Sorry for the long wait, had to help family work, school and so on.
Quick update I had to do a slight retcon in chapter 5, the only change I did was at the end of Raven's part of the chapter. I was fixing something that was out of character for her to do. You don't have to read it but it does involve something important later on.
Hunter to Hunted
In the forest of Anima, a man with black hair in a long braided ponytail in a white outfit and bladed wrist bands. He was cackling madly while carefully walking stalking his prey.
He always enjoyed killing, but it was even more so when he was doing his Goddess's work.
He looked through bushes expecting to see his target ready for death.
And he was on the ground bleeding.
His face looked shocked and then worried. "No!" He ran to the man on the ground and looked at his face. And to his horror it was Shiro, the huntsmen the cowardly lion brought here. He looked at the hole on his chest and applied pressure to the wound. "No! No! Who did this to you!"
Shiro looked up at the man trying to save him, he was relieved to find someone. "I-it was a child, a monkey Faunus."
The man's eyes widened, his target was stolen from a child? That brat from the Branwen Tribe! How dare he!
"I, I need some help, there's a village nearby can you help me?"
The scorpion looked at his target and smiled sadly. "Yes, I can help you, I'm sorry it wasn't the way it was supposed to happen."
"What do-" A scorpion tail wrapped around his throat and squeezed his neck. The man struggled, kicked and tried to pull the tail off.
"Sh, sh, it's ok, just go, I'm sorry I wasn't here in time but at least I can finish my goddess's bidding." He looked sadly as the man died in his grasp.
He looked down sadly at the corpse shaking with regret that he wasn't the won that ended him. He'll need to report this.
The man opened his brief case and a large eyeball with tentacles floated out in front of him.
"Tyrian" The beautiful voice that said his name soothed him. "I take it your task was finished."
"No, my Goddess." Tyrian bowed in her presence. "Someone a child, killed him before I could, forgive my failure." He brought his face down on the floor.
A tentacle rose and brought the scorpion's face up to meet the eyeball.
"This was no failure, someone had done your job for you, it is not your fault."
"Your too forgiving my goddess."
The woman in the eyeball smiled. "Now, this boy, perhaps you can find this boy for me?"
(-)-(-)-
Years ago, on Planet Vegeta…
Kron was four years old and he prepared two Ki orbs and tossed them up.
They flew up and fell back down.
He brought his hands up to catch the orbs only to fail and they landed on his feet.
"Ow!" The child was forced off his feet and blew at them from the pain.
"I told you, visualize yourself catching them first." Neab sounded disappointed.
Kron looked at his father angrily. "I don't want to learn this it's lame! Don't you know any moves about attacking?!"
Neab sighed frustratingly, if his mother won't kill his son, Neab just might do it himself. But he wanted an apprentice and eventually Kron will learn to accept the role. Also it felt nice ordering someone around.
"Look son, I need you to learn how to juggle your Ki orbs." He demonstrated by showing his hands, small Ki orbs formed at his finger tips and he tossed his hands up sending all ten Ki orbs to the sky. Then he showed his fingers going downward. The ki orbs fell at his hands and he started juggling them, showing impressive control of his Ki even for a Saiyan.
Not that it mattered. This was for entertainment and nothing more. Might is all that matters to their people.
"Learning these techniques isn't so bad, it's what adds flare to telling stories and entertains our warriors." He stopped juggling with his hands and waved his hands in a spinning motion, the orbs started spinning in a circular motion on their own. "And eventually you'll be able to move these orbs without your hands and even impress General Nappa." He laughed heartily.
Kron looked at his father not impressed. Why didn't his lousy mother meet another low-class warrior instead of this pathetic groveler? Taking pride in entertaining is disgusting.
"Son" Neab let his Ki balls fade and spoke seriously. "You must understand, everyone is born with a role to play in order to survive. We were born to entertain the strong, this is our role son and if you are to survive you WILL submit."
Kron heard those words for as long as he could remember. Those words were constantly being drilled in his brain but he remained stubborn and clung to the hope that he can be a warrior and not a mistake like his miserable father is. Still, facts were facts, he likely will never see battle.
