Yeah bithezz I'm backkkkk. You know you missed me don't fight it! It's okay! How was your vacation? Mines was crazy but had a lot of fun fighting those army goats. Anyways moving on.
I can't believe this story is about to reach the 200 review mark. I'm honored surprisingly I've only gotten about 5 flames, 60 grammar miskates, 100 good jobs, 30 just stop and 5 please update.. I think. Maybe they were all bad, but for those loyal ones that love meh! I mean the story lets carry on should we?
Reviews
Rinnealex:
Is this story for real?
Silver: Unlikely it is fanfiction.
Fuyutaro son:
great chapter, sad about the third, but he shouldn't have tried to kill minato, that was treason, so i aprove, sort of. so i give the chapter an 8/10 (the last was a 9/10)
On the other hand, *sigh* i really saddens me that people today don't know how to put a warning in their fic header...
Silver: Clap* Clap* Bravo! Please explain?
Raveman2
Oh wow! That was not something I saw coming. Excellent plot twist you have here.
Silver: Thanks.
Batros940
I had to reread the last few chapters to make sure I didn't miss anything. But it looks like you just have Kushina except Mianto's letter from her father at face value and nowthey are on good terms again. Dang it it was an interesting fic to have the two of them against each other. I personally don't think Kushina should give Minato another chance after everything he let happen. I hope we still get to see Kushina and the Uzumaki clan be strict with the rest of the leaf village for the deaths of the other uzumaki's.
Silver: While I agree with the love hate relationship they had it was getting in the way of dialogue and story advancement. Kushina has not forgotten the death of her family, trust me. Naruto hasn't either.
Homarid
Oh noes, what will happen to our dear friend "no name". That was sarcasm by the way. I just can't bring myself to care about him too much. He kind of seems like how most people write Anko, who I really like, but I don't understand his character and he just seems weird. I can tell you are going to do more with him so I hope to hear more backstory.
Silver: You are in for a treat with this character.
Leaf ranger:
So why did they surrender? I honestly though that if this Mitsu was as powerufl as was being hinted at, they could jsut wipe out the army and be on thier merry way. Surrending jsut got nothing of value. o.O;
anyways, nice chapter. Keep it up.
Silver: That is so unlike Mitsu he likes a more dramatic way of doing stuff.
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I know I didn't say much but it getting to the point where I can't say somethings without giving out future plot. I did it a lot before and I just can't now it'll ruin the whole ark and you don't want that.
This chapter will be really long the others were really short and the ark is taking up more chapters then I originally planned. I know it was due to my riters block but its time to move along.
Next Ark: The Wave village: Naruto & Hinata.
Declaimer: I don't own Naruto.
Naruto, Sasuke and Nami ran across the prison halls, taking down any mercenary who got in their way. They haven't even broken a sweat.
"This is to easy, way to easy." Naruto said to himself. Before they were all pushed back by a shock wave that made them slam into a prison cell.
"Oh my, where do you think your going?" A familiar feminine voice asked. A painful moan came from the Team 7 as they got up.
"Your that fake officer from earlier! Where is Nanashi?" Nami yelled. The ruby eyed girl smiled.
"Don't worry about him he'll be dead before you even get there. Why don't you all just be good kids and return home. I'll even let you walk out." She said. While she displayed signs of saying the truth it wasn't a guarantee. An ambush was probably waiting for them outside.
"No thanks. If you ain't gonna let us pass then"
"Then what?!" The woman said as dark chakra began to surround her. This wasn't good this woman KI was foul, it reeked of death. Naruto looked at Nami panicking she was wide-eyed and her chest was raising quickly. Sasuke was faring a lot better but up against KI especially at this level his confidence will wear off too.
'Shit'
"Sasuke take Nami. I'll take care of her. I was serious about what I said before I will lay my life down to protect the weak."
"You better hurry up you have 5 seconds before that door closes, that is the only exit that will lead you to your sensei." Naruto looked she was right, the two huge door were closing in on each other.. damn they wouldn't make it. Naruto felt a pair of hands wrap around his forearm before he was launched through the door quickly followed by Sasuke. Looking in they saw two Nami clones waving at them.
"I won't be weak anymore, get Nanashi." Before the door closed on them. Sasuke rushed towards the door trying desperately to open them.
"Le's go Sasuke." Naruto said already picking himself off the floor and walking away. Sasuke couldn't believe it the guy that just promised not to let them die was just walking away not even trying to open the door and save Nami. Was Naruto really just lying earlier and playing off their emotions, it was too good to be true. Naruto the prodigy of Uzu, the guy who didn't care about no one when he first got here, the careless genius.
"Your just gonna leave her to die?" Sasuke asked. Naruto stopped for a minute turning around his piercing blue/green eyes coldly looking at Sasuke.
"I said come on Uchiha. That was the path she chose. We must finish the mission." With that he turned around and continued his stroll. Sasuke eyes flashed grey, a strange power he hasn't felt since that time with the two jounins, his anger took over as he attacked. He was quickly brought back to earth as Naruto fist located itself in his stomach.
"You are weak Sasuke. Remember what your brother told you." Naruto said before shoving the bent over Uchiha off him. "I have no time to waste this is a mission."
Sasuke got off the floor. His grey eyes returning to its charcoal color. 'He needed more power.'
Naruto was deep in thought, he hasn't talked to the crazy old man inside his mind in awhile but he couldn't help but remember one thing he told him.
flashback
"He didn't. He sealed me away here... I've been stuck here for years, that's why I look as young as I do. In this world, you don't get old, tired, bored, hungry. The fact you're here means you are the kid of destiny, you'll free the world from its path of darkness.. even if you do end up looking like the evil one."
flashback end
'Even if I look like the evil one.' Naruto bit his lip.
