Well chapter 6 is now done and dusted. Now chapter 7 is going to be more of a standard chapter rather than super long like 6 was. (yeah sure past me 7k words vs 8k words really makes a difference.) Again don't get used to chapter 6's length. Now I'm beginning to think that I should start to respond to the reviews in the AN's rather than by PM's. To put it quite simply I have sent PM's to most of the reviews but never gotten anything back. So I'm not sure if the reviewers have actually read them. I actually used to do that once even for this story. When I uploaded the original horrible version of chapter 1 I made an announcement soon after. In this announcement I replied to the only review I got. If I start doing that I would need to respond to the 19 reviews (now even more reviews) I currently have so the length of one chapter would be added quite a lot. Again I'm not sure.
Another beginning An written in 26th of June 2020. Yeah I have been away. The reason is the corona virus. Simply put when the schools were shutdown I lost my sense of a schedule. And because of the chaotic schedule thanks to online school I was never able to put myself to write more. Even after online classes ended and we went back to regular school and school ended it still took me time to finally readjust and be able to write again. So now I'll update again and sorry for disappointing you.
BEEB BEEB BEEB BEEB
"Just five more minutes." I mumbled as I tried to turn off the alarm clock. "Turn that off." I heard Lucy mumble weakly. Eventually I managed to turn it off but it was too late. I couldn't fall asleep again and had to get up.
I was still dressed in my party costume. When we finally got back to Cloud Tower it was so late we didn't bother changing at all. We just put Mirta in her bed and went straight to bed ourselves. Speaking of Mirta. I got up even with big part of me wanting to go back to bed. I then went next to her bed where she was still out. Maybe she was sleeping?
"Mirta." I called her name while shaking her but she didn't wake up. I sighed at the fact that she was still out from the magical exhaustion. Hopefully she won't be out for long. I don't know much about magical exhaustion but I hope it's not that serious.
Looking at the clock I have less than an hour before the classes start. The first thing I did was change from the party outfit back to my new normal outfit. During this time Lucy got out of bed as well with the same enthusiasm as I had.
I started my morning routine by brushing my teeth. After doing that for 2 minutes I took a sip of water and spat it out. Then I started to brush my bed hair. During this time Lucy started doing her morning routine by brushing her hair.
"So Mirta is still out?" Lucy asked while brushing and I nodded at her. She gave a sigh at that. "What am I going to tell to the teachers?" She asked me then.
Finishing my hair brushing I responded to her. "I don't know. I guess just tell the teacher about us ruining the party. Just don't do that in front of every witch." I told her and she nodded at me. I then looked at the clock and classes were beginning soon. I better start going because if I don't soon I'll be late. And I certainly don't want to start that habit this early into the semester. I then took my backpack that had all the books I needed and headed for my first class today.
This was the final class today. It was metamorphism that was taught by none other than Griffin herself. As a teacher Griffin was a good one. Strict but a good one. Her style was completely different from professor Wizgiz. She didn't pull any jokes on the class and she didn't encourage students in a nice way. But regardless she was a relatively good teacher.
Right now we were going back to basics. In fact today we did the same thing as we did in Alfea last year. The simple act of changing your hair color with magic. Back in Alfea I was the only one who failed but in Cloud Tower now I'm the first who succeeded. I felt very proud of that but had to hide that. After I got some mean looks for it.
"And that concludes our class." Griffin finished after she told us our homework. I was in the process of packing when one of the witches raised her arm. "What do you have to say miss Sunton?" Griffin asked the witch.
"Why are we learning such basic magic that anyone can do? We should be learning the advanced stuff that really tests us." The witch said to her. Some of the witches seemingly agreed with her. While the other students wanted her to shut up so they didn't have to do any more extra work.
Griffin looked at her for a second before she replied. "Not everyone can be as good as you. But that doesn't stop you from self teaching more advanced magic. In fact I encourage you all to do that. And there is a place where you can do that. It's called the library." She explained to her. "Anymore complaints?" She asked everyone and was met with silence.
