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Chapter 17

Unexpected Actions

His mark still caused him a certain sting, and he could even tell that it was illuminated today, Charles on the day of the dance felt the sting when he was talking to Miss Bennet, and today when they briefly spoke in the gardens after she created that replica of the bushes; He felt a magnetism that took him towards Miss Bennet. He could have kissed her, but she, although blushing, gently moved away and although she was grateful for his attention, she left.

Jane dear, beautiful and sweet Jane, Charles felt more than enchanted by that lady, she was graceful and very beautiful, kind and sweet; Charles felt like a moth towards the light in her presence, he was almost sure she must be the lady, the hidden treasure that his grandfather spoke of... his grandfather told him many times …do not waste your gift, look for the treasure that will make you return with strength to the house of our ancestors, you have to do it find the treasure...

He couldn't deny that he felt so many things could it be her? of the real irisurt? Darcy had said days ago that Benet girls were superior in quality and today he said that if Charles wanted he could marry her... but he had doubts she was just a pretty country lady, all the things Caroline said made a dent in his brain, he need talk about it and knocked on his friend's door

-Go ahead- Darcy said

-We could talk for a moment; I'll be brief- Charles said as he passed by

-Don't tell me you're still worried about the situation –

-Yes, I mean no, although it is related to the family, but no directly- Charles made fireballs when he felt nervous

-Could you be more specific in what you are dealing with- said Darcy

Bringing her closer and lowering your voice Charles said- You said I could woo her, actually I think it's her, if that's real of the irisurt-

Darcy arched his eyebrow

Charles raised the sleeve of his shirt and showed his mark that still showed some light, Darcy looked cautiously -In her presence it is not the first time it happens, but today it was older I would even say that It burned me, I forgot about the eyes, but I felt that about magnetism, is it real? It's her? Should I offer? —

-It's real, only if she can feel something this is her, and you can do it depends if you don't care about everything around-

-But if it's her, it's the possibility of returning to a magical house, that's not what I have to do and want, everyone wants be in one house—

-Actually they are not in a House, their ancestors were, without a doubt you would improve your position, but not to the rank that perhaps your family expects-

-I don't know what to do-

-Don't offer anything yet, then—said Darcy and patted his friend showing him the way out to dinner

They all took their seats and began to eat, speaking lightly, when they were about to serve dessert Caroline began her plan

––Oh you know that perhaps before we leave we will attend an engagement party––

The Knights looked at each other with curiosity, even Georgiana looks or the lady with curiosity

Louisa even with doubt, followed Caroline footsteps –– Everything indicates that in the next few days the announcement will be made––

––What are you talking about if I may know? –asked Charles curiously

––Miss Elizabeth Bennet will marry her cousin–– Darcy's face darkened, and everything in the room froze for a moment, Georgiana looked up worried, her brother had written in the letters about that Miss, so she presumed that he was in love with her.

Louisa still with doubt continued ––It is logical Mrs. Bennet has propitiated everything–– she said softly–– it is he who inherits the patrimony––

Hurts shook his head

–– Then it is already spoken? – continued Charles who did not leave the room. his astonishment

––Of course, since he arrived he hasn't lost track of her and as he already made the offer– Caroline pulse

––That is to say, she's already engaged–– Bingley said even more curiously, looking at her sisters

––That's what it was commented at the dance, Mrs. Bennet was happy about it– Louisa sentenced quietly

––Oh but it is ideal, she impertinent and he flatterer– Caroline mocked in the middle of a giggle

––Caroline! –– her brother rebuked her

––You cannot deny the obvious, Charles! Jane hardly seems like a lady, and she seems to listen well, because all of them lack training, without a dowry, her mother has nothing of class and much less modesty, the younger girls better not talk, luckily their cousin marries her because if he wasn't a farmer or another insignificant being like them––

Hurts looked at his wife with a steely gaze, so Louisa definitely didn't intervene anymore

–With that commitment They already have what they needed, someone who would guarantee them a roof over their heads and save them from the misery they would reach when their father died—Caroline said sarcastically and continued alone gossiping about the supposed engagement.

Georgiana was in an uncomfortable silence, she did not know personally the Misses Bennet, but from what her brother had written Miss Elizabeth was a sensible, agreeable, intelligent, lively lady, it said nothing against her; therefore, listening to what Caroline said seemed strange to her and her brother's somber silence, she knew not only made him uncomfortable but that those words hurt him. Caroline had always seemed to Georgiana a superficial woman who was obviously interested in Darcy, however with Caroline actions she showed that the interest was not the result of infatuation but of what Darcy was worth and possessed, since it was evident that Caroline delighted in what she did. what he said even if this hurt the man he valued.

