I am tired of wriitng Mary Sues by accident, If you see me getting close say something,...
New Rules for this Mika series, Limit the Naruto missions. Show limited growth due to lack of bloodlines or nepotism.
Not make him a master of everything so fast. It should take years to get to A rank, not less than a year... it should take him time, he has no biological privileges like most main characters. Nor the luck of a great teacher like Gai, Tsunade or Minato.
Show struggle, issues, development...
I want to make this not a Mary Sue story, but one of growth...
More like Pulling my Weight not Legacy.
Thank you for understanding.
Happy as a clam, Mika walked out of the second hand shop, tanto and scroll in his hands. The tanto was battered and old, but still usable. The scroll was nothing special, a set of basic katas for the Dancing Leaf, a generic kenjutsu style used in the Leaf village. Mika knew this, both of these things. He cherished what he bought, with all his soul, for he had earned it. For two years, he worked odd jobs at every place he could, making pocket change until he could afford his stuff. Sure he had to buy it second hand, but hey it worked.
With happiness in his heart, he hurried away to a distant training ground. One six miles away from the core of the village, where he was all alone. Falling into a low stance, he moved through the movements on the scrolls, delicate and proper, trying hard to master them fast. Today he graduated, so in three days he would meet his jonin teacher. He had to make a positive impression.
He had no clan to help him, no gifts of blood or nepotism. He was all alone, and he had to work harder for everything.
This was the start of his path, to a greater future than anyone would allow... and no one would stop him...
He was Mika, and this was the start of his story.
Chapter end, tell me what you think in the reviews.
This is getting old, I hate making so many mistakes I have to restart...
Love, your Ninja Overlord,
Mika.