A/N Finished Son of Neptune today, for the 100 time. Also kind of in a hurry, I'm not sure if I'm able to upload more chapters this week due to a pcban. Also no spelling check this time, RIP

Guest:

While perhaps not the the best in writing quality and short chapters are a bummer, this fic stands out by receiving rapid updates (100k in less than 2 months of publishing). Also, from a personal opinion, I like how you are "extra creative", not deviating too much from the canon storyline while stile adding enough original content for it to be different to canon which makes it interesting. Good job.

A: Thx, I'm trying to be creative and stick to the cannon time line, so I'm glad it works!

Guestt:

Cool.

A: IKR

Billy Bob Joe:

Great chapter! I love how you update often and with great chapters! And for Englsih not being your first langauge, you write them very well! As for the shippings, i say don't have any, that way, no one will be offended. Who knows, maybe Nyx can give one kiss to Percy. Well, this story is very well done so far and my favorite story on fanfiction, and i have been on here for a few years. Also, what is your main language?

A: Dutch! And love it that you like it. Btw, Percy's love live is going to be "interesting."

universalfather :

the storyline is amazing, even though english is not your first language you write very well. KUTGW

A: Thx, and kutgw is getting more used I see.

CTRI:

Nico is my fav character and he is bad ass! BTW I like your take on Artemis!

A: Thx and expect more awesomness from Nico.

Lucian Naruto chapter 47 . 22h ago

For Thalia's own sake, it's best if she forgets this rage against Nyx. If Thalia tries to fight Nyx, she will take a beating and Nyx will even laugh at her face.

Thalia: I'm tired of you your bitch. I'm going to remove that smile from your face!

Nyx starts laughing as if he's heard the biggest joke in history

Thalia will want to fight Nyx? All she's going to do is entertain Nyx. Hehehe! Protect Thalia, Percy! Her hot head will make Thalia be spanked by Nyx!

A: Yeah, no one wins from Nyx, not even Gaia.

Bruce77:

I liked the conversation, just one problem. Dude, are you like somehow reading my own notes? I have nearly the exact same conversation happening in my story. And also the bribing the gods part except not in just the one meeting, it happens over time for me. True manipulation. But shit there are multiple times where the convo between Artemis and Percy follow almost perfectly what I have written down. It's really weird man. But meh "great minds" I guess hehe. KUTGW and good luck. Looking forward to you somehow stealing more of my work lmao nah I'm playing I love your story no matter how many eery similarities there are.

A: Thx and I'm just reading your diary dude, that's how I get all those great ideas.

InfiniteClockWise:

Primordials love puns way too much in my opinion. Are they really that bored? Not to mention I am asking cause of my little bro. Are you gonna add a ship?

A: Primordials are bored as hell, that's why they watch Percy.

mcoombes chapter 47 . Oct 22

Wow, Artemis didn't see that coming... things are going to get crazy if Percy's secret gets out. I also want to congratulate you on taking a lot of normally cliché things like "Percy gets blessed by Chaos and some primordials" and "Percy becomes Hestia's champion" and doing them so differently that I only noticed now

A: Nope, this "boy" is smarter then he looks.

MarethyuQ chapter 47 . Oct 22

nice chapter, as usual.

my only comment is to get nico as far away from nyx as possible ;)

and maybe let bianca and nico have some final sibling words and all that (leave on a good note) percy will make sure of it mayb

A: Thx, and last words are great.

The One From The Shadows chapter 47 . Oct 22

Nice one again, as always!

I'm starting to wonder that if Artemis already thinks that Percy is hiding something, some of the rest of the gods (Athena, etc.) must already know and be making some sort of test for Percy to pass... Could make an interesting story.

A: Yup, Artemis is a smart goddess, so expect some plot development.

(Percy POV)

"Whoa!" Nico cried out, "So that is Apollo! And that's his chariot! The sun!"

"Urgh, yeah, ugly isn't it?" Nyx mumbled.

"You're only saying that because it's not painted black." I argued.

We all looked at awe, well everyone except the hunters, at Apollo's car. The car was a red convertible Maserati Spyder and it was glowing, because it was the sun.

Apollo got out of the car and grinned, he looked like a teenager that was just about to jump on his surfboard. He wore a casual white t-shirt and short pants, he had blond sandy hair and a huge smile that would've put Hemera to shame.

"Artemis! My little sister!" he said and suddenly wings sprouted from his sneakers.

The wings lifted him a few feet above the air and he flew lazily towards Artemis, still grinning like a mad man.

Artemis rolled with her eyes, "I am older than you and stop flying Apollo before one of my hunters mistakes you for a bird."

Zoë played with an arrow in her hand and smiled at Apollo.

