A/N Another chapter. Not much to say.
(Review)
Turtle:
The superhero duit should be one of those fish mascots at fish and chips places
A: That sure would scare the enemies.
Waassuupp:
For a superhero suit maybe have it be spartan battle armor since he is a Greek demigod. Btw do you have his superhero name yet?
A: No Spartan armor, that's would not make sense, also. I have no name yet.
Alex Focker:
A skin tight suit have black as its base colour and dark blue covering parts of the body like Spiderman but a symbol of the trident on his back with accents of red around his body, the helmet could be a Spartan helmet or a just those helmets that surround the face with a glass faceplate that obscures the face just like red hood from dc
A: I consider it, the problem is that Percy doesn't use his water powers that much. But a good suggestion!
Iapetus:
Does this mean Apollo won't be sent down to Earth as a mortal? Also, a long time ago you said pay attention to how Magnus was older so how does that fit? Would love to know so please answer! BYYYYYYYYEEEEEEE!
A: I can't answer both of your questions, time will learn it.
Guest:
Great story! I usually read already finished stories, but this one is good enough to keep me reading. Nice job and keep going!
A: Thanks!
MarethyuQ:
ooh so its not nico bringing hazel back to life. nice. but can we still get hazel x frank in the future? i like that ship
A: Of course!
Guest:
My suggestion for the suit would be like a lean suit/robe all a blackish purpley color like chaos color with an Spartan logo on the back? Idk just an suggestion and for a name try not to make it a title you have to know the difference as an author like Captain America isn't a title but a name but the Winter Soldier is a title and don't you think would be weird if his super hero name was that and that's how they refer to him? Tell me if you understand what I'm saying and sorry I'm making my own story so I can't give away the name of the was thinking of it has something to do with chaos as well
A: Ow, that's cool. I'll consider it. Also, can't wait to read your story.
Guest :
Hmm super suit, well you ever seen lokis suit and how it's not like it has like a bunch of and on it but makes him looks lean and badass, well of course you have, will
A: Loki's suit is not pratical.
Guest:
Why is capitalization all screwed up? It's been like that for a whole bunch of chapters.
A: Oopsie.
Percyjacksonsonofchaoshimself:
o hazel! Percy's death king now but what about Nico? Will he still be ghost king?
A: Nico's still the Ghostking.
Willlll:
Percy don't need a suit. It doesn't really "suit" him
A: Haha, good pun!
Knightwing20042:
A warm wind blew through Asphodel, but it wasn't a nice breast. I'm guessing you meant to type breeze and not breast. Also, for the supersuit, I have a few ideas. I'm writing a PJO/ Young Justice crossover (thanks for helping me out with writing the prophecy) and I'm planning on using a Daedric/Spartan armor. The color scheme I had in mind for were color schemes involving royal blue, silver, sea-green, black. I feel like that would also fit Percy well in your stories. Just so you get an idea, google Batman Timeless Sparta and imagine it with the colors I mentioned above and you'll get a close idea of what I'm talking about.
A: I fixed the error, also thanks for the suggestions. I'll consider it.
Sup3rdup3rman:
cookie (::) also for Percy's superhero suit I think you should do a captain america style suit.
A: Thanks for the cookie! Also, an ultra realistic suit sounds cool.
some other dude:
Omae va ou shinde iru (i think?) t-series: NANI?
A: Percy is the deathking.
Surya25addanki:
Nothing too fancy for his suit but this chapter is good
A: Thanks for the review nonetheless.
Guest:
"died cowardly or in their sleep?" *Inconspicuously looks at half of the universe*
A: I know, its horrifying
Typhon:
I don't know what I was say in that review maybe I thought I was in a different story. Not really sure. Nice chapter though, by the way how much longer will this story go? I really like it and was wondering because it's already at 300,000 words.
A: It's going to be super, duper, ultra long.
Mcoombes:
Woooo! Hazel's here at last, yes! Thank you! That "downside" of using Hel's powers sounds interesting, and I really like dark Percy, even though there was only a tiny bit in House of Hades. Cool chapter
A: Thanks! I'll make sure to use Dark Percy properly.
Ravage200:
Full faced visor that is part of a helmet piece. The helmet part of it covers the mouth, sides of head, and back of the head. A trench coat with a good that covers the majority of the helm and the body. Underneath the tench coat is light, plated armor. The helmet is colored dark blue (not the visor though) with white streaks in the shape of waves, the armor is a patchy blue that looks like some of the paint was scraped off. Shoes-black combat boots, fingerless gloves, and that's about it
A: Capes are not good, but the armor idea is good, I'll take your ideas in consideration.
Kai Chaos Killer:
Please more. I need more. I also luv the cliffies
A: Here is more!
PrototypeSaber15:
Something like Achelles from fate/apocrypha.
A: Cool idea!
DaughterOfSBWG:
I certainly did not expect Hazel to be the Roman friend and the guide for the Maze travel. This is awesome. You mentioned this book will be short. So is this book going to be the adventure of Percy, Katie and Hazel only? Or will other characters appear along the way? "Arachne" If you are indeed planning to make her part of the monster team Percy is assembling, she will get her curse removed like Medusa right? If yes then will she still have her powers and will she be like Spiderman (or more accurately Spiderwoman)? Awesome chapter. Percy frightened me in this chapter with the attitude. Part of Hel's blessing I guess? Have some cookies and milk.
