Yo Friends of fanfiction I'm back with a rewrite of betrayal from the heart. now why? Well it's one of my most popular fanfics and it one of my favorites too plus I thought I could do better with a Ash betrayal type story so here it is.
Enjoy R&R
I don't pokemon or anything I reference.
Ages
Ash: 16
Brock: 19
Paul: 16
Gary: 17
Max: 11
May: 15
Dawn: 14
Misty: 17
Clemont: 17
Serena: 16
"GRENINJA WATER SHURIKEN" Called out a voice of an young man standing on field in the middle of a stadium with at least two thousand people in the stands and thousands more watching from home this was the biggest pokemon event of the year the league championship and it was down to two pokemon A unique Greninja and a mega Charizard.
On the left stood A young man in his teenage years with wild black hair covered by a red cap with a semi pokeball on it. He wore a blue track suit top with bit's of white at the bottom and by the zipper, underneath the blue top was a plain black T-shirt which paired nicely with his light gray pant's that stretched to his ankles covered by red sneakers.
This was Ash Ketchum!
On the right stood a slightly older male with darker black hair but his was much more tame, he had a light blue fluffy scarf wrapped around his neck and on his torso he reped a black unzipped winter coat with a dark blue shirt inside plus an extra white one underneath the blue. For pants he wore black cargo pants and for shoes slick black boots.
This was Alain!
"CHARIZARD FIRE BLAST" The cross shaped fire move and the shuriken base water attack collided.
The fire and water formed a ball of mist.
Both pokemon and trainer was tired both sides panting but smiling both corners knowing the next attack could easily be the last.
Charizard staggered but still stood tall from a first glace it looked like Greninja was fine too but then...
"Gren" The water pokemon mumbled "ninja..." he fell changing back to normal knocked out.
Ash fell down from the break of the sync "Damn" he cursed and winced.
But he got up and smiled and walked over to his fallen pokemon and picked him up.
"Gren" Greninja said to his trainer defeated.
"Don't say your sorry you did your best out there."
In the stands
"Woo I can't believe Ash lost" Clemont said as he fell into his seat since he stood up to cheer for Ash.
"I can't believe he lost again..." Serena mumbled under her breath disappointed in her crush.
In pewter city
"ALRIGHT ASH SECOND PLACE!" A tanned man spring up from his seat which made his family look at him funny "Damn Good Ash, You did damn good"
In cerulean city
"NO WAY I THOUGHT HE WAS ACTUALLY GOING TO FINALLY WIN ONE!" An orange haired tomboy yelled at the tv.
In petalburg city
"ASH LOSSED" A Glasses wearing boy exclaimed.
"I thought he had it too, poor Ash" a Girl in red said with a sad face.
In twinleaf town
"HOW DID HE LOSE AGAIN" a beanie wearing girl said with disappointment.
At the indigo plateau
"Hmph second place huh not bad, I might have to step it up too."
At pallet town
"GRAMPS Ash got second place!" Yelled a boy named Gary oak.
"Amazing he surprises me every time" The old pokemon professor said.
At ?
"HMMM That boy has potential" the ominous figure took a sip of his wine "But not right now..."
"Good battle Alain" Ash called out with his pokemon on his shoulder "You were great out there"
"Thanks Ash, You were great too" Alain put his hand out for a handshake Ash gladly accepted.
The two were moved to a stage and were presented awards.
"For the runner up a medal" Professor sycamore put a ribbon with a gold medal daggling down around Ash's neck.
"And for the new league champion" He paused and pulled out a beautiful trophy "This cup that proves that you are the champion" he gave it to Alain.
"Everyone Champion Alain!" The professor yelled into a microphone.
Alain trusted the trophy into the air as the crowd applauded including Ash.
After the event was finally over Ash meet back up with his friends.
"HEY IS THAT THE GUY WHO GOT SECOND PLACE IN THE LEAGUE" Clemont called out with a smile proud of his friend.
Ash jokey bowed "Thanks Clemont"
"You did super well Ash" Clemont's little sister Bonnie congratulated her older friend.
"Thanks Bonnie" he replayed and messed up her hair.
"You didn't win.." Serena muttered crossing her arms.
"No I didn't" Ash began as he walked up to his female friend "But it's not always about winning, and I learned a lot from that battle!"
