A/N: Naruto looks like the Marcus from Underworld Evolution in this form, except less creepy and younger looking. This has been a chapter I've been waiting to write for a while. In this fic the tails of a bijuu mean chakra, not power so Kyuubi still has near unlimited chakra and is the strongest of the bijuu. I looked up the legend of the bijuu and noticed the similarities and differences from it and canon. Remember everyone is two years younger than in canon so far.

This is the remodeled Chapter Six.

I Do Not Own Naruto or BloodRayne or anything that comes from another anime in this chapter.

Chapter 6 Sono Akebono no Ketsueki Naruto

Rayne and Gobi sighed in relief as they finally made it through the long tunnel and into the night sky. "Damn. Time moves fast in there. Or it's the length of the tunnel. I mean who builds a tunnel that's forty miles long! And then add the fact that you can't get out of there in your demonic form."

Gobi shrugged in indifference as she continued walking forward. "Keeps them from taking when they would have come for me."

Nodding her head in understanding, Rayne could help but think that it made sense. After a few moments of walking, she pulled out her head set and turned it on and ignored the static on the other end. "Itachi, Nibi. What's your status?"

A few moments of walking, Rayne stopped and waited for someone to call back, making Gobi stop as well, though she was much more annoyed. After a few minutes of waiting, Itachi voice was heard from the other end. "I'm here. But you need better sources. I have Yonbi here in my arms, who has apparently been free from her vessel for a long time. I also planted Kisame with the information of Naruto no longer being Kyuubi's vessel as you asked. Though he won't be able to speak for a while."

Rayne being somewhat curious for the reason why asked just that. "Why is that?"

"He insulted my sexual preference. So I used Tsukiyomi on him and made his worst fears come true."

A sweat drop formed on her head as she tried to hold it in and failed miserably. Sighing and shaking her head, she responded. "As long as you didn't break his mind for now, you can do that later. We have to get Naruto off the list so they'll stop coming after him."

"Can't promise anything." Itachi spoke with his usual indifference. Rayne sighed in annoyance and mumbled something about Uchihas and their disobedient ways.

After a few more moments of waiting, making Gobi irritated even further, Nibi voice was heard from the other end of the line. "Why the hell was I given this thing?"

Rayne sighed in annoyance as she rubbed her forehead in annoyance. "Because Naruto destroys everyone he has ever been given. Somehow, someway, he finds a brand new way to do it. So I just stop giving them to him since I don't want to keep going out to buy more."

After a long pause, though both could swear they could hear laughing from the other end, Nibi panted a bit as if she was recovering from something. Most likely from laughing her ass off. "Well I just got the Ichibi container. I'm heading to get Naruto right now..."

Rayne nodded in understanding as she shut off her head set, not knowing something had caught Nibi's attention. Shaking her head from the bad vibes she was getting, Rayne looked over towards Gobi, who was staring at the night sky. She would have said they could continue, but Gobi spoke first. "Rayne, please tell me Naruto is not out tonight."

Blinking in confusion, Rayne looked at her, puzzled why until she looked at the night sky and noticed there was no moon. The color drain from Rayne's already pale skin as her eyes widen in realization. "Oh fuck."

Gobi eyes went wide at this and rushed towards Rayne with blinding speeds and lifted here up by her shirt. "You let him out, tonight of all nights." Rayne nodded knowing shit was about to hit the fan as Gobi's eyes began turning red. "YOU LET HIM OUT KNOWING WHAT HE BECOMES TONIGHT! IT TOOK ALL MY POWER JUST TO HOLD HIM BACK WHEN HE TRANSFORMED DURING OUR YEAR OF TRAINING! IF IT WEREN'T FOR MY ILLUSIONS HE WOULD HAVE WENT ON AN UNSTOPPABLE KILLING SPREE AND POSSIBLY HAVE KILLED ME IN THE PROCESS!"

If it was possible, it seemed Rayne was drained of all color as she heard this. "We're heading to Suna. I just hope it's not too late. It's just becoming dark there."

Gobi gritted her teeth but let go of Rayne, who took off towards Suna with Gobi not to far behind.

Nibi ran out the gates of Suna with Deidara not to far behind. As soon as she arrived, her attention was instantly on Naruto as she noticed his transformation. "Oh shit, the mutt's demon blood is gone."

