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The soft crunching of dead branches and leaves rang through the silent howling of the cold winds around them, the group of Ziden, Mash, Altera, Illya and her Servant bellowed through the night, along with of course, music formed through a source only Ziden and the others are aware of.

Forever Forest ( Paper Mario)

" Seriously, what is that music, is it some kind of Magecraft? Making this feel like one big ole Video game." Illya asked while looking up at Ziden while Hercules stomped behind her, his eyes focused dead ahead.

" Best way to explain it without confusion, you get used to it honestly." Ziden said while his hands rested in his pockets as they made their way through the haunting woods.

Trees that lacked the very concept of life in them, dead and cold, might be an aesthetic choice to make this castle seem spookier or these woods were just cursed. Not that he seemed to truly care.

" Senpai, we're gonna be going up against human opponents, what should I-"

" First, stop calling me Senpai, i told ya that multiple times, and 2. At your own discretion kid, if you don't wanna kill em, incapacitate them with strong strikes. I am not gonna be holding back during this. No reason to keep an Ashura Kai alive after all they've done." Ziden said while cracking his knuckles while Mash was walking alongside him.

" Oh, Sakuya said that I could call you that because you secretly love being called Senpai, Sensei and teacher. So I am gonna keep referring to you as Senpai," Mash smiled up at him and Ziden only grumbled as they kept the walk going.

Illya was very silent about this, worried about her two maids as the towering castle was before them, Ziden's eyes focused on the building of stone as he stepped forward

As soon as his foot touches the dirt of the land, he witnessed a large gathering of Ashura kai coming out of the castle, armed with various weapons, down to chains, bats and even swords and guns, seems they came to play at this castle.

But the sense of dread only sky rocked from the lightning raining down onto the ground before them, the area flashing with bright light as the towering Belial appeared from a spire of flames.

" Bout time you got here, Slayer of Oscura. Saved me the trouble of hunting you down.' The demon had a sneer on his face and that trident was dancing with heavy flames coating its framework.

" Indeed, and here I thought you would have done your usual and iced the Einzbern Master for getting in your way." From the balcony of the castle, Ziden could see Isurs slow clapping into the scene, soon looking down at the group that came. " I expected her head to be delivered to me as a warning, or for you to even go out and rip out her heart to send a message to me." Illya, almost on instinct, felt her hand clutch onto her chest, without knowing why.

" I'm not a man to kill someone who is forced to fight me in a cowardly hostage situation, so I decided, why not just sate my blade's bloodlust by just killing a bunch of Ashura Kai members and a Tyrant Demon?" Ziden was cracking his knuckles while Belial let out a hearty laugh.

" Its cute that you think you're big shit, human. I am one of Lucifer's highest generals, I can tear you up and spit you out like you're goddamn Garbage.'

Ziden raised a brow at this, all while looking incredulous about that. " Seriously? I was beating your ass at the school, oh no wait, you were holding back because I wasn't worth your time so you're gonna bullshit some reasoning as to why I can't kick your lobster looking ass right now."

" I took you as a non threat because of that silly costume you were wearing. But now, I know better. See, I am gonna roast you alive, let you cling to life pitifully. Kill that kid, slaughter the eggplant girl and your tanned friend. Then, I am gonna drag your broken body to where you live and let you watch as I tear your friends apart, piece by piece. And then, I am taking Alice back." Belial's threat was accompanied the air growing hotter as Ziden chuckled.

" Adorable you think you have a chance of doing that. Its always big talk with you Tyrant types, but in the end, you always get your ass killed and slapped back to the hole ya crawled in out of. See, the only one here being turned into pieces is you, you're not the only one who got the Demon Summoning App!" Belial and Isurus flinched when they heard that, seeing the smartphone screen on his jacket sleeve light up with a familiar glow. " Lets rock this show! Come, Cerberus!"

A circle of fire erupted from the ground before Belial and he could feel it, the familiar twinge of the Expanse that emanates from demons, Illya and the others watched as the demon appeared from the app, while Heracles, by nature of what he was, remembered who was there before them. A radiant demon of white, a beast whose white fur flowed in the chilling winds, his glowing yellow eyes, that large, green, reptile like tail and claws that could tear flesh and bone apart with ease.