Serena whispered something to herself that no one else heard.
The gang went back to the pokemon center to heal up Ash's pokemon.
As our hero was talking to some trainer nurse Joy called out to him "Ash Ketchum you have a call!"
"Wonder who that could be" He thought to himself he waved to the trainer and rushed to the phone.
The video phone was blurry for a second but settled to show the face of Brock.
"Hey mister runner up how you doing!?"with a smile on his face he greeted his best friend.
"Yo Brocko, I'm doing pretty good. yourself?"
"Pretty good, pretty good bud" the two just smiled at each other they have known one another for years now see them grow in there own ways.
"So! Why did you call? Not that I mind" Ash asked.
"Well I was thinking that we get all our friends together to celebrate your achievement." Brock replayed "So what do you think?"
"I like it!" The younger boy exclaimed with excitement "When and where?"
"I was Thinking my place, Weeks time" The older male suggested.
"I'm down!"
"Alright!"
"Anyone particular you want too invite that I might miss?" Brock asked.
"MHmmmm" As he thought a purple haired rival entered his mind "Paul..."
"Paul?"
"I want to see how he's doing."
"Alright Paul's on the list. See you in a week bro. bye"
"Yeah bye"
The phone went black as the call was over.
"Who was that?" Asked Clemont as he put his backpack on.
"Oh it was old friend Brock" He replayed and put his pack on "He's throwing a party for me, so I got to get back to kanto in a week"
"I see" The blond boy seemed a little sad.
"Hey" Ash put his hand on his friends shoulder "Why don't you come with me?"
"Me?"
"Yeah why not? Serena and bonnie can come too" Our hero smiled "And I can introduce you guys to all my other friends"
"That'd be great!" Clemont to smiled "Lets go ask the girls."
The girls in question were outside the center waiting for there male friends.
"Hey Serena" Ash called out which made her turn towards him "What do think about a party?"
"Party?"
"Yeah my old friends are throwing me a party and I thought why don't I invite you two."
"I'm down! I love a good party" Serena got excited.
"Clemont someone has to go back to the gym, now that the league is over" Bonnie pointed out to her big brother.
"Oh that's right" The boy in glasses got a little sad again.
"Don't worry bro I'll cover for you!" The youngest of the group yelled.
"What?" her brother asked.
"You clearly want to go so go I highly doubt anyone will challenge it anyway"
"Thanks Bonnie" He smiled "I'll call dad he'll take you back home" Clemont walked off to call his father.
"That was very mature Bonnie" Serena pointed out proud of the younger girl.
"Heheh"
The siblings dad picked up the girl and the rest of the group made there way to the airport.
Two days later The gang landed in Saffron City but it was still a bit of a journey to pewter city so they set out with pewter on there mind
Four days later at pewter gym.
The gang just arrived and rushed to the city gym.
Inside the gym the host was making sure that everyone was here.
"Is that everyone?" Brock scanned the room looking for anyone missing.
"Uh that Paul guy isn't here" Max said.
Right after he said that the door flung open reveal a purple haired male.
This new comer was panting gripping his knees "Di-Did I make it?"
"Just in time" Brock walked up him.
"Good"
Knock knock!
"That must be him!" Gary Ash's oldest friend exclaimed.
"HIDE!"
They all got into positions as the door opened.
"Oh it's unlocked" Ash and his friends walked into a dark room.
"Guys?"
The lights flicked on and everyone got out of there hiding stops and yelled "SURPRISE" Well not Paul but he did jump up to hope to surprise his rival.
The gang was shocked you a second but shook it off.
"There you all are!" Ash smiled.
after everyone said hey and interduce themselves Ash, Paul and Gary were talking.
"How have you been Paul?"
"Not bad Ash, I entered the kanto league and got second"
"Heheh I know how second feels" Ash laughed.
Gary couldn't help but notice everyone on the other side of the home was whispering about something.
"Yo Ashy boy."
"Hm what's up Gary?"
The spiky haired boy just pointed at the other side of the house and said "What are they whispering about?"
"dunno..."
examining the group a bit more it seemed that there was a disagreement between them.
They noticed that Paul and the other were looking at them they called Ash over.
"What's up?" Ash asked his friends.
"Ash we need to talk" Serena said very serious.
