Things are about to turn downhill and rage inducing real fast for this one, and this is another visit with the loud parents, and it is about to become incredibly personal on this level and a big shout out and thank you to "Marvelomac1010" and this is gonna be intense! Enjoy reading this everybody!

Rock n' Not Loud Adventures.

Chapter 247: Intense visit and truths...

(May 27. Royal Woods Penitentiary.)

Michelle Lewis, along with the Louds: Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, Lola, Lana, Lisa and Lily, are headed to where they will meet with the other two, but they have company this time, and her name is Amanda Bright.

Deep down, they all don't wanna be here and see those two again, but they need to see how they have been, but also for another reason which Luna Loud has heard about, and this is a bad feeling for all of them. They need to know, the truth.

The group arrive, to the meeting place and it is divided by a strong glass wall, and they see the parents, Lynnard and Rita Loud, but Rita looks to Michelle in anger, and Michelle looks back, she is not intimidated by this blonde failed excuse of a mother.

Before Lynnard can speak, Rita does. "Hello there, my children. So good to see all of you." This annoys Michelle Lewis, but then she sees Amanda Bright. "Wait, who the heck is she?"

Amanda then introduces herself. "My name is Amanda Bright, I work for the Royal Woods Gazette as a photographer and journalist, and I am also dating Michelle Lewis, and a good friend to the loud kids, and I am here to see first-hand about the stupidity and unruly parenting you guys have done, and you're mistakes too."

Rita didn't like this. "Whatever you heard from that lady is not true, we are good parents and I am not a bad mother! I mean, sure we made some small mistakes..."

"Small?" Luna and Michelle look ticked off, and then Luna speaks. "I think we recall, everything you said to us the many times we came to visit you two numbskull idiots! Right Lisa."

Lisa nods, and she speaks. "Ms. Bright, if you wish to know what went down from the previous visits, then feel free to return to our house so I may allow you to listen to the recordings. They are recordings which I have brought with me every time, and each one is... Full. Proof. Evidence."

That one scares and shocks the loud parents, Lisa is against them and she doesn't seem pleased. "I wasted my life being smart, emotionless and heartless, and I should've lived a normal life style, and you both just allowed me to do whatever I wanted. Because I know see, that I have made a mistake, far too many."

But then the loud parents change the subject, and tell them of the things that they have been doing these past months. They have been trying to improve, and finish their lessons on a high note, but they wonder why they are given new and extra and advanced parenting lessons, almost like they were meant to make sure they don't screw up. That was Michelle's idea which they didn't know, and also the warden.

Then the loud kids tell them about what they have been doing but Lincoln and Luna don't talk to them, and it does surprise the parents to know that Lynn Jr has a girlfriend, and she is proud of her choice and what she seeks in the future, and to not be over the top competitive and be just a good sport, which is something she wishes she did back then before she fell into the whole luck belief ideas from a certain idiotic father, and that one makes Lynnard feel shameful.

Amanda Bright is recording all of this, and also writing this down.

Then Leni speaks. "Also, we're going to prepare for Lincoln's 12th birthday, and its gonna be special and one that will be the best."

Lori nods, and she looks to her parents sternly. "Because the previous ones were literally forgotten. Well, we didn't and never forgot and we always kept track of each other's birthdays."

This made Lynn Sr feel bad, but this shocks Rita. Her son's birthday is on May 30, and she forgot about it again. Luna scoffs. "Looks like two morons did forget again, it seems normal for these two."

Lynn Sr and Rita then speak to their son. "Lincoln, we're so sorry for forgetting, and neglecting you for all these years..."

Lynnard speaks. "Lincoln, I wish I could take back everything that I did and I was really stupid and kept favoring your sisters, when I shouldn't have and just stuck to seeing you all as equals and loved. I am truly sorry, and I know it's gonna be a long and hard road for forgiveness and trust." They can tell, his apology is sincere.

Then Rita speaks. "Lincoln, my sweet baby boy, I am sorry for this and I wish I was there with you, my son to help and support you. But, I promise this that by the time I get out of here, I will make things right and I will be the mother you truly need and only need. I will not fail this time!" This annoys Michelle, and the others, they know it is just her way to get under Michelle's skin.

But then Luna speaks. "Oh shut the heck up, you two nut jobs! You two can say that all the time, but it won't make a hell of a difference, because we all have known the real truth since we visited here several times and that would mean you both have a very, very, very, very, very long and hard way to earn redemption from all of us. Trust and Forgiveness are two complicated things to gain."

