Hello everyone.
I hope you can give this nasuverse story a chance, more specifically from the Fate/Stay night franchise, with a crossing of the world of the murim.
I would appreciate all kinds of constructive criticism or review written by mature people about my work and how I can improve it, I will strive to improve and without further interruptions.
enjoy the chapter.
Fate/heavenly demon
Arch 1 - birth of the heavenly demon
chapter 1 - childhood
a desert wasteland.
full of corpses.
the result of a person's dream, the one at the top, the strongest being who sacrificed everything to fulfill his dream.
looking back, he forged his dream through a pile of corpses of his enemies and comrades with him on top of them all, fulfilling his dream but left alone.
now there was nothing to prevent his dream but he no longer had the strength to do so. He wondered if it was the right thing to do, if the decisions he made were the right ones or if he was blind to the desire to fulfill his dream.
´Was it worth it?´ the being wondered.
He wanted to create a safe place for the needy, for the isolated, for the unfortunate or helpless, a paradise for himself and those close to him.
He managed to get an army of those people, helping them and teaching them to gain power of their own with the methods he created.
Methods of maximum creation, Methods of being envied by the heavens themselves, Impressive methods of immeasurable power, Methods that unleashed a war of hundreds of years.
them against us.
the same people he grew up with stabbed him in the back all for being tricked by the elders of the orthodox faction.
he did not blame them but quite the contrary, he apologized for letting it pass, he and his followers knew it, the latter tried to make them come to their senses but they ignored it and once again he was wrong.
He didn't fear for his life, they were too weak to be able to put his life in danger but… his followers weren't that powerful.
death by confrontation, death by poisoning, death by deceit, death by…death…death and more deaths
all his faction died for his pride and in retaliation he destroyed them.
Their deaths were not solemn, they were the most brutal, but he left with an empty feeling in his chest, he wanted to make them pay for the deaths of his subordinates but he gave them a premature death since he was blinded with hatred.
´I…was I wrong?´ the pride of the strongest came to light
Being the strongest, the most capable, he also thought he was the wisest, just for having devoured every book that could fall into his hands, everyone, did he think he was already the wisest? Wisdom only comes with experience and ironically.
Now if he was the wisest.
All knowledge passed through him tuning his mind, soul, spirit and body and with this his senses and that is why he also knew that he was being watched.
"Senses beyond human, congratulations you have become a mystical being" an old man suddenly appeared in the wasteland
He supposed instantaneous movement but he did not feel that way, he saw the old man, he listened to the old man, he felt it but he knew that the old man was not real, he did not know what was happening but he did know that this old man was not human.
"What does a non-human want from me?, since you have the courage or the nerve to appear in front of me at this moment" a monotonous voice, without feelings came out of the being
"I've been watching you all this time and I have to say it was an excellent show and—" he was interrupted by a quick movement of the being.
the old man's head rolled and his whole body was torn to pieces to finally catch on fire.
but he did not get rid of the non-human.
"That was rude but I understand that you are not in the mood right now" the same old man appeared again out of nowhere looking at his burning head "but I will get to the point, since you have nothing left to do, you fulfilled your dream and you destroyed it alone, in the world there is no one left alive, impressive by the way, so how about trying to help others fulfill their dream? said with a smile
The old man gave him time to think, he knows what he's trying to do, he knows but he doesn't care, the old man is right, he has nothing to do anymore, so why not?
When the old man saw that the being agreed, he smiled with joy and bowed a little "it will be a pleasure to see the adventures you will have in another world, lady Yuan jun or do you answer to the name of...heavenly demon?"
nasuverse- fuyuki city- end of the holy grail war
Hell.
was the right word.
a white-haired woman walked slowly through what could be hell on earth, the snow-white-skinned woman covered in a white-like coat walks through what had to be the secluded residential area on the outskirts of Miyama city , her appearance and surroundings were poetic, looking like a fairy in hell.
looking back in time before hell fell, the situation of the holy grail war was strange.
they began to doubt when they killed the first Servant and irisviel did not feel her soul enter her, she was the vessel of the holy grail, she was the medium where the souls of the Servants had to go when they died.
when she told kiritsugu, the three of them began to look for a possible cause paying attention to the participants, they thought that someone might have a recipient for the grail more act than herself.
mistake.
they did an investigation of the masters that could be the author, Kotomine Kirei, Tohsaka Tokiomi, Kayneth El-Melloi Archibald, Matou Kiriya, Waver Velvet and Ryuunosuke Uryuu the master of the first Servant killed.
To make sure of this they went to marry lancer's master and see if the servant's soul went to another place than irisviel
In the fight against the lancer master she was intercepted by kirei and killed but saved by Avalon, the sheath of the holy sword Excalibur and with powerful healing magic.
He met with Kiritsugu at the time of the murder of the second Servant Lacer along with his teachers, his soul did not go to Irisviel either, further complicating the matter.
Rider's ambush, which turned out to be berserk, managed to be evaded by irisviel calling saber with a command spell but only irisviel managed to get out alive, maya died before irisviel or saber could do anything at berserk's hands.
That was the beginning of all this madness, the hell she is in now.
She and Kiritsugu parted ways, she and Saber searching for one of Fuyuki's highest magical concentration spots that were possibilities, Mount Enzo at Ryuudou Temple, the outskirts of Miyama City, the Shinto residential area, or the Tohsaka Mansion.