" GRAH! IT BEEN TOO LONG SINCE I COULD BATTLE. UPSETTING. BIRD MAN, WHY HAVE YOU NOT SUMMONED ME IN ABOUT 1 MONTH!?" Boombastic voice he had, but Illya, Mash, hell even Altera was surprised that the creature had the ability to talk.

" Yeah, my bad, didn't need the App for a while, had good allies, but I decided, if my foes are gonna be using this app, i should get my demon allies back in the fray. Atleast you had a nice vacation Island to relax and train on." Ziden shrugged while walking forward as Isurus clicked his teeth, didn't expect him to have the app too. " But its fine, to make it up to you, I got you the perfect chew toy. Take care of him for me while I storm the castle and free some hostages." And like lightning, Ziden leapt over Belial and the horde of Ashura Kai outside. ' Don't die guys! Let Cerberus take care Belial! Support him if he needs it!"

" Heh, fine then, Icrim, you wanna see how outgunned you are, make your way to the Garden in this place, I'll put you in your place there."Isurus scoffed before turning around and heading back into the castle, leaving Ziden to smirk with a place in mind and where to go.

And off Ziden ran into the castle, while Cerberus was letting his claws shine under the full moon. " FINE BY ME, DO NOT GET IN MY WAY AND WE WILL BE FINE, TIME TO BECOME CHEW TOY, BIG SAUSAGE MAN!"

" I am not a sausage, you buffoonish beast!" Belial spun that trident of his before charging at the demon, a grand battle was about to take place.


Back at Ziden's house...

Keine's eyes were looking outside of the window to the rather large house they were renting for this Fuyuki trip, a massive yard that battles could happen without bothering other neighbors and because of that, made it easy for the Ashura Kai to be handled and for them to surround the home with their weapons. Meiling standing out by the side entrance, leading to the Koi pond and wooden bridge that leads out there.

" Jackass was right, seems they really did come here to take care of us when he left, honestly." Reimu softly tapped her gohei on her should while she was looking at them in the front of the house, armed with various weapons and ready for battle.

Shirou held onto his wooden sword he used to train with, nervous about this, fighting someone was nerve wracking but this was a bit more than just a simple Holy Grail war encounter, an entire Yakuza sect was out to get them and they had to fight for their lives. Their allies were far from human and even the humans could fight off foes like this like crazy. But he was a human, with barely functioning Magic Circuits and even then, the most he could do was strengthen things.

So it surprised him when Keine took the wooden sword from him and handed him a beautiful Katana with a black blade. " A wooden sword will get you only so far., This is a sword the Human Village has been passing down for a while now. I am giving it to you for this battle. This is a do or die battle."

" The idea of taking another life might be frightening to you." And Shirou looked over at Meta Knight, whose yellow eyes focused on the male while he was wrapped up in his cape. " But in battle, you must be ready for all things, if your claims of being a hero is true, then you must make the choice, swing and kill, don't swing and be killed, or strike non fatally to keep your hands clean. You must make your choice soon."

" Poyo!" Kirby was already in Sword form, ready to run out and fight the humans, all while King Dedede remained on the floor, looking at tv.

" As a King, I shouldn't be dealing with this nonsense, so imma hold down the fort in here and come outside when you guys are barely done!" And Dedede chose the lazy option.

" I swear its still weird that a giant Penguin with a hammer is here." Rin shook her head before looking over at Shirou. " Meta Knight is right, its time to put up or shut up. If you have Morals against Killing, toss em outside right now because we are about to have one long night. We're staying inside while our Servants go out in the front, Saber is out front and Archer is in one of the Big trees, ready to snipe away." Rin explained while Sanae was a bit nervous.

" Their demons might be the hard part to deal with. We don't really have a counter for them here, with no one being a elemental slinging mage, but we can overcome this." Sanae nods at this before looking at Reimu's hand going to the door and opening it, with Her, Meta Knight and Kirby up front. And the Side entrance, was Meiling and Artoria heading out. The back didn't need to be guarded since Alice herself was going to be taking care of it herself.

Which led the Ashrua Kai in the back yard to be cocky. " Heh, just a lil girl by herself, come here and I will make sure you are nice and taken care of. A heavy set Ashura kai that looked like a creepy blob of man. What was Alice's response to seeing him?

