Shweta03 - mera bhi hogaya yarr story likhna ka bhi time nahi milta ab toh
asthaksingh7869 - nahi nahi vesa toh nahi hoga horror chahte ho toh shayad meri up coming story horror ho iske baad
Special Agent Dark - yes uske past ke karan ha yeh sab
Abhivi Mishti - shayad ha as mene roshni ka na decide nahi kiya ha itna but uska role bhi important ha kahi na kahi vo blast kare gi apna role reason
Abhivi-fan-vidhu - couple toh abhivi hi honge mera plot cid se alag hi chalta ha pata nahi kyu suspense investigation mystery likhi hi nahi jatti
Aditya Ki Ankna , sassy girl aish , Abhivian-Ragini , Krystel Sharma , Mri gank , Bapi , Yoongi's Wifey smiley , Sonalika Veer Dutt , Adisha-ki-deewani - thankyou so so for much love for first chapter i hope apko agge bhi pasand ae
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Daya came near abhi and gave the file
Daya - baad mein maat bolna file nahi di yaha rakh raha hu
Abhi - acha theek ha ..
Daya - tu ab bhi games khelta ha
Abhi - acha time pass hojata ha yarr high score ha mera pata ha
Daya - yeh sab baad mein pehle yeh padhle peechla case tha
and he went sat on abhi's seat acp was looking at him through cabin
Acp - headquarters walo ne galati se bache ko toh nahi dedi itni badi post
At night
Daya open ther door both he and abhi enter Daya spread hands
Daya - (happily) so yeh mera pyara
Abhi - (instantly) gust room kaha ha
Daya looked at him and closed the hands
Daya - wo samne
Abhi went inside
Abhi - bag nikaldo yarr
Daya - theek ha dinner kya karo ge
Abhi - jo mann ha bana le
Daya - aloo bana leta hu
Abhi - nahi raat ko aloo nahi
Daya - panner bana leta hu
Abhi - kal hi khaya ha
Daya - toh shimlamirch
Abhi - kabhi cheese Chilli khaya tha
Daya - dal fry
Abhi - dal bannane ka time
Daya - (irritate) toh bata de bhai kya kahe ga
Abhi - tera ghar teri marzi
Daya became angery
Daya - khichdi khao ge
Abhi - ghar ae mehman ko khichdi khalata ha koi
Daya gave him hardest glare
Daya - (taunting) ek kaam karta hu panni ubal deta hu
Abhi - nahi yaar ubla hua peeya nahi jae ga
Daya - Maggi bana du ?
Abhi - nahi yarr jamm jati ha
Daya - (loudly) toh mere bhai kya khae ga bata de
Abhi - tu jo marzi bana na mein kuch nahi kahu ga mere nakhre nahi ha
Daya just kept hand on his waist glare at abhi
Abhi - tumhari games kaha ha
Daya - tumhe toh nahi dene wala mein peechli bar bhi ek CD legaye the
Abhi - areh laya hu bag mein padhi ha
Daya went out and open the back of car and saw
Daya - abhijeet !!
Abhi - ha
Daya - idhar ana zara
Abhi enter outside and came
Daya - bag kaha ha tera
Abhi - areh yehi toh rakha tha
Daya - lock lagya tha ?
Abhi - ache se lagaya tha pakka tumhare beuro mein chori hoga koi
Daya - kya bol rahe ho yarr (he nodded in disappointment)
Abhi - wo Watchman salle ko chodhu ga nahi ..
he was going when Daya hold his hand
Daya - areh yarr kya tu ghode par sawal rehta ha kal dekh le ge Abhi mere dal dena
Abhi - size dekh kar baat kar
Daya - bhai ek din ki baat ha beuro change karlena
On otherside
A car stop purvi got down and open the car back to take out her things she saw
Purvi - yeh kiska bag ha kahi bomb toh nahi na isme ..
she went inside and brought the detector and checked
Purvi - bomb to nahi ha ..
she opened and check the bag
Purvi - kapde ha or vo bhi sirf black and white ..
she saw there was the album..she opened and saw
Purvi - oh toh iss mahashy ka bag ha yeh ..
she started seeing the album and found a great love and respect Abhi had for father Neeti
Purvi - vese dekhne se pata chalta ha ki Neeti ne paise ke liye sir ko chodha tha
(she looked more pics ) oh toh daya sir ke college friend ha interesting...(she closed it and hug that album close ) vese pyar na ha hi essi cheez vishvass agar uth jae toh sab par uth jata ha ...I am lucky (she kept head on book and looked at night sky full of stars )
On otherside
Abhi - isse pata chalta ha ki cid mumbai ko mere jesa officer ki zarurat ha ... naak ke neeche se chori hogayi or pata bhi nahi chala cid officer hokar bhi
Daya - yarr Tanna dena band karo ge
Abhi - hakikat ha accept karna seekho..
