Author's note:
Once again, I don't like how this one story is going, I think I am being far too preachy with my values when they are just supposed to be reflected in my story. So I will delete it and replace it with something that I hope will be the last versión, I will keep this just in case but this story will be deleted it, I don't think its good enough even if it took me the better part of a year to make it.
I apologize for the ones who liked it but I don't think this is up to the standards I want