Not being to far from behind her and hearing her comment, Deidara rushed over to her. "And that means?"

Nibi turned towards him and looked him dead in the eyes before turning back to Naruto. "It means instead of him being a dual half breed, he is a full fledge vampire for tonight."

Deidara blinked a few times as he let the information sink in before his eyes widen in shock but quickly shook it off planning on telling Konan about this. That is if he survived past tonight and his current luck wasn't pointing to that direction at the moment. "Anything I can do."

"Yeah. Don't get your blood sucked dry." Nibi said in an amused tone, making Deidara glared at her with a tick mark building on his left temple. Before he could make a comeback at her, Naruto spoke to Sasori in a voice that radiated pure evil. "Let's see what you can do. Puppet."

Naruto watched in interest as he was suddenly surrounded by thousands of puppets. His eyes showed nothing but amusement as they all came after him at once. In a blink of an eye, all puppets that had surrounded him fell to the ground, torn to pieces. Sasori's eyes widened in fright as he saw this happened and knew without them, he had no chance. Not caring if Deidara was with him or not, he turned around to run, not caring about him as his life was more important.

As soon as he had turned around though, he found Naruto looking at him with nothing but amusement in his lifeless gold pupils. "Going somewhere."

Sasori was shocked and surprised at this turn of events, even if his mechanical face couldn't show it. Within a split second, Naruto's hand pierced through Hiruko's chest before ripping it out, revealing Sasori's heart. Naruto looked at the heart and grinned with glee as Hiruko fell to the ground. He opened his mouth and sank his teeth into and quickly drained the last of Sasori's blood.

As he finished, he looked up to see Nibi, Deidara, and an unconscious Gaara. His eyes brighten a bit more as amused smiled grew before he crushed the heart in his hand, which crumbled under his grasp. "Looks like I have more things to play with."

Both Nibi and Deidara moved into defense hearing this, knowing that this wasn't Naruto any longer.

Naruto was walking in a sewer that he called his mind. But something was off about it. "This is weird; normally my mind is just a dark maze. Why would it become a sewer?"

Shaking that thought off for now, he continued walking forward as he explored the sewer. It was odd really, it was exactly like the maze he was used to, just filled with water he rather not be stepping in. Ignoring the water, he looked around and decided to go to where Kyuubi's old cage was at this rate he was going to get nowhere. As soon as he arrived, he instantly noticed something was wrong.

The first thing her noticed was there was no water here unlike the rest of the sewer. Secondly, it seemed that the water was being kept from entering the room by an invisible barrier. Thirdly, he was pretty sure there wasn't a mirror in his mind. And finally, since when in the hell was he completely devoid of any color other than black and white and his eyes had a background black and crimson pupils. "Ah, so you finally made it. Welcome to my domain, king."

Naruto blinked in confusion at reflection of himself in front of him. "Okay, who the hell are you and why are you in my mind?"

The other Naruto smirked evilly at him. "I am you. I am your dark side. I am your bottled up emotions. I am your envy, gluttony, wrath, pride, lust, greed and sloth. I am your seven sins."

Surprise was evident on Naruto's face as he stared at what was virtually himself. "But... how? Ever since kaa-san, Itachi and Kyuubi took me in my life has been great."

Dark Naruto grinned manically at Naruto as he expected this response. "True, but you still remember your life in Konoha. You despise the place with an unholy passion, even if you don't know it. It was their treatment of you and your refusal to strike back at them. That is what began my creation. When the women and fox change your DNA, they unwittingly caused me to manifest into the form I'm in now. But even then I could not come out, until I learned of the weakness of the hanyou."

And he wasn't finished as he grinned widen seeing the shocked face on Naruto face before continuing. "So when the night of the new moon arrived I took my chance and tried to take control of your boy. I succeed, yet I didn't. I was stopped by that infernal dhampir and the damned kitsune when I came out. But this wasn't the only problem. I couldn't use your body's full potential in this form, but I realized I could never do so unless I eliminated you."

Naruto growled at the dark version of himself as his eyes narrowed while he shifted his stance to get ready to defend himself while Dark Naruto grin grew wilder. "But there is a problem with that as well. If I eliminated you I cease to exist as well, negating the point of doing so. So I came up with a better way."

