Welcome back to another chapter! As you know my name is Ethor and welcome back to another chapter! Yes MS is a little "Camera shy" currently for one of these, and by that he had work and was not able to come to help write this particular Comment spotlight. SPEAKING OF!
THOTSLAYER9000 says: Who TF is Illia
Ethor says: The white hared lolly girl that is the daughter of Kiritsuku Emia that was killed by Gilgamesh. Speaking of Illia I might have spelled her name wrong.
THOTSLAYER9000 says: The Guy Below me is a degenerate.
Ethor says: What little old me? Or the guy below me?
Silverfenics says: Will Ichigo learn and master his other powers and what about Ichigo/Harem?
Ethor says: Well Yes and-
MS says: No to the Harem
Ethor says: NOW YOU SHOW UP! Well as he said, there will be no harem shenanigans sadly, but we do have a ship in mind that we feel works for the story tho to apologize, about your other question I would have to say to an extent. While yes Ichigo is gonna learn some of his powers, mainly his hollow and shinigami powers, so I guess you can say yes and no to the first one and no to the second I guess.
Sagebeld says: Hi again am the person who writes this. My only complaint is Gilgamesh shouldn't be written as shouting arrogant foul... I really wish these chapters were a bit longer to immerse myself in your story. You guys have a lot of interesting ideas I feel like am getting half course meal but that's my opinion. My main point is this I want you to take a little bit long write these chapters in order to explore your ideas fully.
Ethor says: Hey! Welcome back onto this part of the show man good to see you! But yha thank you for your comments and criticisms! About the Gilgamesh thing, yha we both thought that it was a good idea at the time and while it still makes sense to us, I think I went… to far with it, I guess. Like don't get me wrong I still like how I made Gilgamesh angry but the way I did it made him comical, and I get that is not for everyone now BECAUSE of the comments you guys make, thank you for the criticism there. And about the second thing, yha for some of the MS chapters, he really does need to work on that. And for all of mine… I REALLY need to work on that, thankfully though this chapter is one of the last short ones out of the bunch we currently have written. So yha, that's a plus at least!
MS says: That's probably my fault, I'm not that experienced in writing anything, and the stuff I have written (not published btw) each chapter is short since I always wanna get straight to the point. It's a habit I need to work on and I appreciate the criticism of it.
And that is all of the comments so far on Chapter four and the previous, and I must say you guys really are the best so far! Like you are all either so supportive or giving constructive criticism left and write that is helping us make better and better content! Thank you all so much! But enough talk! We have a chapter to get to! Thank you all for the support and DFTBA!
Chapter 5: The Situation
Written and Edited by: Ethorthebayleef and MSLMGamer
(About 16-18 Hours Later)
"RIN? DID YOU GRAB EVERYTHING?" Shouted Shiro
"NATURALLY!" Shouted Rin
"GOOD!" Said Shiro before he slammed the door to the as Taiga called it, "THE MOBILE COMMAND CENTER!", "Did we get all the food we could carry?"
"I thought this thing could hold more food… but yes, yes I did," said Lancer
"The pots and pans?" asked Shiro, "I know it goes with food but I am just making sure!"
"Yes man I got it!" said Lancer before pulling out a massive pot from the sink… and it was all soapy too to boot.
"Okay good, I don't want Taiga to get too… over-exuberant about the lack of cooking supplies."
"What about the combat tools?" asked Archer, "Like the ammo Assassin stole from the local police office?"
"Yes he put that in already," said Lancer
"Good." said Archer before pulling out another set of knives to be cleaned by the blue-clad lancer, "What about the clothes that we stored?"
"Saber managed to fit those in," said Rin as both she and Saber entered the main room.
"Then if everything and everyone is ready!" Said Taiga as she and Assassin sat in their respective seats at the front of the Mobile Command Center or the MCC as Taiga tagged onto the side of their vehicle of choice, of course with Taiga at the driver's seat, "SEATBELTS EVERYONE!"
"What about Lord El-Melloi the Second and Rider?" asked Rin
"They are going to be taking the chariot while on the road," said Saber
"I guess that saves space," said Lancer.
"Then SEATBELTS EVERYONE!" shouted Taiga before hitting the horn twice to alert Velvet and Rider that they were heading out before she grabbed a walkie-talkie that sat on the dash and said, "Red Conqueror, Do you read Red Conqueror?"
"Do we really need to use code names Taiga-San?" asked Velvet, "We read you loud and clear."
"Oh come on buddy! Have some fun with this! WE CONQUER AGAIN! THIS TIME IN THE NAME OF GLORY, COMRADERY!
"Then let's get rolling!" said Taiga before slamming down the walkie-talkie and turning up the radio, which was already set to play Queen's Night at The Opera Album.