Apollo gulped and he dropped down, "Jeez, sis, you're just jealous you can't fly."

Artemis threw her hands up and glared at me and I could guess she blamed me for Apollo's flying ability.

"Sorry." I mumbled, "Next pair of flying shoe's I find will be yours."

"I can fly too." Nyx told Nico.

"You can't." Nico said with awe but Nyx just smiled.

"How can you fly?" Thalia asked Nyx.

"That's a secret." Nyx answered.

Apollo looked away from his sister and glanced at us, he looked at Thalia and exclaimed, "Thalia, sister! Good to have you back! I hate it when girls get turned into plants."

"Like Daphne?" Grover guessed.

Apollo scowled at him but then turned towards Nico and Nyx, "Wow! Two death breaths in one day."

Nyx beamed, "I know right! Totally awesome!"

Apollo looked at Artemis and said, "I like this one already!"

Artemis rolled her eyes, again.

"What am I death breath?" Nico asked.

"You better get used to it." I told Nico.

He then looked at me, his expression changed from really dark to really happy within a flash, "Percy!" he cried out.

I sighted, "hey Apollo."

He threw up his hands, "The Champion of hope."

"Seriously?" I asked, "I know you and Hermes made up that stupid name."

"It's cool." He said.

Apollo raised his hands and took a dramatic pose, "I feel a Haiku coming up!"

"What's a haiku?" Bianca asked, to late.

Apollo said,

"The snow melts away,

Everyone needs my help,

I am so awesome!"

He looked at us like he expected a applaus.

"What was that?" Nico asked.

"Shouldn't the second line have seven syllables?" I asked.

Apollo frowned, "it does right?"

"No my idiot brother, it has six syllables."

Apollo made a not appear from out of nowhere, looked thoughtfully, and wrote the line down, then his expression changed to shock.

"You are right!" he muttered traumatized

Now everyone rolled their eyes.

Artemis snapped her fingers, "Apollo! The campers and my hunters need a ride."

Apollo looked at Artemis with hope, "You need my help?"

Artemis turned towards her Zoë, "tell the hunters to pack our stuff."

Then towards, "Apollo I'm going on a solo hunt."

"Why?"

"The car Apollo!" one of the hunters sighted.

Apollo scowled, turned around and took out the keys out of his pockets.

He pressed on a button and the car transformed into a school bus, "I hate giving up this form." Apollo muttered as the hunters took their stuff inside.

"So why are you going on a solo hunt?" Apollo asked again.

"Some of use have duties, I need to hunt a creature so old." Artemis said determined.

"Don't you get in trouble with Greenpeace?" Nico asked but Artemis shook her head, "No, this monster is a threat to Olympus, I don't know what it is, but I will find it and hunt it down."

Nico blinked, "And then?"

Artemis scowled, "and then what?"

"Are you going to eat it?" Nico asked interested.

"I better should get going!" Artemis suddenly said and turned towards Zoë, "Zoë I need you to stay at camp until I'm back."

"But Arrtemis…" Zoë protested.

"We've been over this Zoë, act like I would act." Artemis said.

And she made a 180 degrees turn and faced the woods, "I let the trail go cold." she muttered.

"So do trails have a heat signature for you?" Nico asked.

"Bye." She said and she sprinted of towards the woods.

Apollo wildly grinned, "Now who wants to drive?"

"ME!" Nyx yelled, along with Grover and Nico.

I kind of wanted to drive to but being a son of Poseidon Zeus might blast the sun out of the sky, like that other kid.

Apollo pointed his finger at Grover, "to fury," then at Nico, "To young," and finally pointed at Nyx, "To psychopath."

I smirked at Nyx, "Well, no you hear someone else say it." I teased.

"What's wrong with Psychopaths?" she asked, "they are always the nicest people."
Apollo turned towards Thalia and me, I shook my head which left Thalia.

"Thalia!" he called out like he just discovered the earth was round, "You get the great honour of driving the sun chariot!"

"No thanks." Thalia said, suddenly becoming more paler.

Nyx put her hand on Thalia's shoulder, "oh you are going to drive."

"Indeed." Apollo agreed and he pushed us inside the schoolbus.

Thalia understood protesting would not help so she took, nervously, the steering wheel in her hand.

"Nyx, you have to wrap shadows around our feet." I demanded.

"Why?" she asked as she sat down and began playing with Nico's hair.

"Trust me, you are bad at driving so is Thalia."

Nyx scowled but snapped her fingers and shadows wrapped arounds our feet, Nico's and Grover's hoof.

"Blaa… what is this?" he asked.

"I am saving your life." I told him dead serious.

A/N Review as always!

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