Daya - cid beuro se bag chori ho nahi sakta
Abhi - parking se toh hogaya na isse pata lagta ha kitni alsi or unalert ha tumhari team
(he took the bite )
Abhi - sudharna padhe ga
Daya - yarr please sudharna maat vo sudhre hue ha already mil jae ga tera bag na mila toh mein khareed du ga
Abhi - baat na bag ki nahi ha kuch or bhi ha usme
Daya - kya
Abhi - teri game ki CD baad mein mujhe sunnae ga ..mene guma di
Daya - nahi sunnata mein acha bata biryani kesi ha
Abhi - khass nahi parso jo khai thi na vo badiya thi
Daya - tarif hi kardeta dil khush karne ke liye
Abhi - jo sach ha vo sach ha joothi tarif mein nahi karta
Daya - (in flow taunting) ha ha vo toh sirf Neeti ke liye thi
Abhi didn't speak anything Daya realized
Daya - mera matlab
Abhi - kesi ha Neeti?
Daya - ab uski padhi ha
Abhi - pyar kiya ha khushi toh dekhne ki zimedari bhi meri ha
Daya - dil tuta ashiq ha sachme tu team bhi yehi kehti ha kal jab bataya mene tum Neeti ke ex husband ho
Abhi - dil tuta ashiq kabir singh hota ha mere jessa samjh dar nahi vese kabir Singh se yaad aya mein laya tha
Daya - kaha ha ?
Abhi - (teasing) cid beuro se jo bag chori hua usme ha
Daya glare him abhi show victory smile
suddenly his cell rang
Daya - hello... ha purvi.. (he smiled ) acha ..(he looked at abhi with victory smile ) theek ha ajao ..
And cut call
Abhi - mein hotel book karleta hu girlfriend aa rahi ha tumhari
Daya - bhaisahab apka bag purvi ke pass ha
Abhi - hu tumhare beuro mein officer ke bajae chore bhare hue ha
Daya - meri or purvi ki gaadi same ha or key chain bhi mere gaadi ke bajae purvi ki gaadi mein rakh diya tha
Abhi - sharam kar ladkiyo wala naam bhi gaadi or Keychain bhi same rakhta ha
Daya - tera har baat par discrimination zaruri ha kya ha ladka ladki
Abhi ignore and started drinking water
Daya - ja chup ja bed ke neeche aa rahi ha bag lautne .
Abhi - mein andar hu bag lelena
Daya - mehman ha chai pani peekar ek ghanta beth kar jae gi bahar maat nikalna
Abhi - senior se chai pani le rahi ha soch bahar se kitna le rahi hogi nazar rakha kar dokhe Baz hoti ha
Daya - uska boyfriend nahi hu jo yeh sab dekhu ga
Abhi - teri wali kon ha
Daya - yeh uski saheli ha tujhe toh pata hi ha saheli patao phir apni crush patao
Abhi - hmm mein popcorn bana raha hu haina
Daya - kyu
Abhi - India vs Pakistan ha dekhna Pakistan jeete ga
Daya - gadar kahi ka sharam kar India ka kya Kasoor
Abhi - dost fixing ha peechli bar India jeeta tha ab dekh lena Pakistan jeete ga
Daya - mehnat karte ha humare khiladi
Abhi - zamin par noto ka bundle ho na toh samne to wala yeh nahi dekhta ki girane wale kese kamae honge wo uthae ga or apne bag mein dale ga samjha
Daya - yarr tu shaadi karle phirse akele reh reh kar dimag kharab hogaya ha tumhara
Abhi - I hate gold digger samjhe pehle khud sambhalo phir dusre ki sardardi lo or phir zayada pyar karke teesri sar dardi bana lo ..
Daya - Neeti ne dimag kharab kardiya ha tera sach kahu yarr or kuch ek bar ladkiyo se mil kar toh dekh unse ache se pyar respect kiya kar dekh ladki kese bhag kar ati
ha
Abhi - teri wali par pyar try marlu
Daya - (angrily) aaeeeeee (he pointed finger at him ) don't ever think
Abhi looked at finger and then him he took the hot pan and kept on his finger
Daya - ahhhh
(he hold the and pressed ..Abhi kept pan back on flamed gas )
Daya - ungli jala di
He kept it in his mouth
Daya - meri wali ko chodh kar kisi or par try karle
Abhi - mujhe drama nahi karna
soon his popcorn formed he took it and sat in front of TV and on
Abhi - ungli Khana band kar Abhi khana khaya ha kha kha kar Mota hojae ga
Daya - profile bana du kya..
Abhi - kis par
Daya - matrimonial site par or kaha
Abhi looked at him he as him with sign Abhi saw a bottle near his side and put some candies and shake it
Abhi - samj tera naam mehnat ha
Daya- kyu
Abhi - karle imagine kuch nahi lagta ..
Daya - chal theek ha
Abhi - kya naam ha tera
Daya - dayanad shetty
Abhi - imaginary pucha ha
Daya - mehnat
Abhi - ha ab mehnat isse khole ga
He gave him cold drink bottle
Daya - yeh bhi mujhse khilwao ge kya yarr
he open it a fountain splashed on his face ..he shocked
Abhi - I hope you got the answer
Daya looked at him he was busy in watching and eating popcorn
Abhi - 10 ki mentos laa dena meri batti nahi janti iske bina ..
Daya shook his head
Daya - kapde gande hue toh hue farsh alag se chip chipa or Ganda hogyaa ha
Abhi - mujhse faltu panga maat liya kar warna tu bhi janta ha mujhe
Daya - huh Ehsan karna bhi bura ha aj kal
Abhi was enjoying the popcorn suddenly the door bell rang
Daya - dekhna yarr kon
Abhi got up open the door and saw purvi
Purvi - good evening sir your bag