First Author's Note: Thank Mister Jackson (Guest) for his reviewing interest here. Second Author's Note is at TBC. . .
Review Responses (THANK YOU for taking the time too):
Heartstrings Pulled:
BearfootTruck: Both chapters reviewed, you so spoil me BFT honey. The purrson our Cattastic hero was chasing unseen, I hope that was sarcasm. Looked up this Patrick Cowley, damn a musical composer amazing. Now that you mention it, maybe the rating should change to M. I'm surprised you find LB's discovery so surprising. Lovely, thanks for the input BFT honey. As well as the Favorite/Follow here.
elijahhedgemond: Okay interesting choices, I'll consider them. Thanks for love as well. Oh believe I'm not worried at all. It will take time but it will be worth it to read your and your Love Song's works. 3 PUNS IN 1 SENTENCE, I can't tell you how joyous I get when reading that. Thanks for the Favorite/Follow here.
The Evo King: Wow. . . Okay it's good to hear from you again my King. Even if this random hot craziness. Which I do enjoy deciphering it. True, I'm surprised that you are surprised. Um, teenagers sadly explore their sensual drive early. Besides HELLO akuma dark magic forcing it on harder. I figured that gun wasn't for myself. I agree Gwenpool, over dramatic in every sense. Harm concept rrriiigghhhttt Gwenpool. No, that wasn't a low blow, dark sure but not naive. Still LOVE the story concept as to why I created Noir's New Nature, which is collecting dust but not for long. No but it's definitely amusing to read/respond too.
High on Cupid's Wing:
Guest: Awww, thank you. Indeed Proud Family needs more love.
"Damn, was I always this stupid for her?"
The invisible force gently releases Cat Noir's black belt tail. Bright cat green eyes stare in the direction the pull came from. He smooths his tail as if it hurt being grabbed. When he feels pressure on his right shoulder blade. Yet he doesn't panic, the gesture is friendly.
His cat green eyes blink ahead, the invisible force materializes into well. . . HIS FUTURE SELF!
Wiser, more confident cat green eyes shine with the same mischievous glint. Same Cheshire Cat toothy grin on his much more regal no longer baby-fat handsome face. Yet untamed blond hair is short clean somewhat buzz-cut, with a tiny ponytail down his back and it's no longer covering his human ears. The black suit is more streamed lined in green mixed in, more tight pockets on the front.
"Well what do I think?"
Mr. Noir asks chuckling, his voice beautifully smooth. Or at least the teenage Ladybug thinks so, as she blushes red behind her red/black spotted domino mask. Neither black feline registered her bluebell eyes staring at the adult version of her partner.
"You're- I'm- we look totally pawsome!"
Cat Noir stares in complete wonder at his future self. Mr. Noir returns it with a smaller amused smile. As he side glances Ladybug (the blush on her, he shakes his head at in disappoinment) "Okay, Mini-Me find you when I need too. I actually need to discuss an urgent matter with Little Lady here."
His statement leaves no room for arguments or backlash. He gentlemanly leads the fluttered young Bug away as he glances over his shoulder to see his younger self use his silver baton to leap off to the nearest building.
He nods silently as his younger self moves out of sight. The true moment they're alone, his cat green eyes turn feral, made worse as Ladybug's bashful smile grows more rosy.
"Pay Attention Marinette!"
Her bluebell eyes widen to late as he whacks her on the top of her head with his silver baton. She cries out in pain, now staring furious and confused at him.
"Hey why'd you- wait. . . YOU KNOW MY SECRET IDENTITY?!"
TO BE CONTINUED. . .
Second Author's Note: Mr. Noir is Future Cat Noir.