Hearing this made Naruto's eyes narrowed even further, but continued to listen. "I need to defeat you, and then lock you up so you will no longer be a problem for me. Now I could have done this easily without letting you know, but in essence I am you so I have your pride. I could not dignify myself on ambushing an opponent when I can get the pleasure of fighting them head on."

Dark Naruto mirrored the stance Naruto was in before he smiled wickedly. "Now let's see who will come out victorious, king."

"Yugito pay attention!" Yugito sighed, completely bored out of her mind, but complied with Kyuubi as she looked back towards him.

Nodding as he saw her paying attention, he continued on with his lesson. "Now as I was saying, each hanyou has a different time of weakness they must go through, meaning they turn human for that brief time period and are vulnerable. Each type of demon has different times of weakness for the hanyous. Take for example, Kitsunes are during the half moon, Nekomatas have the second quarter while Inus have theirs during the new moon. You understand this so far."

Yugito sighed in annoyance as she looked at him. "Of course, it's so basic an academy student could understand most of it."

Kyuubi growled annoyed at the girl's attitude as she looked towards the window of the dojo. She turned back to Kyuubi and had to ask a question. "So Naruto's is during the new moon right?"

He nodded in agreement at her statement while his mind was saying something completely different. 'I wouldn't call it his weakness, but she does have the point.' "Yes it is. Very good."

Yugito nodded figuring it was true as she glanced back outside. "So that means Naruto is tonight them?"

All the blood in Kyuubi's body froze as he heard that and looked outside and had only one intelligent thing to say.

"Oh fuck."

Nibi hissed at Naruto's words as she put Gaara down, knowing he would only hinder her from the power Naruto was rolling off Naruto. She turned her slightly to Deidara and whispered to him. "Clay user. Use your explosives to knock him out."

Deidara nodded as he reached into his pouches as Naruto walked toward them with and malignant gleam in his eye. Nibi hissed even louder as she stepped in his path towards Deidara. Naruto's attention instantly shifted to the demon cat and his grin grew wider. "So you wish to go first. So be it."

Naruto rushed her with speeds beyond what he was could use in his regular form. But it wasn't fast enough as Nibi easily kept up with it and caught his wrist as her tried to reach her heart. "You will need much more than that to harm me."

Nibi gripped his wrist tightly before pulling him forward and slamming her elbow into Naruto's throat before spin kicking in the gut, sending him stumbling back. A soon as he recovered from his quick strike, Naruto glared at the neko before insanely grinning at her. "So it would seem."

A clay bird flew up to him unnoticed as he was too fixed on Nibi smashed into his chest before exploding, kicking up the sand and smoke making it unclear if it worked. Deidara scanned through the smoke and sand with the device covering his left eye and didn't see any movement so he began to relax, figuring it knocked him out.

"LOOK OUT!"

Was all Deidara heard before something shot out of the smoke and raced towards him with unreal speeds. In defense, he released a few more clay birds fly that Naruto easily bypass before they exploded. Naruto reached him in an instant and missed his slash with his arm, but not his pierce with his wing as it aimed for Deidara's heart. At the last possible second, Deidara managed to move just enough that it was his shoulder that was hit instead.

Deidara hissed in pain as he grabbed the wing with both of his hands and tried to pull himself off of it. He gritted his teeth as he slowly pried it off when the other wing went through his arm like butter as it pierced his right lung. Deidara unable to withstand it yelled at the pain as part of his right arm was severed off and fell to the ground.

As soon as it hit the ground, Nibi appeared besides him and grabbed Naruto's wings and forcefully pulled them out and began spin him around like a discus player before threw him towards the large wall surrounding Suna. Naruto flew through the air towards the barrier wall of Suna and crashed into it leaving a substantial crater on impact.

Not wanting to him a chance to get back up, Nibi breathed in deeply before exhaling a large amount of black fire that looked similar to Amaterasu. The flames rushed over to the crater before consuming it. Deidara's eyes widen as he looked over a Nibi, shocked at what she did. She shook her head at him as she walked over to him. "That bomb was too weak to even scratch him. What I did should have done the trick, if not left some permanent damage."

Deidara's jaw unhinged itself as it hit the ground at her statement. He couldn't have made it much stronger with it being C-3, which he was pretty sure would have killed him. But after seeing what she did to Naruto, he was stumped as he was sure that was overkill. Or that was what he thought until the crater began to glow an eerie purple that seemed to be raw energy.

