likely send you possible story ideas using my account, since I have no interest writing any stories at all. I draw things; I don't write things. Just don't ask me any help with writing things or expect me to come up with ideas on the spot.

Ohirume: *nods* Trust me, I understand on the drawing v. writing thing. I can't draw to save my life.

Omega: He really can't.

Ohirume: And, yeah. The benefits of having an account really are nice.

That thing with the reviews not showing up was happening website-wide for three days straight. For people with accounts and guests. It annoyed me to no end.

Yugo: Don't worry about the advice thing.

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6. You know, it's been a while since I've really criticized your work, but that's because there isn't much to talk about without having to repeat my points. Until now:

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Electra:

Why? Not trying to be snarky, sarcastic, or rude, just a general and normal...why? I just...fail to see her actual purpose in the story. Now I'm assuming that you do have plans for here down the road, but for now it just seems like she has no purpose other than existing, something I'm not a big fan of when it comes to OCs in general.

Ohirume: She was kind of a spontaneous thing that really grew on me.

Yugo: We have something in mind for her down the line ... like, way down the line.

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Others Finding About the Secret:

I'll most likely go more in depth with this in the possible retrospective, but I find it hard to believe that every one outside of the main group would actually keep Ash's secret. I could understand some of them, but then you have Sabrina who at the very least should tell other gym leaders and champions about his existence. Again, I'll probably go more in depth later, but I'll just leave it at that for now.

Seishin: *cocks head* Don't you remember? I King Crimsoned the place and gave her an Ashes of The Past memory restore.

I don't think she'll be telling anyone.

Ohirume: Everyone else has been someone who's relatively trustworthy or is isolated from the outside world.

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7. This idea is the last one that I will be sharing within my comments exclusively. Every other idea that I come up with will either be posted in private messages, or both. Really it depends how I feel.

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Pidgeot and Fearow

So I'm not a big fan of Ash constantly releasing his pokemon, as I feel like it's one of those cliches that always put a sour taste in my mouth, and not the good kind. Sure some pull it off well but most of them fall flat. One of those being Pidgeot. Now there is a way I think this could work. Have Pidgeot be in a similar position as Bulbasaur (which I feel should apply to EVERY single one of Ash's pokemon, including Greninja, Goodra, the Alolan Crew, etc.), where they have responsibilities on the side of being Ash's pokemon and be at the lab for the majority of the time. Have Pidgeot be at Oak's lab but also having to deal with the spearow if needed. The events would play out as normal except Pidgeot is just left at Oak's place and Fearow shows up. Now put your shows into his...err...talons if you will. He's been humiliated by his fellow peers within his flock for not only being thrown by a 10 year old kid but also leading the flock to their most crushing defeat. But he rises to the top, evolves, and becomes the leader of the flock. Once he realizes that the very kid that led to his humiliation, and he only has one thing on his mind...vengeance. His fellow piers think that this is a dumb idea, but he doesn't care and wants him dead, or at the very least defeated. Of course that doesn't happen and is defeated yet again, only this time he's not just humiliated, he's also exiled from his flock and is seen as a disgrace to them. Having nothing else to do, he decides to appear to the boy, filled with hatred and anger. However, the kid does something Fearow didn't expect, he apologizes. But instead of accepting it, he takes it as an insult. "How dare this human apologize to me, as if I were some weakling pidgey. No, I will not be seen nor compared to those filthy air rattatas!". He charges toward him only to be grabbed by the peak and thrown away by Ash, reminding him of the humiliation of his peers the first time he encountered him. Then, he does something that neither he nor anyone expected him to do. He cries. He's now lost everything; his home, his peers, and finally his dignity...twice. Taking pity on him, Ash decides it's best to at the very least help him by healing him up at Oak's lab. Deciding to use a pokeball, he catches him and has him healed up at Oak's lab. Fearow doesn't really object to it since he's basically in a state where he doesn't really notice the pokeball until it happens. Once healed up Ash gives him the chance to let him go or have him stay as his companion. Fearow is rightfully confused at this action; why would this trainer capture him only to give him the opportunity to let him go, especially after terrorizing the wild pidgey and pidgeotto? Initially he decides to leave but ponders it a while. He really has no were to go after this, since he's lost his flock and wouldn't really be able to fend for himself against other, more powerful pokemon because spearow and fearow work better as a flock. Accepting defeat he decides to stay as one of Ash's pokemon. I think this could work if given some good writing and dialogue. Though to be fair, this is kind of a way to reference the original manga, since Ash did actually capture a fearow in the manga. A manga that is a completely different beast entirely from the Anime at least in its early days.

