One and a half year later.
So, a lot has happened this since getting our broken class. First of all, a day after getting the classes we got contacted by the devs in a weird turn of event where they said that getting those class were supposed to be impossible (Which explain why they were so broken) but they won't remove or modify the classes as they said we earned them 'Fair and Square' though they warned us off abusing the feature of them as they would remove the class if we abused them too much.
Once me and Rin got the classes we started to experiment to what we could do with them and found out that while I had more versatility with the Life class summon due to me being able to create them from scratch, Rin had more power with it since the Death summon spawned at the best of the summons death (Which include bosses, so yeah completely broken).
Anyway, after having tested our class a bit, we started messing around until the game got a public release, we started PKing Human and Demi-Human player that tried to attack Heteromorphic player, in fact, we got so successful at it that 1) Our Unique Class status was leaked (Not surprised at that, we never really hid it) and 2) we got a reputation even after the public release as the Angel of Life and the Death Demon. That fact attracted a lot more PKer to us as the Unique Class [Toll] Ability was also leaked with our Unique Class (I am 80% sure that was the shitty devs fault) so a lot of people tried to kill us to get access to some of the enormous amount of loot we had.
During the year and a half of playing we did, we found it that the Toll ability was even more broken than people (Me and Rin included) thought. Why? Because the Toll ability also worked on World Item…
Yeah, we now had a few copy of multiple world items though you need to understand that we got like only 6 world items in a year, half of them being the same one, I can understand now why the devs didn't want us to get the classes. Though it will be undoubtedly very useful once Nazarick gets created and I am curious on how that ability will manifest into the New World.
So now, Me and Rin were currently traveling through some sort of jungle to see if we could do a Jungle Themed dungeon as those are surprisingly rare even IN the Jungle.
As my sister and myself got around a big ass tree that was on our path that forced us to circle it (The flying ability of Angel and Demon might be useful, but by experience it's just a dumb idea to just fly over everything as you were easy to spot and could easily miss something important), we heard someone crying with a clearly inhuman voice.
"Why do you keep killing me?! I am already done to level five!"
"Shut up! It's your fault to have chosen an Heteromorphic Race! We are going to bleed you of item dry!"
I looked at Shewill, asking with my eye if she want to intervene with me and she nodded slight with her lips pursed.
We rushed from our position toward the sounds of the cry until we got into talking distance of the party of 5 humans that were attacking a Small Fairy. Once they saw us they stopped harassing the fairy and started doing looking menacing at us.
"What the fu- hell are you looking at?! You should wait your turn before we kill you and get your item!" Surprisingly unoriginal, we got the same flavor of threat every time we intervened in something like that.
I took the brief respite to inspect their gear and composition and determined that there was 2 melee fighter, 1 archer and 2 mages, so all in all, not an issue for me and my sister.
"You should stop that right now or me, my sister and the guy hiding behind the rock will have no choice but to kill you and take all of your item." I responded calmly, which got a surprised look from the 5 douches and my sister, as they all turned suspiciously placed rock near them.
"Ah! I am curious as to what gave me away my dear lady! Though you definitely have sharp instinct to know I would intervene in the name of Justice!" The being that was hiding behind the rock said while coming out of hiding and takings his weapon out.
The player looked to be a humanoid insect race that was equipped by what looked like the first World Champion Armour Set. The Character honestly looked disgusting on the face but with the way it talked, I am sure everyone know who this is right? Touch-Me, the creator of Nine's Own Goal, the predecessor of Ainz Ooal Gown.
"You're just three people! And you two ladies looks like you are mages, so we will go easy on you with such imbalanced team!" Douche 2 exclaimed arrogantly as they started readying themselves to attack us.
We didn't let them get a chance as Shewill and me immediately started with our own combat summons while Touch-Me rushed into the fray.
