The Love of His Life

by jacs48

Ash has gone through many regions. He has made many friends and met many Pokemon. One day he remembers something important, something he is determined to do, and someone he needs to visit. Of course he intends to simply make it a friendly visit, but love always finds a way.

9. Authors note

Hello to all! I wanted to take a break for a while.

I also wanted to say thank you to all those who have reviewed, liked, and followed my story. I realize that it can be a bit cringy at points or a lot of times, and that there are way better fanfics than mine.

But the fact you guys at least gave my story a chance really makes me happy. When I posted my first story I got lucky for 5 people. I know I have a lot of work still, and that it's been a while since I've posted an update. I'll try working on it tonight if I'm awake enough after work.

I will try to remember everything I've learned and you all have suggested I do to improve my writing. I also will attempt to do some brief action scenes to try it out. If you guys have any tips for action or fight scenes, such as if it should be attack counterattack and turn based like the games and shows, or where they attack randomly or constantly like I have seen in some other stories.

In all honesty I may deviate from my original plan. If it's too mushy or cringy let me know and help me fix things! I think I'll be going over my original chapters and fixing anything that needs fixing. So if you guys have anything that you think I should fix to make the story both go smoothly and make a better read, I'm all ears.

Thank you all again!