Hey everybody, sorry this isn't a new chapter, but I've decided not to let this story die. I'll be rewriting the old chapters before I put out a long awaited new one. I feel like my writing ability now is far greater than it was when I first started this story, so I wanted to do these older chapters some justice by giving them a face lift. So for now here's the rewritten chapter 1. Just like before, any comments and suggestions are always welcomed, and I'll see you guys next time.