Bony Boy goes to JJK World

Hey there, Author here. I almost failed to keep the schedule and to stop that from happening, I rushed this chapter. Work was a big reason, in fact, the most important reason, but something else also made me hesitate and think.

One review pointed out that my writing style changed for the worst. I decided to think deeply about it and fell into a rabbit hole. It took me a good while to understand what that guy meant, but then it finally hit me. He was talking about the second chapter, which was in the previous style of writing a long time ago... Great. There is a silver lining though, the reviewer said he would bet his entire savings on the fact that I would not change the writing style or take his advice, which I did after someone else pointed out that problem...months ago ... XD. Why was he so angry with me? Anyways, this is just me venting some frustration because I spent more than I am willing to admit thinking about the review.

Another more useful review also caught my eye, he told me to read the chapters out loud to check for inconsistency and that's actually good advice. Thanks. Unfortunately, I don't know if that will help me much considering that English is not my first language. The intuitive understanding of the language flow is not something I have ingrained in me. So please, if you could give a concrete example by writing some of the lines you find to be wrong and explaining it to me, I would be very thankful. You could also just write some examples yourself, that would be even more helpful. Thanks.

Hope you'll enjoy the rushed chapter. Bye.

-Lots of spoilers on JJK read at your own risk.-


Sukuna's pov

"Coward! " Sukuna screamed at the top of his lungs as Demiurge's shadow disappeared in the distance. Guren quickly took this opportunity to extend his body trapping Sukuna inside of it.

"My love! " Yorozu screamed as she saw what happened to Sukuna. Geto immediately placed himself in front of her.

"We have our own problems to deal with. " Geto said. Yorozu, however, didn't listen, she slammed her body against Geto, pushing him to the side, and then, she continued running forward.

[Maximazi Magic: Vemillion Nova]

Wrath casted the strongest fire spell he knew at Yorozu. The pillar of fire emerged from the ground swallowing not only Yorozu but the surrounding area.

'This powerful even though the domain has been destroyed? ' Geto thought as he watched in awe. Wrath's power, which at its peak, was close to a full-fledged guardian, thanks to Demiurge's domain, was now just a bit stronger than normal.

"Sukuna! " Yorozu screamed as she jumped away from the flames.

'Still alive? That armor is very tough. ' Wrath thought as he began to charge Yorozu.

[Slice]

Sukuna unleashed his cursed technique cutting his way out of Guren's body. The slime's remains were thrown away from Sukuna like jelly flying in the air. "Focus on your own opponent, Yorozu. " Sukuna said once he was freed from Guren.

"Yes! " Yorozu said while blushing. She felt a bit stupid for thinking that her love would be in trouble, but she couldn't help it so now she found herself in an embarrassing situation.

Sukuna waited in the air as he fell. His shikigami began flying to him. He then caught his master before flying after the guardian. "Demiurge! Where are you?! " Sukuna screamed. The pursuit started, but since he had lost sight of the target, Sukuna had no idea how far he could be or what type of traps would be waiting for him.

Not that it matters for him, of course. Sukuna was determined to follow in the direction he thought Demiurge was heading for, the door leading to the 8th layer. 'There's no way that this guardian will stay near the door like an idiot. Still, if this layer is anything similar to the previous one, he must have most of his defense force gathering near that place, which would mean that his hiding place must be somewhere nearby.' Sukuna thought as he continued flying toward the stone temple in the distance, but before he could gain any significant amount of distance, his shikigami screamed in pain.

"What?!" Sukuna thought as he looked at his feet. A bright orange jelly thing was growing out of his shikigami's back and grabbing his feet. "It's not dead?! " Sukuna said in frustration while he jumped away from his crow.

The small puddles of jelly quickly came together to form Guren's body. "Slimes are a lot tougher than you'd think, huh? " Guren said to Sukuna as it began stretching its body, creating a net to catch Sukuna.

"Know your place, trash. " Sukuna said as he switched targets from Demiurge to the slime.

'How did it appear near me like that? Was it hiding in my clothes or perhaps it found its way into crow. No matter, even If I'm able to ditch it here, this curse will only go after Geto and Yorozu. Damn it, Ainz is really making me think like a fucking weakling. ' Sukuna thought as he cursed his own inability to crush Guren which only began a factor after Demiurge proved to be too much for him.