Without thinking much Georgiana stared at Caroline and suddenly her words were incomprehensible, everyone looked at Caroline as she tried to continue her speech and not being able to speak well she was going to start crying. Everyone except the Bingley sisters knew very well that it was a very common spell joke that the words were tangled, the gentlemen looked at each other and Georgiana innocently returned to her food

Hurts laugh and knowing that as much as they wanted to silence Caroline, the other gentlemen had not been, what only leaving Georgiana as the offender, she decided to confuse the gentlemen even more and said - Dear Caroline you should know that some houses or perhaps the servants also have magic and when they hear denigrating things about people they like they can retaliate, you should be more careful not your tongue gets tangled up again- he said smiling

Georgiana kept eating and barely looked at them, which didn't seem strange because they all knew that She was shy but when, Georgiana look at Mr. Hurts winked at her, which made her blush when she felt discovered.

Although nothing else was said, the food lost all flavor for Darcy and he wanted to go upstairs to ask Elizabeth if it was true, but he had no right... his mind began to wander... maybe it was better this way She could be a Hilmen, and come from a distant magical family, but nothing Caroline said was a lie she was a rare unpolished gem, her family was almost all inadequate…. He had considered it before, but he couldn't leave it like that…. that man did not deserve her, he was nothing to her..., she felt jealous just thinking that another was close to her, somber and troubled he closed in on himself, once again silence all around him.

That night the common separation was obvious and while Caroline positioned herself at the piano to play since she couldn't sing, Georgiana approached her brother and whispered to him ––Are you okay? ––

He nodded but she could see the confusion and pain in his eyes, he had never shown interest in a woman before, Georgian worried about how he would react to the situation, he did not like what she perceived as his equal, he could see her cloudy and gloomy aura, besides, he had already had three drinks almost in a row.

"You should rest," gently squeezing her arm lightly, she tells him. She doesn't hug him visibly, but magically wrapped him in love, he looked into her eyes and tried to smile but it was barely visible

Bingley was looking at him from a distance, he also felt his disturbance, but didn't intervene, Caroline was delighted by her triumph without However, from now on she would think twice before speaking because what Hurts said remained in her mind, Darcy chose to retire in the darkness of her room, he walked around, he had many questions: Why then she had come to him? Why she risked to heal him? it was pure gratitude!

Elizabeth cared about him, she was not indifferent to him, their interactions and flirtations, if she flirted with him through the supposed discussions...besides he had felt that she was his irisurt, he thought he saw it in her eyes, he thought he felt it in her Mark, No, she couldn't be engaged to another? Would she be forced? What did it matter! He couldn't marry her! … but he couldn't leave her to be forced to marry that poor buffoon magician either, he could get her out of that, he had the means for it... Of course that was it! She had looked for him, she needed him to get her out of that absurd commitment imposed by her family.

Caroline's words had a completely opposite effect, she wanted him not to be forced or tempted to offer himself to Elizabeth, but what she achieved was that Darcy despaired at the possibility of losing Elizabeth, and even though he did not know how he would talk to her and Somehow he would get her out of that commitment according to the tax imposed by her family...

After midnight, insomnia and despair took their toll and caused him to burst into the room where Elizabeth was, he saw her sleeping there, she was so beautiful and tempting...

Darcy approached and touched her face, with this caress a barrage of sensations awoke in him, she woke up and seeing him there she couldn't help but startle and exclaimed -Mr. Darcy-

Aware of his closeness and lack of decorum, he separated and breathed He felt an irrational magnetism, his chest was burning, he was acting on impulse- Elizabeth... are you alright? - was the first thing he said

She nodded, while she covered herself and looked at him in amazement, why he was talking to her like that, why he was there...

He walked around and then he got a little closer to her looking at her longingly, in Elizabeth's presence his feelings overflowed and he started talking about his feelings for her... -Forgive me for breaking in like that, but you have I can't know it anymore. I am unable to contain my feelings. Allow me to tell you that I admire and love you passionately….

Elizabeth's stupor was inexpressible. She blushed, stared at him, indecisive and speechless. He took it as a favorable sign and followed him statement. By his way of speaking, he reflected that her impediments and the situation of her family hurt him, also that he was honest in his affection, as well as noticing a light beginning to reflect on his chest near one of his shoulders...