"Good. Class dismissed." She said as everyone packed their stuff and left the classroom. Before I could do that Griffin stopped me. "Come to my office with Mirta and Lucy. We have things to discuss." I just nodded at her not telling about Mirta's unconsciousness. Then I left the classroom as well.
I opened the door of my dorm room. Well technically me, Lucy's and Mirta's dorm room. Lucy was already inside listening to music while Mirta was still unconsious in the bed.
"Lucy Griffin wants us in her office." I told her but she couldn't hear me though her headphones. Before I would take those off of her head, I would check up on Mirta. And yep she was still unconscious. Sighing I turned back to Lucy and she took off the headphone when she saw me approaching.
"What is it?" She asked me.
"Griffin called us into her office." I told her.
She sighed at that. "Shouldn't we wait until Mirta wakes up?" She asked me with a slightly guilty look.
"I don't know. How long will she be out anyway?"
She let out an another slightly guilty sigh. "When you pass out of magical exhaustion, you might be passed out anywhere from 30 minutes to years." She explained and I got really worried.
"Years?"
"She won't be out that long. That has only happened to people when they for example create a shield that can cover an entire city by themselves. And try to keep it on for very long. Mirta might be out at most for a few weeks but most likely will wake up any moment now. Still... I feel like crap about it because of me she is in that situation." I tried to think of a way to make her feel not that guilty. But nothing came to mind.
My eyes then wandered around her little section of the room. Then something caught my eye. It was two items that were on top of her bedside table. A crown and a trophy. In that trophy it read "miss magix". So Lucy has won a beauty competition? I mean that's great that Lucy has been able to achieve her dreams but I just can't see it happening. Then again beauty is to the eye of the beholder and if the contest was for the witchiest look well Lucy's got it all covered.
Lucy then noticed that I was looking at her trophy. "How do you feel about the fact that your roommate is a miss?" She asked me rather proudly.
I smiled back at her. "It's great." I responded not wanting to be rude and put any assumptions at how she could have won. Again if it's for the witchiest look I can see her totally winning it.
She smiled back at me. "I'm the only witch who has ever won it."
"Why no other witch has won?" I asked her as something just didn't match up with this miss Magix thing. I just can't see Lucy winning a beauty competition that wasn't aimed at witches. I didn't want to be rude or anything like that. But it just doesn't make sense.
"They don't like the looks of witches and are geared for fairy looks." Lucy said seemingly angry at the fact.
"Then how could you have won it? You out of all the people are the most witch looking witch." I asked her little bit suspiciously.
Lucy gave me one of her mischievous smiles. "That's my secret." Was all she gave me. "Oh and you should have seen the face of princess of Solaria." That caught my intrest. Stella lost to Lucy in beauty competition. That is just something I can't see happening. But for sake of Lucy's feelings I didn't bring it up.
I know I shouldn't bring up my former friends. But my curiosity got the better of me and I wanted to know more about what happened to the winx after my exit. "How did she react?" I asked her wanting to know how my former fairy friend reacted to losing to a witch of all people.
"She might have been calm while in the stage but backstage she had a rage fit." Lucy said and chuckled a bit at the memory.
"Sounds like Stella." I replied without thinking and only realized my mistake only after the words came out of my mouth.
"Stella? Do you know her?" Lucy asked me suspiciously and I was immediately trying to make up a believable lie.
It felt like when I had to lie about me being a witch to the winx just before I left. This was the exact same thing having to hide my true self from my friends and... I hated it. "I follow the tabloids and found her name mentioned in them." It came off way too naturally for my liking. I don't like the fact that these lies are starting to make me a very good liar.
Before Lucy could question me any further we heard a groaning sound as Mirta finally got up from her bed. "Man my head hurts." She groaned.
"Mirta!" Both me and Lucy exclaimed and went to see her. She was rubbing her head but was up. "H-hey guys." She nervously greeted us.
Lucy then did something I wouldn't expect her to do and hugged Mirta. "I was worried about you." Lucy said and Mirta seemed to be glad and embarrassed at the same time.