Lynnard nods. "Yes, I understand Luna..."

Rita then intervenes. "Luna, we heard about the tour that you are going to, and the manager of the whole thing came here to speak with us." Now that makes Luna and Michelle realize, and so do the others. "She told me that she has some good and special plans for you for the tour, and as you're mother I believe you should hear her out. They might be good."

Everyone remains silent, and then Lynnard backs away. "I am not with her on this! I didn't agree to what Crest said, I didn't want to get you into trouble, Luna!"

Rita looks to her husband confused. "What are you doing?!"

"Saving my skin!" said Lynnard. He then looks towards the others. "Luna, I didn't agree to anything and I knew she was trouble. I know the truth and fact, and reality that you need to make your own choices, with parents... Or a good mother, who can be there and help support you for when you need it the most."

Everything that he just said, it shows to the louds that he is changing, and trying his best but this confuses and shocks Rita that he would be against such ideas from Katie Crest.

Michelle then speaks. "I knew it, I knew she would try this. Katie Crest is not someone to be trusted, she is a power hungry, and fame hungry mad woman and as equal to Doug Rockwell, and I for one am glad I don't need to go back to that life anymore, and you have fallen under her vile ways."

But this angers Rita. "You don't know that! You are lying! Luna is my daughter, and I know what is best for her, and Crest told me all about you, and I know that what Crest said is the right thing, and you are just lying and being a fool of yourself to my children!"

Luna then yells. "Shut the hell up you stupid blonde bitch!" The others cover the younger ones ears. "Katie Crest is not a good person, and the only reason why we're going to the tour is to shut her up for good, and then have her leave me and the rest of us alone! She is also responsible for several crimes which she covered up, and we're going to make sure that she gets sent off and never bother us all again!"

"Also, Michelle Lewis is a damn good mother, a mother we have always wanted, but mostly needed. She saved our lives, she helped send off our returning enemies so they don't try and come back, and she is there to comfort us through moments that feel bad or just plain miserable, and I will never ever see you as my mother, Rita Loud!"

Rita then stands up, and looks towards Luna. "I am you're mother, Luna! Michelle Lewis is not, and she never will be and I don't think she should be because she can't even have children for goodness sakes, and that is proof enough!"

Hearing her say that, makes them all silent and shocked, disgusted and ashamed of her. Lynnard sighs and he looks down and wipes away his tears, his wife has lost it.

Michelle, she is ticked off and legit angry, and then she stands up. "We're going home, now." They all do so, but Lincoln follows close and he holds her hand, and he can tell that Michelle feels hurt from that, and he wants to help her.

Rita is confused by this, but Lynnard feels disappointed. Luna then turns around. "We'll visit you two again, when the tour is over, and when we have proof of what Crest truly is, and then we'll see who the bigger fool was."

Luna then takes her leave, and so does Amanda but then she looks to Rita and Lynnard. "One of you seems to be good for the road to redemption, except for the other. I was told that you two are bad parents, but I guess I was told differently... Because you two are by far the worse parents ever, but mostly you Rita Loud. This is going to become an article, and I am sure my boss will want that published, ASAP." She then takes her leave.

Hearing all of this angers Rita, and she goes back to her cell. Lynnard on the other hand, feels disappointed in himself, his actions, and his wife. This has him thinking and seeing things clearly. 'I thought I could handle with eleven kids, but I was wrong and got caught into my own little stupid fantasy.'

'Perhaps... Perhaps Luna and Lincoln, are better off with Michelle, as for the other kids...That is something I need to try and think about.'

(Outside.)

They all drive off, and the loud kids are ranting in Vanzilla about Rita and Lynnard, but mostly about Rita and they are following Michelle's car, while Amanda drives off to head to the Royal Woods Gazette.

Lily is with Lincoln and Luna, in Michelle's car, and then Luna asks Michelle. "What are we gonna do now mom?"

Michelle sighs, and she calms down. "Even though we don't wanna deal with her, after what we heard today... We need to talk with her, tomorrow."

A/N: Well, hot damn! That went serious real fast, and now that they know the truth, they are about to go and have a stern word with someone else, and as for the parents of the Louds? Well, redemption might not be possible, and someone might have to agree to what is truly right, and what has fallen apart. I hope that you all enjoyed reading this newly posted chapter guys.

In collaboration with Marvelomac1010.

Date made: 3/9/23.