Kiritsugu for his part went to tour the city of Miyama, they devised the plan and part of this required Irisviel to give him the command seals, when she and Saber arrived at the first point, Mount Enzo, Saber had disappeared leaving her alone and meaning that Kiritsugu needed support.
Neither in the cave of Mount Enzo nor in the Ryuudou temple she managed to find anything and Kiritsugu was not answering his phone either so she had to go to the second point alone, the residential area on the outskirts of Miyama city exactly a gigantic warehouse on the edge of the residential area.
The zero point of the catastrophe, the eye of the hurricane.
It took her fifteen minutes to get to the place at full speed and upon entering the warehouse she saw 3 ornate cups, one bronze, one silver and one gold, placed on an altar with a magic circle that occupied the entire room.
She took her time studying the magic circle since it was very extensive, floor, wall and ceiling and finally in its core the cups, when she saw them she knew that they were since she was the same.
They were vessels of the Einzbern family's holy grail and she also knew that they were the vessels from previous wars, the one used in the first war (bronze), the one that didn't activate from the second war (silver) and the one that was destroyed. in the third war (gold).
While she was wondering what those treasures were doing, she looked towards them and saw a black liquid like tar and suddenly.
hell appeared.
The vessels were activated which meant that all the Servants had died, it had only been three or four hours since she separated from Kiritsugu, engulfed by the black liquid she lost consciousness.
waking up and seeing hell, getting up and continuing to watch, the fire and tar expand furiously but they don't get close to her thanks to avalon but quickly spending the little mana she knew she had left.
I look towards where the glasses were, there was no longer any but a black pearl, looking at the color of this one that seemed to swallow all light just like the hole in the sky that threw the black liquid.
stunned by everything, irisviel did not know what to do next but staying in that place was not ideal, she went out and saw hell that suddenly appeared, the houses destroyed, burning or drowning in the tar, the same for the people running terrified from the place alone to be crushed, burned or swallowed by the tar.
She walked and walked, she saw people helping each other, trying to save themselves, the same people abandoned that they helped, mothers abandon their babies or children to save themselves, entire families destroying themselves to try to live.
"What is this place?" the fairy wondered. "This is hell," she assured in her mind.
all dying, except her thanks to Avalon still repelling fire and tar.
and before they knew it, only she was walking, she looked around and found nothing, alone.
"If the grail vessels were activated, it means that knowing...it means that Kiritsugu..."
the eyes are the doors to the soul and the soul of irisviel felt sadness and bitterness
now she was alone.
*sound*
He turned his head towards the distant noise and looked at a boy with red hair and a lost look, walking with the same difficulty as he was breathing.
'someone' thought the albino.
He didn't know what moved it, he ignored the others but not this child, he was the only one left in sight in hell, fighting against it for his survival.
the child fell and she was next to him looking at his eyes totally empty with nothing, she knew that the child would not survive, he was burned and bathed in curses by the tar, he will live if he is given avalon.
before doing anything, the black pearl came out of the pocket in which I keep it and flew directly to the child's forehead, going through it but when it entered completely, it left no trace of injury, the child who was looking at it recovered his calm breath and his complexion stopped being pale.
Seeing that it had a healing effect on the child, she judged that the effect of the pearl was not evil, but she was not convinced.
"Okay, rest and everything will be fine" a weak voice came from her due to exhaustion and the boy saw a golden glow but listening to this he lost all his strength and fell unconscious but not without thinking beforehand.
"His smile is sad"
3 days after the fire - Miyama City Hospital
Calm.
A soft calm, in a hospital room, accompanied by the singing of the birds and the breeze of the wind.
a boy was lying in the hospital bed, unconscious, in the same room was a nurse changing the empty drip and a red-eyed albino.
The child opens his eyes in a moment and looks around, a light-colored wall that does not irritate the eyes and a white ceiling, he looked at his companions and they looked at him too, the nurse said something to the albino that the child did not understand nothing and left the room, her gaze went from the albino to the room in general and she repeated.
The boy sees the albino woman come closer and sit on his bed, look into her eyes and see them sad.
The woman says something but he doesn't understand. When the woman sees this, she puts her hand close to the child's forehead and whispers a few words and a brightness forces him to close his eyes. The child's senses are clear again.
"Do you feel better now?" the woman said in a motherly voice and the boy nods.
"do you recognize me?"
the boy nodded once more, he remembered her, the sad-eyed woman who found himself in the fire, at that moment she had said something to him but he didn't remember it
"I see, let me introduce myself, I'm Irisviel Von Einzbern, and what's your name?"
'my name' the child's thought flew trying to remember who he was since he did not remember anything, in hell in order to survive he had to turn his back on people who were screaming for help, surely his own family were there but he did not remember.
the silence lasted for a while, Irisviel waiting for the answer and the boy trying to remember until a memory came to the surface, the word 'Shirou'
I didn't know if that was his name or someone else's but it was the only thing on my mind
"Shirou" said in a low monotone.
Irisviel looked at him for a moment noticing the lifelessness in his tone, the boy was alone at that moment (just like her), surely he lost a lot in the fire (just like her), a poor child that she saved.
Silence fell, the child and the woman exchanged glances and did not speak, empty eyes with sad ones, in the middle of the exchange a doctor had entered, neither the child nor the woman paid special attention to the last one, both locked in their thoughts until they The woman was struck by what the doctor said.
"-and we didn't find anyone related to the child"
"Excuse me, could I repeat what you said?" Irisviel said suddenly.
