At first I want to thank the people that were disappointed how it turned out, to still be polite when they wrote their Review. I had a few Reviews from guests in the past about "What bullshit" "Disgusting development so you can wank off" and other things.
It seems like what I wrote created a misunderstanding.
Freya isn´t dead, the goddess part of her is dead.
In the scene where a half of her bodies were shattered, when Bell hugged them, he pushed the halves together without noticing it.
Since what makes her immortal is gone and she wants to be free, she only uses the name Syr. But the two halves of her personality have mixed into one, she is no longer disturbed by herself.
You will see what I mean in the next chapters.
Also I want to apologize, there is a part that I forgot to write, an important part. I will add it to the chapter, but also write it here so that people see immediatelly what it is.
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When Syr opened her eyes slightly to look at Ottar, they looked normal to him, like Syr´s eyes ever did. Her hair though had changed a bit, it was slightly more silvery than grey, like a mixture of Syr´s and Freya´s haircolor.
What Ottar couldn´t see...or rather only Bell could see, Syr´s eyes had changed.
Others would only see the grey eyes that Syr had. For Bell, there were a few fine sprinkles of purple in them.
This was the woman he loved. Not only Syr. Not only Freya. Both, he loved both and both had become one. Were one ever since, but now separated no longer.
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I´m sorry for forgetting to write something so important.
About the "sealed Falna". The former Freya familia members still have their strength and experience, they just need a new blessing of another god.
Then why didn´t I go the way to let Bell live his full life and go to heaven with Freya afterwards? Why not letting him become divine to live with her forever?
Because one of my short stories will have a similar end like this and I didn´t want two stories to end in nearly the same way. I won´t say which one, but his partner there is obviously a goddess.
