His Planet is WHAT?
I'm not certain that this is going to be any good, I really am not sure how to set it up for Jackie to find out about the Time War but let's give it a shot.
"This is getting too much! The travailing I can understand, but this, this, this constant constant seeking out of danger, it's getting too much, I can understand, travelling just fine, I mean I'd rather Rose back home with me, but I can understand the want to travel, but this the constant dangerousness is too much!
Ever since Rose has met you all she's done is get into dangerous situations, and why, why, why do you keep taking her to places where their trying to destroy earth? It's not right, I mean there's no reason to do that.
If you just wanted to show Rose the wonders of the universe I'd be fine with it, but if you want to take someone with you to a place where they're about to destroy earth, why, just why don't you take with you some aliens from your planet?
It's completely unfair to keep taking Rose trying to destroy the home planet, when are you going to take her to your home planet huh?!" Jackie had finished her rant at the Doctor, but hadn't noticed that Rosey was desperately trying to gesture at her to stop talking and that the Doctor was looking more and more angry.
The Doctor bolted out of the flat, and Jackie smiled at Rose with successful grin on her face, and Rose slapped Jackie. Jackie looked very surprised (as you would if your daughter slapped you) and started to say something along the lines of, You've been hanging out with him for too long, and you picked up his rudeness, when Rose interrupted her and said
"What did you do that for? You're never supposed to bring up the Doctors planet! Do you know why we never have to go and save it, maybe because Gallifrey has been destroyed?
The Doctor's home planet, Gallifrey, was destroyed in the Time War! And not only that, not only is his planet destroyed, but he is literally the only Time Lord left alive in the entire universe!
And then here you are giving him a hard time because we've never had to go and save his planet, now I've seen Earth be destroyed but when it was meant to be destroyed, I can't even imagine how absolutely horrible it would be to see your own planet be destroyed, well before it's time and not only that, with all of your species on it, leaving you the only Time Lord alive in the whole universe!"
Jackie gaped at Rose, and sat down again on the sofa, the mouth hanging open resembling a fish. That was absolutely the last thing Jackie had expected Rose to say, and it had completely shocked her.
I hope you enjoyed, I wasn't sure how to start it so decided to jump straight into a Jackie Tyler rant. Did I do it okay? I think this might have happened, possibly, have a nice day.
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