Bony Boy goes to JJK World

Hello there. Author here. It's been a while since I saw anyone talking about the writing on the reviews and as I was about to publish the chapter I saw someone commenting about it which reminded me...

It feels like it's been a long time without me getting much criticism. I'm kinda missing it, actually. So I'm gonna ask for another round.

Is it still confusing? Is it too shallow? I think I have serious problems with the setting or the environment. A.K.A the location where the scene is taking place, but maybe that's not a priority... Would you kindly tell me about it in the reviews if you find the writing to have an issue and what issue that is. I'm kinda plateauing at a bellow average skill level. I'm hurting bad here, help. XD

Anyways, enjoy the chapter.

-Lots of spoilers on JJK read at your own risk.-

Gojo went above and beyond in order to increase the number of teams for the jujutsu sorcerers. They were able to collect 7 fingers giving them 21 players in total.

Even after going from no participation to pretty much tied with the curses number-wise, Gojo was not completely happy with the end result. 'This is not good... we are all over the place with this setup.' Gojo thought as he remembered the negotiations that took place over the last few weeks.

While the curses were more or less on the same page and they all wanted to destroy the jujutsu sorcerers, it was not the same for the jujutsu sorcerers. And that fact was painfully obvious for Gojo when he saw the teams.

Only 4 fingers were given to the schools leaving the other 3 in the possession of the main families. That was not such a big problem as Gojo thought since he got a finger, but the Zennin family and the Kamo family didn't coordinate properly with the school and decided to make their own team. Which made him uneasy until all the teams had been revealed.

The Zennin family brought out Naobito, Naoya, and Ogi. The head of the family, his son, and his own brother respectively. Gojo knew that these guys didn't care about the world or anything else but the power they could get from this. 'One more enemy team for us to deal with inside the Domain. ' Gojo thought as he read the text message Yaga sent him.

Unlike the Zenin family, the Kamo family brought out a student. Since they didn't have many powerful jujutsu sorcerers they had no other option but to bring out some outside help. The fact that Kamo himself didn't like or trusted his family also didn't help as that lead him to pick out Gakuganji and Todo to be a part of his team.

That actually helped out Gojo a lot since pretty much everyone useful from the Kyoto branch was immediately in the game. 'That leaves Mei Mei and Utahime out... We don't need Utahime anyway. Ha ha ha ha' Gojo remembered saying that in the meeting and then laughing in her face. Utahime freaked out and attacked him by throwing a teacup. 'Classic Utahime...'

It was also in this meeting that he found out about Mechamaru's situation.

"We can't use him in this fight. " That was the consensus that they reached. Not only Mechamaru betrayed them, but he also became far weaker. The higher-ups decided to arrest him until this was over. After that, they would decide his fate.

At the end of the convoluted mess that was figuring out teams they finally came up with a distribution that most people found to be acceptable. Gojo, Yuta, and Yaga were chosen to be the leaders of their respective groups while Gakuganji would be the operational leader of Kamo's team, meaning that he would not have to right to choose the reward in the end.

With 5 teams decided and only 2 remaining the discussions were bound to be long and tiresome, but Mei Mei quickly put an end to that. She declared, "I'll be the leader of my team and I'll bring my brother with me. "

Everyone looked at her like she was crazy. Mei Mei had just claimed two spots and while everyone had no problem with her leading the charge, they didn't want to accept her brother in it.

"I'm doing this for free for a change. I'm taking him and that's that. " Mei Mei said. The discussions went on for a few hours before they finally accepted with a condition, the other member of the team had to be Nanami. She had quickly accepted.

The final team spot was begrudgingly given to Hakari, a third-year student who was suspended after he had broken a few regulations. After what Ainz had done to the school and to the jujutsu world, they turned to whoever could help them.

Gojo picked out Megumi and Nobara, as they were the closest to him. Leaving Yuta to pick Inumaki and Maki, who had become a completely different beasts from before. 'She's like a female Toji at this point. ' Gojo thought when he saw her practicing for the party.