" Mamudoon." The words sent chills down the man's spine and five of the men who were too close, black and purple mist floating and touching along the flesh of the men, they instantly knew what would come next.

" ARGHHHH!" The violent scream that left their lips was echoed by the sound of their very flesh and body rotting, from that pale white skin, to it being violently dotted with red veins and their flesh rotting away, down to the very soul, fingers and bone falling apart into the ground, eyes shriveling up into the skull and leaving a thin white line coming from their skull and clothes falling to the ground, covered in the ash.

" Ah shit! That must be goddamn Alice! Incapacitate her to the best of your abilities boys!" And the Ashura Kais made sure to approach her, as a great battle on 4 different fronts was about to start. And the heroes were about to have a blood bath on their hands.


Back at Einzbern Castle...

Ziden was walking into the nicely decorated hall, witnessing Ashura kai members running to him, armed to the teeth with various weapons, with several demons soon spawning with them. 2 Nekomatas, and 5 Pretas, to round out 16 enemies in this hall for him to face. "Alright, time to get to work, beat ass and kill my way to that Garden."

TUSK (Yakuza 0)

One of the Nekomatas wasted zero moments and charged at Ziden, swiping at him with her claws, which led to Ziden sidestepping the swings, those claws extending out to be shortswords in length, and soon caught one of her arms under his and violently jerked to the side, causing that arm to become a right angle, with the heavy sound of bone snapping like a twig. " MREOOOOW!?"A cry of pure pain, followed by the loud snapping of a neck when struck by an Elbow, causing that head to spin almost 720 degrees.

" Oh shit." One of the Ashura Kai saw that happen and saw the other Nekomata leaping in to help her friend, both hands coming down with those claws extended, only for Ziden to catch her by the neck and legs, lifting her onto his shoulders and soon leaping up and then coming down like a meteor, smashing into the floor and using the force of that to quite literally snap the Nekomata in half, painting to hallway in blood as he tossed the two halves away.

A leaping front flip caused his leg to smash right down into the skull of a Preta, causing its face to skid along the floor, wearing down flesh and bone from the heat and force, all while landing on his left legs, spinning and smashing his leg into the face of a Nearby Ashura Kai, causing his nose compress and be smashed in and several teeth leaving his gums and hitting the floor.

" Take him down quick! This goddamn dude is a monster!" The bat wielding Yakuza, swung it right down onto the skull of Ziden, promptly moving his head back to dodge the impact, continually side stepping to avoid those wild swings, Ziden feeling the air from each of those swings, knowing a single one would knock down an average man. Catching it in his bare hand, Ziden lets fire gather to his free hand before slamming it right into the chest of the Yakuza. " GEH!?"

" Crimson Eagle!" Fire exploded from around his fist like a massive glowing ring, before fire tore clean through his body and out of his back like a flamethrower, the Pretas watching as the flames raced towards them and literally consumed them in the hell fire, screaming as the only surviving Yakuza soon scrambled to run away from the battle, as Ziden tossed the dead Yakuza off of his fist, cleaning it before running down into a sprint, the long droning hallways of this castle meant he had a ways to go before he hits the garden. Reaching a corner and curving around it, he soon found himself staring down two large Oni demon and a Just as large Yakuza man with a battle axe.

" Heh, there's the rat, lets ice em boys!" A click of his teeth and Ziden made sure to charge at the enemies before him. Through the window and outside, the battle was raging on, Cerberus was dancing and dodging around the swings of Belial's weapons and flames. One could almost be amazed at how such a beast was able to move so swiftly.

Altera and Heracles, were fatally taking out any Ashura Kai that attacked that, her whip like blade tearing mooks in pure and bloody chunks, while Herc's weapon barely even left that in its wake, all one could see was the pure red mist left behind by his weapon.

" You accursed Beast! Triagion!" Those spinning flames of his appeared once more, as Mash saw it coming, Illya herself winced with her Magecraft continued their duties, wireframe autonomous birds that are defensively and offensively strong, in protecting her but she knows against a Demon's magic, even they would fold.

" THAT CUTE, ME CAN DO THAT TOO! TRISAGION!" A slam of his claw into the ground and soon watching the fire rotate before his mouth, Mash had to leap back to avoid the clash of fiery beams clashing with each other, with Cerberus' side outright plowing through the flames and blasting clean through Belial's face, singing a part of it clean off, leaving muscle and bone exposed.