She warned that Darcy did not doubt receiving a favorable response. He spoke of fears and anxiety, but his appearance revealed absolute security. This exasperated Elizabeth even more, and when he finished, she answered him with her cheeks flushed with anger:

-In these cases I think it is customary to express gratitude, and although I thank you for your help in the attack that I just suffered, I do not thank you. Your attentions, you have given it to me very much against your will. Really, if I have hurt you, it was unconsciously, and I hope that this damage will last a short time. The same feelings that, according to what you say, prevented you from seeing me considering me adequate, will easily overcome that suffering_ She fell and breathed trying to calm her emotions, however it was not possible

-And that is all your answer- He said with evident disappointment and it seemed that a well immense opened in the place

While Elizabeth with her dilated and bright eyes said abruptly - Do you expect more? you have treated me so rudely practically insulting me, definitely you are so selfish that you cannot even patronize others for a moment, you are an arrogant and cruel man with whom it would be impossible for me to coexist, you handle others at will and I know that even his friend is under his control and perhaps that is why he does not decide to approach my sister in a serious way.- everything in the room began to tinkle Elizabeth's emotions were overflowing

He opened his eyes in surprise, and everything was paralyzed thanks to its impact.

She touched his throbbing head and closed her eyes, it seemed that her thoughts were fighting in her mind and suddenly she continued speaking-You cannot expect me to accept you in any way, because I know your true nature that was confirmed by a story that Mr. Wickham told me What can you say to this? With what fictitious act of friendship can you defend yourself now? With what falsehood can he justify in this case his domination over others? - Her eyes had changed now the anger was manifest, there were no signs of union and compatibility there, they shone in flames as when he met her, while without noticing it when speaking she rose threateningly before him -

-You are very keenly interested as far as that man is concerned- said Darcy coldly, who, seeing his exterior change, felt anything but calm and red-faced, while the air around him changed and the cold grew greater

-Who knows hardships he's been through; can you help feeling interested in him?

––The sorrows that have passed! Darcy exclaimed contemptuously. Yes, really, some immense sorrows... -Darcy looked at his shoulder where his mark was still somewhat illuminated

-Because of him! Elizabeth exclaimed energetically and vibrating, drawing Darcy's attention back to her. -You reduced him to his present relative poverty. You denied him the future that, as you well know, was destined for him. In the best years of his life, he was deprived of an independence to which he was not only entitled but deserved. He did all of this! And he is still capable of ridiculing and making fun of his sorrows...—She said, breathing heavily and almost buzzing around Darcy

And that is— Darcy shouted as he paced the room—your opinion of me! This is the estimate you have me on! I thank you for explaining it to me so openly. My faults, according to your calculation, are truly enormous. But it may be, he added, pausing and turning to her, that these offenses might have been overlooked if I had not wounded her pride with my honest confession, and spared me these bitter accusations if I had been cleverer and hid my struggle from her, flattering her. by making him believe that he had taken this step driven by reason, by reflection, by an unconditional and pure inclination, for whatever it is -he said covering his still illuminated mark—

But I abhor all kinds of deceit and I am not ashamed of the feelings that I have manifested, they were natural and fair. How could you suppose that I liked your position and the behavior of many in your family and congratulated myself on the prospect of having relatives whose station is far below mine? —he concludes

Elizabeth's irritation grew by the minute; yet he tried very hard to express herself moderately when she said: -You are wrong, Mr. Darcy, if you suppose that it is your way of proposing that has affected me; if you imagine that I would have been spared the embarrassment of refusing you if you had behaved more chivalrously-. Elizabeth realized that he was about to interrupt her, but she said nothing, and she continued:

You could not have offered me your hand in any way that would have tempted me to accept it-

Again his astonishment was obvious. Looked at her with an expression of disbelief and humiliation at the same time, and she went on:

-From the first, almost from the first moment I met you, your manner convinced me of your arrogance, your vanity, and your selfish disdain towards the feelings of others, always showing your great power and magnificence for being a powerful Hilmen, all of you have displeased me in such a way that they gave birth to your complete disapproval in me, with all this I must know that you would be the last man in the land I could marry. -

-You have said enough, miss. I fully understand your feelings and it only remains for me to be ashamed of mine. Forgive me for interrupting you and accept my best wishes for health and happiness- Darcy shifted into an eagle and a cold wind whipped as he flew out of the room.

Elizabeth for a moment felt like everything was frozen…. It was cold to death... she shivered and decided she had to leave, she also changed her form and flew like a sparrow to leave the place, the sentinels in Netherfield noticed the magical activity and surrounded Georgiana's room, just as they approached to Darcy's room noticing that it was the room with coverage from which it came, they were alert waiting for anything to come out of there...

Once outside the mansion Elizabeth turned into a wolf and began to run, the cold was superior and as a bird it was difficult for her endure it, she was running back to Longbourn when suddenly an intense and furious storm broke out, she looked back and saw how the hail fell wildly and the icy wind roared with fury, she quickened her pace and felt how the earth also seemed to protest and moved The sky shone with lightning and sparks, it seemed that from Netherfield the entire earth was determined to stir everything up on itself… once at home it transformed and entered through the chimney…. She covered her tracks and once in the room she looked out the window as the storm hit the ground….