Total Drama Island
Chapitre 13: X-treme Torture
amit. avrashmi: I didn't want to make Brick win because in many fanfiction he is the winner, so I let Gwen win like in the original series
Duncan for ever: Thank you for your understanding
Yassine567: Yes Sammy is talking to herself
The last time on Total Drama Island. Our eleven candidates went through a brutal training camp, under the orders of Master Chief Hatchet. Duncan was the first to be sent to the hole by the major for lack of discipline. A real shocker! But the real surprise was Sammy who infiltrated the recording studios and stole the confessional video to prove his innocence. I should fire the guards. At the end of the day Jasmine was eliminated because Scott changed the votes. A real genius that one! This week, our contestants will go to extremes. Who will be the first to crack under the pressure? Find out now on TOTAL DRAMA... ISLAND
After the intro song we find the campers sleeping except Shawn who was looking around
"No zombies in this area and very protected" said Shawn.
He turned his head and saw a bear stealing marshmallows
"What's a bear to do with marshmallows?" said Shawn.
The other campers were all asleep, except for Duncan who was listening to music on his headphones.
The sound of a helicopter woke the campers up.
It was Chris who used a helicopter. The candidates came out to see what was going on and the bear ran away.
"I'm coming," said Chris as he swooped down.
"Let's run away soldiers" said Brick. They ran away.
"Yes. I can't wait to get my pilot's license" said Chirs as he destroyed the confessional with the bear in it.
"It was a little stretching session that will serve you well for our Extreme Sport challenge today" said Chris
"I wish I had never come here" said Idris
"It's too early for this kind of thing" said Gwen
"This week you will be participating in three different challenges. The first is the extreme skydiving challenge. The contestants will dive into the void with their parachute, they will have to land in a sofa bed waiting for them at the bottom" said Chris.
Chief Hatchet jumped in to set an example. Landing that the sofa bed breaks
"It's a little dangerous," said Dave.
"You still don't understand that everything is dangerous here" said Duncan.
"Of course, you're expected to jump over fifteen hundred meters using these" said Chris as he handed them their old parachutes.
"The lucky candidates selected are Dj and Dave" said Chris.
""NO! I don't want to do that," Dave said.
Duncan nudged Dave with his elbow.
"What are you doing, Sky doesn't want to date a loser" said Duncan.
"Okay, I'll do it," said Dave.
"You know in action movies they say the best view from the sky is on the way to hell. "said Idris
"It's supposed to make me less nervous" said Dave.
"Come on buddy, look at Dj, he's not scared" said Idris.
"Yeah. Sure, that's cool," Dj said sarcastically.
"Not so fast. Because the second challenge of the day is... An extreme rodeo on the back of a moose" said Chris.
"You don't know what you're making up anymore" said Scott
"You feel compelled to comment every time I explain a challenge" said Chris
"PFFFF" said Scott
"Well I'll take it from here. Our candidates will have to ride this big Canadian moose, for eight seconds, or they will be buried, under a huge pile of lost and found" said Chris
"This pile is nothing compared to the dirty laundry at home" said Scott
"It's your lucky day Scott, you've been selected for the Gophers. And Idris, you'll be defending the Bass colors" said Chris
"He doesn't look very stirring. What a loser," Scott said. The moose hit Scott
"And the third one challenges X-treme Seadoo water skiing. Competitors will have to do a water ski course, and catch as many flags as possible, before reaching the finish line, while a member of the opposing team will drive the water scooter" said Chris
"How to water ski without water" said Sky.
"Yes. You'll drool, watch this" said Chris. Chief Hatchet arrived driving an indescribable vehicle. He lost control and crashed into a tree
"HAHAHAHA! Great. Brick you will ski for the Bass" said Chris
"Great" said Brick
"And Sammy for the Gophers" said Chris
"Great. I get to wear my new bikini" said Sammy.
"One last detail, the team that wins the most challenges will get to brag all night long, not to mention win immunity and a great multi massage shower in our mobile bathroom," said Chris
Showing the bathroom, the campers were amazed because it was so clean and bright.