'Everything in this world has a price, even your friends. There are many gods, and fate is the worst one. You happen to be a child of fate, which means no matter what you do, the way you act, you will always look like the one at fault for that is your fate.'
Naruto clenched his fist. He blocked out the god for now. He had the mission to complete.
Sasuke looked back at the door.
'Let it be she'll be okay. Your Uzumaki friend knows this.'
'How?' Sasuke demanded.
'Remember what I told you the first time we talked.
flashback
'Listen to me well, if you ever have to fight a Namikaze... and they have full control of their power run!'
Flashback ends
'but she doesn't have complete control of her powers.'
'Your right, but remember she was gone for two years.. what do you think she was doing?'
Sasuke eyes widen.
'Even shes passing by me'
Rikudo stood quiet, he knew this wasn't true. Sasuke was on par with Naruto if he learned how to not rush into things. But the hate growing in Sasuke will lead him towards a better place. A place where I control.
Sasuke looked at his wrapped left arm before he began to take off the white wrapping, he stared at his tatted arm. 'I think its time.'
'As you wish. I will let you have a taste of true power.'
Sasuke eyes went grey and his body was covered in a dark cloak. His reaper blade being formed from his chakra. Naruto looked back at Sasuke and nodded. He kicked open the door they were outside in a clearing. The thing was filled thousands of fallen one and night crawlers with what they guessed was the other in disguised officer standing in the middle.
"I'm surprised you made it this far. It's time to die." The other masked woman said, standing against a wall.
"Sasuke you get the woman. I got the creatures. I have a bone to pick with them." Sasuke nodded.
"Kids are so arrogant either way. Follow me, our fight will go uninterrupted. Before she dashed off in a different quickly followed by Sasuke.
Naruto continued running, bashing through the wall. Naruto stood in the middle of the clearing taking out both his blades. His eyes flashed grey as rain began to pour down. Masses on top of masses of fallen ones began to fill the clearing. Naruto looked around he was surrounded. Naruto closed his eyes.
'Use my power, you need it. The Tama will save you.'
Naruto heard. He shook it off. "No."
'Then have fun dying.'
Naruto smirked. Sliding his sword off his back.
"Let's go." And just as the last rain drop fell, they attacked.
Mitsu smiled looking at the fight from a distance. A tied up Nanashi and Kakashi laying on the side of him. He took a seat this should be good. He really didn't think this will go this far. But these kids were the future of the shinobi world, they will bring so much death, just the thought was making him happy. Finally things were getting pretty boring around here.
"Why are you doing this?" Asked a freed Nanashi. Mitsu looked up.
"Entertainment." Was his calm reply. Nanashi nodded.
"Are you going to let them die?" Mitsu didn't reply immediately.
"Depends."
"On?"
"How they fight. If they fight good they will not die, if they don't they do. I have seen the greatest fighters in the world fall just because they didn't fight good. It's a lesson best learned early. Power doesn't make the fighter, the fighter makes the power. A lesson two of your three pupils don't seem to understand."
"Your talking about Sasuke and Nami right?" Mitsu shook his head.
"Naruto and Sasuke. Nami... that girl she's going to be something to fear beecause she has something the others don't." Nanashi looked at him.
"which is?"
"A reason to live. Naruto has no idea what he's going to do once he catches the person that killed his grandfather. Sasuke will have no reason to live after getting the answers he wants. But Nami he has the village, but most of all she has him." Mitsu said looking at Naruto fall to his knees after a fallen one came from behind stabbing him from the back.
"I got to help them!" Nanashi shouted. This man was nuts. And while he didn't want to reveal his true power just yet.. he needed to help.
"You will do nothing." Mitsu said just as calmly. Nanashi stared him.
"I'm a lot stronger then you think." Mitsu looked at him.
"Nanashi Uzumaki also known as the fallen star. One of the last remaining Uzumaki that has almost full control of the Tama. Asked to leave the village after a failed relationship. You traveled around the world. Becoming something no one thought possible. A monster, a god, a wild beast.. what ever you want to call a person that could make the gods them-self shit there pants."
Nanashi was wide eyed, who was this guy?
"You returned to your village to give the current leader news, news that could've prevented the attack but you didn't say anything. What? Don't give me that look. You know the reason you didn't want to come here was because you already knew what was here. You could've prevented so many things... What's your goal in Konoha? And don't tell me its to protect Naruto. We both know that's bullshit. Every power has a price, the uchiha know this the best.. a uzumaki is just as cursed at the Uchiha. You feel your power dwindling? Harder to control the mighty elements? Harder to teleport, because the power you posses is finally starting to show its true colors. The Tama, its a selfish power. It gives then takes. Why aren't all the Uzumaki weather controlling monsters? Because to have this power you have to have something everyone can't meet.."
"That's enough." Nanashi said, his Tama already glowing brightly, the ground under him shaking and the dark sky got darker. Mitsu nodded.
"As you wish. You are still not interfering with my project, so take a seat. The good stuff is about to begin."
"And if I refuse?" Mitsu looked back at him. His dark eyes meeting his Tama.
"Such beauty. Amazing. Those eyes. Man Ikiro you out did yourself." Before Mitsu stood up and began to walk away.
"Where are you going?"
"My project is finish. I have no need to stall you any longer. Those kids are weak, maybe in a couple of years I'll re-evaluate them."
Nanashi looked confuse before looking back at the field, Naruto lay'd on his back the clearing empty.
"Next time I won't be as nice." Mitsu said before he faded away.
"Who are you really?"
Mitsu turned his head. "I'm fate."