"[Air/Fire Light T7N10] [Living Plant T9N3]" I started off summoning two of my custom Life summons. Air/Fire Light are basically small light made of Fire that are really quick due to the air aspect and are used to basically distract opponent as well as being surprisingly powerful due to the synergy of being both Air and Fire. Living Plant was basically just a tentacle plant that would restrain and crush opponent once they got them into their grasp.
I immediately give a custom order to my summon to get the Light to distract the archer and mages while using the Living Plant to try to crush the warriors that Touch-Me was attacking. Props to him though, even while being helped by summons that doesn't really exist in Yggdrasil, he didn't lose focus and continued doing a deadly dance of blade with the 2 warriors in a breathtaking display of skills as he parried and used his insectoid body to bend at impossible angle to better dodge the sword and axes of the two warriors.
"[Undead Minotaur T9V2] [Undead General T8V4]" Shewill chanted after me, summoning one Undead Minotaur (The second version she got into her undead arsenal) and an Undead General that summoned a 10 archers themselves. The Minotaur charged at the Warriors to help Touch-Me while the General used it's archers to basically keep pressure unto the enemy archer and mages.
Seeing how it was going badly for them the human player decided to cut their losses and try to run.
"Shit, they are too strong! Quick, Alfonso use your Greater Teleport and- ugh!" I interrupted the leader trying to flee by boosting my summons a bit to surprise them with their new strength and that strategy was a major success as they got destabilized and were quickly killed before they could run.
Once we got done looking around us to be sure everything was fine, me and my sister sent a nod toward the fairy that stayed still in awe while looking at Touch-Me, something that he seemed to understand immediately as we all got close to the Fairy.
"Ah ah! Nothing better than to serve justice toward those that harbor evil! How are you little Fae?" Touch-Me started with.
The fairy, still looking shocking at the speed we took out the 5 humans that kept killing her, shook her head and bowed to us.
"Thank you, misses and mister, for the help. You got there just before I lost my last item so I guess it could be worse." She laughed bitterly at that. Hearing that, Shewill softened her gaze and opened her inventory to send some gear that would help her get back her levels.
Once we got done with the thanks, me and Shewill started a discussion with Touch-Me.
We started simple like what we were doing before stumbling unto this scene, which lead to Touch-Me learning we were Beta Tester.
"Truly?! It must have been an honor to play this game before everyone got access to it! If you don't mind me asking, you bear a striking resemblance both in look and gameplay style as a certain Beta Tester duo…" He questioned obviously referring to our status as Angel of Life and Death Demon.
"Yes, I am the Death Demon while my Onee-chan is the Angel of Life, we worked very hard to get those title!" My sister said proudly before I could respond to my amusement.
"I thought so, your clothing is rather distinct for 2 girls playing the game! And you're summon were ones I never heard of before, I assume it must be your Unique Classes?" He responded, fishing for information for some reason, even though I had my doubt about why.
If you are wondering about the clothes part of his phrase, that's because most girl playing the game prefer to get clothes that are either more in line with IRL clothes or that cover more stuff than we did. I convinced my sister to dress more sexily at some point during our game sessions at that turned into both me and her designing sexy mages clothes that would be more fit into a 3D RPG of my old world.
I had a white dress that flowed all to the way to just after my butt in a smooth way while having a big hole in the middle of where my boobs were (they still hid all of the most important part, there was just a hole to the right of my left boob that continued to the left of my right boob), my arms were clad in silk gloves that reached from the tips of my fingers all to way to my shoulder and blended in so well with the arms that it looked painted on with my left gloves being red and my right being blue as an homage to my eyes, I also had stockings that reached to just a bit below where the dress ended and my feet were placed into high heeled boots.
Shewill had a similar setup with the dress being black though it didn't have a hole in it and stopped just a bit above her boobs as it was staying on with most likely game mechanic, (Curious on how that will be in the New World, assuming she doesn't change clothes) She had silk gloves like me but, instead of doing a multicolor scheme like me, she just got black ones, my sister also had stocking but she didn't get high heels, instead getting normal leather boots, something that she somewhat tease me about because I liked wearing high heels more than normal boots. Honestly, that's most likely because once I started wearing them, I got stubborn and tried to learn to run and doing everything with them and the Game gave me a skill for that, that I maxed. So now high heeled boots were pretty much the same as wearing normal shoes for me now so I just decided to fuck it and wear them full time.