"I dream about it" said Dave.
"You're not dreaming," Chris said.
"A shower. I wish there was something more useful" said Scott.
"Listen up farmer, we're going to win this challenge and take a nice shower" said Leshawna as she grabbed Scott
"Well folks go get your breakfast. I want to see you back in twenty minutes for...our EXTREME SPORTS challenge! "Chris said as he left with his plane.
Refectory
Most of the candidates had finished eating. Scott ate it all in one sitting.
"Excellent oatmeal, Chef," said Scott as he burped and let a paper with a heart on it slip out of his mouth.
Chef Hatchet read the note
"For the girl with the beautiful fiery eyes," read Chief Hatchet.
He threw the paper in front of Sky and Sammy. Sammy took the paper and showed Sky
"Check it out, it's a Haiku poem" said Sky
"It looks like one of the boys has a crush on a girl. Maybe it's you," Sammy said.
"You think? I was going to say it was for you" said Sky
"But Dave is totally crazy about you. I've seen the way he looks at you and he always wants to look tough in front of you" said Sammy.
"Yes, but Idris is crazy about you" said Sky
"No I don't think so" said Sammy
"But if you remember the first day on the Dock of Shame" said Sky
"It was just a look and nothing more" said Sammy
"Maybe but a look filled with love" said Sky
"Yes, but remember the night Amy was eliminated?" said Sammy.
"That's right. Now that you mention it, it was really bad of you" said Sky
"You're wrong, it wasn't me, look at this" said Sammy as he handed Sky his phone.
Sky watched the video
"So this was all Amy's plan" said Sky
"Yeah she couldn't stand that a boy was interested in me" said Sammy
"On the other hand, I can't see Idris being able to pronounce Haiku, let alone write one," said Sky.
"What is that supposed to mean? "said Sammy
"Nothing. You can't say he has a poet's soul" said Sky
""And I guess Dave writes poetry in his spare time," says Sammy.
"Anyway, Dave is more of a haikist than Idris," says Sky.
"Haikist? At least Idris isn't a germophobe who goes completely nuts every time there's a dirtbag," says Sammy.
The two began to tear the poem apart until it was torn in two
"Here's what we'll do, beautiful. I'll bet you two dessert nights that the poem was for me," said Sky.
"That's fine with me. Let's do it like this" said Sammy
Back in front of Chris' plane
"Don't forget. The ground crew can set up the sofa bed wherever they want to help their buddy during the landing" said Chris.
"Sayonara Dave. I hope your efforts to impress Sky are enough to keep you from missing the mark" said Scott
"Hey did you ever think that maybe Dave sees this as a special form of expression like Haiku?" said Sky. Dave looked at Sky strangely.
"Or not," Sky said.
Sammy smiled from afar
Confessional: Sky
Granted, it wasn't the most subtle moment of my life
Confessional: Dave
How I could see a five hundred meter drop as poetry
End Confessional
The plane took off with Dj and Dave ready to jump
"If you'd like to fill out these forms" said Chris
"But... we already signed an insurance contract at the beginning of the show" said Dj
"Yes, but these are for organ donors only. I would like to present a cannibal challenge to the producers and this will provide us with plenty of free organs! "said Chris.
"No way I don't want my organs eaten" said Dave
"Me too" said Dj
"And this is the place to jump" said Chris
"I can't see the landing zone" said Dave
On the beach the teams pushed the sofa bed. The Gophers had a harder time
"I wish Dj was here. With this strength he would be useful to us" said Sammy.
"Why does this thing weigh a ton" said Leshawna
The gophers looked over to see what was on the couch and there was a bear
"How did that bear get there? "said Scott.
"I don't know, let's try to possess it" said Leshawna.
The Gophers pushed with all their strength but the bear did not move
"Come on, get out of the way" said Leshawna
"I have an idea" said Sammy
She took out some paint and painted a cross on the bear
"Good idea Sammy, at least he should land softly with that" said Leshawna
"No it's not a good idea, when Dj lands it will wake up the bear" said Scott
"Don't worry, this will do it" said Sammy
On the plane
"I'm not sure I want to do this," Dave said.