A few minutes before the game started.

They all gathered in a parking lot before the "game" started prompting Gojo to make a small speech. He first started by fake coughing to get everyone's attention and then he jumped on top of a car.

"Everyone. The party is about to start... Are you excited?! " Gojo said as he lifted one leg and spun around a few times.

No one liked that.

"What is this idiot doing?! " Nobara asked as she immediately tried to cover her face. Megumi simply turned around and pretended nothing was happening while the others just stared at it with a blank expressions.

Gojo finally stopped spinning and started talking, "As you all know we are here for a reason... and that reason is Ainz Ooal Gown. " His voice became angry when he mentioned the name making everyone stop cringing for a second. "The strategy is simple, my team and Yuta's will cover most of the first layer as fast as we can while the others will just try to group up. After that, we make our way to the second layer where everyone but me, Yuta, Hakari, and Todo..." Gojo pointed to himself and subsequently pointed to the other people he mentioned.

"Will stay behind and beat up anyone trying to get to the third layer. " Gojo quickly glanced at Naobito's team before repeating, "Anyone who tries to move to the third layer, understood. "

Naobito rolled his eyes as he started talking, "Shouldn't we make several choking points on the other layers as well. My team could-"

"It's fine. You just stay on the first layer and annoy the curses. We don't need any help. " Yuta said interrupting Naobito who quickly became displeased. He turned to Yuta's team and saw his daughter among them, but before he could make a comment on that they all saw a pillar of light emerging from a street.

"Let's go. " Gojo said before everyone made their way to the light.

There they found Ainz and the other contestants waiting until the clock struck midnight. After everyone got in position both curses and jujutsu sorcerers started bickering against each other.

When midnight was just a few seconds away, Ainz put a stop to the conversation and opened his Domain.

[Domain Expansion:

The Great Tomb of Nazarick]

It was unlike any Domain activation they had ever seen or felt. For a split second, the whole of Japan was engulfed in cursed energy until it finally settled down on 9 distinct points, one of which was right in front of them.

A grass-filled plot of land now stood where Ainz was, making everyone a bit confused as to why they were not inside the Domain yet. In the jujutsu sorcerer side, Hakari was the first to notice and start running towards the staircase in the middle of the field.

The curse side was even slower to react, only moving after three teams from the enemy side had already taken a few steps.

Everyone started running to the plot of land and as they went down the stairs they started to disappear. One after the other, they were teleported to Ainz's Domain.


-Team Gojo-

The place Gojo and his team ended up was narrow and dark. The smell of rotting flesh was the first thing they noticed forcing both Megumi and Nobara. 'What kind of place is this? ' Megumi thought as he struggled to understand the source of the smell. The walls looked much cleaner than you would expect given the amount of decay the walls had suffered over time.

The stone walls looked very old and were cracked all over the place. And while they didn't know what to expect from the Domain, the peace and quiet that surrounded them made them both uneasy.

Gojo was also a bit disturbed by the lack of an immediate attack. He had pulled out his blindfold right before going there, but it seemed like that was not necessary. "Alright! Let's goooooo! " Gojo screamed making both of the students turn to him.

"What are-"

Nobara tried to complain, but Gojo immediately interrupted her by grabbing both Megumi and her and placing them both on top of his shoulders.

Gojo hopped forward gracefully and immediately started cleaning the Domain's layer. With only two steps he could make his way to the end of a corridor stopping only so that he could deactivate whatever traps he saw with his Six Eyes.

'Where is this guardian?! ' Gojo thought as he quickly dispatched the group of skeletons who should up after he turned into a dead end. Needless to say that the fodder undead was cleared in the blink of an eye as Gojo simply looked at them... menacingly. The cursed energy he released as he passed them also helped with that.

"Put us down, Gojo! " Nobara screamed as she tried to punch Gojo.

"Gojo! She's gone crazy ! " Megumi said while trying to not get hit by Nobara.