"Yes, it is. Anyway didn't you say you were with a party? Won't they get worried about you taking so long?" I questioned, just before we started hearing voices calling for Touch-Me.
"Speak of the devil!" Touch-Me said jovially as we saw the party coming to us and we started exchanging greetings.
Honestly, apart from Touch-Me I didn't recognize any of them. After some discussion, Touch-Me decided to ask the question I half-expected to get.
"Do you want to join our party Kaori and Shewill?" He asked, getting surprised look from his party at us being invited. I guess they are strict into their invitation process.
I looked at my sister, silently asking her what she wanted and she nodded at me. I looked back at Touch-Me and nodded my head at his question.
"Sure, we never really got into a party before so this might be fun. I guess you would want to know our classes to get our position settled?"
"Yes, that would be best. Though you are summoners, you said yourself that you have unique classes, so knowing how they differ from other class will help a lot" Touch-Me looked pleased at our response and we got the invite, accepted it and made our way to a safe zone to talk about it more privately.
"That's completely unfair! How did you manage to get those classes!?" Someone in the party exclaimed once they got over the shock of our Life and Death class.
"We beat a dungeon that wasn't supposed to be beatable and got rewarded with those." Shewill responded bemusedly to the shock of everyone.
"Damn, we will have to get you some practice to work with us in the party though I am surprised at finding a class more broken than my World Champion class!" Touch-Me exclaimed excitedly as we started planning our party training with us in mind.
I looked at my sister in amusement as she made it seems as if she was completely in control and not overwhelm by all of the party training talk we currently have. It made me take a moment to look at all of the current player and I got surprised once I realized that including me, it made exactly nine people.
'Was someone replaced by me?' I thought a bit worriedly, hiding my anxiety at something going wrong because of that.
[I sometime forget you don't really know Overlord all that well. Don't worry, you didn't replace anyone, Nine's Own Goal first member were only 8 in members including Momonga.]
Uh, why call it Nine's Own Goal then?
[Honestly, it doesn't really matter the reason as it will most like not be the same once the party name is decided in your world.]
I guess that's true. By the way, you weren't really talkative this last year, any reason why?
[We already established that Systems get customized to the people that receives them, you got a more hands-off system which include me not talking to you unless you address me.]
Oh, fine then. As I was communicating with the Game and listening to Touch-Me training regimen (Multi-tasking skill for the win!), someone ask a question that most likely just popped into their head.
"Hey! What about World Item? Do you get those from your [Toll] Ability?" The person asked curiously. That stopped all movement and sound as everyone looked at us, curious about our answer.
I looked at my sister, silently giving her the lead for that one. She looked back at me, nodded then started answering the question.
"Yes, we get those. It's even more broken than you would think as we get copies that are at the full strength of the original and we can get multiple copies of the same item." I took in the reaction of everyone once they processed what my little sister told them.
"Oh come on! That's even MORE bullshit!"
"You miss the point friend, since they are in the party, we actually have access to unlimited World Item!"
"Yeah, but don't most people that gets them are very cautious to not die with them? They must get those a lot more rarely."
The party started playfully arguing together to my amusement, while my sister looked a bit overwhelmed by the reaction.
'I have the feeling that it's the start of a lot of cry about us being "broken"' I thought bemusedly.
A Year later.
So it make one year since me and my cute little sister joined Nine's Own Goal, the name being decided 2 weeks after we joined them, and the clan as since grown to be 24 member strong.
We all got called to our bi-weekly meeting we hold to discuss everything we found and the direction we will orient ourselves for the next 2 weeks earlier than planned, though I had suspicion on why, I am pretty sure that in Overlord, Touch-Me created Ainz Ooal Gown some time after they reached 23 members and, if we don't count myself as member, we reached that number.