Nibi stood her ground as she turned around with eyes narrowed at this unfolding event. 'How is he not unconscious? That would have killed anything less than a B bordering A-class vampire. Something is not right here. Naruto was already a B-class without being full blooded and unlike demons, dhampirs don't get a substantial boost when they become full fledge vampires.'

The purple energy that was hanging around in the crater exploded like that of a hurricane as the powerful winds sent everyone nearby flying even if they were using chakra to stick to the ground. The only one able to stand their ground was Nibi and that was because she faced much higher gales of wind before, but she still had to shut her eyes due to the sand being blown into them.

As the wind died down Nibi rubbed her eyes furiously, trying to get the sand crystals out of her eyes. Once she succeed she turned towards the crater and noticed Naruto was climbing out with a dark purple glow around him and felt even stronger than he did before.

'SHIT! Where in the hell did this power come from? He is easily an S-rank with the amount he's putting out.' Naruto's energy was steadily growing higher and was tearing through the ground as he moved towards an increasingly nervous Nibi. 'Dammit! How much power does he have?! I have to transform to keep up with this.'

Nibi shifted her stance to all fours as her features began to change into her demonic ones. Her size began to increase as her youki flared around her in a demonstration of her power, hoping it would make the vampiric Naruto back down. Instead it had the opposite effect as Naruto's grin grew even larger and became more vicious. "So finally going to play."

She hissed loudly at him as she began her transformation. Deidara watched from the sidelines next to the unconscious Gaara stunned at what was happening. He began cursing his luck as he knew something that everyone else was slowly beginning to figure out.

"This won't end well, yeah." Deidara mumbled to himself unaware of the blonde hair girl sneaking up behind him, trying to recover her brother.

"And don't even think about it girl, and puppet boy. Remove that seal we will have twice the amount of trouble then were in now, yeah." Deidara told her without even looking back at both her and her other brother as he sealed his severed arm into a scroll before using his remaining hand to create some C-3 explosives.

Both Temari and Kankuro's eyes widen in surprise that he knew they were and tensed up as they prepared for battle when they saw him reach into his pouch. Deidara shook his head as he looked at both of them with the ocular device on his eye. Sighing, he pointed out towards the battle field. "Besides, I don't think you want to add to our troubles, yeah."

They both did so tentatively, not really trusting Deidara. I mean why would they trust an S-rank nukenin. It didn't really make to much sense to do so. Once they were standing near him, they both noticed the large two tail cat that had beaten Shukaku with ease before and a frightening looking creature radiating a terrible power.

"What the hell is that thing?!" Yelled Kankuro in a frightening surprise as Temari eyes widen in realization of something she read as a child.

"Is that a... vampire?" Temari said shakily, not trusting her own voice at the moment as she was scared beyond belief at the killing intent rolling off both the demon and vampire.

Deidara nodded at her words as he continued concentrating on his making his C-3. "From what I know, yeah."

Kankuro looked over to the two as if they were crazy. And he was only partially correct with his mental statement. "Vampires don't exist. That thing must be demon!"

As he finished, someone else made their presence know as they spoke up, scaring all three of them as they quickly turned around towards the direction of the voice. "No, that is a vampire. They are real as you and me. The majority of them are limited to one area due to the vampire overlord, which happens to be a dhampir, or a half breed."

It was surprisingly the Yondaime Kazekage, Sabaku Boufuu. He gave Deidara a glance before looking towards Gaara. "If I had to guess you would be from Akatsuki but one of the spies in it. And if I'm not mistaken, those two are supposed to be the ones taking Gaara out of here."

Deidara nodded, figuring this as Konan had managed to get the information to Jiraiya, who spread it to Rayne's group and the Kazekage. Both Temari and Kankuro looked shocked at what there father was saying. After letting the information sinking in, Kankuro was the first to speak up. "So wait, you knew this was going to happen!"

Boufuu shook his head at the battle about to happen. "Not this of course, but I knew they were coming for Gaara."

Temari narrowed her eyes as she glared at her father with anger written over her face. "So you just were going to get rid of Gaara once and for all, is that it!"