" WHAT? WHAT IS THIS?! A MERE BEAST IS RIVALING A TYRANT LIKE ME?!" Belial's rage was fuming as he stumbled back from the impact, seeing fiery explosions coming from inside of the castle from Ziden's attacks.

Inside, Ziden was moving at lightning speeds, anyone who got in his way were brutally impacted, kicked into the air, solid multiple hits to the chest and smashed clean through the floor, with him teleporting and dashing to the next foe, before a powerful drop kick sent a body clean through a door, causing it to fly clean off the hinges and into a large open room, with a large staircase ahead of them, the body of the Yakuza bloodily skidding along the floor before being stopped by Yukimura.

" Heh, had a feeling you'd be here, now this is great. I might have left the church but." And Ziden watched the man shift down into a fighter's stance, two large Nightfire Daggers, a customized version of the small blades Yakuza use to slice off fingers in case of broken honor or failure. He could see Kanji for the word Holy etched into them. " Doesn't mean I am gonna let our Number 1 Enemy just run around free. Don't worry, one of the best Regenerating Executioners is gonna take you out quick and fast!"

On the wall above them, a quadruped machine was watching them and through it, one could see Gilgamesh and a Priest looking at the scene as the duo charged at each other.

" hmph, so the Mongrel is foolish enough to storm into the Den of Lions. Even time has not dulled his uncanny ability to leap before thinking." Gilgamesh was looking at the wine that was in his glass as he looks at the odd device in the Priest's hand. ' though, Kotomine, what is that odd device? I do not even recall this world having advanced enough for such an odd device."

Kirei Kotomine, the man in charge of this Holy Grail War and a fighter in the last war, his answer was as honest as they come. " Angelic Technology, crafted by the Stewards of God himself in order to aid the church in our efforts of cleaning human filth and dealing with Heretics. This, is a tool known as the Eye of Enoch, to humans, a highly advanced Camera and drone that allows us to record and live stream incidents occurring. But it also allows us to see into the mind and souls of those we are viewing."

Gilgamesh raised his brow at this, God's Vassals were never ones he had much encounters with but did they always have such technology on their side. " Hmph, so even angles have such tricks up their sleeves. But why give you these trinkets for this War? that mongrel surely cannot be worth the hassle."

A small smirk appeared on his face. " Of course, from what I have been told, he has been a thorn in the side of our Lord and his vassals ever since America tried to force their hands in these lands 10 years ago. Before our Grail War could even start." Gilgamesh raised a brow at this. America, that was that country to the far West that is a land of Greed and sin. But also freedom.

" Oh? so they tried to conquer this land?" A swig of his drink as Gilgamesh watched Yukimura land a kick on Ziden's side, only for it to be caught, smashed with an elbow to the point it became an Acute angle and soon suffered a brutal palm strike to his face to send him sliding along the ground, face torn off from the sheer force of the slide. Watching the blood pool from his facer as he stares down Ziden.

" Indeed they did, under the orders of Marshall Thorman, to purify this land of Demons and filth, they fired an endless amount of ICBMs to nuke the land clean and rule the survivors with an iron fist. Thorman was the God, Thor in disguise and he shed it before 2 young hunters, unfortunately for him." And Kotomine smirked at this. " Icrim sensed something awry and went into action destroying every nuke and then brutally slaying Thor in combat in the Outskirts of New York. Japan's folks heard about this and cheered the man as a hero of this place. Because of this however., he has made himself an enemy of the church because of this. Thor acted on God's orders and to deny that, is to deny God himself."

"Ho...so the fledgling bird did something that big, to piss off the Divine creator so that you wasted no time placing a bounty on his head for the other Masters to take him out." Gilgamesh took another swig of wine before a smirk overcame his face. " Then I shall test him to see if he is worthy of the name hero. Kotomine, go and deliver a message to him for me. I think I shall have some fun tomorrow. Though I am curious, that gang member who used to be of your flock, do you think he has a chance at Victory?" His brow was raised at the sight as a soft chuckle left Kotomine's lips.

" I know of him, Yukimura, he was wiped from the Church's order, good skill but, not what it takes to take on our biggest enemy."