"O-ok" Our hero stuttered.
There was a pause
A long pause
It was as if what they wanted to say was the hardest thing to say well not for the one that felt the strongest about this his first traveling companion.
"You should give up on being a pokemon master!" Misty finally spoke up.
Ash just started laughing thinking it was joke "That's a good one! hahah!"
No one else laughed he looked around at his friends all most had serious faces May looked a little sad though.
"You don't really do your mother proud. do you?" Dawn blankly said with no remorse.
"WHAT'S THIS ABOUT!?" Paul walked into the conversion and was not happy with what he was hearing.
"It's pretty clear isn't" Serena cockily said.
"SHUT THE HELL UP!" The purple haired rival once again out burst.
"What's going on over here?" Gary now was on the scene.
"THIS BITCH'S ARE SPITTING LIES!"
"Lies?" Brock and Clemont both came out of the kitchen into this.
Paul was pissed "GO ON SAY IT AGAIN!"
It seemed the room had too sides, Ash's side which had Paul, Gary, Brock and it seemed Clemont was also on his side there might be someone else too but it wasn't clear.
Than the other side was Misty, Dawn, Serena, it seemed Tracey was on this side too and Cilan. Iris Ash's other unova friend couldn't make it so who knows which side she's on
"Fine, I will" Misty began "I've traveled with Ash first and through the six years I've know him he's never once won the league. Face it he's just a bad trainer!"
"He starts over every time If he was really about it he'd use some of his actually good pokemon." Dawn added.
"He definitely Hasn't made his mother proud" Tracey blankly said.
"DAMN YOU! BRING UP HIS MOTHER!" Now Brock was mad.
"Yeah that's low" Gray looked down in sorrow.
Ash's mom Delia died while he was in Kalos and it hit him hard since it was the only real family he knew.
"ASH IS THE OPPOSITE OF A BAD TRAINER!" Paul yelled "HE HAS HEART HE MADE ME THE TRAINER NO THE MAN I AM TODAY! SO IF YOU'RE TALKING SHIT ABOUT HIM THEN YOUR TALKING SHIT ABOUT ME."
It was just an onslaught of yelling while Ash just stood there with his head down and his hat covering his eyes.
As the two sides fought they started hearing laughter, they turned around and it was Ash cackling like a mad man.
"You ha you guys make me laugh" Ash spit out holding back laughter as he talked.
He just laughed and laughed Misty was getting mad "WHAT'S SO FUNNY HUH?!"
"You say ha I'm the disappointment HAHAHAH YOU'RE ALL DISAPPOINTING ME RIGHT NOW!"
"GRRRR BASTARD!" Misty cursed with gritted teeth.
"Now If you could leave me alone that'd BE GREAT!" Ash ran off.
"Ash wait" Gary and Brock called out at the same time, And they ran after him.
"I'm coming too" Paul ran off as well ignoring everyone.
Clemont shook his head at the other side, wanting to chase after Ash too, but he had to get back home, so he left to get to the airport, hoping that he others can handle Ash.
Gary saw Ash run into the woods so the trio rushed in after him.
"HAHAHAH want a battle?!" A random trainer jumped out of a bush.
"Not really kinda of a bad time" Gary said trying to get past him.
"Come on lets battle!"
Paul sighed "GO! I'll deal with this dumbass"
"Got it!" Brock and Gary ran past but it wasn't long before they were stopped again this time Brock took the trainer on and Gary went on to find Ash sitting down flipping a knife that Gary knew.
It was a memento from his late mother.
"There you are Ash" Gary let about a sigh but formed a smile.
The raven haired boy said nothing.
Gary walked up to his broken friend and caught the knife when he threw it up "Look Ash I know I hurts but it will make you stronger."
"Sure..." Ash mumbled "Can I have my knife back now?"
Gary gave it back to the broken boy.
"I'm leaving" Ash stood up and gripped a pokeball with a flying type in it "But I'm sure we'll meet again."
"Ash! Paul, Brock and I are on your side!"
"I know..." he flew off.
"Oh Ash..."
Well that was chapter 1 of betrayal from the heart rewritten. I hope you enjoyed it friends. Now you probably noticed but I'm just putting these rewrites in the original bfth because I want people to know this was what I wanted it to be from the start. Well see yea friends of fanfiction.