"I guess we're off," said Shirou
(Karakura Town High School)
"God damn it," said Ichigo under his breath
These past 16 hours were… stressful for Ichigo. The first thing both he and Ukitake noticed was the fact that Ichigo's human body was gone. And even after searching for it for four hours, they only found a raisin-like corpse left behind. Meaning the body itself died and he had to get a gigai from Urahara. That was the first thing to piss Ichigo off, the second was that Ichigo got next to no sleep and was seeing things on his sister's hands… yha he made a mental note at the time that he would have to check on them after he got home and actually had some coffee or something. And the final thing… well Ichigo really couldn't consider it a bad thing. Rukia Kuchki, Renji Abarai, Toshiro, Rangiku Matsumoto, Ikkaku Madarame, and Yamichika Ayasegawa all showed up to class just when he was feeling down about… well everything. It was the pick-me-up he wanted. And of course… he got in contact with the one that claimed he could teach him everything about "controlling" the hollow inside him, and assigned a meeting within the next 24 hours… just enough time to catch everyone up… or so he thought. Ichigo and his friend were looking upon the inside of the kitchen/living room area with utter shock that was the scene before them. Both Karin and Yuzu were working together on dinner… Yes, it was that simple.
"Yuzu? Karin? What the hell are both of you doing?" Asked Ichigo
"Oh Hi Nee-Chan!" said Yuzu with glee before setting down the ladle she was using and flinging herself into a projectile hug toward her eldest brother, as soon as she made contact she said, "You're home early!"
"Yha, I didn't have any extra activities today… Why are you both here early?" asked Ichigo
"We did not feel the best today. So we were allowed to come home early, we are feeling better now though." said Karin before she looked behind her brother to see his friends, all of whom he asked to come over to explain things, "Who are these losers and the skank?"
"WHY YOU LITTLE!" said Rangiku at the "Skank" comment
"Oh hey Rukia's back." said Karin, "I guess these guys are cool if they are friends with her."
"Oh yha, they're cool don't worry about them little Karin!" said Rukia as she patted the 11-year-old on the head
"Don't call me little," said Karin
"Hey, Nee-Chan?" asked Yuzu, "Do they plan to stay long? Is Rukia going to stay over with us again?"
"Hey Rukia, I thought you said they didn't know you were here when you first started living here?" asked Renji
"I got noticed after day four." said Rukia, "Their dad freaked out when he saw me."
"Well you two, I got to talk to these "Losers" about what they missed when it comes to classes. I will be down for supper soon ok," said Ichigo
"Ok." said both of them at the same time.
Ichigo and the gang made it up the stairs and everyone situated themselves around the room. Yamichika and Rukia were standing in front of the closet, Orihime Inoue and Yasatora Soda, or "Chad" as everyone called him stood by the window, Rangiku was looking around trying to find Ichigo's non-existent porn stash, and Ikkaku was trying to find out what the hell Ichigo's music equipment actually did. And of course, Ichigo was sitting on the bed.
"So… I guess you all want to know why I asked you all here… other than the obvious things Toshiro-San has said about the situation." said Ichigo
"About the attack last night?" asked Orihime
"That's it yha." said Ichigo, "I was honestly kinda… shocked about the whole ordeal. Aizen did something with my human body…and I guess I am fully a soul reaper now."
"I guess that explains the excess of power coming from you, even in Shikai you were never this powerful."
"Apparently that did not help me all too much. I still lost to that blue-haired hollow." said Ichigo, "And because of that. I plan to be leaving for a while to train a part of myself I have been trying to avoid… the hollow powers that showed up after my time in the shattered shaft."
"You mean the ones that forced their way to the surface during your battle with Nee-Sama?" asked Rukia, "I think that is for the best, although wherever you are going I don't think you need to do it alone."
"Agreed. I need to train my powers as well. I think it would be better to improve our powers together Ichigo." said Chad
"I am not sure if they will allow multiple people to train with me… Hell, I barely even know Shinji and the gang all that well."
All the present soul reapers and Ichigo himself realize… a sudden surge of power? No, it was something different. It was insanity. Insanity oozed from downstairs that none of them realized before entering the room… and that was enough to make Ichigo bolt out of the room faster than even Toshiro.
"YUZU! KARIN!" Shouted Ichigo as he barreled down the stairs and he ejected his soul out of his Gigai he could tell that both Rukia and Chad were close behind him with everyone else trying to make it close to the stairs, "ARE YOU GUYS O-BLAGH!" Ichigo was about to say before he was hit square in the face with a titanium pot… it didn't hurt physically… but his pride was certainly hurt by this.
"YUZU WHAT THE HELL!" shouted Ichigo before he realized something… that pot made contact with his spirit form, He waved his arm around… and noticed that she was tracking his movements, she could see him fully, "I once again have to ask… what the hell happened Yuzu? And who the hell is next to both you and Karin?"
Outtake
"Archer, since you're a future Shirou, did you and I get married?" Rin asked, blushing the entire time.
"No, I never needed a lover," Archer said in a teasing way as he was cooking food.
"Oh come on man, didn't you have a type or something?" Lancer asked.
"I just never really thought about it. Didn't have a lot of time, really."
Shirou was about to say something but held back, he remembered Archer's past and didn't question it.
Archer quietly says to himself, "Gonna be honest though, I prefer blondes."