"Well... we tried to look for the child's relatives by facial or blood relationship but nothing was found, we also tried to find out the child's identity from the same records but nothing, it's as if the child did not exist" the doctor had said
They looked at the child who was looking at them with dead eyes, Irisviel thought and thought and made a decision, I wait for the doctor to carry out all the procedures without interrupting them and come out, she had something important to tell the little one.
"Do you want to come with me?" Irisviel directly asked Shirou
It didn't make sense to think about it so much just to ask her if she wanted to go with her or not, she understood that she might be taking advantage of the child's current state of mind but... for some reason she didn't want him to stay alone like her and she didn't want the same thing either, just he was using it but would take responsibility for the child.
The little boy looked at her for a while and Irisviel waited patiently for his answer, it was choosing to stay in an orphanage or go with a stranger he met recently. In normal situations, no one would choose the latter, but not the boy Shirou.
*assent*
Irisviel felt a little happy for the child's choice "I'll go prepare everything so that I can adopt you, just wait a while and when you recover we can go" she caressed the child's red hair and went out to prepare everything but stopped at the door and she turned to see Shirou who was following her with his eyes
"By the way, Shirou, I wanted to tell you that I'm a magician" she said briefly before closing the door.
it was time to start everything for little Shirou and Irisviel
time after- einzbern castle
Irisviel had brought Shirou to the castle telling him about the locations of the traps, they would disappear some time later but they were still active.
A week had passed since the fire and four days since she adopted little Shirou, it was a very difficult week for Irisviel from the adoption of the child to the communication with the einzbern that left a bitter taste in the woman's mouth.
She called the fixed number of the mansion that Kiritsugu had suggested installing and they answered, she had informed the old man Jubstacheit of the outcome of the war and the inconveniences they encountered, everything she said to him was received by the old man's silence.
"The objective was not reached, go back to Germany" the old man said simply
"Yeah, I'll come back when I'm done with business in Fuyuki…how…how's illya doing?" Irisviel was worried about the girl.
"The girl is stable, just go back to Germany as quickly as possible, we must secure the container from that place and put it in a safer place together with Avalon"
Irisviel sweated cold, securing the vessel and Avalon meant… she was just a Justeaze class homunculus body and inside her was the vessel, what the old man said meant that she had to die to get the vessel out of her, currently she had Avalon inside her once more taking it back from shirou together this morning.
she made sure that the child was in perfect condition before taking Avalon back after all if they took away the vessel she would die and if they took away avalon she would die, she was just planning to live with a calculated time, her overall life time would not exceed the eleven years
The reason why the old man Jubstacheit wanted her to go to Germany was because of the concern of losing those two treasures, if Irisviel died Illya would be left alone in the hands of the old man Jubstacheit and she did not trust the old man with such responsibility.
He answered "OK" and cut off the call. He couldn't die and leave Illya and Shirou alone, but he couldn't leave Illya in Germany either. Somehow he had to get her back, she-
"Irisviel" called a monotone voice pulling her out of her thoughts.
"y-yes Shirou, what's wrong?" He responded quickly and looked towards the boy, he was holding a small photograph.
"who are they?" he said as he got closer, there was a little curiosity in his voice
the boy handed the photograph to the woman and stood next to Irisviel's seat, she looked at the photograph, it was of Kiritsugu, illya and her in the forest of the einzbern mansion in germany it was taken at her request to take her to japan .
Irisviel contemplated the photo for a few moments "the man in the photo is Kiritsugu" she began to speak with a small smile "he is the man I married and the girl is my... daughter"
Irisviel found herself unable to tear her gaze from the photo, looking at kiritsugu and his daughter, how she met him and how they conceived illya, the happiness she felt holding the baby in her arms and how she found her…wish.
Irisviel was perplexed, because of everything that happened in the war, she forgot why she was fighting, why she tried so hard.
In order for illya not to suffer the fate of becoming the recipient of the holy grail, she knew about the modifications they made to the kiritsugu seed, it was the reason why she did not want to leave illya with the old jubstacheit, she knew that he planned to turn her in the grail vessel if she and Kiritsugu failed.
He looked at Shirou next to him, the boy still had an empty look but compared to when he woke up he spoke more, much more.
"Shirou, where did you find this photograph?"
"I found her in the practice room" he said looking at her.
the boy was curious about magic and when he asked if he could teach him she showed him the fake workshop that Kiritsugu set up, though he had to disable all the traps both magical and non-magical.
"Are you sure you found it there?" that photo did not have to be in that place, she was sure it was in her bedroom
"it was next to the lizard tail"
'It wasn't a lizard tail it was-no that's not the problem now' She looked at the photograph again, looking at illya, her gaze resting on Kiritsugu and she almost felt that he was looking at her, and not at the camera, his slight smile and her warm eyes, eyes only for her and illya.
it was what she needed, her sad eyes disappeared giving way to determination, she had to get illya out of Einzbern's hands and bring her here, she is going to introduce her to her new brother and educate her, pamper her and…and.
Irisviel's mind began to accelerate and everything was observed by the little shirou who was staring at her, impressed by the change in Irisviel's eyes, when he realized shirou's gaze he suddenly lifted him up and sat him on the table in front of her .
it was shirou who found the photograph, it was shirou who gave it to him and thanks to him he knows what to do.
"Shirou" he looked at irisviel and irisviel looked at shirou "Thank you"
an end-to-end grin with all his teeth, red eyes glowing with sheer determination.
Shirou looked at the woman, the sad eyes left, the environment around him changed and especially the smile.