He winced at her tone, but knew he deserved it for his past treatment of Gaara and knew Temari was the only that the red head actually had an affection for. "In a way yes." Temari's eyes narrowed even more as she whipped out her fan and was about to charge her father when he spoke again, trying to avoid the same beating she gave Deidara. "That doesn't mean that everything I've tried to do in the past year was pointless. I began to realize that it wasn't his fault that your mother died giving birth to him, but mine instead."

Both of his children were taken back by his statement as Boufuu sighed sadly before continuing his story. "It was I that gave the order to have the priest seal Shukaku into Gaara as he was still in Shizukesa's womb. If I knew the procedure would have killed her in the process... I would have never done it. After Gaara was born I used him as an outlet for my anger of her death. I failed him as a father, and I want him to have a better life.

"So when I heard about them trying to get him before Akatsuki, I was all for it. This is my way of redeeming myself for his life. As I know he will never be view as a human here." Boufuu turned away from his children and looked a Deidara with a deadly calm face. "What happen to make him transform?"

Deidara glared and spoke in the same tone of voice. "If I knew, I would tell you, yeah. I got here after the transformation. The only thing I know is that he keeps getting stronger as time passes. NOW IF YOU WOULD SHUT UP, I'M TRYING TO CONSENTRATE, YEAH!"

The two siblings were taken back by the outburst, but the Kazekage noticed his hand in his pouch and saw the clay in it. 'So he's from the Kurebomu clan from Iwagakure. I thought the Uchihas and the Yondaime Hokage wiped them out in the IwaKono war.'

As all this was happening, Nibi charged at the vampiric Naruto and slashed down at the small vampire. Naruto quickly flew out of the way and headed towards Nibi's head. Nibi seeing this move with agility, beyond something her size should have been capable of and jumped back to dodge the clawed hand as it tried to pierce her skull.

She took a deep breath and began to inflate a bit before releasing a stream of black flames out of her mouth towards the vampire. Naruto tried to fly out of the way, but he wasn't quick enough as the flames engulfed him. He screamed in pain as the fire burned every inch of his skin while his rage began to increase. His blood began to bubble more furiously than ever before as all his excess blood began to push outside of him.

Nibi watched patiently to make sure that it was enough to stop him. The black flames suddenly started to spiral around in a sphere, which surprised everyone there that saw it. The fire started to die out as if it was being put out and what was left made everyone there queasy.

Naruto was flying with a few burns covering his body and wings. But what made it somewhat sickening to look at was because he was in the center of a miniature maelstrom of blood as it swirled viciously around him. As soon as they saw it though, the blood stopped spiraling around him and dropped to the ground, splattering the sand with it. Naruto looked towards Nibi with a happily psychotic look on his face with an even larger grin than before. "More."

Nibi closed her eyes and shivered at the tone and look that Naruto was giving her. It reminded her so much of Yamata no Orochi's grin that it was frightening. She reopened them to find Naruto in her face before he kicked her in the throat, forcing it shut. She attempt to gasp in pain, but no air would come in or out.

He quickly landed on her shoulder blades and rammed the points of his wings into them. Biting her lip in pain, Nibi quickly countered as she used her tails to swat him away, but he managed to dodge them by dislocating his wings from her shoulder blades. Dodging the two tails Naruto grabbed one and used his Super Speed to fly as quickly as away from the nekomata.

The cat bijuu bit her lip harshly as her tail was yanked like if it was Tsunade that pulled her tail. Seeing her pain, Naruto rushed back to her tailbone and rammed his right claw into it, only to be swatted by both tails into the ground. Naruto pushed the tails off of him to see that Nibi managed to reopen her throat and exhaled a large amount of flames towards him. He waited to the last second before he went underground to avoid the flames.

Nibi scanned the area as she searched for him, knowing the flames didn't hit him. Using all her sense, she realized one thing. He was below her.

Naruto shot out of the ground with an impossible speed, most likely since he was using Super speed, and reached the nekomata's chest before she could move. Just as his clawed hand was inches away from piercing her chest cavity, a medium sized clay bird from five meter below him exploded. The blast was powerful enough to knock Naruto off of Nibi as she was able to get away from the vampiric demon.