Neab sees that he failed due to his silence, he will learn soon enough for now he will bribe him. "Alright, son, perfect your juggling three times in a row and we'll go hunt for that new beast that was brought to our planet."
One of the lesser creatures that can withstand Planet Vegeta's gravity and yet not fight back like the beasts' low-class warriors can hunt. Not exactly enough to make him excited. But killing a lesser creature always made Kron feel better if only for a moment.
Kron knew this was the best offer his father was willing to give...or could give really. "Fine" He stood back up and got ready in a stance.
(-)-(-)-
In the present day on Planet Earth, or Remnant.
Kron was in the forest further away from Mistral and surrounded by trees.
"Ok this time." The child put his hands up and formed tiny Ki orbs at his fingertips. The orbs left his hands and spun in a circle, it was like how he juggled Ki blasts back home, only this time he's using it for combat. The orbs started levitating around his body in circular motion.
The child then aimed a hand forward. "Guided Swarm!" He yelled and the orbs surrounding him scattered in all directions.
Some trees were hit but not all, those that were did not fall before his power, only leaving marks embedded all over them shaped like his orbs.
"Damn it." Kron fell down tired. All of the Ki orbs were supposed to be focused into the direction his fingers pointed, not go all over the place! But that's not all the child was disappointed in.
"That should have made the trees fall." The child fought to stand up and walked over to a tree. The hole wasn't deep, but it did take a good chunk out of it. "I guess it does do the job, still I'll need to be able to use it multiple times a day and need to control where all my Ki goes."
He remembered his fight a couple days ago. If they had kept fighting together, they would have had him. Captured and imprison. Granted he doubt they could have hold him, they had Aura cuffs but not Ki blockers. Still it wouldn't do for him to be prisoner of an inferior race.
And so Kron worked on his Guided Swarm, a technique that uses the control he had in juggling and fires Ki in whichever he direction he pointed. Like guided missiles.
It would be used for fights where he's outnumbered, though he wants to also control in which direction his Ki goes instead of everywhere at once. It would've come in handy against those two and he wouldn't have had to stoop to Raven's lousy tactics to 'make a fight go smoothly'.
Kron began remembering Raven's teachings about using his father's lessons to create actual attacks. That was one thing Raven was useful for, but he had to admit his father had a hand in this. Admittingly without him he wouldn't have a foundation to create his techniques.
Berringer Burst was deprived from making your Ki into a single point in your palm electric current that danced across your arm. And Guided Swarm was of course deprived from juggling your Ki.
"I wonder if this means dad could have been a warrior?" He was the one who created those parlor tricks. "Probably not, he was too satisfied with just entertaining drunks." His father was annoyingly happy most of the time, though it was a good thing since he can actually tolerate Kron. His mother was on the verge of killing him for all the begging he did to train or go on missions.
He wishes he could see his mother's face when he stole her pod. And also, the kills he had.
Kron grabbed under his shirt and pulled out a necklace. The licenses of those two fools a third he collected a couple hours ago, he smirked at them, it felt so good to have trophies, proof that he can be a warrior. Sure, his mother would have killed them in a nano second with her power level of 1500. But they were still proof that his parents were wrong not to send him off world once he was born.
Which is why he came here to rise to be a Saiyan warrior who will purge hundreds of planets.
"And this planet is just the start." He told himself. "I'll get stronger and eventually be strong enough for planets with real warriors that use Ki not this Aura crap."
The child walked away with his tail swaying around. He clicked his tongue as he wrapped it around his waist. "Have to remember to hide the tail, maybe cover my face." Clearly huntsmen are looking for him, and some are looking for those two 'missing' huntsmen.
He walked over to collect his bag and opened it. It had the broken weapons of the huntsmen he killed were. He started walking thinking of his next move. Clearly staying in Anima was getting complicated and he was not ready to start the mission.
His first option is that he can lay low, hide in the wilds and train normally by fighting Grimm or regular exercises. Anima was the largest continent and easy to hide in, that was how the Branwen tribe and other bandits, all he had to do was avoid people for a while.
