I have restarted this story under the nameThe Stark

This will be where I will post everything.

I'm changing Leon Stark to be where I'll post my rough draft so I can listen to it . Which will help me fix errors and I can add more content.

I thought I'd posted my answer to some of your questions and criticism.

I have a learning disability and being after posting the story, I use webOutLoud to listen to what I wrote. It helps me hear what I need to correct. I ended up cleaning up the the previous chapters. As one guy keeps mentioning I do need to fix characters names. I started to using a speech to write programme for the third chapter and did not review it closely before posting. I took more time in my last chapter and think it came out better. I know it's not perfect.

What's the point of having magic from the wizarding world, if it's not a power wank fanfic. If you want a nice and heroic main character and dont like power-wank this story is not for you.

About my character.

Leon Stark is a cunning, vindictive and sociopathic hypocrite. I don't believe my character is evil, but if he feel slighted or threatened by someone he is extremely petty. He will make the north prosperous and a militarily power powerhouse, not because he cares about the people, but he cares about his own image. I've always liked these kind of characters, more than a heroic ones. They are more fascinating to me.

I also thought I hinted at why he truly doesn't like Ned. That he and his mother were reluctantly, accepted into the Stark family. He feels threatened by him and fears rightfully or wrongly that he might be usurped by him.

I think people need to remember who his mother is. I know I haven't really written about her in the story yet. How do you think canon Barbara Dustin would react to being treated the way she was. The whole of the north knew about how reluctantly they were accepted. Think about the rumors that must've been spread about her and her child.

About Lyanna.

Again he's a psychopath so of course he doesn't care about thousands who have died. He wanted this war to happen. He also knows because of her action she's no threat to him. No one will follow her in the north to overthrow him. So he doesn't hold anything against her. He could've stopped the war if he truly wanted to. He know the truth. He could have magiced his grandfather and father to listen to him.