Alright! Welcome to Chapter 4 of Naruto: the Dark Prince.
So I decided to not reveal the two other Elemental Affinity intill like the one month training for the third exam, hope you don't mind :)
Also about the Harem I still haven't made a list yet and also I'm not going to do anything intill Naruto is 15 like in Shippuden (at least that's what I think)
Thank you guys for the support of my story I really appreciate it and I would like some feedback on what I need to fix or some tips when I write my story so if you think you will hurt my feelings, then don't worry since I'm the one asking for your opinions
Anyway let's get to the Chapter
Chapter 4: Identify revealed
(Naruto's mind scape)
"What do you mean?" Naruto asked Confused
Right now Naruto was back in his mind scape after his fight with Sasuke and his encounter with a cute white cat. Naruto now was face to face with the black haired person from before
"Also who are you?"
"As I said we have much to discuss" The figure replied to Naruto not even answering his questions and started walking in another direction while signaling to follow him
"Okay?" Naruto said unsure but still followed
Naruto and the Black haired person was walking for some time now, and still there surroundings hasn't changed, they haven't spoken yet either so Naruto decided to break the silence
"Um, so, what did you want to talk about?" Naruto asked
"We're almost there" the person replied
Naruto then looked around his surroundings again to see...the same thing as before
"What do you mean? We're still-" Naruto said only to be cut off by the massive castle in the distance
"Woah!" Naruto said surprised
"We're going to talk there" the person exclaimed
"Oh, Okay" Naruto replied still stunned
the figure grabbed Naruto's hand
"Hey! what are you-" Naruto was about to say but was cut off by the figure
"We're going to fly there" The person said shocking Naruto
Flap*
black and red feathered wings sprang from the black haired persons back, which Naruto recognized from before from there first interaction
"What- woah!" Naruto said but then was startled when a pair of black leather wings sprang from his back surprising him
The black haired person started to hover himself off the ground and into the air
"Wait! I don't know how to fly!" Naruto yelled out
The person looked at Naruto for a second and then replied
"Use the muscles in your back to sprang up in the air and then let your wings glide through the wind" The person explained
Naruto tried doing what the person said and his own pair of wings started to twitch and spread out but got exhausted after
The black haired person saw this and lowered himself and went behind Naruto to help him by putting his hand on Naruto's back
"Try focusing on the spot I have my hand on and try again" He said
Naruto nodded
He then tried again this time focusing on the spot the persons hand was, this time the results were different, Naruto's black wings began to twitch and spread out again but this time they started to flap
"Good, your starting to get the hang of it, this time try again but more harder" The person explained
Naruto nodded then let out a breath and tried again but this time harder then before, his wings began to twitch and spread out while flapping
Naruto started to lift off the ground slowly while the Person had a small smile on his face as he watched Naruto
"Alright, now get used to stay in the air intill you start to feel it get easier" the person said as he to began to lift off the ground again
"Did you have to do this as well?" Naruto asked trying to keep himself in the air
"Yes, I had to teach myself at the time" he replied back
Naruto nodded
"You didn't have a sensei to teach you?" Naruto asked
"I did have a teacher, but, he didn't teach me how to fly" the person replied
"Why not?"
"Well it's because he didn't know I had wings, I mean I didn't either intill at a certain moment" the person said then looked down with a frown in remembrance
Naruto noticed this and felt bad, it was silent for a moment before Naruto broke it
"Sorry" he said
The person shook his head
"It's fine, don't worry about it" the person replied
Naruto nodded and started to feel the hovering is getting easier as his breathing returned to normal
"Your doing good, try moving around so you can adjust to it"
Naruto nodded and started to hover around slowly getting the hang of it, The person watched Naruto with a nod
"Alright, let's go" the person said to Naruto as he began to fly in the direction of the castle
Naruto nodded and flew towards the castle as well
(Time Skip)
Naruto and the Black haired person arrived at the gates of the castle, now that Naruto can see the castle clearly, it was a black and purple in color along with a small village surrounding the castle
Naruto looked around the village a little bit
"Are there any people living here?" Naruto Asked
The black haired person looked at Naruto who was looking at the village in wonder
"No, remember this is your mind, I only created this place so that we can talk with no distractions" the person replied
"Oh, okay" Naruto said
Then the Black haired person put his hand on the gate of the castle and pushed it open so they can walk in
"Follow me" the person said which Naruto nodded
They then started to walk in the foyer room of the castle where some stairs were to the second floor, Naruto was speechless from the inside of the castle, they started to walk through some hallways intill they are at a door which they opened and inside is a living room with two red couches facing each other
Naruto and the Black haired person sat infront of each other getting comfortable
"Alright, let's get started" the person said as Naruto nodded with a serious face
"First, im pretty sure you have some questions don't you?" the person said to Naruto
Naruto nodded and spoke
"Who are you?" Naruto asked
"You can call me whatever you want, alot of people did anyway" the person replied, Naruto frowned at that
"You don't have a name?" Naruto asked
the person just shook his head, Naruto put on a thinking pose, and thought of what to call him
"Keiran..." Naruto whispered
"What?"