"Ha ha ha ha. Get comfortable kids. Gojo Express has only one stop and it's in the guardian's room. " Gojo said.

Gojo left a trail of bones in his path to find the entrance to the second layer and both his teammates, Nobara and Megumi, was left with no choice but to suffer through the ride.


-Cursed Womb Team -

All three of them were teleported inside a big room. It took a few seconds for them to check for enemies before they started making their way to a pair of doors on the other side.

"Hey Choso, are you sure we want to help out the curses that much? Shouldn't we go ahead instead of hinting down the jujutsu sorcerers? " Eso asked.

Choso shook his head and said, "You have a point, Eso. But I'm worried about the other curses meant to stop us. That curse, Ainz Ooal Gown, must have some serious power if he's risking his life like this. "

"And even if some other curse gets the wish, we'll benefit as well-" Kechizu stopped talking when he was attacked by the wall.

The door he was walking toward turned out to be a curse in disguise which immediately tried to eat Kechizu. Eso quickly released his cursed technique Wing King and pulled his brother out of the wall while Choso pushed out some of his blood and attacked.

[Piercing Blood]

The blood moved like a bullet piercing the mimic's body.

"Argggg! "

The creature fell down. Eso dropped his brother on the floor and went in for a punch which caved the mimic's face into its body immediately killing him.

Choso looked around the room searching for another opponent, before taking a deep breath. " There doesn't seem to be any more hidden enemies. " He then turned to Kechizu and said, "You have to be more careful. "

Kechizu walked to where the mimic was and started poking it. "Thanks, brothers. I didn't feel it at all, but I'll pay more attention. "

Eso pulled his one strain of hair to the side and then asked, "Me neither. Did you notice it, Choso?"

Choso shook his head before walking toward the real door to his left. He opened the door slightly and peeked at the corridor where he saw a group of skeletons ready to charge whoever came out from there. He slowly closed the door and turned back to his team.

"Eso, Kechizu. How many curses are outside of that door? "

Choso asked while pointing to the door.

"There's none there. " Kechizu asked without thinking. Unlike his brother, Eso took a few more seconds to respond. He walked up to the door, closed his eyes, and focused on the cursed energy. When he was satisfied he turned back and said, "I don't know. I can hear something coming from the outside, but I can't feel any cursed energy at all. "

"As I thought. " Choso said as he started biting his nails. "The curses from this Domain are hiding their cursed energy while outside combat, just like that one over there. " Choso pointed to the mimic.

Kechizu tilted his head. "What does that mean? "

Eso shook his head as he looked at his brother. He then walked to the door and stopped right in front of it.

[Wing King]

A lot of blood gushed out of Eso's back. The blood pushed against the wooden door which was pushed into the corridor crushing a few skeletons. Eso exited the room and started clearing the curses.

"It means that we can't use cursed energy to sense the guardian of any layer or any other curses from this Domain... Any cursed energy that we do feel probably belongs to another player. Unless we are in combat, of course. " Choso said before walking outside.


[Team Jogo]

The undead Troll dropped to the floor. Its body underwent sublimation thanks to Jogo's cursed technique leaving him and his team alone in a huge room full of bones scattered around them.

The place was a dumping room for anyone who died while trying to invade the Domain. With only one exit point and many ordinary paths or traps leading down there, it was one of the most active areas for the undead guards who spawned every time someone fell into the pit.

"We're back here?! Grasshopper, you idiot! I knew we shouldn't have taken a right back there. " Jogo complained.

The game started only a few moments ago, but they had already circled back to the same room and while Jogo was smart enough to predict that possibility there was no way they could have predicted that a slide in a random hallway would bring them back to the same room they had fallen into a few moments before.

"Who was it that triggered the trap in the first place? Who? " Grasshopper said while having multiple arms pointing at Jogo.

"Grmasdfm grajdsf. " Dagon tried to speak, but his team was too focused on arguing to understand. The curse quickly walked to them before touching Jogo.