"Lucy you are choking me." Mirta complained after a little while and Lucy released her allowing Mirta to breath again.
Mirta then let out a small cry of pain and began holding her head with her hands. Looks like she'll have headaches for a little while. "How long was I out?" Mirta asked us.
"Almost a day at this point. I was starting to be afraid it would have been much worse." Lucy said with concern in her voice, which was something I hadn't seen yet in the small time we had known each other.
"You shouldn't have." Mirta said in appreciative way.
It was good to see them be back together especially after that argument they had yesterday. "Not to spoil our little reunion but Griffin asked us to her office." I then pointed out. Lucy nodded and Mirta seemed to be little confused until it seemed that it finally hit on her.
Before we could do that however Mirta had to change from her old clothes she wore yesterday to a new pair. After she shooed us off the nearby room allowing herself to change in privacy, she came back with a different outfit. Well if you can count a different T-shirt being a different outfit.
We then headed our way to Griffins office. Once we made it there I knocked on the door and got a simple "come in" as a response.
She seemed to be in a good mood when she saw that it was us who entered. "Have a seat." She motioned and we all did that.
Then she dropped something to the desk. I looked at what it was and it was a newspaper. Magix times to be exact. "Read it." Griffin said and I picked it up. I looked at the page where Griffin had left the newspaper and it was about the whole thing that happened at the party. It wasn't in the front page but still I was in a newspaper and not in a good way.
"Alfea's annual party ruined!" I read the headline aloud.
"Last evening Alfea school for fairies hosted their annual back to school party with the Red Fountain school of heroes. The party was going well until it was ruined." I read aloud. In both Griffin's and Lucy's faces a grin was starting to form. While Mirta looked like she wanted to be anywhere else than here. I just tried to look as neutral as possible.
"From what the students told us. Just as the Red Fountain students were going to give gifts to the Alfea's students, a tradition in this party. Giant beautiful Butterflies started to fly towards the students. The beautiful butterflies then turned out to be just an illusion and in reality were giant wasps." Lucy looked like she was proud of herself while Mirta looked like a child whose parent had just scolded her for a stupid thing she did.
"The students tried to leave the ballroom only that, all the exits were covered by a huge wall of fire..." It was getting harder to read this part as I started to feel guilty about the whole deal. Like I was just like the Trix who last year tried to ruin it.
"The only option for the students was to defend themselves until the fire simmered out. A group of fairies and specialists did their best to defend against these wasps. Eventually the fire stopped and all of the remaining students made it to safety. While no one was seriously hurt..." I let out a big sigh of relief at that. I don't know if I could live with it if someone had died or gotten seriously hurt. "18 fairies and 13 specialists are currently being treated for their large stings."
"While the perpetrator has not been proven. It is most likely that they were a group of Cloud Tower witches who have been known to ruin these parties. We tried to contact Headmistress of Cloud Tower but received no comment." I finished. I looked around the room and could see that Griffin looked proud while Lucy smirked and looked proud herself. Mirta on the other hand looked like I read aloud that she will be banished from magical dimension forever.
"I must say that I am proud of how much chaos you three girls have caused." Griffin said and she brought out 3 cards. "As promised three gift cards for the biggest mall in downtown Magix." she then put them at her desk and all of us picked it up.
They were quite valuable gift cards. I can't say how much you could say magical dimensions money was compared to Earths money. But I would say it would be about 150 euros, which means I can buy with it few things I'll need in here.
"Now that is all I have for you today." She said as we all stood up. "But I have to congratulate you three again for succeeding in this task, something that our top of the class witches couldn't do last year." I almost felt a feeling of nostalgia for that day. If it hadn't been also the day when I started to doubt that I was a fairy. "And Bloom I am even more impressed because of your... background. I wasn't sure if you could do it." She said to me before we left her office.
To Lucy and Mirta that meant she was impressed because I was an Earth girl without much knowledge of magic. But I knew what she meant by that and it was because she wasn't sure if I could do it to other fairies because I was part of Alfea.