My little sis and I were walking to our rendezvous point along with 4 other clan member that tagged along because we were close to each other during the moment we got called, when we finally set eyes unto the meeting place with Touch-Me along with a few other like Ulbert the only demon other than my sister, Bukubukuchagama and her brother Peroroncino and a few other I got to know during our year together.
"Is it everyone?" I asked Touch-Me seeing as I thought we were almost full with the way the safe zone was filled.
"Not quite, we are waiting for Nishikienrai as he said he will be late for a bit." Touch-Me responded to my question while inclining his head to me.
"In any case, he said it shouldn't take him longer than 5 minutes to come here from now."
"Uh, so why did you call this meeting so suddenly? It's not your style to just change the meeting time and place at random." I decided to question him to see his and the other reactions.
"Yeah, did something bad happen? OH, did you get a period and deci- OUCH! Sis, why?!" Peroroncino decided to shoot his mouth with bad decision before his sister Bukubukuchagama (Too long, from now on I am calling her Buku) decided to shut his mouth by using her slime appendage to slap her brother on the top of his head. She huffed at his question.
"I wouldn't have to always do that if you kept your mouth shut from inappropriate things you pervert! At least Kaori and Shewill respect people with their perverseness."
Ah yeah, that… First of all let me tell you that that was by accident, in a hilarious coincidence, we were doing a dungeon and found some half naked monster girl called Dryad. Once we saw them and before we started fighting them, both me AND my sister decided to run our mouth by saying that we would like to tap that (That tidbit led to other people discovering we were lesbian but they were really chill about that), and once we started fighting them, somehow, by a struck of bad luck, I summoned my Living Plant summon (Which are Plant Tentacle as a reminder) and Shewill was panicking a bit as she was getting surrounded by them and lead to her casting [Weakness of Life] all over the area. That lead to my living plant being fast enough to grab all of the dryads but not strong enough to do any damage… You can see where this is going as they grabbed all of them and were trying to crush them but it ended up looking like a softcore tentacle porno.
After that, we didn't make it better by apologizing about the mistake we made but then saying that it was hot… and that's the story of how we are known as the closet pervert by our clan. Honestly, all of this was really amusing in hindsight. I am still unsure how the devs didn't catch that honestly.
"Come on, that was one time! Why are we always being reminded of that onee-chan?!" My sister cried dramatically while hiding her face beneath her hands while I smirked in amusement.
Fortunately, she got saved from further teasing by Nishikienrai finally arriving at our meeting spot and everyone quieting down before letting Touch-Me begin his speech.
"Welcome to our bi-weekly meeting, before I inform you of the reason why I called this meeting earlier than expected, does anyone have anything interesting to share?" He said while looking at everyone, especially the thieves like Nishikienrai as they were the one that had interesting information most of the time and as expected, Nishikienrai stood up to inform us about something he found while exploring some swamp.
"Wait, you found a dungeon in the Grenbera Swamp? Wasn't this place fully explored some time ago?" Someone asked him as they listened to his explanation.
"It doesn't mean something wasn't missed, a lot of quest or item don't appear if you don't do something specific or have a specific class, maybe it's something similar?" I said and propositioned, which lead to people nodding their head and looking at Nishi for more explanation.
"Yes, I am pretty sure I activated a secret condition, as I found it while sneaking through the mob camp there and it was just there at someplace I am sure doesn't have a dungeon normally." Nishi said while keeping a calm demeanor and crossing his arms.
"Sneak through the Swamp Camp? Isn't that supposed to be impossible?" Peroroncino questioned.
"Supposed doesn't mean it is, we all know that, right Kaori? Shewill?" Touch-Me respond in good humour while teasing us, which lead to my sister blushing and grumbling beneath her breath that everyone was ganging up on them today while I just send him an unimpressed stare.