Nibi panted as she looked at the explosion from where she was. It had taken some energy to beat Shukaku, but she never thought it would be this difficult to beat a vampire. It was as if she was fighting one of the past vampire lords, since no vampire has become overly powerful in ages, besides Rayne herself made sure of that. She didn't want to have another take over happen again so she did what she could to keep it from happening. 'Damn this fucking half breed mutt! I can't keep this up; I have to end this now.'

Closing her eyes, Nibi began to concentrate her energy at the center of her forehead. As she did so, the fur started move away from the spot on her forehead, revealing a crimson third eye. 'Rayne is going to kill me for this, but it must be done. There is no other way to stop him. I have to use the Zetsumeigan.'

Naruto emerged from the crater in the ground that the explosion had created, looking at Nibi with rage in his eyes before smirking devilishly at her.

Naruto was not having a fun time. The reason being was that he was getting his ass handed to him by his dark side. He hadn't even managed to land a single hit on him so far. Forget that, he hadn't even been able to touch him while he was covered from head to toe with scratches, bruises and gashes. 'DAMMIT! How do I beat this guy? He knows all my moves, he knows what I'm going to do ahead of time and he even knows the moves I can't even use yet! This is FUCKING ridicules!'

Dark Naruto chuckled at Naruto's thoughts which made Naruto growl deep in his throat. "Maybe I should have just ambushed you. There is no fun in this. I'm just beating you down while you can't even land a single hit on me. That's just embarrassing."

Naruto growled deeply in his throat at Dark's response and lunged at him, to earn a punch to the gut and a spinning jump kick to his left temple. He flew through the air for a brief seconds before he smashed into the wall, creating a small crater. Trying to pull himself out of the crater, he coughed up a glob of blood. Shaking his head as he glared at Dark, he placed his hand on the edge of the crater to lift himself out of it.

Within a second, Dark Naruto reached him and slammed him back into the crater as his hand gripped his face. Dark smirked evilly as he lifted his hand back and began to pummel Naruto in the crater, making it larger after every single strike.

Gritting his teeth, Naruto tried to resist the assault but was slowly giving in to the darkness after each painful strike. 'NO! I must not give in! I need more power.'

Dark stopped his onslaught on Naruto and backed up, believing he was finished. He was about to walk up and throw Naruto in the cage, his eyes widened in surprise as Naruto slowly stood up from the crater, his knees trembling under the stress and pain they were in.

'Dammit. Why won't he stay down?' Dark gritted his teeth and grabbed Naruto's forehead before slamming him back into the crater and continuing his onslaught on Naruto. While the beat down continued on Naruto, he had only one thought going through his mind.

'I can't give up. My friends and family need me. I NEED MORE POWER!'

Nibi concentrated what was left of her youki to her eye as she stared at Naruto, before breathing in deeply for one last attack and announced it, hoping to god nothing would get in the way of it.

"Doragan no Yami Enkou!"

She exhaled and a large dragon made of black flames shot out of her mouth and raced towards Naruto with blinding speeds that even Rayne would have a hard time keeping up with before it engulfed him before he could move. Nibi sighed sadly as she reverted into her regular form as she stared at the burning black flames, indicating that Naruto's body had survived the initial attack, otherwise the flames would have mostly evaporated and there would be nothing left but ash.

She sighed once more, knowing she would be punished heavily for killing Naruto, but it had to be done seeing the insanity in his eyes. She just hoped Rayne would see it that way. As she turned away the flames, they erupted spreading across the field and in the center of them was one pissed off S-ranked vampire glaring at Nibi with overwhelming rage in his eyes.

Nibi spun around in shock as her eyes widen in fear. She backed up as she noticed there wasn't a single scratch on him now. 'That's not possible, even Kyuubi was hurt by that attack! It didn't even leave a burn mark on him! This isn't possible! Anything less than a SS-rank Vampire or Demon should have been turned to ashes! SO HOW IS HE STILL STANDING?!'

She was so shocked she didn't even notice him move.

Naruto rushed to her with blinding speeds and gripped her neck. Nibi's eyes widen as she struggled to get free as he lifted her off the ground.

From the sidelines the Kazekage was rushing over to help while Deidara was trying to hurry up his clay molding, both hoping to be able to stop frightening power of Naruto.

Naruto smirked gleefully at the petrified Nibi's face before grinning madly. "I hope your blood is as feisty as you are."