"How about Kieran?" Naruto asked
The person looked down in thought about his new 'name' Naruto thought for him, this isn't the first time some one called him by a different name alot of people called him either boy, or kid, but that's really about it, after a couple of seconds he spoke
"Sure, I don't mind you calling me Kieran, Besides the Author can finally stop calling me the person now"the person now named Kieran- wait what the fuc-
"What?"
"What?"
"..."
"..."
Naruto and Kieran were staring at each other in an awkward silence until Kieran broke it
*Cough*
"So...do you have any other questions?" Kieran asked
Naruto disregarded their awkward moment a few seconds ago (thanks god) and asked another question
"You said this was my mind right?" Naruto asked and Kieran nodded
"So how did you make this place then? Also why did you make it like this?"
"As for your first question, you could say we are link together in a sense, thats how I created this place in your mind, and, your second question im going to answer in a little bit. Anything else?" Keiran Replied
Naruto thought back to what happened in the void and to him when he woke up and that power he had, he didn't know what that was so he asked
"I have two more questions, that power i used when I fought my 'team mate' that was yours right, what exactly was that power" Naruto asked curious
"For the first one you are half correct" Keiran replied confusing Naruto
"That power you used was the power of Darkness and it wasn't just mine but it was yours as well, and I'm going to explain what the darkness is as well in a little bit, what's your last question?" Keiran explained
Naruto was surprised at this realization, he didn't know he had that kind of power inside of him but he had some concerns regarding this power of darkness, but, he pushed it back for later since Keiran was going to explain it more in a little bit
"When we were in the void, you were looking at someone, it was a girl with Silver blue hair and she had unusual clothing on, the same as you, but, she also had White feathered wings, who was she?" Naruto asked
Keiran was looking down in thought but he had a look of longing in his eyes, seeing this Naruto was about to apologize but was cut off by Keiran with a sigh
" I was planning to tell you after your questions but since you asked that question now's a good time, first the girl that you saw, her name was Iris, and...she is my beloved" Keiran said with a sad smile
Naruto was surprised at this
"I'll tell you more in a little bit, in the mean time I'm going to tell you a story first" Keiran said while he manifested a book out of some Black energy
Naruto nodded and got comfortable but then remembered something
"Wait! how long is this story? Because i still have an exam to finish" Naruto said worried
"You don't have to worry, I made it to where time works differently here in your mind, an hour here is like 10 minutes outside of your mind scape" Keiran explained and Naruto relaxed at that
"Alright, ahem, along time ago, before the age of the shinobi, there were two kingdoms, one tried to over power the other while the other one tried to keep peace between them. The one who tried to keep the peace were the Kingdom of White and the one who tried to over power them...were the Kingdom of Black"
"The kingdom of white, and, the kingdom of black, were polar opposites to each other, the kingdom of white specialized in Light while the Kingdom of black specialized in Dark, Both kingdoms were protected by their respective governor's for The kingdom of white they were under the protection of the Queen of Light, and for the Kingdom of Black they were governed by the King of Darkness"
"Above the clouds In the sky is were there was a floating island that the Kingdom of White were resided in and in the mud of the surface was where the Kingdom of Black resided in, because of that, the clouds blocked off the sun light so that the Kingdom of black couldn't harvest any food, or any natural landscape like grass or trees, all there was is Dead trees, mud, and dirty water that they had to fertilize to survive on, and it wasn't any better that they were monsters that attacked the people of black and so they resented the people of white for what they had up there
"So the Kingdom of Black wanted to wage war on the Kingdom of White, and so they did, the battle was endless alot of people lost thier lives do to this silly war, it got out of hand because the king of darkness made civilians put on armor and go fight"
"There is also an ancient legend revolving around two figures, the White Maiden of the Sky; represented by the White Cat, and the Black Prince of Darkness; represented by the Black Cat. At the same time, a war between the demons and the guardians of light took place, with the demons led by the Black King of Darkness attacking the lands in the sky. The Black Prince however, despite the wishes of the Black King, defied his orders and falls in love with the White Maiden, in hopes that their union would end the war. Both were not meant to meet and love each other as the war ravaged the world around the land and the skies"