Ohirume: *puts hand to chin* Huh. Not a bad redemption concept.

I'll think it over.

But, yes, I agree. A lot of the releases were just dumb.

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That's it for now, but before I go, I have to ask. The anti you Seishin, or is it Yukiro (seriously can someone explain that to me). I see someone is still salty. But, if that's how you see me then...*snaps fingers*

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(a man with a black business suit, white dress shirt, red tie, flaming skull head, and a fedora appears)

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I can get accustomed to this...persona if you will. Also if I'm the anti you, then that means I'm your villainous antagonist correct?

Seishin: *sweat drops* I meant 'anti-me' as in 'you don't like me.'

It was also a partial Assassination Classroom reference. Well ... the English Dub version.

Anyway, *salutes with large grin* Name's Yukiro Seishin. My Cameo Debut was in the Saint Anne chapter.

If so, then I already have something in mind exclusively for you my friend.

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*10 minutes later*

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Alright gentlemen, here's the scoop. I've revived you 5 from your home dimension to beat up your target. Not to the point of death mind you, but just enough to where he'd never dare challenge me. That's exactly why I've given you a major power boost in your pre-existing skills as well as a few other quirks. Do I make myself clear?

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Gi: Indeed. Now boys, what's our motto?

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B: Speed of light and strength of all.

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R: For we will make sure that they fall.

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J: We're King Cold's army's strongest force.

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Gu: We'll beat them all, secure the course.

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Gi: If trouble meets us as we pass.

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All 5: WE'LL SHOVE OUR FISTS RIGHT UP THEIR A**!

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Gi: Ginyu Force!

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All 5: MOVE OUT! *flies away*

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*sips coffee mug* It would appear that thing just got a little bit more interesting, wouldn't you agree. *wicked smirk*

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(Credit to Team Four Star)

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Also this: watch?vRpSuqm3IdTc

Seishin: *raises finger with cheerful smirk* Oh, the DBZA Ginyu Force. *DBZ abridged Mr. Popo voice* Bye. *snap*

Omega: *glances at Seishin warily* what was that?

Seishin: A reference to the guy who gave Fantastical Dragon Phantazmay his nickname.

*whispering to Just Some Guy* Phantazmay's a buff purple dragon with golden armor. Also he's a Yu-Gi-Oh card.

And don't worry. I only targeted the Ginyus.

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From RT89 (Trix chapter 50):

I never managed to catch that episode, so i cant give a good impression of how much better this chapter was. It was certainly a great chapter and a great look at stage magic. Seriously though, the guy was lucky Ash didn't kill him for putting Soot in danger. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ohirume: Yeah. I may have gone a bit overboard with Melvin.

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From Zach the hedgehogCharmander (Trix chapter 50):

Can't wait for what new chapter for our heroes to run into! (And now I should plan on watching the anime again)

Ohirume: Thank you, Zach.

Yugo: And yes, watching the anime again will make it easier to follow everything. Namely, it'll help you picture the setting, characters, and voices.

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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 51):

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Another chapter that's just good in my opinion. The beginning was nice and Ash finally repaid Misty the bike, which is something that only this fanfic has done in my memory.

Ohirume: *looks up thoughtfully* I think that some other stories have done it as well, but I can't really name them. Although, I think most of them were stories where she's written out after her debut.

Also, the explanation for Jigglypuff's singing actually makes sense, although I'm not 100% sure if it was like that in the original show. If not good job.

Yugo: *shrugs* Eh. Hard to say. We got that concept from Ashes of the Past.

But I am cautiously skeptical on what you're planning to do with Suzie.

Seishin: Hey, don't worry too much. She's just about to experience a new perk to knowing about the watch.

Faux: Isn't that a spoiler?

Ohirume: Barely. Trix practically said it to Suzie's face.

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7/10

Omega: *groans* yep.

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From RocKHord (Trix chapter 51):

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Chapter is great as always,but can you show to us an ANGRY ASH,VERY ANGRY,for example, who caught Soot and hurt her very much (very straight) and he crashed right in earnest, just ready to tear and throw and lay anyone who touches her daughter. The fatherly feeling turned on, which protects his family in any way.

Ohirume, Yugo, and Omega: *sweat drop*

Ohirume: Like I said, we'll get to that at some point.

Yugo: Also, Trix once put a scyther in a chokehold for cutting Soot's back open and threatened Surge's Raichu for talking about Soot in a … certain way.

Omega: And when the poison ghost used the Arlequins to thrash Soot, Trix stepped in and defended her.