Practical, but too boring so that option's out.
The second is to just hang around Anima and fight whatever huntsmen came his way. He can just hide in the wilderness while killing whatever huntsmen in his way and destroy the evidence.
Fun but too impractical, it took all his will to not just go through with that option. Anima was large but sooner or later people will find him.
The third option is to leave Anima, go to the other continents and fight around, huntsmen and Grimm alike.
That one can work, it's practical and fun. The only drawback is that it's a lot of work. He can fight huntsmen from many different places, all kinds of Grimm and learn the different terrain of the continents. Hell, he hadn't even learned all of Anima's yet, but he could come back and learn it when the heat's died down. And as an added bonus, he'll learn about the many different cultures of this planet since it was so divided unlike back home.
However, there's one problem with that plan. How to do it? Yes, he can fly but across the ocean to the next continent is a bit of a stretch, his power level is still not strong enough.
He could just stow on a boat or something. "Maybe I can steal one of those what do they call them? Bullheads?" He said aloud. Then he stopped thinking and looked ahead.
Buildings, a new village?
Kron stopped himself and remembered all the raids he went with the tribe. It was fun fighting all the huntsmen he could from every village but he always dreamed of doing it by himself. But now's not the time.
With an annoyed sigh he turned and walked away. But then he stopped when he realized something.
He sniffed the air. No scents.
The child turned around and floated above the village. It was huge, it looked more like a town than a village, the buildings were anctient, like there hardly standing. And yet it was empty, uninhabited. He flew to the center of the village and looked around.
Not a single soul.
"Seems like a waste." Kron recalled the history of Anima. Many towns and villages were built in Anima but most of them were helpless as Grimm attacked, the people either fled or died.
From the lack of smell of blood, he can deduce this one was successfully evacuated.
"This kingdom is so helpless; it's people can't fight for themselves." Then again that's why planets like this are so easily conquered by sending mere infants.
Kron was about to leave no point staying here but then a thought came to his head. He's never been to a town this size or destroyed a village on his own. Perhaps now is the time for a little practice. He smiled as he powered up Ki in his hand and tossed it at a building.
A large hole was where a wall of stone used to be.
He's frustrated that he couldn't master his new technique yet. Time to let off some steam.
Buildings were set on fire, streets exploded, it was all so cathartic. This was described in what few books Saiyans bothered to write. He always imagined himself doing it in the soldier's place. This was different, it was real.
With a laugh of a happy child Kron began to fly over the town and rained down many Ki blasts across the town creating large columns of smoke. He was imagining a bunch of humans and Faunus here scurrying around from his mighty attacks.
This was what a Saiyan was meant to be, death and destruction nonstop, not sneaking around hiding and waiting!
Eventually the boy stopped and sat on a scaffolding looking at his handiwork. At first he admired some of the buildings that fell before his might but frowned noticing that most of the town was still intact, much to his dissapointment. Plus all these buildings were old, and seemed to have been on the verge of collapsing. Yet he didn't manage to destroy no more than four small buildings. If it was a real town, he likely struggle to blow up a fully supported house.
"I'm not ready to destroy a town, much less the planet." Which is why he had to resort to these pathetic tactics.
Sneaking around and waiting. Absolutely pathetic. That is not what a Saiyan does, but that is what he is doing. Because he was not born a real Saiyan thanks to his father's defected genes! Kron squeezed his fists in frustration, he knows for a fact he's only doing what needs to be done. If he were to attack entire cities now, he'd be dead. Forgotten and risked his hide just to die on a weak planet.
Self-loathing started filling the boy's thoughts for almost an hour as Kron contemplated what his doing. He stopped mid thought and looked down. The child took a sniff, wretched scent, right negative emotions, how ironic he may have attracted a much needed distraction he fell down and looked in the direction of what he brought on himself.
Three Beowulves came from behind a couple houses.
And he was disappointed, just more Grimm canon fodder. Oh well he can just play with them, it might make him feel better.
Kron rose one hand powered up his Ki.