"Don't worry, Dave. You'll land on the mattress for sure! "Dj said as he patted Dave on the back, causing him to fall out of the plane
"AhAHAHAHA" said Dave as he fell
"Sorry" said Dj.
Dave went down at full speed and shouted that he was going to land on the mattress but he landed next to it in the sand
"Dave? You're okay, buddy," says Idris.
"That must have hurt a lot," said Shawn.
"SOLDIER DOWN, I repeat SOLDIER DOWN" says Brick.
Dj prepare to jump out of the plane
"Well come on. The blue rope first. Then the red" said Dj before jumping.
In his fall he forgot the order and pulled the red one first. He started to panic and even tried to fly.
The Gophers waited except for Sammy who had gone to see Idris
"And Idris you know what is romantic" said Sammy
"Break the heart of a boy so violently" said Idris
"Actually, I was thinking more of handwritten words" said Sammy
"For example a poem" said Idris
"Yeah, that's like the Haiku" said Sammy
"The what? Never heard of it" said Idris
While the two of them were talking you could hear Dj's screams.
He came in with his parachute which finally went off and landed right on the bear.
"Yeah my plan worked" said Sammy
"I'm in one piece? I don't have anything broken" said Dj.
The bear woke up and gave Dj a hug before leaving.
"That was weird" said Scott.
"The Basses lose this round, the Gophers win it. One to zero
An ambulance came for the injured Dave.
"I hope you'll get better soldier," said Brick.
"Dave. Do you have anything you want to ask before we take you to get fixed?" said Sky.
"Yes. Am I clean?" said Dave.
"Seriously," said Sky.
Chief Hatchet picked up Dave and took him to the infirmary
Next challenge
"Come on cowboys, let's go to the special rodeo on the moose" said Chris
"Hey, Chris I can trade places with someone else" said Idris
"If anyone is willing you can" said Chris
"Someone would take my place" said Idris
No one wanted to take that seat
"Come on Shawn you can take my place" said Idris
"No I don't want to" said Shawn
"Rodeo is like a special training to gain agility against zombies" said Idris
"Very nice metaphor. It looks like the ancient art of the Japanese, the Haiku" said Sammy
"I still don't know what this thing is" said Idris
"Too bad for you" said Sky to Sammy
"I'll put your disscission aside and take your place" said Shawn
"Thank you Shawn, you are a lifesaver" said Idris.
Shawn sat down on the elk who was looking pissed off
Chief Hachet wasn't too keen on opening the cage but he did anyway.
The momentum started to shift and become uncontrollable but Shawn was able to hold on.
"It's actually pretty easy" said Shawn.
"I'm glad I let him have my spot" said Idris
"You can't do better I'm disappointed" said Shawn
The moose started to stop because he was tired
"What's already over I was having so much fun" said Shawn
"And Shawn gets a point for his team. Scott you're next" said Chris
"I'm going to make meat out of this elk" said Scott as he climbed onto the elk.
Scott's words made the elk angry and destroyed his cage.
"And Scott... " Chris said as Scott served him.
"Is he knocked out? " Chris said.
He landed in the pile of dirty socks.
"It smells bad for Carp. Wait a minute," Chris said as he stopped the screen.
"Go back to the last clip and put it in slow motion," says Chris.
You can see Chris with a stopwatch in his hand and Scott flying overhead with his pants down, which no one noticed.
"It's super embarrassing. It's super humiliating. I mean, look at me! " Chris said as he circled his face without motioning Scott.
"Couldn't we have a slightly more decent hair and makeup buget! I look like I just fell out of bed!
Resuming the episode
"Well yours is germophobic with a broken back! "said Sammy
Yes. And yours doesn't even know Haiku" said Sky.
The two of them stood back to back for a few seconds with their arms crossed.
"Well, it's true that it's not Idris or Dave" said Sky.
"Yes, plus we might have been mistaken in thinking it was for us" said Sammy before taking Sky in his arms.