Naruto was so engrossed into the story Keiran was telling, it was intriguing to him, but he couldn't stop the feeling of deja vu when ever Keiran was telling the story and he didn't know why, but, that's not all, he felt like whenever Keiran was telling about the prince of darkness and the white maiden, that he was talking about himself and this Iris person
"But then on a faithful day, that's is when the war has finally ended"
Naruto perked his head up when Keiran said that and gave his full attention towards it
"But not as you expect, not all endings have a happy ending" Keiran said but this time he had a look of sadness and regret which Naruto noticed
"The queen of Light saw the deaths and destruction that the war has caused and thought now is enough, so she went to the center of the island where a huge tower was to end this, at a different place the Prince of darkness had just left the trap that the king of darkness has made for him because he didn't want the dark prince to interfere with his fight against the queen of light because he has defied his orders"
"The Dark prince rushed to were the queen of Light was but... it was too late by the time he got to the center of the island where the tower was, the island was already starting to break apart and collapse and making the island fall to the surface of the earth, apparently with the last of her power the queen of Light made it so that the king of darkness was sealed away. Because of that the island couldn't hold itself up anymore since there is no power, The dark prince rushed to the top of the tower where she saw her for the last time, once they locked eyes with each other, the queen of Light had a shock expression on her face but then changed to one of regret as she apologized to him for breaking thier promise to each other, then the building started to collapse as well as the remainder of the island, both the dark prince and the queen of Light were falling, the dark prince tried to save the queen of Light trying desperately to take her hand, when they locked eyes again the queen of Light had a sad smile on her face as she disappeared into the rubble of the building as well as the dark prince himself ending both of there lives"
"Mewhile the island has now crashed on the surface of the earth disbanding the clouds as the earth finally had sun light being brought down upon it, do to this, the war was finally over between Light and Darkness but at a price two individuals have made so that there can be peace for the world" Keiran said as he closed the book signaling the end to the story
Naruto was shocked at the ending to that long story, true the war was over but at the price of the dark prince and queen of Light he was even saddened by the fact that the Dark prince and the queen of Light couldn't get together or fulfill thier promise to each other
Keisan looked at Naruto for his reaction and he was shocked which is understandable
"Now, do you have any questions?" Keisan asked
Naruto was broken out of his thoughts and nodded
"What's the point of telling me this, I mean when you were telling the story, when you read about the Dark prince and the queen of Light it sounded like... you were talking about yourself and this Iris person?" Naruto asked
Keiran stared at Naruto for a moment before speaking
"Naruto let me ask you this, what if I told you that this story, this legend, really happend, what if I told you that this story was based off of real event's that happened?" Keiran said to Naruto who stared at him for a few moments before his eyes Widen
"Wait! hold on are you saying that-" Naruto asked and Keiran just nodded his head
"Yes"
"It's true, all of it"
"I am the Dark Prince"
Alright, thats is the end of chapter 4. Hope you guys enjoyed
So about the Harem I think I'm going to do either 10 or 12 girls, so that way it can be balanced for what I'm trying to do, because, if im doing 10 then I can do 5 OC girls and 5 from Naruto, if I do 12 then I can do 6 and 6 so let me know which one you prefer
I hope you all enjoyed that story I put into the chapter, I literally had to jog through my memory of when I watched Shironeko project to make the story also how was it? Because I tried to make it detailed for you all
Also I'm super excited! Because we are getting a trailer for the New Super Mario Bros Movie on Nintendo Direct which I'm excited for because I loved Mario when I was young and I still do and I am hoping they don't pull a Sonic on us when making the trailer because you all know what happened with the first Sonic trailer for the movie, oh man, I hope they don't make that mistake again with Mario
Guys again I hope you all enjoyed this chapter and thank you again for the support on this story. Also do yall play Splatoon 3 because I'm trying to get a team going when playing splatfest, turf wars, or ranked mode even salmon run
Anyways see you all in the next chapter bye bye.