I can partly hear Faragonda's plea back in her office almost a year ago. 'Don't become one of them.' I don't think she meant becoming a normal witch. I think she meant with that becoming someone like Trix which scares me. Am I on the way of becoming someone like them?
When we finally made it to outside of her office. Mirta then all of a sudden decided to give me her gift card.
"I can't take this." She said. "Split it with Lucy. I cannot accept monetary gain for what we did there." She explained and I could respect that. If I didn't need the money so badly, I probably would give mine to Lucy as well.
"Are you really sure Mirta?" Lucy asked her.
"I already feel bad for doing it and I certainly will not accept a reward for that. And besides are you really complaining about free stuff?" Mirta asked Lucy and that seemed to be enough to shut her up. "Anyway you go to the mall and we'll see each other back in the dorm. Besides I think, I probably should rest of the day, because my head still hurts." she finished while rubbing her head to prove her point.
"Alright Mirta. See you around." I said to her as me and Lucy were going to leave the Cloud Tower while Mirta was walking back to her dorm room.
"Just don't spend all the time shopping. You still homework to do right?" Mirta called out and then facepalmed herself. She then turned to Lucy. "I almost forgot. Lucy can you tell me what we got for homework."
"I'll see you at the bus station." Lucy told me and then I to find my way out of Cloud Tower while she stayed inside for a bit longer to tell Mirta about the homework she still needed to do.
After getting through the maze that was Cloud Tower. Well it was only a maze in the first two days but now I am already familiar with the layout. I found the bus station and when I looked at the schedule the next bus was going to come soon. Lucy then found her way here about 2 minutes later. The bus was at the station precisely at schedule something which seemed like rarity in Earth. They always came either too early or mostly too late there.
The ride was really quiet. Me and Lucy barely spoke a word to each other. Lucy mostly listened to music while I looked out of the window at the scenery. Once we arrived at the station fairies, witches and a few boys departed from the bus. The station was right next to the mall. And I could already appreciate the size of the mall. Maybe it was because Gardenia's mall wasn't really that big. But still it was a huge mall.
We made it to the entrance and Lucy took the gift card Mirta had given to me. "I'll use my half now and give yours when we are finished." She simply said. I couldn't think that my purchases would be that expensive so I decided to let her use that half now.
"Alright. But why do I have a feeling that you will use more than just half." Which earned me a small chuckle from Lucy.
"Few cents won't matter." She said just before she disappeared.
'More like few magix dollars.' I almost said to her. I then turned around and looked at the map that gave the layout. It was filled with store names I had no idea meant. I could pick few things up like how some places were obviously restaurants while others were clothing stores. Eventually I found what I was looking for, a cellphone store. Magic mobiles to be exact. Probably just one the many cellphone stores here but there's nothing I can do with the fact how the other places names won't make it obvious that they sell cellphones.
On my way there I saw plenty of interesting stores. Two bookstores, which were obviously meant for witches. That's something I probably should check out so I might find few useful spells there. A music store which I will visit today. Couple of restaurants which were serving foods that reminded me of Earth and others, which seemed to have some weird magical dimension exclusive dishes.
Finally I made it to magic mobiles and it looked almost like every cellphone store on earth. There was a table and it was full of different models of phones. There were few ads here and there proclaiming the 'amazing' new features some of the more expensive models had. There was an ad for a premium inter dimensional network.
When it came to phones themselves they looked exactly as same as the phones on Earth. 'This is ancient technology.' I could hear Tecna say about my old phone. But it was somewhat ironic that if you put a Magix phone next to an Earth phone no one could tell the difference. Both phones had the same keypads, the same answer call and end call buttons and the same small screen. The only difference was that the phone from Magix could call inter dimensionally while the Earth phone could not.
That was the big difference. That is what makes an Earth phone ancient and Magix phone new. Maybe it's good to feel that we on Earth are almost advanced enough that when it comes to technology we already have the outline ready. But enough about comparing phones on Earth and Magix, it is time to pick one for myself.
