[Short Story Inspiration]
Retcons and Plot Holes, you got to love'em. I'm being serious here, It's awesome to see stuff like that! Watching an OC unknowingly contradict an aspect of themselves is the most hilarious thing in the world for me. An example would be: saying that your "Dishlong" is around FIFTEEN METERS in length, only for you to realize that centimeters were the metric system you were suppose to use.
I've seen that on a Spanish MLP fanfiction once, but I lost track of the story because I forgot to follow it. It's a shame, I would have loved to see where it headed. But like almost any OC fanfiction out there...
It probably never got that far...
[Chapter 5: A Heroic Daily Life 1/2]
Darkness... all that could be seen was darkness. There's probably nothing in this dark void other than a veil of darkness. It was darkness within darkness. So intensely dark, that you could say it was all... black... But alas, amidst the dark void stood the hero of this world. It was the one and only Galaxy Spiral, who was having a nightmare about his dark tragic past.
In front of him there was a large screen showing him the most tragic moments of his wretched human life. The bullying, his uncle's, his failure at love, and his parents death! All of those things were torturing his mental state. These traumatizing moments never stop hunting him till this very day.
Galaxy: NO! STOP! YAMETE KUDASAI!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
[Start of the 4th day: 26 days remaining]
The season was spring in the peaceful town of Ponyville. Residing inside the Castle of Friendship, Galaxy's screams of fear echo on the empty hallways. He woke up in a cold sweat, panting in despair from the never-ending nightmares. And to his right side laying next to him, a very concern Twilight stared at him with the most worrisome eyes.
They are both laying in a king size bed, brought over ever since their relationship became a thing. They've slept together ever since, on top of doing some "other things" contextually speaking. Apart from that, Twilight spoke up first about the situation. It was noticeable how much she was worried about him.
Twilight: Did you had another nightmare dear...?
Galaxy: Yes... It appears I'm unable to escape my past... I truly miss them Twilight... My parents... *Sob*
Twilight could feel remorse in his voice, as if he blames himself for the death of his parents. The pain Galaxy feels cannot be compared to any other pain, and she can feel that. So in order to soothe Galaxy's sorrow, she embrace him in a warm hug to show him he will never be alone again.
The two of them began to cry, letting all their worries wash away in their everlasting embrace. Their love for each other was absolute. Not even the so called "Princess of Love" Mi Amore Cadenza, could ever reach the level of love these two alicorns were emitting.
Twilight: How could any pony ever think of making your life miserable!? YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE SAD!!!
Galaxy: People hated me because I was weak. Being alive to them was like if I was "forgotten garbage." And what better way to get rid of garbage than to slowly burn it until nothing remains...
Twilight: You are not garbage Galaxy! YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME!!! If anything, those MONSTER are the TRUE garbage!
Galaxy: Twilight...
Twilight: So please Galaxy, look into my eyes...
Doing as Twilight said, he looked into her eyes, and immediately realized how special he is for her. In fact, they were both meant for each other from the very beginning. They are soul mates from different worlds. So what better way to solidify the love they were feeling, than to end it off with a kiss on the lips. This kiss was passionate!
Not like those other passionate kisses they had. This one was different then the rest, it was SLIGHTLY BETTER! Therefore, by default it was the bestest they ever had.
Twilight: You will never be alone again. I love you so much, and that will never change.
Galaxy: I love you too... More than anything in Equestria, or the Multiverse.
After that display of affection, Galaxy decided to take his usual walk around Ponyville. As he continue his leisure stroll, the residents of the town couldn't stop looking at him. He truly stand out from the bunch, considering he's a male alicorn. But on top of that, he's the physical embodiment of the word attractive. Sexy is not sexy enough to describe his sexiness. The redundancy of that sentence just adds to the fact.
A thing ponies were most intrigued about was the uniqueness of his Cutiemark. It was just like his name; A blue spiraling galaxy, but the center of it had a shooting star. This is the best way to describe the most awesome cutiemark ever seen, and these ponies know it.
The only thing they could not grasp was his thoughts. What is this handsome stallion thinking as he walks among this curious crowd?
Galaxy: (Why the FUCK is Luna not helping me!? My nightmares should be drawing her attention towards me! And every night she avoids them like if she's being chased by a hungry FUCKING Manticore! FUCK, I JUST WANT TO BE LOVED! MY LIFE FUCKING SUCKS, SO WHY ISN'T SHE SAVING ME!?)
Galaxy was... distracted to say the least. So much so that he accidentally bump into somepony. It was the rainbow pony herself, Rainbow Dash. Isn't it coincidental that he bump into one of the element bearers. With a whole crowd watching from the sides, on top of being the one who flies 99% of the time. This world works in mysterious ways.
Rainbow Dash: Woah, Galaxy! Sorry for the bump dude. You ok?
Galaxy: You shouldn't underestimate me Rainbow, I'm pretty sturdy. Mentality, and physically.
Rainbow Dash: Yeah you are! (Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! OH MY GOSH!!! I wasn't expecting to run into him! Keep it cool Rainbow, just act cool. Even if you're in love with him, you got to remember he's Twilight special somepony.) So... how's is going?
Galaxy: Hmmmmmm...
Galaxy's ability to read minds comes in clutch. Then again, he always knew Rainbow Dash had feelings for him. In fact, all of the element bearers are in love with him. Unfortunately they gave up pursuing him after he began his relationship with Twilight. That was always a thing that bothered him, yet it doesn't matter that much.
In alternate timelines of Equestria, he always ended up with a different mare. Sometimes with Twilight, sometimes with Fluttershy, Celestia, Luna, Rainbow Dash. He even end up with Cadence once, but he didn't like it because he needed to be in the Crystal Empire a lot. The point is, Galaxy is always satisfied ending up with any girl, as long as the rest are still infatuated with him.