One of their necks was wrapped in a metal whip, with a squeeze it's head came clean off.
"What?" Kron put his hand down and sniffed. A new scent must have come here not long after he finished his practice.
Before he can further ponder, a woman came an kicked on top of one their heads she then wrapped a chain around it and the other one's necks and broke their necks destroying them.
They faded and Kron looked down at what was supposed to be his prey fade to nothing. Then he focused on the woman.
She woman walked towards him, black hair stripes on her face.
Attacking was his first thought, they were probably going to deceive him to capture him the last ones. So first he decided to listen to what they have to say, just for now. "Who are you and what do you want?"
Sienna was surprised but she only smirked. "I suppose you wouldn't recognize me, you were in a hurry when you woke up that day."
What was she talking about, woke up that day? He then remembered a tan woman with striped arms, cat ears, a tiger Faunus had nursed back to health after Raven almost killed him. She wore a black outfit with a red cape. "You, I remember you now." He noted, that was not a good memory and dampened his mood. "What do you want from me? Gratitude?"
Sienna was unfazed by him not thanking her for saving him. He is just a child. She rose a hand and kept her friendly smile. "To talk that's, it." She looked around the abandoned town to see how much of it he had destroyed. Powerful indeed.
"We were never really introduced." Sienna put her hand up for a hand shake. "My name is Sienna Khan, me and my guards are members of the White Fang." Sienna introduced herself.
Kron looked down at her hand and scoffed. "I know about you White Fang and I'm not interested." He was fighting not to attack her yet.
Sienna kept her calm demeanor; this was a very powerful potential recruit. She needed to remain calm and focused. "Even if you're not, I'd still like to invite you to our camp, I assure we, were not like the rumors say."
"Not interested." Kron said right away. Obviously, a trap, but knew better being surrounded by a group with Aura was something he wasn't ready for.
Sienna frowned but kept composure. "Come now don't you feel you owe me for saving your life? You're a Faunas like me who has had a hard life, thrown to the side by humans."
Kron chuckled. "I never asked to be saved, you idiots wasted your time." And likely doomed your planet. " Trust me we're not the same. Your group is too soft, too weak. All you do is beg for whatever scraps humanity can offer. It's pathetic."
"Not all of us." Sienna countered.
"Oh?"
Sienna sighed. "My supporters take more active measures that the rest of the White Fang wouldn't approve of." He explained. "We rob the SDC whenever possible, free innocent Faunus prisoners and destroy human huntsmen that take advantage of faunas wherever they go."
The huntsmen killing sounded tempting.
"In time I will step up to the throne of the White Fang and become High Leader." She explained. "And then all our members will do what needs to be done for the revolution."
Maybe there was hope for them after all, resorting to killing their enemies instead of begging.
"So, I'll ask again, please join us."
So, a group dedicating to fight humanity? That sounds nice better than the Branwen tribe that just tries to raid and run, he'd have food shelter, wouldn't have to camp and fight more than he did in the tribe by the sound of it. But regardless the Branwen Tribe offered more or less the same and that didn't end so well did it?
"I've been liking being my own man lately, and I'm not going to serve anyone again." Kron declared. "So, I'm curious what would happen if I refused." He was going to start a fight if they weren't, he was just curious.
Sienna was a bit frustrated but reminded herself this was a child raised by bandits, she kept calm and responded. "I'm afraid I can't just let you go if you refuse." It'd be too risky, she can't just let this loose cannon out on his own, he'll likely make the humans think even less of their kind.
Funny he was just about to attack her. She was clearly willing to fight, good it always made this more fun.
"You know I was really angry that you killed my prey but, now I think you'll be more fun." He looked at the tiger and her weapon. Another trophy will be added to his collection. And this Adam guy looks as though he can hold his own though he's a lot younger than the huntsmen he's killed. "Ready to die?"
Sienna knew this boy was vicious but meeting him made her understand Girah's stance on not allowing him in on their organization. She was ready to respond to this aggression in kind.
"I hope you can make this fun for me."
Sienna looked at him with a mix of pity and anger. "Last chance."