Beautiful.
"You're welcome" a soft response came from the boy, who looked at his lap, Irisviel looked curiously at the boy and noticed a small blush along with a slight smile and laughed.
"what a beautiful child I have" he said
'You were right, it was…beautiful' Shirou thought.
"Of course I was right" a female voice responded to the thought.
to explain the situation it is better to go back a bit, specifically your time in the hospital.
the same day he woke up - miyama city hospital
after waking up Shirou couldn't go back to sleep so he just looked at the window that had a view of the city and the sea, he was silently watching, not thinking about anything but he was interrupted.
"Don't you want to do something more productive?" a female voice said, the boy looked around but no one was there.
"Don't even try, I'm not in your room," said the soft voice, "I'm on your mind."
The boy was just silent for a moment and then he just turned his head back to the window and there was a short silence.
"Hey brat, are you ignoring me?" the voice said irritated.
"yes" he said quickly and directly
"what a cheeky child"
"what do you want?" once again the answer was curt but the voice knew that it was not on purpose
'Don't you want to do something more productive than look out the window?' said the voice. 'Something to get you out of here faster?'
"..." the child no longer answered and remained silent, the voice sensed that it was a signal to continue speaking
"I can give you a little help so that you recover faster and go with the pretty lady"
"..." another silence
"Do you want her or not?" the voice sounded angry.
"Yes" he answered softly.
"Very good and there is no need to talk, think about what you want to say to me, but it is better that I bring you here with me"
As soon as he finished the sentence, Shirou felt himself being pushed unconscious once more.
When he opened his eyes again, he was no longer in the hospital room but in a desert covered in dense fog.
"Now we can talk comfortably" the voice sounded behind Shirou and he turned to see her.
The boy saw a sun, shining brightly and a woman in black clothes with red details that did not reveal any of her skin with a veil that prevented her face and jet black hair from being seen.
"Let's not waste any more time on this child" said the woman crossing her arms under her chest "I am Yuan Jun also called the heavenly demon and I want to take you under my wing"
straight to the point, the woman would take no more time than necessary to start and finish the conversation with the child.
"..." Shirou didn't make a sound and just stared at the woman with his empty eyes.
The woman only looked at the child, looking at the striking eyes, dead or empty of feeling, defined him better, it was to be expected, the woman thought, her soul was destroyed and forced to rebuild itself by the power of the sheath and herself.
while the cover helped to regenerate the child's soul, she put together the parts that came off and before they disappeared, she put them back together, it was a joint effort that resulted in a big soul but with many patches, the next thing was to give it the shape and The pod had the perfect mold.
the scabbard as a mold and her as a stabilizer could give it shape in a short time but that was all they could do, reconstruct it and not recovering its previous shape, strictly speaking it was a new soul, pure as a newborn.
'the price to survive the curses' thought the woman
"And since I won't take no for an answer, that means you're already my student and I'm your teacher," the celestial demon declared brazenly, "what you need right now to fully recover is to fix that body of yours."
as the soul was transformed for its survival and even more with the intervention of the sheath and herself, her body remained unchanged producing an imbalance, there was a limit to the functioning of the sheath but she did not have that limit although she thought it was a waste that she will fix it herself so she thought that shirou himself would do it since it will be more beneficial in the long run.
the little shirou just remained silent as he listened to her and watched
"At least I know I have his attention," he sighed.
"The training method that I will give you is based on breathing and control of your inner energy with forced breathing and movement to your central energy and you will have to circulate it as explained in the method" he said as he approached the child and sat in position lotus.
if someone from the sky demon world listened to the method they would spit out their drinks, forcing the movement of your core energy carries far more dangers than benefits after all the core energy was the one that determined your lifespan forcing it to move would only make it fall. spend.
"Fortunately the child has that pod" the woman thought as she looked at the sun
forcing the movement of his core energy only to be retrieved back by the scabbard would cause the boy's recovery speed to skyrocket and his body assimilate with the soul returning to 'normal'.
"If he manages to recover, he will have an excellent body for the martial arts he needs to learn"
"Come here and sit like me in front of me, I'll tell you exactly what to do," he ordered.
Shirou followed the order and sat in front of her, imitating how to sit, he kept looking at Yuan Jun and thinking about the events.
Was this the magic that Irisviel claimed to know about? Dream control, perhaps?
the woman and the boy sitting face to face, while Yuan Jun spoke, Shirou listened and it took some time until the woman urged Shirou to try the technique.
"If you perform the technique here you will also be using it outside" he had said.
and the boy continued, using the lungs to force the central energy, which was in the heart, to move and guiding this energy through his body as the woman had specified.
from the chest to the head, from the head to the arms, from the arms to the belly, from the belly to the groin, from the groin to the legs and finally from the legs to the chest again and repeat.
it would sound simple if she did not have to cover every vein, muscle or tissue in her body, only in this way the technique would be performed correctly, the woman had said that the energy felt like a liquid on her skin and she had to spend a long time before that I could start to feel it.
since she started the technique she didn't know how much time had passed but so much use of the technique was making her feel warm inside, in her tummy near her navel she felt a comfortable warmth.
He opened his eyes when he began to feel sick but he was not in the desert, he was back in the hospital room, he looked at the window and it was getting dark.
'a dream' thought the boy, confirming that the woman and the desert were just a dream
"boy it was not a dream, instead of looking out the window again you better practice"
Yuan Jun remembered the boy, he was surprised even if he didn't seem so, he sat down and positioned himself correctly to start practicing once again after all it was to get out of here faster.