Her eyes widen as she struggled from his grip as he opened his mouth revealing his fangs. She continued struggling, but it seemed useless as almost all of her youki was gone as he bit into her collar bone.

An ear splitting scream from the Nekomata was heard from all within twenty miles as he started to drain her blood.

Naruto felt the darkness creeping up on him once more as his eyelids started to flicker and close. 'Sorry everyone I failed. I didn't have enough power to win.'

As he thought that another presence enter his mind. "Foolish mutt. Get the hell up and fight back."

Naruto's eyes widen as he heard Nibi's voice go through his head. 'She's right. I have to fight back. Even if I die at least he won't take over.'

As Dark threw another punch at Naruto, Naruto grabbed his fist easily, stunning dark. An eerie light green aura began to surround him as he slowly lifted himself from the crumbling crater. The green aura increased rapidly around him as it destroyed enough of the crater to allow him to completely stand. His emerald eyes met Dark's for a brief second before he delivered a hard kick to his gut.

Dark stumbled back from the blow and looked up at the glowing Naruto, who was looking at him with no other emotion other than hope and determination. His eyes began to widen as Naruto spoke with intensity only few could ever match. "I will win. I do not give up. I will not let my friends and family down. I WILL DEFEAT YOU!"

The green aura around Naruto exploded around him with intensity that barely anyone living creature could match. If possible, Dark's white face began to pale as he backed away from Naruto. 'It's not possible. He's tapping into his full power.'

Naruto extended his right arm out and a ball of pure youki began to form in his palm. Seven sets of hands gripped Dark, who turned back to see Kyuubi, Rayne, Itachi, Jiraiya, Nibi, Yugito and Gobi holding him down. Dark's eyes widen as he was startled by this and turned back to a grinning Naruto. "This is my mind. Everything in here revolves around me. In here, I AM GOD!"

The green Rasengan in Naruto's hand doubled then tripled in size before Naruto rushed him and rammed it into Dark Naruto's chest. Dark screamed in pain as he was literally torn to shreds by the giant green Rasengan till nothing was left of him. Naruto dropped to all fours and panted heavily as he was completely worn out.

He looked up and smiled a bit, thinking it was over when an echoing laughter was heard all around the room as Dark Naruto voice was heard. "You may have one this round king. But I will be back."

Dark's laugh harder and louder at this but was getting smaller by the second till it completely stopped. Naruto sighed in relief. 'Well it's over for now. I'll deal with you later when you appear again.'

Nibi was clutching onto Naruto's hair, trying to pull him off but had no luck as her strength was all but drained. Her face was getting paler by the second as her blood was being drained, but noticed it was slowly down and rapidly at that. She absently noticed that Naruto's eyes had changed back to there normal red and green color before he was knocked to the ground by a red headed figure.

She fell to the ground and clutched her neck where Naruto bit her and looked up to see Rayne's back as she looked at Naruto's form. Nibi had a faint smile before passing out from exhaustion and blood lost.

Rayne glared coldly at the Naruto in front of her, knowing this wasn't the real him. That was till she saw his eyes were back to normal.

"What happened?" Naruto said in a less frightening tone of voice but still wasn't his normal one, before he too passed out from mental stress and the pain his body was in.

Rayne sighed and noticed the sun was starting to rise. She cursed mentally and noticed the Kazekage running towards them. Once the Kazekage reached them she spoke as she pointed to the rising sun. "We need shelter now."

Boufuu was about to respond when he noticed her finger and the sun beginning to rise as well and nodded as he did not wanting to invoke her wrath. "Alright, follow me."

Rayne nodded a bit as she picked Naruto up, who had turned back to his regular form, and was about to follow Boufuu when she turned to Gobi. "Gobi, pick Nibi up and take her to the mansion."

Gobi snarled but did as she was told since Nibi was the only one of the bijuu she could tolerate. Rayne sighed deeply as they walked into the gates with Temari and Kankuro carrying Gaara behind them.

'I hope something like this never happens again.' Was Rayne's only though as she walked behind the Kazekage.

Two crimson eyes with three tomoes surrounding the pupil stared at the scene with anger written on his face. 'I will tell leader of this. He must know.'

In a swirl of flames he was gone.

Well, here is the revised edition of Chapter Six. I didn't change much as there wasn't to much wrong with it other than some grammar errors. Anyways, read and review.