I hate to disappoint you all in not having an actual chapter published. But I need to vent this out.
Lately, I've been seeing some criticism in Dark Souls: Embers of Remnant. Look, I am aware that I do not like it, but lately I've been re-thinking on what you said and I am taking a consideration in Rewriting it.
I know, I know, the original one always sucks as see with the First iteration with Halo Galactic Wars. That has gotten a lot better and I've been thinking of doing the same thing here.
Why do I keep asking on what do you want in some of my stories? Yeah, it's a sign of begging. But every time I do my own thing, I get criticized for my major reasons such as grammar, poor plotlines, and major plot holes. Why do you think I always ask for your suggestions now that I mentioned about it?!
Anyway, let's get onto the positive side. Dark Souls: Embers of Remnant has been a good experience to write. Sure, it's usual "Follow the RWBY plotlione" scenario and I had a lot of plans for that. I am not cancelling it, I am informing you that this story will go into a huge change in regards to missing plot holes, dialogue between each character and also how the story will plan out. That is, of course, a problem as I have bad grammar and now I am thinking of getting an editor to see what went right and what went wrong. In honesty, I haven't watched RWBY for a long time that wasn't in clips. Sure, I'm going to be rewriting it after watching volumes six to nine.
But, if there are things I am going to keep, there are two things. One is Ash's personality. Since this takes place in the aftermath of the events of Dark Souls III, I want his personality to be similiar to Kyril Sutherland from a popular Fanfiction called 'The Night Unfurls' by StaffSergeant. The second one is how I want this to happen right around after volume five and before volume six starts. No Emerald Forest, not at Beacon, and certainly not in volume 4 to 5. I want to do my own thing and you can't force me.
Well, that's what I need to plan out how it's going to change. From the title to the synopsis and even the plotlines. I'm going to take a break from this story as it brought me nothing but getting hate from those that had the right to criticize me. See you soon.