Present - Einzbern Mansion
It was his teacher who told him what to do to put Irisviel in a better mood but he did not trust her plan "give him the photograph and hope he recovers" is what he had said, he had seen the photo inside the nightstand in the Irisviel's bedroom when she was visiting the mansion on her first day.
His teacher had said that it's good to see all the rooms, he didn't see any point in it, why? He can rest easy knowing only his room and Irisviel's, but when he said that to the teacher, she forced him anyway.
he wondered how he managed to recover just by looking at the photograph.
"He needed the support of those who have already left" is what his teacher said
because? And how does photography help in that?´
´Those who are no longer there and were important to you makes you lose your way when you are alone, your mother just needed a little push to straighten herself up again and photography was good for that´
I didn't understand, it was difficult for little shirou to understand such sentimental topics since he didn't know how to deal with them.
"When you saw her smile, what did you feel?"
I don't know
"try it" he said
'It was...' the boy didn't know how to explain it, Irisviel's smile when he rescued him was so sad and the smile she gave him was the complete opposite, it made him feel strange. 'It was... warm?'
"Try harder," he pressed.
́It was... when I saw his smile and... I remembered the sad smile I saw before and I felt that... ́ What the boy was saying didn't make sense but Jun knew that the boy was trying and it was what he wanted ́ My cheeks got warm and he can't Keep the look
"You were impressed kid and then you felt happiness because you were able to help your mother recover and with the smile she put on you were embarrassed, you better remember those feelings" Yuan Jun said with a soft all proud "Do you want to keep seeing that smile on her? ´
́ yes ́ without delay a little boy answered, between the sad irisviel and the happy irisviel he preferred the happy one many times more.
"To keep the smiles of the people you love, you need to take care of them, to be able to do that, you need to support them at their worst moment without expecting anything in return."
I will do it
"It is not as simple as simply wishing for it, child, many times the problems are greater than what you can face"
"It doesn't matter, I'll protect their smiles"
"Stubborn brat, if you want to protect them even from these difficulties you need strength, you need power," said his teacher calmly. "I can help you with that but you have to try much harder."
a child scarred by smiles, yuan jun thought, would move for them and she has to make sure he doesn't jump to procreate a smile by sacrificing others, they are mistakes you can never forget.
"You'll be an excellent martial artist" but if he has the power it wouldn't matter, saving many by sacrificing a few means nothing if he has the power to save them all, that's what she was aiming for and what Shirou is aiming for but he also has to understand that people can only grow or learn if you leave them alone.
It is difficult but necessary.
"Your body and soul are already in balance so I can give you the following training method and let me warn you it will be very hard for a child"
"I'm ready sensei"
"Ehw, don't call me that, call me teacher, go outside to the woods and we'll start your training there."
einzbern mansion - forest
"We have to get your body in shape so that it can store a greater amount of qi and of a better quality, so you will have to exercise," the teacher concluded.
Various exercise methods began to appear in the little shirou's mind, some simple, others more complex.
"divine iron body?" his mind went directly to the name of the method.
"That's a method I found in the Mount Hua sect. It's too old, so texts were lost, but I recreated it and improved it to suit you."
The method consists of hardening the user's body through continuous internal blow, rather, exploiting its interior to improve its exterior, it was a method that could only be defined as hellish or brutal.
it destroys the practitioner's organs with an explosion of energy that hit its surroundings and improved the interior and exterior of the body, it was a method that prioritizes the hardening of the organs and bones than the exterior of the body such as the skin.
"We won't use this method yet since you don't have qi but to prepare for that you will have to use this" Some training methods popped into the shirou's mind
´White Dragon Technique: White Iron Bones´, ´Red Hare Technique: Compact Muscles´ and ´Taichi Technique: Eternal Fairy´
"These are techniques of my creation, they are perfect to start practicing martial arts and they are extremely safe compared to the divine iron body technique," the woman began to explain. "The white dragon technique is to improve the practitioner's bones with help of the muscles, the disadvantage is that the practitioner's muscles become gigantic but it is fixed with the technique of the red hare that uses the flexibility of the practitioner's body and the Taichi technique is to improve that flexibility and rest the muscles´
they were a perfect set of methods that maximized training, creating the strongest person in their world.
"why not make them a single technique?" Shirou said a question out of curiosity.
"The principle of each technique is different, it's like the flavors of food, if you have 3 dishes in front of you and you try them individually it has a definite flavor but it has a different flavor when you eat them at the same time" the woman patiently answered
"How long am I practicing this?"
"It depends, it can be only today or in a week or in a year, the training depends on the practitioner's own talent and perseverance, it only begins and you will finish once you are satisfied"
one week later - einzbern manor - studio
maybe she skipped a few steps in her plans.
Irisviel after achieving the determination to rescue her daughter began to plan how to do it, the first thing she devised was to maintain a fort, a safe place when the Einzbern homunculi come for her since she never left Fuyuki and the castle itself fulfilled that well. function.
The castle's defenses had magical and non-magical remote activation spells and traps, mines, spiked holes, elemental spells, hypnotic limit fields, intruder warning, electrical rejection, and many more, but Irisviel knew that those defenses would only buy time. .
the second is support, contact with mercenaries that Kiritsugu had some confidence in but none agreed to protect her so the best she could get was a local force.
the Japanese mafia, the yakuza.
She had knowledge of the Fujimura family from Kiritsugu's investigations of the local forces to be considered apart from the magical ones and the most powerful and leader of all the others was this family.