A: Yeah, those three will be the main protagonist. Also, spiderwoman idea would be cool.
Thanks for the cookies and milk!
Moonlight22qu:
yayayayayayyayayayyayay hazel! you are the best! I say it all the time but it's true!
A: Thanks and I'm glad you like it!
(Percy POV)
After an hour of walking through dark tunnels we finally reached the surface. The tunnel led to a cave which itself led to a valley.
We stepped out of the cave and the first thing I noticed was the red moon hanging in the sky.
Hazel's eyes widened as she stepped out of the dark cave and saw for the first time since decades real trees and grass, stars and a red moon.
"Is that new?" Hazel questioned, pointing at the moon.
"No." Katie said as we looked around.
We were standing on the top of a rockcliff, underneath us was a forest that seemed to go on forever.
"Is that a camp?" Hazel wondered and she pointed over the pointed over the edge.
Underneath us was a small clearing and my eyes widened as I recognized Hazel's tunnel had brought us.
The camp contained out of a dozen large tents, all made of silver silk, curved in a crescent around one side of a bonfire. But something was horribly wrong.
One of the tents was on fire, wolves were running around the camp. I recognized some of them as the wolves from the hunt but there were other wolves too. Larger ones with glowing red eyes.
Girls in silver parkas were engaged in a battle, trying to shoot the attackers but the Hunt was hopelessly outnumbered, In the middle of the camp stood a man wearing a mask, or at least I guess it was a man. I couldn't be sure because he was 10 feet tall.
He wore grey tactical gear (giant size of course) with a cloak and hoodie but his face was covered by an iron mask shaped like the face like a skull.
On his back he had a quiver, stuffed with black arrows. On his belt he had a black hunting knife but as main weapon he had a huge black composite bow with silver blades sticking sticking out on the ends. If Robin Hood would be evil he would look like this guy.
He rapidly shot arrows at the hunters running around at the camp. I saw one of the Hunt's wolves had an black arrow stuck in his eye socket and another one was pinned against a tree with an arrow stuck in her throat.
The hunters tried to fight back and take a defensive stand but they failed horribly, the wolves were running around all over the camp, preventing the hunters from forming an actual plan.
'I need to help them.' I thought and commanded the shield of winter to activate.
"The hunt!" Katie cried out, "They are in trouble,"
"I know." I muttered and detached the shield from my arm and did the first thing that came up in my mind.
I threw my shield at the archer guy.
He must have heard it coming because he jumped out the way and my shield struck the ground instead of him.
He turned towards us and I realized I had given away our location.
"Take cover-" I tried to scream as he shot an arrow at us.
For a second I expected one of my friends to be impaled by an arrow, when that didn't happen I wondered if he had missed us.
I leaned over the edge, a black arrow had pinned itself into the cliffside.
The arrow looked like a regular arrow except for the fact it had a thicker part at the end and there was a blinking red light.
"What's that?" Hazel asked worried.
I jumped away from the edge as I realized what was about to happen.
A large explosion followed immediately after and the ground underneath our feet fell away, one moment we were standing on rock. Seconds later it crumbled to pieces.
I tried to absorb the fire so my non-fire-resistant friends wouldn't die from the flames, but I couldn't do anything about the fact we were falling.
Luckily, Katie did.
The landing was soft, it was like I had landed on a cloud... But it was not a cloud. I had landed on a bunch of leaves.
I opened my eyes and saw that all the trees underneath us had intertwined themselves and formed some kind of safety net.
A second later Katie and Hazel landed onto the tree leaves as well.
A second later the leaves spread themselves and we landed onto the ground (on our feet luckily).
Katie turned to me, "What's the plan?"
For once I didn't have a plan, in fact. I was totally taken by surprise.
I saw a familiar hunter taking cover behind one of the silver tents. She stabbed one of the wolves with her blades.
"Zoë!" I whispered as I ran towards her, sneaking behind one of the large silver tents so the archer wouldn't see us.
Zoë's eyes widened as she saw us.
"Percy?" Zoë hissed, she looked tired, her long dark hair was messy, she had a cut on her forehead and she was bleeding. "You too are alive?"
I ignored her question, instead I asked. "What the fuck is going on?"
Zoë raised an eyebrow, then her eyes widened and she aimed an arrow at me. "Duck!" she yelled and I immediately dropped.
An arrow flew over my head and pinned itself into the eyehole of a grey wolf that had been sneaking up on Hazel.
Hazel let out a yelp as she was caught by surprise.
Zoë grinned and pulled another arrow from her quiver. I heard the sound of another explosion in the distance and a tree caught fire.
"What is going on?" Hazel almost cried out.
Zoë raised an eyebrow, "New Demigod?"
I nodded, "And how are you alive?" Zoë asked.
"No time for this," Katie asked, "What is going on? Who is attacking the hunt."
Zoë grimaced, "Well. Percy is not the only one who came back from the dead."
She stepped away from the tent and shot an arrow at the archer's back. The arrow pinned itself into his back. He let out a horrified scream and spun around but Zoë had stepped back before he could see her.
She turned to me, "That should've killed him. The arrow had penetrated his heart."
"Is it a god?" Katie asked warily.
"A monster?"
Zoë shook her head, "No, apparently Percy is not the only one who came back from the death. It's Orion, and we can't kill him."
A/N The end of the chapter.
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