"We'll find out who it is anyway" said Sky
No, seriously, I'm lucky I have a clothespin at all, it's the Basses who win this point" said Chris.
"Yes!" said Duncan
"Well done soldiers, I'll try to do better for my challenge" said Brick
"We have a perfect tie! The team that wins the extreme water ski challenge with jet skis will win the invincibility" said Chris
"I'm ready" said Sammy in the distance
She was wearing a blue bikini with sunglasses. All the candidates looked at her, especially the boys who all had their mouths open
"Wow, that's a beautiful girl" said Duncan.
"Thank you Samey for the fashion show but you have a challenge and the candidate for the Gophers is Leshawna and for the Bass is Duncan" said Chris.
Confessional: Scott
Here we are. We are tied but I'm not going to do anything Samey is so bad that he won't be able to make us win so I'll be able to get rid of Dj who is much too strong physically
End Confessinal
In summary, as haikist candidates, we have Duncan, Dj, Scott, Shawn and Brick," says Sky.
"But we know Duncan has a girlfriend, so he's out of the competition, and Scott is very short on vocabulary," says Sammy.
"I'll take care of Shawn and Brick and you take care of Dj" said Sky.
The challenge go started Brick was up and Leshawna was also up
"Sorry but this shower is for me" said Leshawna
"May the best person win" said Brick
"The rules are as follows: Wait! There are no rules! Which means it will be great! " said Chris
"Say, have you read a good poem lately? "said Sammy a Dj
"Hey, have you been asking arbitrary and pointless questions lately? "said Dj
"Forget it" said Sammy. She nodded her head away to Sky
Back to the test
"And go away! "said Chris.
Leshawna sped up Brick lost his balance and fell but he didn't let go. She tried to drop him through a ramp but he grabbed a flag and didn't let go.
"And a flag for the Bass" said Chris
"Yes" said Idris as he gave Shawn a high five.
Duncan gave a thumbs up
Despite what just happened Leshawna didn't know how to admit defeat and started to drag Brick everywhere but he still didn't let go, on the contrary he even grabbed four more flags
"Five flags it is unstoppable" said Chris
"Impossible" said Leshawna
"Leshawna must cross the finish line or she will be disqualified! But by crossing it Brick will win five flags at the Bass" said Chirs
"Well, think about how I can get him to let go" she looked around and had an idea. She was going to try a bluff by running into a rock
She sped up even more on the rock that was on the ground. Brick started to panic, once she got to the rock she shot and Brick let go.
"Sorry, that wasn't really my focus," said Leshawna.
"Well done soldier you got me" said Brick as he stood up
"Yes I won" said Leshawna as she crossed the finish line
"I don't know what Leshawna was thinking of doing but it's an absolute bust for the Bass team" said Chris
"That sucks, buddy," said Idris.
Duncan put his thumb down
"You think he got hurt" said Sky
"You've already had a rock thrown at you" said Gwen
"I'm fine" said Brick
"Unbelievable there is nothing normal on this island" said Gwen
Sky went to ask Shawn something
"So if we take the challenge, is there anyone in particular you would take a shower for?" said Sky.
"A shower? I would never do anything but attract zombies" said Shawn.
"Okey... Let it go," said Sky.
"Get ready for the second and final run.
Sammy was in place on the skis and Duncan is in place ready to drive
"On your marks. Ready. Hold on tight Samey! Go for it!
Duncan sped up and unlike Brick she didn't fall. He went over the rail but she didn't fall, she even caught the flag and did a somersault.
"First flag," said Chris.
Duncan did a zigzag but it didn't work. He had an idea to kick the seadoo but it didn't work, instead Sammy caught three more flags
"That's four flags for the Gophers" said Chris.
Duncan became upset when Sammy grabbed a fifth flag
"Samey grabbed the fifth flag and is heading straight for the finish line. Duncan is done for, he has to cross the line too" said Chris.
"Are you sure?" said Duncan.
Saying that, Duncan didn't look ahead and took the same rock as Brick. He flew into a tree and Sammy crossed the finish line.