She met with its leader and with the money from Kiritsugu's bank accounts and the weapons in the mansion's warehouse as payment, they agreed to protect her, although she had to hypnotize them a bit so that she didn't ask too much why she needed the protection, but that's it. he had allies.
having the first and second steps ready, he proceeded to the third.
She had a stronghold and staff in this first one heavily armed, pistols, machine guns, rpgs, all variants of grenades and secondary weapons like knives and katanas and magic-enhanced clothing, missing only herself.
He had to get the skills to not only defend himself but also attack but he could not take the Fujimuras, much less Shirou to Germany, he began to practice his marksmanship to be able to use the representative weapon of the magus killer, the thompson contender. A few calls later I also had the books written by Kiritsugu on boundary fields that I keep in the Japanese mansion in Miyama.
I had all that but I knew it wouldn't be enough and I didn't have the time before I started being attacked, *sigh* I had a lot to do.
"Irisviel take a break" a childish voice was heard when they opened the door.
shirou entered the room with a set of tea cups and sweet snacks.
"aaahh~~ my little angel is worried about me" her voice came out with a childish tone, she got up to help shirou, while she was busy making her plans she did not pay attention to what shirou was doing and when the fujimuras began to reside in the mansion informed him that the boy was training and practicing cooking.
When Irisviel asked him why he was training, he only told him 'it's because I want to protect you', the child fainted when he couldn't breathe because of the hug that Irisviel gave him, preventing him from breathing through her breasts 'kiaaaa, my angel wants to protect meeee'
after that she allowed shirou to continue training, it seemed kind of cute on his part, she didn't spend much time with him with everything she had to prepare but according to what the fujimuras men tell her the boy was improving in terms of his condition mentally, she began to talk more with the fujimuras and began to practice her food too, each success went directly to her and they created a tea time for shirou, he prepared tea and some sweets to spend time with her.
"What is it this time?" he asked shirou happily
her gaze went to his eyes, they weren't so empty anymore but they still weren't those of a normal child, maybe he would recover faster if he spent time with him but she didn't have that time either.
"They showed me how to make some cannoli so I tried it, I also made the cake that you like and some colored macaroons that Takeo-san taught me"
"How beautiful I feel sorry to eat it" the tray of sweets was very nice to see but she did not delay in trying what her little angel prepared for her.
the sweets were delicious but nothing special but impressive that a child managed to prepare them so well, a comfortable silence fell while irisviel ate the sweets and drank her tea.
"irisviel" called shirou and he stopped eating and paid attention to him "can you teach me magic?"
Irisviel knew that this moment would come, since she told her that she was a magician in the hospital, it was only a matter of time until Shirou would ask her about magecraft.
"I'm sorry Shirou but I can't teach you" he said softly.
"because?"
"Being a magician, shirou, means walking with death, it's a dangerous profession and I don't want you to put yourself in danger" he explained, his heart was not prepared to teach shirou the profession "besides we don't know if you are capable of using magecraft "
"Can't we find out? If I can do magic, could you teach me?" Shirou insisted.
Irisviel didn't want to, she could simply tell him 'no and the conversation is over' but she didn't want to act that way with Shirou, what he needed now was affection and pampering to recover, not cold and forceful answers.
*to sigh*
"Very well, let's do that" he said relenting "but if we don't find something stop asking" he said firmly, the chances that shirou had the talent to perform magecraft were very low.
Shirou quickly nodded, if he didn't have talent as a magician, why would he insist? He would spend his time training in what he was capable of doing.
like martial arts.
"Follow me, to find out I have to prepare some things" he said getting up from his seat and eating one last sweet macaron
she wishes shirou didn't have the talent to be a magician
einzbern mansion - magic workshop
Irisviel had brought Shirou to the real workshop where the valuables that she and Kiritsugu had brought from Germany were, including enough materials for the ritual to find out the magic circuits.
"Shirou, take off your shirt and drink this concoction, it will make you not feel so much pain or discomfort that I see your circuits"
"circuits?"
"it's the organs that allow a mage to gather, filter and produce magical energy, the magical energy you produce within yourself is called od and the magical energy from the environment is called mana, the latter is toxic to magicians if not they take their time to purify it in od" I explain while putting some kind of ointment on the child's back.
'did shirou grow?' irisviel thought as she applied the cream to shirou, she took him to the hospital at that moment and thought he was smaller but this is not the time to think about that.
"Shirou, sit in the magic circle and wait a moment, I'll let you know when we'll start" he said as he finished putting the ointment on him and went to the glass cabinet and put away everything he used.
"This is all to see if I have magic circuits or not?" so many things to find out that, how complicated
"It is not only to find out if you have them or not, it is also to see their quality, your element and your origin, seeing all that exerts great pressure on the body and soul of the person, that is why the concoction and the cream" he explained. calmly "I'm going to start shirou get ready and tell me if you feel anything" he said and saw that the boy nodded
Irisviel began to apply magical energy to the magic circle activating it, the letters written on the circle began to glow and Irisviel entered the circle, positioning herself on Shirou's back and placing her hands on him.
First he started looking for any hint of circuits and to his dissatisfaction he found them, he started counting them and there were 32 in all, an above average 20 magic circuits.