Once we settled the dungeon information we decided to tackle it after this meeting but before that, Touch-Me got our attention again for his announcement.
"So, I called you here today to say that I am going to Disband Nine's Own Goal and-" He didn't finish before people started panicking and questioning why he would disband a highly functional clan before I decide to help him.
"Calm down people!"
"Calm down people!"
I looked at my sister in surprise as we looked at each other, not having expected to talk in sync before getting back to what we were trying to do as everyone stopped trying to shout over each other at the surprise of our voices.
"You should let him finish."
"He was obviously going to say something else before you started shouting."
"So let him talk and explain himself."
My sister and I talked to them alternating between us 2. Touch-Me sent us a grateful nod at the control we had over the situation before continuing what he had to say.
"So, I guess I should have expected that, don't worry we won't be separated, I want to disband the Nine's Own Goal clan to create a guild." That got him a lot of approval as we were already at the size of a small guild and we felt it with the clan bonus not being good enough for our size. But he wasn't finish.
"I also want to step down from my leader position of the new guild, before anyone says anything, I know I was a good leader, but I do not feel I am up to the task to rule over a guild instead of a clan." He proclaimed, shocking everyone. With that everyone tried to discuss between themselves who will be the guild leader, it wasn't until an hour in that Ulbert propositioned Me and Shewill.
"What about Kaori and Shewill? They undeniably have experience leading, knowledge of the game better than us and are well liked by everyone."
"I guess that would be fine, can two people be the guild leader at the same time though?"
"Yes, it is possible. Not many people uses that feature though."
With that, most people agreed to us becoming the guild leaders, poor Shewill was overwhelmed and questioned if it was the right decision to Touch-Me.
"I honestly feel that's a splendid idea, as for the two guild leaders bit, you can't tell me that if either of you were the guild leaders, you wouldn't work together on that no? Then it's settled, Kaori and Shewill will create the guild as co-founder. Ah, I forgot to tell you but I already had a name prepared for this occasion for the Guild; Ainz Ooal Gown." Touch-Me decided. Honestly, I was a bit surprised about that, I knew Shewill would most likely become the guild leader, but I didn't expect to Co-Own that status with my sister.
Anyway, as me and Rin were creating the guild and the option, we actually got a special notification that surprised us.
"Huh?" Shewill eloquently said while looking at the notification.
"What is it? Is there something wrong with the Guild menu?" Questioned Peroroncino while trying to look over our shoulder.
"Not wrong per say but surprising, you will see it once you get invited in." I responded. As I sent out the invite to the member of the clan to the new guild.
"Again with the busted stuff? Remind me again why you never use you're most powerful ability?" Someone questioned.
"Because we don't want the devs to have any reason to remove our class, so those are limited to friendly match, also I am as surprised as everyone to see that" Shewill said reading the message that everyone had about the guild.
[Life and Death Pantheon]
This perk is only given to a guild that has both Life and Death as leader of said guild
+500 NPC Levels for guild base.
Admittedly, it wasn't really THAT busted, because Guild NPCs never were really that strong in Yggdrasil, but it will help in the New World.
Speaking of the New World I had a thought, game.
[Yes?]
Would you be able to erase my memory of the Overlord anime before going into the New World? I know that sounds dumb but I would prefer to experience everything first hand, both high and low points without knowing about it.
[...Huh, strange request but doable, though it will be more locking those memories than erasing them, less danger that way.]
I shook my head before giving a glance to my sister and, together, giving the order to move and go to the dungeon.
Once we got to the swamp, we devised a strategy that let our sneaky player kill every mob without being discovered, using Nishi's speed, Peroroncino archery and mine and my sister sneaky summon.
We surprisingly had little trouble finding the dungeon once everything was cleared as it was in a cavern. Once we were at the entrance, Shewill immediately saw an issue.
"The dungeon won't get hidden after we get into it isn't it?" She realized chewing a bit on her glove.
