AUTHORS NOTE!: Hey guys! It's Cambo here and I am so excited to have this chapter be read! If you've stuck it out this far then be prepared for on hell of an epic battle. I am happy to see that, please leave a review of your thoughts on the story! I would love some feedback. Anyway! Enjoy =)
Visual Aids to made up characters:
Gimlock: Large Namekian, body structure of Demon King Piccolo with Nail's facial structure.
Jax: A white colored version of Cui
Fortu: A blue version of Jeice with a scottish accent !
Chapter 2
Age 740, Yardrat
Speeding to the planet's surface in his pod, Raditz could not contain the excited feeling whelling up inside him. He laughed uproariously, feeling his Saiyan blood boil at the thought of this opponent they had been gifted. Raditz had not yet been on the front lines, tasked with training exercises with Saibamen and clean up crews with some older soldiers. Now he was finally getting his chance at a real fighter. After years of being mocked, he was finally able to compete with more of the elite soldiers of Frieza's army. Even able to keep up with Zarbon. "I'll show them all" Raditz thought with a snaring growl. Raditz pod hit with a thunderous explosion, behind him he heard the sounds of four other pods crashing near him.
Grabbing his scouter, Raditz opened his pod and hopped out effortlessly. Raditz enhaled deeply while equipping his scouter, sighing with satisfaction "I love the hunt!" he said with a relaxed tone. Quickly, Raditz began studying the area, getting a position on any potential threats. "Man Raditz, you sure are eager" said a booming voice from behind the young Saiyan. Raditz turned to the voice which belonged to a tall, Armor clad Namekian named Gimlock. "Of course!" Raditz declared with joy "any true Saiyan would relish in this opportunity" Gimlock laughed at Raditz, rubbing Raditz head gently "You're just like your uncle kid!", Raditz smirked at this, playfully swatted away at his comrade. "He's his fathers son" said Turles who lands near them "Stubborn and cocky" Raditz grimaces at this but Gimlock only smiles "a Saiyan trait, is it not?" Turles smirked at this "good point".
Turles looked over to Raditz, his gaze obviously back to business "Status report" stated the Saiyan commander. Raditz nodded and went back to his duty. After a few momnets, the scouter chimed, causing Raditz to point to the west. "According to the scouter, a collective of mild power levels can be seen in that direction" Raditz smiked, cracking his knuckles gently with anticpation. Turles crossed his arms, working out the stratgeies in his mind. "Gotta be the populace right?" asked Gimlock. Turles gently grumbled in agreement "Yes, they're our target." Gimlock and Raditz turned to Turles, awaiting their orders. Turles spat off to the side "We devestate the populace and that should draw this warrior to the surface". Turles walked between them, staring off into the direction of the populace. "according to reports-"
"Enough of this chatter, Master Frieza isn't paying you to goof off!" said Jax as he landed a few feet away from the three comrades. Turles glared at Jax "We stratgizing fool" Turles snarled. Jax crossed his arms at this comment, spitting in their direction "what stratgey could a pair of monkeys and a slug come up with?" A humanoid man whose skin dawns the color blue, lands next to Jax, answering his question with a humorous tone "a crock of shit, sir! No doubt about it!". Turles glared at the pawns he had been stuck with. Jax and Fortu were on the fast track within Freiza's army. Rumor had stated that Jax was seen with Lord Frieza personally, seemingly finally replacing Dodoria. Fortu, however, was a different story. Fortu had been handpicked by Zarbon after the blue warrior went up against Zarbon in a cantina scrap. Rumors were zarbon was pushed to transform, making Fortu one of the few to see that alive. A rumor and reputation he ever so adored. Turles sneered to the duo "Now who's wasting Lord Frieza's time" he said mockingly. Before the soldier could retort, Gimlock rose his arm and held up his hand to motion for silence. "We have company" spoke the Namekian, his voice holding a sense of calm urgency, his voice saying "We're under attack"
Suddenly, the rapid sound of wind breaking speed slowly filled the silince. Raditz was quickly looking around for the source of this sound before he turned to see a bright orb of energy crashing towards them. "There!" he shouted, quickly blasting off into the sky to avboid the blast. He went to alert his comrades, but silenced himself. Looking to Turles and Gimlock, they were right on it, following Raditz close behind. Turles looked to see Jax and Fortu had also seen the attack and joined them in the air. The blast connected with the ground below them, destroying the elite units ships in the process. "Damn it!" shouted Fortu "I just bought that thing!" Fortu looked over to Turles, his eyes filled with rage "You stupid ugly son of a bitch! this is your fau-" "eyes up, soldier!" Interrupted Turles. The sound of Fortu grunting softly and the splatter of blood Jax felt hit his cheek silenced any response the Elite could muster.