Also by Charizard is better for me than Dragonit (it's very chubby for me, and it doesn't look like a cool dragon) can you change this shape?

Ohirume: *blinks in surprise* Are- are you asking me to change the design of a Pokémon? That's not for me to decide.

Yugo: If you actually mean for Trix to scan Charmeleon after he evolves, then *shrugs* that's not really out of the question.

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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 51):

good chap

Ohirume: Thank-

Seishin: *British voice* Nuevo was standing around and doing nothing like he does sometimes.

But today, he'd be visited by none other than Mr. Timn.

Nuevo: *staring ahead in confusion* Where did this window come from?

Mr. Timn: *Puts hands on windowsill and pulls himself up; surprising Nuevo* Greetings! *Pulls out Moss Rock* Lookin' for some fungi?

Nuevo: *sweat drops* That's moss, not fungus.

Mr. Timn: *throws rock back* Shows what you know about fungi. I'm guessin' you're not very fun. Guy!

Nuevo: *confused stare*

Seishin: *British voice* Mr. Timn was right about Nuevo being no fun.

Nuevo: *looks at Mr. Timn warily* Who are you?

Mr. Timn: Mister Tiiiimn.

Nuevo: Tim?

Mr. Timn: Timnnn. With an N.

Nuevo: Timn.

Mr. Timn: Mister Timn!

Nuevo: *deadpanned* I think I'll stick with Tim.

Mr. Timn: *grabs Nuevo by the collar of his shirt, pulls him closer, and glares; startling Nuevo* Listen here, guy! I didn't go through nine years of Candy Land, Milkman, and Kill You to be called Tim! GUY!

Nuevo: *freaked out expression* What?

Seishin: *British voice* It was at that moment when Mr. Timn heard something he could not believe.

Mr. Timn: *looks around* Do you hear that?

Nuevo: *glances around warily* What?

Mr. Timn: *looks at Nuevo* It's a washing machine with a brick in it dancing on bubble wrap.

*distant popping and clanging*

Nuevo: O- okay?

Mr. Timn: I'm gonna get me some of that bubble wrap, guy! And I'm gonna get me some of that bubble wrap! GUY! *lets go of Nuevo and runs off towards a road*

*continues running while stomping as a car appears out of nowhere on a high-speed collision course with him*

*Everything freezes and goes gray*

Subtitles: RIP Mr. Timn. ? ? ? ?-2011

Seishin: *whispers in Julian Smith voice* We ripped this off for you.

Nuevo: WHAT THE #### JUST HAPPENED?!

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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 51):

that a interesting chapter

Ohirume: Thanks … I think.

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From johnymike98 (Trix chapter 51):

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Awsome story and can't wait to see jigglypuff again uh I doubt it but i am still hoping you have some poketubers aka pokemon youtubers show up

Seishin: *Yoda voice* Well placed, your doubt is.

out of curiosity how well woukd ash react to the orre region

Omega: He'd probably say, "Where the **** did this region come from?!"

Faux: *raises claw* Except for the fact that curse words don't exist in Trix's world. He'd say Yvel.

Crocker: mabey soon if i end uo in that world i can get acess ro *spasms* FAIRY TYPE POKEMON *twitches*

Nuevo: *flinches, pulls out shotgun, and points it at Crocker* Omega! That guy's been possessed! I'll keep him distracted! You-

Omega: *sigh* Stand down, Nuevo. He's not possessed. Just insane.

Nuevo: *looks at Omega in shock* What? But the spasms and screaming-

Omega: Yes, I know. Just ignore it.

Deadpool: *shoves crocker aside* anywho put of curiosity how do you guys feel about glarian slowbro and the new pokemon

Ohirume: We've known about them for over a month. I'm still waiting for Galarian Slowking.

Pinkie pie; you guys are still in kanto but I feel like ylu guys are better than ashes of the past since you do a better story reasoning

Ohirume, Yugo, Seishin, Omega: *blank stare*

Omega: You cannot be serious.

Seishin: Yeah, I'm with Satoshi, here.

Anna: i wonder what ash would think of his anime counterpart in each region as well as some other fanfictions

Yugo: Well, he doesn't know about the multiverse yet, so he might have an existential crises and/or mental breakdown for the first twenty minutes.

Strawberry: like when one door closes another two opens where pikachu abandons ash and a spesrrow and rattata join ash and ash actually doesn't catch many pokemon and has developed a fesr if eltroc type pokemon mainly tbe pikachu line

Ohirume: Oh yeah. That is a good story. I'm really wishing they continued it.