"The floor opened up right beneath our feet. How could I-" Jogo stopped talking and turned to Dagon. "What is it Dagon? Did you trigger a trap too? "

"Grmasdfm grajdsf. " Dagon spoke once more, but this time both Jogo and Grasshopper immediately reacted by turning their heads to the one exit.

"Are you sure it's this way?! " A distant voice spoke.

Jogo and his team heard a few steps approaching the room which prompter Grasshopper to jump at the wall, stick himself to the ceiling above the exit, and wait for the guests.

Jogo stood in the middle of the room while he prepared a bunch of his shikigami. 'We have to give them a proper welcome. ' Jogo thought as he laughed to himself.

As soon as he saw someone appear, Jogo immediately threw all of his shikigami toward the enemy creating a huge explosion, but when the dust settled down there was no one there.

"I missed?! " Jogo said in a frustrated tone. "We know you're there, come out! "

After a few moments of silence, the people from outside walked in. Naobito was the first one to walk in, followed by his son and then his brother.

"Damn it. I lost the bet. " Naobito said as he looked at Jogo. "This is one of the curses from the outside. It's not the guardian. "

Naobito's brother, Ogi, was the final one to enter. He looked at Jogo and then at Dagon. "So it seems. I recognize these two. Maybe we can only detect the other players? "

"If that's the case where is the third-"

Naoya was interrupted by Grasshopper attacks. The curse jumped down on the person it deemed the weakest and started biting his neck, but before it could do much damage Ogi pulled out his blade.

With a clean and fast cut, he sliced through most of the curse's arms. "Ahhhh. " Grasshopper was able to dodge the follow-up attack thanks to using Naoya as a shield, but that didn't stop Naobito's punches which pushed the curse away.

"I see you're very eager to play this stupid game, but I have a better alternative. " Naobito said as he turned to Jogo. "Why don't we just forget we saw each other here and walk away? Knowing that Gojo must be trying to get to Ainz as soon as possible. None of us has time to spare."

Jogo placed his hand on his chin before letting out a puff of smoke. "You talk as if you're not on Gojo's team. " Jogo said.

The three jujutsu sorcerers started laughing. "We don't see eye to eye. Let's put it like that. " Naobito said while chuckling.

"I see. Do you happen to know the strategy Gojo is employing? " Jogo asked.

That question made Naobito's mood turn sour immediately. He stopped laughing and frowned his brow. "I'm not saying anything to a thing like you. I'm just trying to not waste my time. Let's go. " Naobito said as he raised his hand making both Ogi and Naoya walk back to where they came from.

"Of course. Of course. " Jogo said before he used his cursed technique to create a small volcano behind the jujutsu team.

A jetstream of lava was released into the room melting the bones that were on the floor. "No deal then? " Naobito asked. He and his team were hanging from the ceiling. The lava kept pouring inside the room creating a small pool.

"You are right when you said that we don't have time to waste, but the 6th page could be the edge I need. If you could die fast I would be very thankful. " Jogo said as he showed a sadistic smile.


[Team Hakari]

"This place feels disgusting, Hakari. Let's just clear the game and go back fast, okay? " Kirara said as she grabbed Hakari's arm.

They were walking alongside each other leaving Inumaki, the other member of his team clearing the curses in their path.

"Yes. I'm not into the whole spooky underground shit anyway. Let's take a right here. " Hakari said while he scratched his neck.

After a few more minutes of walking and they somehow didn't find a dead end or ran into a trap. Unknown to them, they were the closest to the guardian and thanks to Hakari's guesses they were heading straight to it. Their initial teleportation spot was also the best.

"Tuna Tuna. " Inumaki said while pointing to a huge door.

The door was different from everything they had seen up to that point. It was made out of blueish stone material with a beautiful silhouette of a woman wearing a dress carved on it.

Hakari smiled and quickly ran to the door. "I don't understand what you just said, but Tuna Tuna indeed Inumaki. I told you I could find it. " Hakari got the door and touched it. He then started pushing it open when he heard a small clicking noise.