Jax turned to see a dark and bloodied hand sticking out the dead center of Fortu's chest. Fortu, eyes white with death, limply dangled from the forearm of the mysterious assailant. Jax followed the hand up, looking towards its owner with paralyzing fear. The assaliant was a man whose attire was an odd mixture of armored cloth colored in green and red styles as well as a strange turban-like mask. But the thing that caught everyones eye, was the tail that waved back and forth in a predator like manner. The warrior stood there silent, gazing at the hunters who came for him. Jax glared at the figure "how did he get behind me?" he thought, then looking to his fallen comrade "and... how did he kill Fortu so easily?!". Turles stared in joyful surprise, the rumors had been true, there was another Saiyan! Gimlock looked over to Turles in amazement "Captain... Is that..." Turles nodded gently "another Sayian" he answers. Gimlock smiled at this, his heart filling with excitement "He's mine" he stated and before Turles could stop him, Gimlock charged, roaring in excitement "fight me, Renegade!".
Gimlock threw a fury of fists and kicks to the masked Sayian, but not a single one made contact. The Sayian casually moved out of the way as though his attacks were nothing. Finally the Sayian made a mistake, dodging one of his fake outs, the Sayian left himself open. Gimlock thrusted an uppercut to the Sayian. The strike whisped through the image of the Saiyan, confusing Gimlock "I lost him?" mumbled the Namekian before violently spitting from the explosive blow he felt to his stomach. "So...fast!" he choked out, the strike had left him breathless. But when Gimlock felt himself losing consciousness, he knew it was over. Which made the over head kick to his head feel just a bit more personal before the darkness over took him. Gimlock head darted to the ground and hit the dirt with explosive force. When the smoke cleared, he was seen half buried in the crater.
Turles looked on in amazement, "I blinked and he was gone! How can he move so fast?" he spoke to himself. Raditz, on the other hand, felt nothing but rage at the sight of his friends defeat. Raditz charged to the masked Saiyan with a blind rage "I'll kill you!" he shouted as his speed increased. Raditz launched his fists to the masked Sayian, who blocked them with ease. Turles watched as his nephew attacked this obviously powerful warrior and argued with himself. As a Saiyan, he craved the chance to take a shot at this guy but did not want to ruin this chance for Raditz. Turles smirked to himself "ah fuck it" he said softly, he then charged to the fight and joined in with his own fiery attacks. Despite him joining in, no matter what they threw at him, the Saiyan continued dodging their movements.
The masked Saiyan stopped his dodging and once again, he disappear. Raditz and Turles look around for him desperately. "My scouters not picking him up" said Turles "who cares!" shouted Raditz, an obvious anger in his voice "I don't need the help of my old uncle to beat this tra- Raditz was interrupted by a swift knee to the face, blasting him to the ground. Turles, in reaction to his nephews assault, fired a hurricane of energy blasts in the direction of the Sayian. The Masked Sayian flew towards Turles, dodging each of his blasts, before getting into another blow for blow fight with Turles. Turles laughed maniacally at this "yes!" he screamed as his attacks continued "I knew you were powerful!" The Sayian disappears again, appearing to Turles right. The Captain turned his head and opened his mouth, a suddenly flash of energy erupted from his mouth, making contact with the Sayian.
Jax watched this scene carefully, observing the Saiyan very carefully. There was something odd about him. Jax studied under Dodoria, a powerful monster who would eat his victims if they provoked him. It was rumored that a Saiyan had killed him. To think a mere Sayian could beat such a grand warrior as Dodoria. It was an insane idea, lunacy and Yet...this Sayian moved at speeds that Jax was having a hard time keeping up. "This rebel is quite something" commented Jax said to himself. Jax activated his scouter, able to lock on to the Saiyan hiding in the smoke. The scouter colculated, given a reading of thirteen hundred. Jax scoffed at this in annoyance, the reading was false. "The Namek's reading is at least over sixteen hundred and Turles sits at twenty thousand". Jax felt sick, the world spun at this situation, litterally spun, spinning spinning.