"We will have to get a few people staying behind us to guard our rear yes. Any volunteer? I think most crafter should stay behind but I won't force you." I responded to her question with a reasonable solution.
"Ain't no way I am staying behind!" Peroroncino exclaimed before getting hit by his sister… for the 4th time since we got to the swamp…
'I wonder if he is a masochist? That would explain a lot if that's the case.' I thought while looking at Buku scolding her brother, saying that I didn't meant him as he wasn't a crafter.
In the end, the crafter stayed behind along with Blue Planet, as he said that his druid ability will help them blend in the dungeon entrance a bit more.
"Everyone have their equipment in order?"
"If so, follow us to the start of the dungeon."
"Tell us if you see something out of the ordinary or need more time putting in your equipment together."
Me and my sister said to the guild before going into the dungeon, once we entered it, we encountered a lot of undead and lightning based enemy for some reason?
'I expected the undead, but Lightning Vulture, lightning elemental and all of that? That's strange.' I mused once I saw that while progressing through the first part of the dungeon.
"Has anyone seen the strange composition of enemies?" Nishi questioned, most likely coming to the same conclusion as me.
"Yeah, I saw that, lots of lightning mob for some reason… Undead are normally paired with either ice or poison mob. What do you guys think?" My imouto said and asked while looking at the data crystal dropped by one such lightning mob.
"Maybe this dungeon has multiple bosses and each type of enemies correspond with one of the boss?" Ulbert propositioned with his eye narrowed in thought.
"That would imply that there either is both an undead boss and a lightning one or we are gonna get more variant of mob as we go deeper…" Touch-Me said in response, taking point while killing the mob that was on our way to conquering this dungeon.
"Come on! I know the devs are sadist in disguise, but even they are not evil enough to put more than two bosses in the same dun-" Buku started to complain but got cut off as as the small pond next to her exploded to reveal a Water Elemental trying to grapple her to drown her.
Fortunately for her, I had summoned some basic Fire Elemental (They were actually modified to look more like Flame Atronach of Skyrim than shapeless flame… Would I try to tap that in the New World? Honestly, most likely not, I like to look at my summon so making some of them sexy is good for me but too much of that isn't and I don't really want to tap the stuff I technically bring into life. I might not care too much about incest but they are limit to it.) and they immediately swarmed the Water Elemental and quickly killed it once Buku joined the fray once she got her racing heart in control.
I pointedly looking at Buku while doing my best Really? Stare.
"The shitty devs always try to outdo themselves, got it." She responded sheepishly while a slimey tentacle rubbed the top of her head.
We continued like that, finding more type of elemental creature; Lightning, Fire, Water, Poison and Ice as we cleared the dungeon until we came across something.
"We should send the thieves ahead, we didn't yet encountered a trap and this corridor doesn't really look safe." Tabula, a brain eater player character, suggested once everyone saw the corridor he was talking about.
It was really thin for a dungeon corridor, barely allowing three people in at a time if they were rubbing shoulder. Perfect for a trap, like he said.
"I agree. Though we maybe ought to keep one of them with us in case a trap get activated here from the corridor." Rin said while rubbing her chin, then she suddenly looked like she had an idea.
"Or… we could use my [Trap Rat] summon to clear it before advancing!" I beamed at her forward thinking and was about to agree to that before Ulbert interrupted us.
"Excuse me, but isn't your Unique Class summon to only be used as a last resort?"
"Ah, don't worry about that, [Trap Rat] are not summon from [Death], I got those from the [Dusk] class."
Yeah, while my summon were reasonable in term of mana consumption, Rin's were really greedy for those, so much that in fact she could not summon most of the boss she had access to unless under the effect of Super-Tier buffing spell. Because of that, we decided early on in our clan days to use her undead from [Death] as a last resort as she would be taken out of the fight really quickly after that.
"That's good then, we should still send a thief with them, just in case." Touch-Me responded while leaning on the wall to the left of the corridor.