Of course, given enough time and testing, Sukuna was confident that no one could beat him, but now, not only Ainz proved himself to be able to force the king of curses to play his game, but not only there were guardians, creatures that were not even real to began with, that could achieve any sort of victory against him, but now, Sukuna found himself having to face a weaker curse just so that he can have backup in the 8th layer.

"Weakling! " Sukuna said as he placed both of his hands together. "That's what you are, a fucking weakling. "

[Domain Expansion: Malevolent Shrine]


Megumi's pov

Even though Megumi and Hana were teleported just a few minutes after Sukuna and his team, because the spawn was once again random, they found themselves on the completely opposite side of the layer. They were in a valley-looking area where the ground was scorched red by what looked like a river of lava.

Megumi was quick to summon Mahoraga, as he found himself surrounded by curses. Unlike the ones from the previous layer, however, they wore armor and had weapons. All of which, were cursed tools. War devils, of course, Megumi didn't know what they were, but the fact that he was facing curses that relied on something besides their own teeth and claws, was enough for him to understand how strong this layer was.

Angel also choose to attack as soon as she appeared in the layer, but once she felt the power of Sukuna's cursed energy reverberating throughout the layer, she changed her mind. "If I use my cursed technique here, Sukuna will know about me. I would rather catch him off guard. " Angel explained to Megumi as she took a defensive position near Megumi.

Mahoraga did quick work of the curses. The shikigami's blade, which was the only weapon in existence created with positive cursed energy, could one-shot pretty much any cursed spirit, as long as they don't have enough cursed energy to overcome its effect.

"We have to find the guardian and the room. " Angel said as it took control of Hana's body. "It's best if you don't come out anymore Hana, a single second could be the difference between life or death. " Angel said.

Megumi looked over at Hana before saying, "Angel is right. We need to be 100% focused if we're going to succeed." His skin began to burn thanks to the passive effect of the layer, which lead to excruciating pain, but before it spread inwards, Angel used reversed cursed energy to not only heal him but also create a temporary barrier around him.

"You should take your own advice. Keep your cursed energy barrier at maximum output at all times." Angel said before jumping toward the hill nearby. She then looked back at Mahoraga.

Megumi stood there for a few moments trying to get his barrier up and running again. He became distracted for a few moments and the burning sensation around his body was the price. Of course, he was now healed, but that didn't mean he was mentally ready to go back to fighting. The pain, even though was short-lived, was agonizing.

"Sukunas probably not having any trouble against this heat. I doubt anyone else from his team is having one either. So get your head back in the game. " Angel said as she jumped as high as she could.

Angel quickly began analyzing the area around her. The temple, that was surprisingly close to her, was the most suspicious place. 'Would the spawn be this close though? ' Angel thought while she began falling to the ground.

Normally, scouting from a higher area was easy for Angel, but since she didn't want to warn Sukuna of her presence, she decided against using her wings. In the end, it took multiple jumps to figure out her bearings and to decide on a direction.

"The temple. It was kind of obvious from the beginning. " Megumi said as he scratched the back of his head. He had barely recovered from the pain, but that didn't matter to Angel. Since Mahoraga was a very useful shikigami, she didn't mind having Megumi near her, but that introduced another problem.

"It could just be a trap. " Angel said as she pointed in the opposite direction of where the temple was. "Sukuna is fighting there, his team too. I also feel another very powerful cursed energy there. "

"The guardian?! " Megumi asked as they climbed out of the valley and began walking toward the temple.

"Most likely. Still, the battle doesn't seem to be over yet, which means that Sukuna is having trouble exorcising it. So stay close to me. " Angel said. She then continued walking forward with Mahoraga in the far back and Megumi in the middle.

'Megumi's life and my mission are entertained since Hana doesn't want anything bad to happen to him. ' Angel thought as she glanced at the jujutsu sorcerer. 'That's right. Megumi is special. ' Hana said to Angel inside their own mind.

'I understand. ' Angel replied to Hana.

"Hey, what the hell is that? " Megumi asked as he pointed at a cursed spirit. It had two gigantic bat wings and wore a red suit. The cursed spirit glanced at them before increasing its speed.

Even though Angel couldn't feel any cursed energy from the spirit, which Ainz's domain hid as long as the curses were out of combat. "Suspicious. " Angel said.