'Trap?! ' Hakari immediately jumped back.

"Kelp. " Inumaki said. He also heard the noise and was ready to attack anything coming from the door.

"Was it just a trigger? " Kirara said as she placed a mark on the door.

"Hmmm... It could be because we were the first to open it. Set up your cursed technique out here while I and Inumaki will take care of the guardian." Hakari said as he opened the door and walked in.

"Salmon. " Inumaki said before entering the room.

It was a completely different room from anywhere they had been before. A purple carpet covered the ground in a cross pattern diving the room into four different sections.

The floor was made of a very smooth stone that emitted a dark blue light. There was another door at the end but unlike the one from before it had nothing carved into it.

As soon as Hakari stepped inside the room all the chandeliers and candles lit up. He saw a huge fireplace which also lit up illuminating the room with a dark blue tone.

Hakari looked at the pillars at the edges of the room, the intricate and pointy details grabbed his attention. 'Are those actual spikes? What kind of gothic heaven is this place? '

He then saw a red void appear in the middle of the room. After a few moments, Inumaki caught up to Hakari and they both saw someone come out of the void.

It was a pale woman with silver hair and red eyes. She wore a huge dark dress and was carrying an umbrella.

"Oya... you're not the person I was expecting. I suppose I should congratulate you on getting here so fast." They heard the woman say as she closed her umbrella.

Hakari whistled as he extended his arms to form a frame with his fingers. He then moved around to place the woman inside the frame. "For a cursed spirit, I must say... you're hot. "

The woman tilted her head before going back to her perfect posture while covering a smile. "You also have great taste. I must reward you somehow... "

"A name would be nice. I'm Hakari. " Hakari said as he placed both of his hands in his pockets. "This is Inumaki. " He nodded to his teammate.

"I am Shallltear Bloodfallen. " The woman said while giving a polite bow.

"You must be boss of the first layer. " Hakari said while cracking his neck.

"Salmon. " Inumaki said as revealed his mouth.

"Indeed. " Shalltear said as she threw her umbrella away. "And to get to my lord you have to get past me first. "

Hakari gave a huge smile before laughing loudly. "I must have gamer brain or something. "

"Gamer brain? " Shalltear asked. She saw Hakari's cursed energy spiked and the jujutsu sorcerer prepared his fighting stance.

"I played a dungeon crawler once you know, but I never had much patience for gaming in general so it was pretty trash. I dropped it very quickly." Hakari said as he took a step forward. " I had no idea a boss fight was this exciting, but now I'm hooked on this shit. Guess I'll be one of those otaku losers before leaving this Domain. "

Shalltear placed her finger on her lips before saying, "I have no idea what you're talking about, but I think you want to fight now. Is that it? "

"Yes! " Haraki screamed. He quickly jumped toward Shalltear while Inumaki started circling around her.

"Finally something I can understand. " Shalltear said as she opened her mouth revealing her fangs.


Geto's Teams.

Team Cursed Womb : Eso, Kechizu, Choso.

Team Jogo : Jogo, Dagon, Grashopper

Team Lance : Lance, Veth, Cockrouach.

Team Uro : Uro, Ishigori, Dhruv Lakdawala.

Team Uraume : Ogami's Grandson, Ogami, Iori Hazenoki.

Team Hana : Hagane Daizo, Reggie Star, Hana Kurusu,

Team Kashimo : Hajime Kashimo, Toshihisa Negi, Manami Suda

Team Geto : Geto, ?, ?

Jujutsu Sorcerers Team.

Team Gojo : Gojo, Nobara, Megumi

Team Zennin : Naobito, Naoya, Ogi.

Team Kamo: Kamo, Gakuganji, Todo

Team Yuta : Yuta, Maki, Shoku Ieri

Team Yaga : Yaga, Utahime, Takuma Ino

Team Mei Mei : Mei Mei, Ui UI, Nanami.

Team Hakari : Hakari, Kiara Hoshi, Inumaki