Despite me not being in Magical dimension for long enough. I could already start telling which brands were the major ones, which are the specialized ones and which are the budget ones. Like how one of the ads advertises "20 years of quality from Zeninth." While an another ad is for a phone from Melody that is pretty much a music player as well.
I moved around the shop not really concerned with features more about the price. My budget was still limited and I wanted to buy other stuff with my money. Well gift cards to be exact. Eventually I found what I was looking for. The brand could be best compared to that one Chinese brand no one had heard of. It had almost no features other than calling and texting, it's answer and end call button were reversed for some reason and it still had monochrome screen which was something that was becoming a rarer and rarer even on Earth. Let alone here.
But it was cheap. Cheap enough that I could get a decent network and perhaps a cheap 'Magix cd' player and few books.
After buying the phone and signing into their inter dimensional network I exited the store. It was time to make my first test call. I typed in a number I had memorized in my head for a long time that being my home number.
"Hello?" I heard moms voice on the other line.
"Hey mom." I said to her hoping that my call would be a pleasant surprise.
"Oh Bloom. It's been too long since I last heard your voice. Why haven't you called?" She asked me.
"Well I wasn't in downtown to use the payphones. But now I have a more permanent solution. I got myself an inter dimensional cellphone here." I explained to her and I think she would have been surprised if I could have seen her face.
"Cellphone? Where you got the money for that?" She asked and gulped a bit. I knew my mom would not appreciate what we did in Alfea. So I would need to tell her the half truth.
"Well me and my roommates entered and won this school wide contest. And I used the reward to get the cellphone." I explained to her hoping that she wasn't going to ask too much, on what kind of contest it was.
"Well that's nice. Have you made any friends yet?" She asked and that was a question that I was happy to answer.
"Yeah I have. I'm friends with my roommates Mirta and Lucy. Lucy is more of your typical witch but not as bad as stereotype makes her sound like. Me and her are friends but we still aren't that close. But it hasn't been that long yet. Then there is Mirta. She is really kind and nice. Unfortunately she gets bullied for that a lot. But me and her are already good friends." I explained to her.
"That's nice to hear. I can't continue this call much longer I have to make dinner. But Bloom now that you have that cellphone make sure to call us more often alright?"
"Ok mom." I responded.
"goodbye Bloom." Mom answered before she hung up.
I then made my way to the next store this one being a music store. I needed to buy a Magix cd player. Well that's not what they are called but still the cd's here are different from the ones in Earth. I learned it the hard way when back in Alfea I bought a disc and wondered for a little time why it would not work. I then got a lengthy explanation from Tecna on how our cd's are ancient technology and how their discs are better and because of that they will not work with an Earth cd player. The detailed reason, was a long explanation about microscopic pit sizes and laser sizes. It can be summed in simple words that they do not work for the same reason why DVD's will not work in a normal cd player.
After that Tecna had been even kind enough to make custom made cables so I could plug Magical dimension music players to my Earth hifi. I still had those cables so all I needed to do was buy a magix cd player and then I can listen to music from here. Maybe I'll find some Magical dimension artist that I'd end up liking.
Looking at the players I came to the realization as with the phones, I need to settle for that weird brand no one has ever heard of. But even worse was that even that weird brand was too expensive to buy with my gift card. I would need to wait to get my half from Lucy just to afford the cheapest player. And Lucy will probably spend some time buying stuff before I could get my half.
I sighed and then began to look at their albums if I could find anything interesting there, while I was waiting to get enough money to get the player. Before I could look much into the albums, my eyes widened in horror as I saw a familiar face enter the store. Her dark blue pigtails and her matching eyes, her pale skin tone and her what would be considered in Earth as an Asian face. It was unmistakable who this girl was.
Musa dressed the same way she was last year, was walking into the store listening to the music through her headphones. Seeing her caused me to panic and I ducked behind the shelf of records. Praying that she wouldn't see me.