Rolling his eyes Kron fired a Ki blast.
Sienna rolled out of the way and sees Kron right in front of her. She sways a punch grabbed his arm and tossed him over her shoulder.
Kron caught himself with his hands and flipped but he noticed the chain whip wrapped around his leg. "Damn"
Sienna yanked down slamming the boy into the ground and pulled her chain wrapped it around her arm. She sees Kron getting up holding his head and growling. She took a step back, this boy wasn't going to brought down easy.
Kron roared and dashed throwing many punches and kicks.
The Faunus dodged almost all of them, he was letting his anger get the best of him which made him more predictable.
He powered up Ki in his hand and prepared to fire. He was getting frustrated but he was enjoying the fight, looks like Raven isn't the only one that can actually have him enjoy a fight.
Sienna sees him about to fire and kicks his hand making it hit the blast hit his shoulder this caused him pain and allowed her to get some distance.
Kron looked at his wound he was hurt by his own attack? How pathetic. He looked ahead ready to lunge again but knew better to calm down first, he breathed in and out and dashed once again.
She looked at the boy and swung her chain only for it to miss a now calmer Kron.
The boy looked ready for a kick to her head.
She started swaying her head only to be punched in the gut and sent her flying. She skid across the ground but landed on her feet, she sees him dash for her again. Quickly she rose her arms up blocking a powerful punch.
Being tiger Faunus as well as her Semblance Grudge which provides her with more speed and strength the more she focuses on a target, she can handle a large amount of force. However, the punch still hurt from the boy but she shouldn't be surprised.
Kron swept kicked making her start to fall, he smiled as he prepped another Ki ball.
Only for Sienna to step on his face and bounce away from the child. She landed on top of a small house. Perhaps she should try a different approach, she'll need more time before she's strong enough to knock him out.
He scoffed and fired a couple Ki blasts only for Sienna to jump away from every single one of them, as she jumped off the collapsing house she swung her chain only instead wrapping around the boy it like Kron expected it released one of the chains at the end of her weapon.
Not seeing it coming Kron was hit in the chest by one of the chain's blades, it didn't go deep of course. Kron pulled it out and noticed there was a red jewel on it, it exploded in fire. The fire burned his hand, but he waved it away and noted that she had projectiles as well.
Sienna stood swinging her chain behind her stood ready for whatever the boy tried. She noticed he hasn't been flying, perhaps he's saving his Aura, if so smart, but she knows she even though he's stronger she still has the experience and nimbler.
Kron knew that this wasn't going in his favor. But he tried to keep calm. His opponent seems to be getting stronger and faster the longer the fight goes, some kind of physical enhancing semblance. Her fighting style relies on dodging before striking, so he just needs to hold her still for a bit, or maybe hit her with something she can't see coming.
He placed one hand on the ground and fired a Ki blast to create a dust cloud. This plan wasn't much but it was his best chance to finish this.
He flew above the dust cloud, he can smell her scent down in the dust, he should be able to cover a building before she can get away.
He opened his hands showing tiny growing ki balls. He squeezed his fists and rose them up, he concentrated his Ki as quickly as possible. "Berringer Burst!"
The Red Ki blast exploded, when the explosion cleared a hole as wide as a house was there.
But there was no body!
Kron looked around growled at himself. Maybe her body was incinerated? No, he knows it couldn't be. He looked around trying to find her. He was then struck in the back with a blade with a blue crystal. His back was covered in ice and he fell to the ground.
It was freezing on top of that he wasted Ki.
"So that's your limit?" Sienna asked walking forward ready for him to lash out. "I'm afraid it's over your coming with me."
"Screw you!" Kron rose one finger it formed a small Ki ball and he tossed it at her head.
Sienna merely swayed her head. "That's enough just-"
Kron moved his finger in her direction.
The Ki ball hit the back of her head.
Kron smiled and charged punching her across the face, he followed through with another.
But Sienna caught the second strike in her hand.
"What?!"
The tigress looked down at the boy. "Slower and not as fast as before."