The scene changed from the duo to focus on the battle between Ziden and Yukimura, well, if it could be described as one, a kick to Ziden's side, led to his leg being grabbed and his elbow being slammed through that leg, snapping it clean in half and causing the male to scream out in pain before yet another brutal palm to his chest, cracking his chest once more to take him off of the ground.

A stomp of his feet and Ziden soon spins the airborne Yukimura by the back of his head. " Hey, what are you doing!?" The spin soon turned the duo into a black drill that made sure to tear through countless layers of rock like an actual drill. Flesh, bone and muscle left the Yakuza lieutenant's body as his face became ground down to the very bone.

Isurus soon found himself gazing at the ground cracking and the sight of Ziden soaring out of it as a massive drive, soon spinning out of it, the air blasting apart around them before Ziden lands before him and Yukimura, slams to the ground, a broken, torn apart mess that was slowly trying to repair itself, before a massive explosion of fire sent the screaming skeletal mass into a glowering pile of ash.

" Sorry about that, not a fan of assholes waiting for me, hope ya don't mind me cutting back on your forces there." and Ziden saw the man standing there, rather emotionless to the sight of one of his men being butchered like that before him, Ziden seeing the two Maids of Illya tied up next to him.

" Just as brutal as they come, eh Kamen Rider?" Isurus stared down at Ziden watched the man grab onto the ropes holding the unconscious maids and soon tossing them high up into the air, Ziden watching them soar over the distance of the castle. " Catch."

Ziden was so busy looking at the soaring maids, the male was caught off guard by Isurus appearing right before him, his fist outstretched, normally, he could handle blocking such an attack but the sight of Isurus' face stunned him into taking that fist into the ribs and feeling his body soar over the famed castle area where 3 Kings had a famous chat. The impact seemed to have sent Ziden;'s insides broil and churn as he felt himself slamming down into the ground like a meteor.

But the main thing that caught him off guard was not his speed, he could have easily fought against that speed and dodged it, but what truly caught him off guard, was the absurd amount of fangs that dotted his teeth, but his mind was cleared from the sound of flesh being torn and Cerberus tearing the legs clean off of Belial and sending them smashing into the ground behind him.

" Y-You, filthy mortals and specters of the past. I, am a grand Duke of Hell, I cannot be beaten, by mere mutts and false warriors!" Belial refused to take this loss, crawling along the ground with the intent to escape, only for Heracles to be standing before him, that blade in his hand.

" Berserker. Destroy him." At his Master's command, one could see the skin of Berserker soon turn a bright red and he seemed to expand in size as that blade cracked with energy, Belial's blood caked eyes staring up at Heracles,

A rage bellowing cry came from the Berserker's lips as that blade came down and cleaved between the skull of the demon, causing his body to slacken and slump almost instantly from the sheer amount of gore splattered all over the area from the impact of that blade cleaving through the skull of his opponent, the castle grounds covered in the death blood of the demon lord and the various Yakuza who were unlucky to not be facing Mash. Mash and Altera were not spared from the gore that sprayed out from the impact

Mash and Altera looked up to two people flying off of the roof and instantly leapt the capture them, holding the two servants in hand as Illya felt her heart slowly calm down as they landed down next to them. " We got them, Miss Einzbern! Our Mission is a Success! Senpai! Did you-"

" Get laid out by the Yakuza leader, yes." Ziden slowly got to his feet, soon coughing up an unholy amount of fluids down onto the ground. "Geh, the hell did he just hit me with.'

Isurus simply sighed at the losses he was dealt, a Lieutenant gone and his demon gone, how troublesome. " all forces, retreat and get back to base, tch. This ended up being a bad business deal." Isurus is seen clicking his teeth, before those familiar infernal portals appeared around the area to let the Yakuza escape.

Ziden standing there in silence while shaking his fists clean of the blood caking them. " I need a shower."

Mash looks at herself, covered in demon gore and blood of Yakuza from Altera's sword going wild, while Illya was surprisingly spared from all the blood and death. " Agreed.'


Back at his house...

" ORA!" And a thunderous crunch of a fist shattering jaws could be heard as the Yakuza and demons that all got too close to Jotaro found themselves pummeled by a force they could not even see or defend against.