However, without the Princesses of the Sun and Moon filling those empty spots due to their unorthodox behavior, he can't make awesome love scenarios happen. An example being the classic "Luna brings Mane 6 to protagonist nightmare."
Rainbow Dash: Uhhhhh? Equestria to Galaxy! Are you really ok?
Galaxy: Ah! Yes! it's nothing... I'm just thinking about the nightmare I had last night... Lulu couldn't help me again...
Rainbow Dash: Oh... I'm sorry about that Galaxy. I didn't meant to bring up bad memories. Heck, if I was in your world, I would have protect you with all my might!
Galaxy: Really...? you would have done that?
Rainbow Dash: Absolutely! (And on top of that, I would have tried harder for us to be a couple... What I'd give to do that!)
The thoughts Rainbow Dash is having are giving Galaxy an idea. Currently, boredom is catching up to him faster than ever before. So what if he could hook up with Rainbow Dash as well? There's no doubt she loves him, but he can't just start playing the infidelity card on the spot, there are ponies watching. This is when Galaxy came up with an elaborate plan to start a hidden relationship with her.
It is called: "Speed of Love"
Galaxy: Hey Rainbow, do you want to race?
Rainbow Dash: Race!? Hey! that's my line!
Galaxy: I know, Is just that I want to get all the bad thoughts out of my head with some good old racing. I was also thinking we should make a bet to keep things interesting.
Rainbow Dash: A BET!?
Pinkie Pie: Now that sounds like my kind of fun!
The unexpected appearance of Pinkie Pie took Rainbow Dash by surprise, it didn't affected Galaxy though. After all, he isn't the type of guy that would be surprised by anything. Frankly, he was expecting her to come. There's no point in initiating a race without somepony to instigate the start.
Rainbow Dash: What the heck are you doing here Pinkie!?
Pinkie Pie: I was always here!
Galaxy: Makes sense, you being Pinkie and all. So, do you want to be an announcer for our race or something? I'm guessing you are here because of that right?
Pinkie Pie: YES-YES-YES-YES-YES-YES-YE-
Galaxy: Ok, I get it... Now, let's get things sorted out shall we?
Pinkie, Rainbow, and Galaxy are now in front of the Castle of Friendship, with Twilight coming along with them since this is her house. The race starts and ends in the same place, so it won't be complicated to find the finishing line. However, the route used for the race might be the thing that gets them lost.
Twilight: Let me get this straight! The race starts in front of the castle, you do three laps around the entire town of Ponyville, to then go straight to the Everfree Forest in order to reach the Castle of the Two Sisters, and then deviate into Gahstly Gorge where you will try reaching Ponyville again in order to end up back at the Castle?
Rainbow Dash: Yep, just a simple stroll in the park.
Galaxy: It's easier than finding Dragon Balls. Speaking of which, I'm going do the ultimate anime move and give you a handicap.
Rainbow Dash: Cool what is it? (I'm gonna need it...)
Galaxy: First, tell me your hypothesis on your estimated time of arrival.
Rainbow Dash: Hypota-What?
Galaxy: "How fast do you think you're gonna finish this race?"
Rainbow Dash: IN AN INSTANT!!! (Probably around a 1:31 seconds.)
Galaxy: (Huh... almost around an anime OP.) I'll give you a 1:30 second head start.
Twilight/Pinkie/Rainbow: YOU WHAT!!!
To think things got intense already, and they haven't even mention their bets yet. Speaking of which, they should probably get into that. After Twilight pointed it out, Rainbow started to think about it. Galaxy already knew what he wanted from her, so he stood there waiting for Rainbow Dash response.
Rainbow: Well... how about... If I win, you'll take me out for dinner tomorrow.
Pinkie Pie: That sounds like a date!
Rainbow Dash: N-NO IT ISN'T!!! (Yes it is...) Anyways, what do you want Galaxy?
Galaxy: If I tell it to you, you might not give it your all on this race. I'll tell it to you when I win.
Rainbow Dash: Look at yourself, already claiming victory! That cocky attitude will be your down fall Galaxy!
Galaxy: Then I'll give you an extra handicap, I will not fly during the entire race. Does that sounds fair?
Will the stakes stop getting any higher? At this point the girls astonishment cannot even be described in simple words. Galaxy is such a generous soul, with a pinch of coolness to balance it out. Apart from that, they are now ready to go at it. Pinkie Pie even got up front to do the countdown.
Rainbow Dash was already prepared to kick it into overdrive. Galaxy on the other hoof... well... he got other plans in mind...
Galaxy: Pinkie, mind holding off on the count down. I'm going to get myself ready.
Pinkie Pie: Okey doki!
Twilight: Wait, what do you mean by "get ready!?"
Without answering the question, Galaxy's eyes turned from their usual emerald green, to crimson red. Twilight immediately recognized those eyes, Galaxy talk about them long ago. They belong to a character in a world of ninjas and mythical beings. the eyes she was looking at were... The Sharingan...
Twilight: No way...! the Sharingan...! What are you going to do with that?
Galaxy: I'm not done yet Twilight... need, more, POWER!!!
Just as Galaxy said, this was just the beginning. The Sharingan is only to adjust his perception of speed. He needs more than just that to beat Rainbow Dash, especially with the handicap he gave. And in order to do that, he must rely on the power systems of a few anime and games he had seen and played during his time as a human. Things are going to get insane...
The ultimate speed power crossover, is about to begin!
[End of Chapter 5]
Galaxy is insanely easy to write. The effort I need to put into him is practically nonexistent. He doesn't need to make sense, and I love it!