Ashes of Skyrim (HALTED & UP FOR ADOPTION)

by Crimson Soldat

The Age of Darkness should have consumed the Ashen One. Yet he and the Firekeeper had found themselves in another land. Civil Wars, Jingoist Fanatics, and Gods. They must survive this new lands while making new friends and enemies along the way. All the while traversing through the lands of Skyrim.

4. Any Improvements

At this point, this story isn't going anywhere. Ashes of Skyrim is at a dead end.

I have no idea where to go. I have Halo Galactic Wars to update. Then Avengers/Transformers: Worlds Greatest Heroes, and finally my new story, Fairyborne. Those are the stories that I need to work on because I haven't updated them for a while now.

At this point, I feel like I need to take a break on writing Fanfiction stories until I have my personal life settled.

Now then, is there any suggestions and rooms for improve I can make on Ashes of Skyrim? I am already aware that I have to rewrite the third chapter as it felt too short.