Anywho story is good keep up the good work

Ohirume: Thank you.

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From RT89 (Trix chapter 51):

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Excellent chapter, completely hilarious! Seishin, not cool with the yawn trick, grumbles, I didn't start yawning till after that comment.

Seishin: That's actually a good thing. It was an empathy test. You wouldn't've yawned if you were a psychopath.

Omega: *nods before raising finger* Psychopaths feel much less, if not zero, empathy and are much less susceptible to 'contagious yawning.' Feeling the involuntary need to yawn when someone else does shows that you are empathetic towards others.

Ohirume: Even dogs do it. Seriously, if you yawn while your dog is watching, there's a chance they'll yawn back. Can't say the same for cats.

Seishin: Yeah. And it can even happen when no one else is around.

You'll often feel the need to yawn when you see someone yawning, think about the word yawn or about someone yawning, or read about yawning like you are right now. So, did I get you to yawn again?

Faux: *fox yawn* Yep.

Omega: *jaw twitches before stopping* Same.

Great chapter, looking forward to more. Heck, if your Random-ish stuff chapter is as humorous as usually i might want to take pain killers before reading it.

Seishin: Oh, we … woah. Response-seption.

Also, YAWN!

Nuevo: *glaring at Seishin* Cut it out! *tenses slightly and yawns*

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Seishin: NI!

Ohirume: Thank you, Yukiro.

Seishin: *quiet* ni.

Ohirume: Now, as you may or may not have notice, some large portions of Just Some Guy's reviews don't have responses.

Omega: If you don't care about that, we don't care that you don't care.

Yugo: The reason for the lack of response(s) is that we've been Private Messaging some comical nonsense with a lot of their questions getting answered in the process. They gave us permission to post them.

Ohirume: Spoilers not included.

Seishin: NI!

Omega: We also have no idea when we'll post them. So, we can't give you a post date for it.

Seishin: AH! Don't say that word!

Omega: Oh, right. *sly smirk* It.

Seishin: *screams while covering ears*

Yugo: Now on to the deleted scenes. Hope you enjoy it.

Seishin: *fearfully* NIIII!

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*Deleted Scenes

Dark City - Pikachu's ketchup prototype

Why: Wasn't feelin' it

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"Pikachu, stop it!" Ash shouted.

"Give it!" Pikachu whined.

Everyone perked up and looked over in surprise. Ash was holding the ketchup bottle in an outstretched arm. Pikachu climbed all over the boy in an attempt to grab the condiment. Soot almost broke into laughter. Clefairy and Electra just stared in shock.

"What the Yvel am I looking at?" Misty asked in shock.

"You tell me!" Ash shouted in annoyance. He grabbed the Mouse Pokémon by the scruff of his neck and looked at him, "What has gotten into you?!"

Pikachu flailed in place, "I just want it!"

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Dark City – Misty's reaction to first battle (doesn't act tough prototype)

Why: Suspense. It apparently didn't work out that way.

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"Is … this actually what I've been putting my Pokémon through in a battle? This much pain?"

Soot frowned, "It's probably more like a fraction."

Misty jerked and her eyes widened fearfully.

Brock glared at the canine, "Soot!"

Soot looked back; still frowning, "She asked."

"And she's not wrong." Ash added.

Brock glared at Ash, "How is that supposed to make her feel better?!"

Ash smiled sadly, "Because we never said that was a bad thing."

Misty jerked and looked at the pair in shock, "What? What justifies this?"

Soot smiled sadly, "Because Pokémon can handle it. Mentally speaking, humans aren't used to that kind of strain."

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Exeggutor march – Misty and co. in pool prototype

Why: Felt too mean spirited.

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Staryu laughed, "Geez. But that probably doesn't even compare to the time I had an electrode blow up in my-"

"STOP IT!" Misty shouted.

Her team jerked and looked at her in shock.

Misty looked around her team in horror, "How can you all be so casual about this?! I've been putting all of you through this much pain and suffering for years! Why didn't you ever tell-" She stopped and her eyes widened in shock. She put a paw on the symbol on her chest, "You have been. Haven't you?" She started tearing up, "I just never listened."

Starmie moved closer, "Misty-"

The vaporeon jerked and looked around them fearfully, "I- I'm so sorry." She jumped out of the pool and broke into a sprint.

"Misty, wait!" Horsea shouted.

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Ohirume: And we have a new winner for longest comment response. Word count (according to the Doc Manager) - 16,231.

Yugo: Dear Arc!

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Omega: It.

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