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The day was October 10th, four years after the attack of the nine-tailed fox. It was late at night, around 10:00 or 11:00. On this day, a celebration of sorts was being held.
The villagers had gathered a mob to, in their minds, complete the work of the deceased Fourth Hokage. You see, four years ago when the nine-tails attacked the village, the Fourth Hokage sacrificed himself to seal the beast within a baby.
The villagers were blinded by the grief of all the people they had lost and then the death of their beloved leader had convinced themselves that the child was the nine-tails in human form.
The hatred for the child was so great that the third Hokage after retaking the title made a law banning any mention of the child being the nine-tails jailer was punishable by death.
The villagers were not fond of this and for the past four years their hatred had been stewing. Now the mob had plans of killing the jailer or jinchuriki of the nine-tails, whose name was Naruto Uzumaki.
Right now the young blonde jinchuriki was running from said mob as fasts as he could through the rain while holding on to a heavily bleeding arm. The villagers had caught up to him once before and hit him with with all sorts of garden tools they had available.
Naruto had only managed to escape from them when they were distracted by their rambling. Behind him, he heard the multitude of footsteps growing closer. A searing pain shot through his right leg, causing him to fall to the ground.
The young blonde looked back in horror to see the moon's light reflecting off of the headband and sunglasses of a leaf jonin. Naruto then looked at his foot to see that the jonin had thrown a lunai into his leg.
The rest of the mob laughed as Naruto started to tear up and attempted to crawl away. The jonin walked forward and kicked Naruto in his side, making Naruto roll into an alleyway.
"Damn dirty demon, how dare you string us along like this," the jonin said as the rest of the mob surrounded Naruto. Naruto sat up and began backing away towards the alley wall.
"Why are you all doing this?! What did I ever do to you!?" Naruto shouted as he began to panic as his back finally touched the wall. One of the members of the mob scoffed before driving the pitchfork in his hand into Naruto's leg.
Naruto screamed out and the man kicked the blonde's head. "Tell that to my son you killed nine-tails" The man growled out. Naruto had no idea what the man was talking about but was too panicked by the pain he was in to care.
The sunglasses wearing jonin stepped up. "My sister is dead because of you you monster." The jonin hissed. Naruto could barely register what he said through the burning pain in his eyes. A female member of the mob stepped in front of Naruto.
"Tonight we finish what the fourth Hokage started, tonight you die!" The woman shouted Naruto's eye swapped open at that. The tree adults infront of him all swung at him. "STOP IT!" Naruto shouted as he thrust out his uninjured arms in front of him and a blast erupted from his palm.
The entire mob was flung back several feetinto the street. Naruto sat shocked before he jumped a bit as he realized his vision was different.
The entire world was on black and white aside from blue flame in the stomachs of the mob and in paths inside them. Naruto noticed that the flame in the jonin was bigger and brighter while also flowing faster through the paths in his body.
Naruto looked at his hand and saw pathways in his arm as well. Naruto stumbled back and blinked. When he opened his eyes the world was back to normal. Naruto felt his foot become cold and realized he had stepped in a puddle.
Naruto looked down and froze at what he saw in his reflection. His once blue eyes were now gone and in their place were two eyes in which the pupil and sclera were purple and six black rings were present.
Naruto stepped back and felt his foot touch something. Naruto looked to see that his foot hat bumped into the jonin's sunglasses that had fallen off of him. Naruto picked up the glasses and put it on with a smile on his face before walking over to the knocked out jonin.
Naruto bent down next to his ear. "I don't know if you can here me but I'm taking these and it serves youbright you jerk!" Naruto yelled in his ear. Naruto stood up and laughed before walking away without realizing his wound shad healed.
This is just a short intro chapter that I wrote so be assured all future chapters will be longer than this.