" Honestly, you'd think they'd give up by now, seeing how outgunned they are." Jotaro exhaled while leaping back to avoid an Oni's blade smashing into the ground where he was, whom quickly lost his jaw from Star Platinum's fist.

" They're probably hoping that we will give up and be overwhelmed after a while, not knowing who we are." And Reimu was quick to leap up and unleash a Fantasy Seal down onto a large group of Yakuza, causing them to scream and be sent flying over the yard, some even landing in the pond.

" Not knowing that we are very much used against this kind of Combat since the Ultima Brigade War!" and a stomp of her foot and her fist punched clean through a heavy Yakuza man who was wielding a machete, watching him slump over her fist as the Yakuza folks were getting disheartened.

" Come on, we were overwhelming them for 2 hours and they are still going strong!? Screw this, the battle ain't worth this and our demons! Gather up any survivors and get out of here!" The head man of this operation seems to be running from this battle, with the survivors calling back their demons and booking it.

Archer was looking at the pile of demons and bodies before his perch, before seeing the familiar red lights of cop cars coming down the street and cutting off the Yakuza that were trying to escape, hauling out of their cars and pointing guns at the escaping men who stopped in their tracks.

" Freeze, everyone, hands up in the air now!" With that, it was almost an instant wave of dropped weapons, with even the heroes, raising a brow and doing what they said as the cops got closer.

Keine herself let out a sigh, knowing that the battle was over. after all, usual cases like this, they would keep going until both sides are worn out but in a modern city, cops would come to try and stop a gang battle like this.

But the crashing of the door and the charging in of two Yakuza who somehow snuck past the others and one was approaching Shirou, with that Katana in hand, steadfast. " Heh, a woman and a runt, a shame, thought this would be a far more interesting blood bath in this house!" and not even a hesitation, he made sure to charge right at Shirou and out of sheer instinct, his blade found source deep within the breast of the Yakuza man. " Y-you're joking. Not... me dying to some punk." a stagger back from the blade drinking in the last remnants of his life, shook up Shirou a heavy bit, he just took a life, even if it was in self defense.

Such a shock to him, left him entirely unaware of the Yakuza who was rushing towards him to take his life, only to have his ribs almost instantly shattered by the fist of an unknown helper, one whom Shirou didn't know but would know the many times this war originally happened.

" Are you doing well, young man?"


Elsewhere...

Another neighborhood, far away from this current one, stood an officer overlooking a mysterious sight, one that frightened him, considering his phobia. " Dispatch, I am gonna need someone to send a snake expert. judging by the trail of it, its frightening. About 20 meters in size." The sight soon showed a massive trail of crushed earth that was left behind.

Not so far away, a Shiba Inu could be heard barking frantically, which the officer heard and was about to head to, before hearing it scream into silence.

" What the?!" And the officer quickly whipped that revolver of his, while his free hand was hovering on that phone, getting ready to call for those hunters he saw on tv. Or he would, if a shadow not overtaken him, leaving his hand behind and dropping the phone on the dirt.

In Chaldea's Dreadnaught side...

" Whoa, its just impressive, our world gets scorched, but Chaldea gets fused to a space ship, have to say, that is pretty cool." One of the Chaldea workers was on break with the others as the next singularity wasn't spotted so they spend timeoff for right now and destress.

" Yeah I know, even Romani seems more relaxed these days, which is good, we lost alot of friends, the master candidates are safe, and we have a hero from another world helping us save our world, its like one of those, Isekai stories, ya know!" And the female worker was grinning at this before the ship began to violently shake.

" H-HUH?!" And the duo made sure to hang onto the table in case something happened that caused them to go flying.

In the Base side of Chaldea, a large crack formed in the air before the command center, where Romani and Da Vinci was staring. " A Temporal Breach. We read about this in the files in Ziden's ship. But to see one happen before our eyes." Da Vinci already had her staff summoned, before the breach cracked open, phantasmal glass spilling out from the rift and the rough and tumble fall of a rotund blonde man landing down on the ground.

" GEH! MY WORD!" and his groans of pain were replaced with confusion when he noticed the two standing at the top of the command center. " Wh-what is this, how are you two-"

The male stopped his words, echoing words soon flowing into his head to shut him up. To not speak words that may alter the future, but to see them again, especially Da Vinci was good. His eyes do look around for a moment as a spark goes through Da Vinci's head, the throne was sending her new knowledge, now?