She waved at the store clerk and took off her headphones. "I heard it arrived." She said to the clerk, who began then quickly brought it over the counter and showed it to her. Seemingly a hip hop album.
"The one I reserved for you. Every other copy was sold today." The clerk told Musa. While Musa was distracted by the clerk. I used it as an opportunity to sneak away but I had to be careful to not alert the clerk or Musa.
I was able to move from the shelf I was in to the shelf closer to the exit with ease. However that seemed to be end of my good luck. Musa stopped examining her new album and was going to look at the albums for sale here. Which would mean she would walk where I was.
My options were limited. There would be no way to go sneak away from this without her noticing me. I knew the day would come when I had to finally confront the rest of the members of winx club. But right now I was not ready for that.
Musa's steps were going closer and closer and she would notice me any second now. I couldn't have that conversation now. Just before she noticed me I bolted. I ran as fast as I could away from the store and her, leaving a perplexed Musa behind.
"What's wrong with her?" I could hear Musa ask the clerk while I was running away from the store. Once I figured I was safe from Musa I let out a sigh of relief.
"No more shopping." I mumbled to myself.
After that I walked around the mall just looking around. It would still take some time until Lucy would finish her shopping. I found few interesting things that I might buy later on. I was also lucky enough to not bump into any winx club members.
Eventually Lucy was finished with her shopping and we met near the entrance. She was carrying bags from various stores. A bookstore, a clothing store and a prank store. I could see myself becoming a bit paranoid to avoid being pranked. I had enough of that in Earth already.
Lucy ended up giving me my half of Mirta's prize. "And you haven't spend more than your amount of it." I asked and the only response Lucy gave me was a sly smirk. Well it doesn't really matter as long as she didn't spend too much. We then exited the mall and made our way to the bus station. The ride to cloud tower was equally quiet as our journey to the mall was.
We then arrived to the cloud tower and made our way to the room. Lucy put down all her shopping bags near the entrance.
Mirta was nowhere to be seen in the empty room. She probably was just somewhere doing her own things. It really wasn't my business.
I then used some of the remaining time to study for tests and homework. After that I began playing around with my largely featureless phone. But as time passed it was clear what Mirta did was my business. It was very late and I would normally go to bed now and she still hadn't come back. Infact she is breaking school rules by not being here this late. Even Lucy was beginning to worry.
"Where is she?" I asked out loud knowing full well I wouldn't get an answer.
"Mirta is never gone for this long." Lucy states, which only makes me worry even more.
I try to rationalize the situation trying to find a reason to not start a rescue mission. Maybe she was out and didn't realize how late it had got. Maybe she was just studying somewhere else and was coming back. There had to be a perfectly good reason for it. But I was still panicking "What should we do?" I ended up asking Lucy.
"Sleep. While she was never gone this long she did have a habit of being out very long. If she is still gone tomorrow then we should panic and call the police." Lucy explained calmly. It made me feel a bit better and reluctantly I do as she says.
After washing my teeth and switching to my pajamas I went to bed. Unfortunately sleep didn't come easily and I could already tell I wasn't going to like tomorrow morning.
BEEB BEEB BEEB BEEB
"Just five more minutes." I mumbled as I Used all of my willpower to open my eyes. Knowing it is too late to fall back asleep I get up.
Looking around I can see Lucy is already dressed and is seemingly ready for today. "Good morning Bloom." I heard a voice call to me and I turned around and it was Mirta, who was also dressed as well. Looks like Lucy's assumption was correct. But still why would she be gone for that long?
"Where were you? We were worried about you?" I ask her.
"Oh I was outside studying." She answers while seemingly trying to hold back a laugh.
My eyes narrow at such reason. It feels like she is not honest with me.
"And what were you studying outside?" I ask her again.
"Nature off course." She simply responds while still trying to hold from laughing. I decide to drop the subject for now and start doing my morning routine.
When I go to the bathroom and look in the mirror I see something horrible.