Such a number of circuits could only be achieved in old, well-established families, which gave way to the suspicion that Shirou was a descendant of a magician's house, which would explain why he had no records, his family was hiding illegally in the Tohsakas' territory.
he quickly went on to measure the quality of shirou's circuits and they were of very good quality, that means that with enough training the magical energy units could go into the hundreds but currently he only had access to 10 magical units per circuit with almost 320 units being the maximum that he could currently release.
he wanted Shirou to have no talent for magecraft but he only got a kick in the butt, his son surely had better talent than the children of many well established families on the mainland.
Irisviel just wanted to cry but now she had to find out her element and origin.
The albino could only swallow the bitter pill and tried to see the element and origin of the child but when she found out she could only swallow a more bitter pill, she began to sweat cold from what she was seeing.
incarnation.
his son was an incarnation.
not only was he a possible orphaned son of a hidden wizarding family who had enormous talent but he was also an incarnation, was his son so unlucky, the former might give him big trouble with the wizarding association and the owner of the land, the second would win the desire of the nobles of the continent to get their hands on his child and the third would make him in a workshop where they study the parts of his shirou.
finishing the ritual and deactivating the magic circle, irisviel practically fell exhausted and raised her hands to her face, frustration, she didn't want to teach shirou magic but with her circumstances that would only make her easy prey for any magician.
"I have no choice but to teach him" he thought, that would take time, time he doesn't have
His original plans were for her to learn to defend herself and attack in one or two years and she would go to rescue illya since the information with which she was created was not enough, she knew that in that time it would not be possible to learn everything but she did not want to leave illya either. with the old jubstacheit so long.
"irisviel" a voice took her out of her thoughts, she looked at Shirou and was looking at her with concern "are you okay?, did something go wrong?"
Her little angel was only worried about her, she had to calm down, she was worrying Shirou.
"n-no, nothing bad happened, you just... you have a talent for magecraft shirou" she said and before the boy could say anything she continued "you just have too much, I told you that being a magician is walking with death, magicians are hypocritical people who would sacrifice anything to fulfill what they want, they are dangerous and very envious people" he explained with a soft voice as he grabbed shirou in a hug
"You have 32 high-quality magic circuits and an identical element and origin, that makes you something very precious to magicians either as a baby farm or as a test subject" he explained while caressing Shirou's red hair delicately
"I'm forced to teach you magic, that's the only way you can defend yourself, but we don't have time, I don't have time, Shirou"
"Time? Are you sick?" asked shirou
how she explained to a child with psychological problems that she was a homunculus, recipient of the holy grail, with a limited life expectancy
"It's complicated to explain...it's my body...I just want you to know that I have a short time to live and thanks to a magical treasure I can last a few more years"
the two were in a hug, although only irisviel had her arms around shirou and he had them close to his body, it was an uncomfortable hug but at the same time comfortable, with shirou's head on irisviel's chest and the head of the girl. woman leaning on shirou's.
'Do you want to help her?'
the teacher decided that it was time to talk to the boy
' that I have to do?' direct and without hesitation shirou replied
'Don't you listen to what I'm saying? What were the techniques I gave you for?'
lightning.
Shirou understood, Irisviel's problem could be solved with the martial arts that his teacher had taught him.
"I can help you" Shirou said as he got out of the hug and looked at her
Irisviel was heartbroken to see shirou so willing to help her but he couldn't give her the illusion that he could, only the einzbern had the ability to fix her, other family members with homunculus research couldn't do anything thanks to the kind of homunculus he is.
"thanks shirou but no-"
"If you can give me a chance I can prove it" Shirou insisted
"... shirou" irisviel wanted to cry again, looking at shirou she saw everything that had changed in such a short time, from being an empty child to caring for people, for her.
Shirou began to despair when he saw irisviel start to cry, his chest hurt and he didn't want to feel it anymore, he was thinking about how to help her, he how to convince her but he couldn't while the albino was crying.
"child let your teacher take care of this" his teacher spoke to him and managed to calm the child "all you have to do is hug her and tightly"
without hesitating for a second, little shirou rushed to hug irisviel and caused her to start crying but from one moment to the next they were no longer in her workshop.
they were in a desert with dense fog.
when irisviel realized she got up with shirou in her arms still hugging her tightly, the albino was worried since they suddenly appeared in the place and protecting shirou with her own hug she looked around until a voice appeared.
"Calm down, nothing will happen to you"
Irisviel quickly turned her body to face the voice, seeing a black-haired woman with a veil covering her face.
"who are you?" a cold voice came from the albino as she looked at the woman
"Someone who doesn't want to hurt you but quite the opposite" the woman said as she approached but stopping at a healthy distance from Irisviel "you won't recognize me in this form but you already know me"
for a moment only silence was heard while irisviel looked at the black-haired woman and her veil taking a few steps back until Shirou spoke in her arms.
"She wants to help you, trust her" her voice came out muffled since everyone had her head between Irisviel's breasts as she hugged her
"...who are you?" Irisviel once again asked but with a calmer voice but no less authoritative.
"I'm the black pearl you found" the black-haired woman began to explain "right now I'm playing the role of teacher for that little one in your arms"
the look went from the woman to the child in her arms "is that true shirou?" I ask with a soft voice and he nodded without taking off
"Shirou asked me to help you with your problem and I wonder if you are willing to listen to her" calmly explained the boy's teacher
Irisviel taking her time to answer, changing her gaze from the black-haired girl to the redhead in her arms until she finally answered.
"I will listen"
it was progress.