" But where are they, Mash and Ritsuka." and his eyes soon catch the large screen behind him, seeing Mash walking next to someone with black hair and blue eyes like Ritsuka back home, only for his eyes to widen when he notices the differences, the male's hair was alot spikier than his, light blue hues that seemed to have alot more wisdom and namely all of those weapons on him. That was not Ritsuka at all.

" Excuse me...but uh, who exactly are you?" Romani looked confused for a moment, as the heavy male soon took a trademark smile.

" Me? Why my good sir, I am Gordolf Musik, current owner and director of Chaldea."

Trivia:

1. Cerebus only has one head in SMT due to that was how he was designed, he does end up having additional faces in a future game but the design was hated so the classic design came back.

2. Yes, the act of Ziden rushing through Einzbern castle was a cutesy reference to Kiryu's rampage through the Tojo Clan HQ after he resigns.

3. Realistic Outcomes will start to become more apparent due this story taking place on earth and a city so expect stuff like cops showing up after fights.

4. Shirou's first kill happens in self defense but still would affect him a good bit as taking a life is never easy unless you're an anime protag or a sociopath.

5. Marshal Thorman comes from SMT1, due to Ziden's actions, SMT1 and 2 do not happen in this timeline. 4 will happen but in a vastly different way, as you know by a certain char appearing.

6. A giant snake roaming around, sounds familiar no?

7. That Shadow is indeed what you think it is, Fate fans.

Author's Notes: Haha, wow, I have been slacking on actually doing this, games man, what can I tell ya, got into Breath of Fire so I am enjoying that series and I will be working hard on this one, but ya know, since I sure some of you saw it, I might as well bring it up. If you wanna pitch your story ideas, that is fine, my dms exist for a reason. That review I got a few months ago is, well, you'll see me explain it but I will say this, I will be deleting reviews that are not reviews but instead pitches to werid stories you can make on your own. I don't care if ya do it, but people read reviews to see what they think of the story. Not to see multiple paras of someone desperately wanting Okita Alter involved in the story. But below this can be ignored if ya don't care, anyways, hope ya enjoy the chapter, read and review!


Special: normally I don't even do stuff like this because, its, ya know, just flexing of crotch parts but, the main reason I called your review cringe, because the idea of shoving so much extra stuff onto a Canon existing char, is cringe, especially when the concepts don't even mesh well with the Canon Char. Giving Sonic all those powers and abilities makes no sense, even in the context of this story with the World Recreation.

As for the 'bullshit' Ziden has done. Yeah, he's a very strong being who literally has trained countless years without a limiter to how strong he can get, of course he is gonna do bullshit. I did model him off of Shonen protags and their goofy powerhouseness but the thing is, he is an OC, a blank slate to you all to either love or hate. But when you try to slap all these crazy powers onto a Canon like Sonic, you get, a shit ton of misses and hates because people do not like when Canons get all of those goofy powers.

As for the weird things you listed as having a counter for Ziden, none of what you said, really works. As Ziden explained in Ultima Brigade war, his eyes only limitation, was that he couldn't copy Mechanical attacks, which Nitori remedied with a piece of equipment Ziden has, so anything Sonic does within Eyesight, he could copy. His Immortal Rending Technique is not a Phantasm nor can be explained in any fate term, its just a technique that rends immortalities and Sonic here is not immortal, this is not Archie Sonic. This Sonic is Mortal and the attack would do, well, nothing.

And the Okita Alter thing, its a thing that her sword can do that, but there is absolutely nothing stopping Ziden from outright blitzing her and taking her out with a single blow. Just from the previous stories, his speed has exceeded what either has done in Fate GO with their NPs and faster than the Eye speeds. And even then, Okita and Alter are two different beings, they cannot just flip in and out of each other like Zelda and Shiek. I normally never do this stuff but I had to address it, don't bother leaving a review to reply to this, you can either send it as a dm or just bite your lip and make your own Sonic Fate story.