"WHY IS MY HAIR GREEN!" I scream from top of my lungs. And the response I got was laughter from both Lucy and Mirta. I get out of the bathroom and take a look at the green eyed witch. "You did this!" I point the finger at her. The only response I get is more laughter.
"Alright calm down just a simple spell will fix this." I tell myself. I went back to the bathroom and look at myself. I might not have been able to change my hair in the first class of Alfea. I am able to do it easily now after studying witch magic.
I close my eyes at the mirror and think of myself back as a red hair. When I open my eyes my hair is still green. "What. The spell didn't work."
Lucy's laughter only intensified because of this. "The product is metamorphism proof!" She manages to tell me in between of her laughing.
"I'll get you for that." I mumble to myself.
Hopefully you liked this chapter. I had a writers block and I know this isn't the amazing comeback chapter (The only alternative for me is to spend months on this chapter instead of continuing the story.) Also I originally planned to release this in Saturday. Until I realized wait that's 4th of July. While to me that's just Saturday for the American audience, which is the majority of this story's readers, it is a very important holiday. So out of respect I moved this to Sunday. But otherwise whenever I update it will always be on Saturday. Now moving on before corona and after corona I have watched winx club episodes so I can make any changes for my story outline. However while watching the first season I noticed that my version of chapter 3 work with the canon. This is because I never watched past the first 6 episodes when I originally started to write this story and read the wikia instead. Wikia gave me the wrong picture so after this I'm rewriting chapter 3 (well the alfea parts. The earth parts will be the same) so it fits. Then I'm going to write chapter 8 and so on.
And as you can see from my first AN I'm wondering if I should answer the reviews in these AN's themselves because it seems that 95% of you don't read the PM's I send you. Well I have decided to do that and from now on I'll answer the reviews in AN's. As of now I have 21 (now 24 as of 3rd of July) reviews in the back end and I'm going to respond to all of them now here. I think once chapter 8 is uploaded I'll move these reviews to the chapters where they should be. But for now you see a huge list of answers to reviews. Also if I have a longer more complicated answer for your review I'll still PM you while also replying in the AN's in a more simple way. Anyway bring on the big list of answering reviews.
Hivedragon (c6): The Griffin part is because of version differences between the 4Kids version (which is what I watched) and Nick version. I told you more about it in the PM. Again only very mild BloomxSky nothing too much. And yeah I'll fix that mistake I did. Also when I do these AN's I almost always do the first AN just before I start writing the story (the one on chapter 4 was made 1 year and 9 months ago (thanks to an another hiatus that an is over 2 years long) and then I do the AN at the end once I have finished the chapter. That is why I wrote about not getting reviews in the first chapter 6 AN.
Luiz4200 (c6): Fairies won't know... at least for now.
Dutchie (c6): Well the less reviews thing was because when I wrote chapter 6 I had just uploaded chapter 4 and didn't have any reviews at that point. And I was afraid people no longer cared for the story. On the same day I uploaded a new chapter for a story that I hadn't updated in 9 months. Unlike this story that story really didn't get any reaction so I had a good reason to think something like that. I'll try to update this story about every saturday but there will be pauses especially now (thanks corona for an another pause) that I need to rewrite chapter 3 and still watch rest of the winx club episodes.
TheDragonMage19 (c6): English is my second language so I might never understand Commas. So my commas are about as good as MS word's auto correct let's them be. (now I lost my access to ms word it will be as good as google chrome lets it be) The reason why I write the way I do is because I prefer the paragraphs being more thick. And when I saw other more experienced writers not putting a character speaking as a separate paragraph I started to do that as well.
Superflarroww (c6): Good to see you like the story and as you can see I updated now.
Winxclub4evr (c6): Glad you liked the story and hopefully I'll see you reading and reviewing future chapters.
Videocrazy (c6): I know I said to you in our PM talk that I would upload this chapter in this weeks Saturday. Well as you can see it was delayed by one day but hopefully that's not going to end the world. (well it's technically monday here and in some parts of the world so I guess it's a two day delay.)