Irisviel spent her time listening to what her son's teacher called, she heard that the woman was from another world, one of martial arts and how the latter can help her recover in the middle of the explanation, Shirou stopped hugging her so tightly and also looked at the black-haired
Once identified as Yuan Jun finished speaking, the time for questions began.
"where we are?" It was the first thing the albino asked
"in shirou's mental space"
*silence*
*sigh*
"Will those martial arts really help me?" the albino asked the black-haired woman
"I can assure you, with the correct method and the pod inside you, you can easily recover"
"...well, what do I have to do?" she asked as she accommodated shirou who was still hugging her, the albino chuckled since it seemed that shirou was a small koala.
It was a brief but detailed explanation, the black-haired woman was giving her the same technique with which Shirou recovered in the Miyama hospital, only with a different circulation of energy, what Irisviel needed was for her body to recover and not to balance with his soul.
"Once you go out you have to start practicing, you can ask the child to supervise you since he understands the technique very well" explained the teacher.
"...thank you" was an awkward but genuine thank you
"On the contrary, thanks to you for believing in me"
"I mistrusted you due to the circumstances but... my instinct tells me that you are not dangerous to us" said the albino
A chuckle came from the black-haired woman, she said goodbye and walked further into the mist.
In a blink of an eye, Irisviel and Shirou were no longer in the desert and back in their workshop. An awkward silence filled the room and the best Irisviel could do was talk to the little koala that was hanging from it.
"Is it thanks to her that you were training outside?" said curiously
the boy just nodded while looking at her.
"hehehe~~ my cute boy was being serious about protecting me" her childish voice came out of her and brought a small smile to shirou "we better get into action we have a lot to do"
and the little one nodded again
Miyama City - Matou Residence
In the depth of the matou's house, in the matou's dungeon a disgusting sound sounded, like chewing meat with an open mouth but the cause of the sound was something even more disgusting.
worms.
The phallic worms were swimming in a pool full of them and in the midst of the disgust was a girl being sullied by them while being watched by an old man.
matou souken.
"Kariya failed to get the grail and it disappeared after the fire" the old man was just thinking aloud "there is no point in continuing with this"
The girl did not make a single noise while she listened to the old man speak and the worms raped her, the old man more than once in these weeks came to tell her that.
that she was being raped for nothing.
"I wanted to get the body of the recipient of this war but he not only survived but hid in his mansion and did not return to Germany"
"..."
"but it would be lucky if someone manages to get her out of her mousetrap and thus can capture her" the old man's voice bled with sarcasm "perhaps he would even free a poor girl who is not even fit to be raped"
"..."
"just lose all hope girl" said the old matou before leaving the girl alone in the pool of worms
the girl believed that her father would save her and it was not like that, she believed that her uncle kariya would save her and it was not like that, now she only hoped to find a new hope to cling to and keep her sanity while the worms do what they wanted with the body of the little one, from her two lower orifices to her mouth and sullying every place through which they will pass.
A long time ago the girl died.
Tohsaka Sakura was no more.
there was only the broken Matou Sakura.
The little girl had many thoughts of ending her own life but even that was not in her control, the worms inside her prevented any suicide attempt.
Sakura just wanted to die.
Miyama City - Tohsaka Residence
It was beautiful how life disappeared and gave way to death.
For kotomine kirei the natural law of life and death in suffering was simply beautiful, while searching for a meaning for it in his training in the grail he found that hobby.
The pleasure of killing his master and having his wife blame someone else was sublime, a cycle of suffering only ameliorated by learning that the wife was not dead but mentally challenged.
now the chances of her finding out that he was the one who planned everything were the same as her recovering her speech. Seeing that the wife of the deceased was not in a condition to support her family, the responsibility fell on the student of the head of the family who turned out to be kirei.
He died but rose again, took over the family and assets of the man he murdered, and had the company of the most powerful Servant in exchange for the lives of some poor orphaned children the church took in.
indeed the ways of God are mysterious.
"hey shoddy priest" and there goes his afternoon wallowing in his fortune
"what do you need little girl?" under his gaze a girl with black hair in pigtails in a red skirt and white shirt with a book in her hand
"I want you to explain this to me"
Unfortunately, with the arrival of benefits, responsibilities also came, and in Tokiomi's will it said that Kirei will be in charge of the magical training of his eldest daughter.
God's ways are mysterious.
? - desert
If they think that the celestial demon was still doing nothing, then they would be very wrong, the woman would never waste her valuable time on something non-productive.
so what was he doing?
Little Shirou's soul in Avalon's absence was falling apart, the woman's job was to keep the boy's soul together until he went through his awakening.
All martial artists must go through awakening, it is the process in which the qi is concentrated in one place, the core of a person, the dantian.
this awakening will change both the body and the soul of the martial artist giving way to unlimited power in due time, the awakening process was rare, only one of thousands of martial artists achieved it and it is because many times the body is strong enough capable of storing qi in an ideal way, granting even better control of energy.
the simple-minded disdain the awakening of the dantian but they do not understand its benefits, she knows it and any sect that awakens as well, because of that awakening the 7 great sects existed.
The dantian allows transformation, enlightenment and tribulations, that's why practitioners without dantian don't reach the power and longevity of those who do and once Shirou goes through that the real training begins.
she who rose from the trash of their society would make shirou stand out, she was the one envied by heaven, she was the celestial demon and she will make sure shirou is recognized as her after all.
the boy dreamed of a world of genuine smiles.
I hope and you like my attempt at a story, as in the previous one I apologize for some grammatical error, it is the translator betraying me.
izuru kamakura says goodbye.