His eyes widened, he wasted so much Ki in that last blast. Retreating would be smart. But the stubborn Saiyan wasn't going to run from a single opponent! He swung a kick only for Sienna to sway it and kicked across his face.
The Saiyan stumbled back and fell on the ground. He pushed himself off the ground with so much effort. He remembered the last time he was in this position. He starts to see Raven in Sienna's place looking down on him.
No! This won't happen! Kron immediately aimed his palms at her.
Sienna quickly swing her chain wrapping around Kron's wrists, she then jumped behind him and pulled the boy's arms back.
"Damn it!" Kron sent Ki to his arms and pulled them with a lot of effort pulled at the chains, but he couldn't break them. He used up so much of his energy he can't break simple chains. Desperate the boy fired Ki out of his hands hoping they hit Sienna.
Though the agile Faunus merely swayed the red Ki as they came merely cracking the houses behind her.
Kron kept firing until all he can create was red sparks that wouldn't leave his hands. The Saiyan realized that he had ran out, he had nothing left. He lost? To some other lesser being?
Sienna walked up to the boy still keeping her chains wrapped around his arms. She came next to him and kneeled down to him. "Are you willing to surrender."
With a growl he slammed his forehead against her face, stupid decision as she still had plenty of Aura and so his head hurt more from it and he lost consciousness while Sienna just looked down at him.
Sienna smiled, she looked at him and sees no fatal injury. She thought she would have to cause more damage to the boy before capture, but she managed. Now she'll need to take the boy back to their base, hopefully she can persuade him.
She was about to grab the boy but she felt something, or someone watching her. She looked up expecting something dangerous.
But it was just a mere raven staring down at them.
Sienna rolled her eyes, she must be starting to get jumpy, she took the young boy in her arms and walked away.
The raven watched her take the boy to her airship, some might say it looked like it was extremely focused on him.
Little did both of them know there was a third watching.
Tyrian watches the airship take flight.
The scorpion at first really wanted to murder the boy for taking his target, he begged his goddess permission to kill him. However, she took an interest in him and wanted him to capture her alive.
He already had to share his Goddess's attention with Hazel and Watts though they were all business only speaking when spoken to, but then that annoying brat Cinder the future holder of the four Maiden's power and now he will have to share with that brat who stole his victim. This was indeed a task he hated but he will do so for his goddess despite his jealousy.
But seeing the boy fight was beautiful, he was clearly trying to end that White Fang filth. He was a Faunus with a need to kill, an outcast. Just like Tyrian himself was, hated by humans for his heritage, hated by Faunus for his need to murder. Both things he couldn't control.
Only his goddess accepted him for his faults.
No doubt they think they can brainwash the youth into following the organization's foolish cause just like his parents tried before he took care of them.
Tyrian giggled. "I believe I have found a brother in arms." It's a shame he got here too late; he only caught the end of it. Hearing him scream threats and thrash about trying to kill his enemy. He's like the little brother he always wanted! Though he will remain his goddess's favorite he will now happily bring him into the fold.
Though he may require assistance, he rather not have Hazel help in this. There are a couple mercenaries he can hire, and then silence them once they fulfill their use. No loose ends and all that.
"Not to worry my kindred spirit, I will save you from the pathetic fang, we will both do such fine work for the goddess."
Now before reviews swarm in with why Kron lost hear me out for a sec.
Kron is still weak he's not at the top of Remnant's fighters, yet. He still needs time and training. Also Sienna already knew she can fly and create blasts so she was ready for the fight before hand.
And yes I know Sienna was one shotted by Adam but from what we seen her fight, I'd say she was probably too comfortable and rusty on the throne, at least that's MY reason for how she was easily killed. But we all know the real reason was because RoosterTeeth were too lazy to do a fight scene.
Anyone even remember Sienna? They gave her a cool design, good voice and then just kill her off back in volume 5, remember? No one does lol. Ah RoosterTeeth I'm glad they made RWBY but sometimes they make shit decisions. Oh well there's always fanfiction.