Raditz rose from the ground. Dirt and sand crumbling off him as he rose into a sitting positon. Raditz groaned slightly "Damn, that smarts" Looking up, Raditz sees only a puff of smoke. Standing proud, Raditz powers up out of frustration. As he felt blood drip from his forehead, Raditz pictured his mother and father. Even little Kakarot, who he never had a chance to know. Wiped out by scum stronger than him, stronger than his family or his people. It was this rage, that Raditz began to power up, feel his Saiyan blood rise. "I...am Raditz! Son of Bardock! Grandson of Rarret the Hungry! I will not sit by and-" "I've told you hundreds of times Raditz" spoke a familiar voice "it's 'Rarret the Honorable', not 'the hungry' idiot!". The booming voice took the attention of both Turles Raditz. Both looked on in surprise and shock, standing before them was an older mustachioed looking Saiyan, and Bardock
Bardock, seen tossing the severe head of Jax as he smiled confidently at his relatives. Turles looked over to the Saiyan he had been fighting. Seeing a young man, not much older looking that Raditz, was before him. A calm relaxed gaze dawning his young face. This however, caught Turles off guard. He could of sworn he was facing an adult, not a child. This realization of the youth strength gave Turles fear, fear he quickly ignored as he flew down to meet his brother. Turles landed gently, not far from Bardock"been a long time... brother". Turles looked to the older Saiyan "and you are?" he asked politely. The older Saiyan placed his fist to his chest "I am Paragus, the warrior you fought is my son, Broly". Turles recognized the name "Son of Spera Paragus?" Paragus nodded, causing Turles heart to skip a beat. Paragus smirked at the reaction "Ther Legendary Super Saiyan bloodline, yes, the same". Turles looked to the boy, explaining his previous quarry of his power. Turles chuckled "quite an ally you've got yourself brother" Bardock smiled "You have no idea"
Raditz ran up to his father, speechless and staring at him with awe. All he managed to choke out "are... you real?" he stated with a shakey tone to his voice. Bardock smiled at this and put his hand to his eldest sons head. "We have other problems it seems" he spoke softly. Raditz hadn't noticed it yet, the hundreds of soldiers that had descended from their ship. The Hundreds of Freizas forces, watching this group of Saiyans amongs bodies of their fallen. The sight of this, this would not stand for such an elite army. And the Saiyans, would not let numbers bring them fear. Turles, Paragus, Bardock and Raditz all faced the militia, Broly landing next to them, discarding the robes and mask. Turles looked to Bardock with a concerned stare "Bardock, there are over one hundred soldiers on that ship!" Bardock simply smiled "let them come" he spoke softly "This war begins now".
Else where...
Staring out the window from sheer boredom, the now teenage Prince found himself more and more irritated. "Why do Nappa and I have to come to this god forsaken world?" he thought to himself. Vegeta had been training day in and day out for the past few months. Upon hearing news of a warrior Saiyan rebel going throughout the cosmos and destroying Frieza capitals and militia bases had inspired the young royal. Vegeta would one day find his place in the universe, and that place would not be at someones side, he would achieve his birth right, the right to be called a legend. "The Super Saiyan" he said to himself "Your power will be mine". The sound of his door opening broke his concentration, Vegeta looked over to see Nappa had entered. Vegeta scoffed at him "you should learn to knock Nappa! I don't like people entering my private quarters". Nappa bowed apologetically "I am sorry Prince, but I came to inform you that we arrived at Tech-Tech".
A few months ago, contact was lost on the planet of Tech-Tech, two elite soldiers were sent to figure the problem, Abo and Kado. That was two weeks ago, Frieza became nervous, thinking it might be this rebel whose been destroying the Frieza territories. "I can't believe I am tasked with this, what is Lord Frieza thinking?" Nappa nodded as the Prince spoke "Wasting my potential like this, I can't stand it! I don't deserve that shit!" punched the ships wall, denting it severely, Nappa put his hand on the young Princes shoulder "Vegeta calm down, think of this as a test of strength. Abo and Kado were very powerful elites, this opponent should be fun"
Vegeta entered the bridge, ignoring the foot men greeting him, staring at the planet, Vegeta felt a smile crawl on his face "You're right Nappa" he said with an excitement in his voice "Let us see this fighters true strength".
AUTHOR NOTE: Holy shit that is a long one, I hope people enjoy, I am keeping on eye on the traffic and I appreciate all the reads and comments would be much appreciated. Thanks everyone!