"She won. The Gophers win and end the Bass winning streak.
"We won" said Leshawna
"Yes!" said Dj
"Great," Scott said sarcastically.
"Sorry Duncan, but I really wanted a good shower," said Sammy.
"It doesn't matter," Duncan said as he climbed out of the tree half dead.
"My beauty, come into my arms" said Leshawna to Sammy
"What's going on, we won" said Dave coming back
"No sorry no shower for us" said Idris
"What? NO" shouted Dave
Confessional: Dave
So I fell five hundred meters and in the end I didn't even win.
End Confessional
The Basses lost but I have a little surprise for them. While the rodents will enjoy a much needed shower" said Chris
"So we can eliminate Dj and Shawn" said Sky.
"I know and it's not Brick I asked" said Sammy.
"But then who could it be? " said Sky
"Who are you talking about? " said Leshawna.
"From this," said Sammy, showing Leshawna.
"Another letter for Jasmine" said Leshawna
"Jasmine ? that's the girl" said Sammy and Sky
"You know another girl as tall as a tree" said Leshawna as they left
"But who wrote her" said Sky
Killer Bass cabin (boy)
"Who are you going to vote for? "said Idris
"I was thinking Brick" said Dave
"No, we need to vote out Shawn," said Duncan.
"Why Shawn" said Idris
"Because the merger is coming up and Shawn will be too strong an opponent" said Duncan.
"He's not wrong" said Dave
"Okay I'm with you" said Idris
"Me too" said Dave
Screaming Gopher cabin (Girl)
Leshawna était rentrait d'une douche Sammy l'attendé
"Hi Leshawna, can I show you something" said Sammy
"Yes if you want" said Leshawna
She showed Leshawna the video
"So everything you said to me was true" said Leshawna
"Yes" said Sammy
"Sorry Sammy I didn't know" said Sammy
"That's okay. So we're still friends" said Sammy
"Of course" said Leshawna
Tonight
The Basses are sitting and the Gophers were right next to them
"As you know, if you don't get a marshmallow you will be forced... to go to the Dock of Sham and you will never, ever be able to return to the camp
"Duncan"
"Idris"
"Dave"
"Gwen we didn't hear today
"Sky"
Brick, Shawn, there's only one marshmallow left and the one that isn't will have to go forever. Brick you could be gone because you failed the last challenge and you Shawn I don't know why I didn't think of everything. The one who will be leaving is...
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"Shawn"
"Me but why" said Shawn
"Sorry buddy" said Idris.
"Ok, then I can say goodbye to my zombie shelter" said Shawn.
"If you see Jasmine again, tell her I meant everything I said in my letters" said Shawn.
"So you're the one writing this letter" said Sammy
"Unbelievable" said Sky
"Wait a minute Shawn, you're not eliminated" said Chris
"WHAT?" said all the contestants
"Yes, it wasn't an elimination challenge" said Chris
"So you mean we're all doing this for nothing?" said Duncan.
"No, you could have won a shower," said Chris.
"A waste of time, I'm going to sleep" said Duncan.
"Yeah, me too" said the rest of the campers.
"Well that settles it" said Sky.
"Yes Good night" said Sammy
End of chapter 13
Author's note: Hello, I'm back for another chapter. I know it's been a while but I'm back again. Yes, in this chapter I didn't want to eliminate anyone, I didn't add a new Drama, I just changed the characters. I like the fact that Shawn is doing the letters for Jasmine.
Vote:
Idris: Shawn
Duncan: Shawn
Sky: Brick
Shawn: Brick
Dave: Shawn
Brick: Shawn
Gwen: Brick
Team
Killer Bass: Idris, Dave, Duncan, Gwen, Sky, Brick, Shawn
Screaming Gopher: Leshawna, Sammy, Dj , Scott
Ranking
12e: Jasmine
13e: Sam
14e: Amy
15e: Zoey
16e: B
17e: Dawn
18e: Izzy
19e: Beardo
20e: Rodney
21e: Max
22e: Leonard