"I agree, Nishi, are you okay with proceeding alone with the [Trap Rat]?" I asked once it everything was settled.
"That's fine, it won't take me more than 5 minutes to clear this corridor of traps, I can already see a few of them from here." Nishi acquiesced while starting to go down the corridor with a few of the rats that Shewill summoned while we were discussing all of that.
We relaxed a bit while waiting for Nishi to come back, just talking a bit about our day to day life.
Once he got back, he looked a bit shaken, which worried me somewhat.
"I cleared the corridor, though you should come and see what is at the end." Nishi said and without further explanation, started going back where he came from.
We looked at each other before following him, keeping silent in case there was an ambush somewhere, before emerging into a big cavern with a door at the end that was obviously meant to be the boss door and a writing in the middle of the room on a giant boulder.
"Beware of the elements grave robber, as the five of them won't be kind, them, as well as their leader, the disease elemental, won't be kind to you. Turn back or be destroyed." I read off the writing, a bit unsettled as it sounded even more difficult than the Life and Death fight me and Rin fought to get our classes.
"SIX BOSSES?! Are they mad!?" Someone exclaimed in shock.
"It's even worse, it's almost all of the element except Earth and Air, so we will need to keep a constant rotation depending on how the fight proceed to be sure our attack do damage to them." Ulbert said grimly, clenching his staff in his hands.
I grimaced myself at the sound of that, sighed and was about the address to guild before my imouto beat me to it.
"I know it sounds hard, but we should give our best to do it! Imagine the reward for beating a dungeon like that first try!" Her eyes twinkled at the thought of what we could possibly get before she shook her head and address them more seriously.
"We should start doing some basic strategy before going into the boss fight." She said before we started hashing what we would do. Me and her will stay in the back with a few of the archer and long ranged mage to provide support, Touch-Me will lead the charge in the melee and will give his own order to his group, while Ulbert, despite being a mage, was better served in the melee with his powerful damaging spells.
"Are you all ready? Yes? Good, we start now" I said once everything was settled, I then went to open the gates to reveal the boss inside.
And CUT! Yeah I know I am evil to end on a cliffhanger but I could not really find a good point to end the chapter so cliffhanger it is!
Thanks for all the support I've got in the first day of the fic release! 24 Favs and 24 Follow currently in a day!
I am now going to respond to the few reviews I've gotten.
Dragonslayer l3: Thanks, though I definitely saw a few issue once I revisited the last chapter for a few reference today.
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Anon112-1 (Yeah I know that's a guest review, still gonna respond): The harem part is definitely not for everyone. As for slowing down the story, I am unsure if that will be really done as I set myself a max of chapters/words I have to have the story finished by then, I know a lot of story goes into the 300k words, and to be fair I plan to have around 200k and 30-40 chapters, but I honestly always felt that a lot of those story get into the trap of trying to elongate their story too much so it often result in story at 300k words that are still at the start of the story in term of timeline, I wish to avoid that, so a max it is. About the gamer system part, I actually completely agree about it most often breaking the story and I thought I explained my plan for it correctly in story but maybe not, for those that are curious, yes the MC as a gamer system, but it will be barely relevant to the plot except from niche things. Its basically a tool to explain a faster character growth and the reincarnation of my MC and if you looked at the Gaming Menu I put into the first chapter, you would realize that's it's basically just stuff Kaori would have had access to once she got to the New World anyway with the exception of Gacha and Relationship. As for the Gacha, I am not actually making it a random thing, and will only be used twice in my plans for something that you will see later. As for the class being broken, I actually put some explanation in this chapter, basically the classes weren't meant to be obtainable and the only reason Kaori and Rin got them was because they abused an unintended system mechanic to allow summon in a dungeon that could be only conquered with summon but blocked them at the same time. As for my MC being OP? That's basically just Overlord in a nutshell, don't worry though, I have some vague plan for an enemy match of Kaori and Rin in the New World, can't promise anything though.
That's all for now, I hope to see you next time!