So I thought I'd give her some importance here, another fighter that got the best of Kron even if he's still just a kid. I looked up her semblance it's called Grudge makes her stronger and faster against someone with a weaken or broken aura. Since Kron has no aura in the first place I reasoned she'd be able to use it the whole fight and giving her an advantage with a semblance that's basically meant to land a killing blow.
11/29/20 UPDATE (Ignore this, I did a slight retcon, I changed her semblance. It now increases her speed and strength over time the more she focuses on her target, I decided to retcon it cause I'm not sure how her canon semblance would work on people without Aura and she didn't end up doing anything majorly important in canon anyway, so it's a safe change.)
Now Kron has two people he wants revenge on, and that last may keep growing.
Basically Sienna has more experience, a good semblance and was aware of Kron's abilities. For those reasons she won.
Kron's training with Raven was good but she's no Master Roshi and couldn't quite push him as far as he could handle. Plus she's not great at hand to hand since she's never without her weapon unlike her ex husband.
That is my reasoning, feel free to tell me if you disagree and why.
Review Responces
Idea: Ya, Raven was kind of an improved version of his mother, she trained him and taught him how to read. His actual mother like most Saiyans only kept him around as long as he was useful cleaning the house and helping his father make money. To be even fairer at the end of the day Kron was still intending on killing her anyway, Raven just did it first. Very little trust between the two of them, hell the only reason Kron is alive is because Raven screwed up parenting the first time and she has other plans for him.
I know, I have plans coming up to change him a bit. He won't turn good so soon but he will change. Vegeta benefited being a prince and elite, Kron was at the bottom of the barrel even lower than Raditz who at least got to invade other planets. So he'll be easier to develop than Vegeta was.
Which is why he hesitated with the idea of betraying Raven.
You make some solid points with Adam. I wanted him dead from when he cut off Yang's arm, more so when he stalked Blake like you said a creepy yandere. T All they had to do was show us a flashback or two of why he was the way he was and done, decent villain. I'll definitely remove the yandere thing, make Adam somewhat understandible. The bond with Blake will definitely not be so creepy.
I rather avoid doing massive retcons personally. Any retcon I will do will only be done if I feel it would make more sense for the story.
Anyway good points I hadn't considered I'll think on it. Thank you.
Guest: I thought more people would find it if I put it in Teen, when this gets more gorey I'll change it to M.
Well RWBY characters will also get Ki, it's going to have an interesting effect when it's mixed with Aura. Kron would need to be the one to teach since he's the only one on Remnant who wields it for now, he just needs a reason to do it, I already have an idea on how, why, and who he'll teach.
But Kron will never have Aura that power is exclusive to the people of Remnant and we all can agree that saiyans are OP enough with their zenkais, great ape forms, growing stronger during battle and of course Super Saiyan. It's to give human's something unique they can use unlike humans in dbz, this way it's more fair. There's an explanation that gets revealed why exatcly that he and other species can't get Aura that doesn't really go against RWBY's canon.
God Light: Yes though technically no, so far their only new spins on what his father taught him, Raven only suggested to try to make them used offensively.
projectshadow06: That's pretty much what would happen, just leave the canon fodder to their fate.
Vegeta would murder the entire white fang if they mistaken him for one of their own, though Kron's not as prideful as Vegeta because he never really came from anywhere speacial while Vegeta came from royalty. He's only prideful because here on Remnant he's not on the bottom of the food chain and he can brag he's part of a warrior race. He enjoys being independent, whether he gets to for the rest of the story is unknown.
SSJKiriyu: Yeah, we'll be seeing some some more admirable traits later down the line they just have to come slowly. It's what made Vegeta so awesome hopefully I can do the something like that with Kron and it won't take as long. And a threat may come from Remnant itself, like Goku's pressence was a magnet for threats from earth and beyond.
ThatSaiyaGuy: Thank you!
suppes1: Thank you!
I'm pleasently suprised some people are still reading and we haven't met the main cast yet. I hope you guys can wait a bit longer, I need to set up the threat that will need Kron. A couple more chapters and we'll get to our final time skip.
Thank you all for reading and I'll see you next chapter.
Have an awesome day!:)