3/5/2022 Add On: This is how I can immediately ignore your criticisms, Superman being bland, is a Criticism only second hand knowers of Superman use, because they never took the time to actually read any of his stories and know of his depths. Superman is a powerful char but he is not like anyone else, he doesn't care that he is strong, he doesn't care that he doesn't fit in. He was raised with values and it shines through his character. He is an outsider in a world where everything is made of wet cardboard to him and he knows it. Yet he doesn't abuse his power to rule over the people, but stand among them, working a day to day job he realistically shouldn't have to work. But he was raised human and sees himself among them no matter what. He will always be on humanity's side because he believes in the good in all of men's hearts. He is a char with depths that make him out to be human because underneath all of the World crushing power, the ability to hold and lift Infinity and Eternity, to tug around planets

Ziden is a rude and crass protector of humanity who absolutely cares and loves for humanity but he is not afraid to slap the belt down when humanity goes stupid and its in his right to do so.. Superman is a nurturing father to people while ziden is the dad that cracks the belt against the ass of people when they act up.

It is, humorous, that you would bring up Plot Armor Nullification, when Ziden doesn't have plot armor. But good ole Sonic does in so many spades. You have never read the first and 2nd story, where Ziden has been brutally torn apart and beaten and has gone on point to say many times that his allies are just as helpful to a fight as he is. You came ito a story where Ziden is back at his 100% and is back to his normal ways, crass, rude, but caring and tutoring. This Ziden here, has been humbled alotand you would know that especially if you read the first story where you learn that the worst moment of his life was being tricked by Lucifer into attacking the 4 big Gods of Earth, which led to him being unable to age. He is not allowed to age and die with his friends and has to outlive them always unless they are Youkai or immortal. Hell Ziden is humbled again later on which will be actually revealed in this story as his by far greatest mistake.

As for those stories, yeah those are stories among the rarity that works, because good people write them with the intent of balancing who they are with the new powers. People still don't like that in most cases, and thanks t people writing Naruto like he's akin to an unbeatable god ( Which is funny when he is revealed to essentially be the reincarnation of a god), or when they give goofy new powers to chars when their own powers worked well enough.

As for the whole, Ziden gets away with no being punished, is again, you clearly not reading the past stories. Gensokyo got attacked because Ziden fought the Ultima Brigade in the past, leading to the Touhou girls having their home and powers stolen. Ziden destroying Atlantis lead to its queen and the surviving descendants to hate and hunt down Ziden. Ziden accidentally attacked God and his 'siblings', so the church ends up making him their greatest enemy above even the Anti Christ. Said action led to the supernatural being revealed as real. which made him the enemy of the Mage association. Everything he has done, has led to an effect happening which outrght points out that he doesn't get away with much unless its minor. They have had long lasting effects which last even into this story and beyond.

As for he My Way or the Highway, you are very much confused on that, Ziden doesn't force decisions on the group, nor do they really listen unless its life treatening, again, a sign you never read the stories before Super Hero Taisen Omega. Ziden makes decisions and they usually do their own thing. In Link's world in Ultima Brigade War, Ziden voted to choose the long way to take the spirit of Adventure and literally half the group just flew over the wall while a few others trekked with him through a dungeon. Ziden /had/ to destroy Ueno because if that virus got out, humanity would be fucked again like it was in the RE universe. He took that on himself so no one would have to share the burden of having to end innocent lives. Ziden /had/ to take the leadership from Marisa because with her messed up mind, she would have gotten everyone killed. That was seen in Tsukasa's and Takeru's Past accounts of the previous ten timelines.

YEs, Ziden is Overpowered, just like half of the Touhous he traveled with. And how Reimu herself fought him to a standstill even after he went 100%.

Imma be real with you, this honestly just feels like you want a Sonic vs Ziden fight, with Sonic gaining ultra duper powers to fight Ziden really. Which isn't, likely to happen because my Sonic already fought and beat Ziden after he tried to jack the Power of the Master Emerald and ala Shonen anime, became friends by repeatedly punching each other into the allies they are now. Like I said, you can keep slapping down these reviews on how and the whys Super Heart of the Cards SURVIVE COMPLETE LINER XTREME Sonic over there would beat Ziden with his with Okita girlfriend, then just get up on Microsoft word and type it out and make your own story. Granted, you would look like an ass to make your own version of a story to beat up someone else's OC but you do you, Sonic Fan.