You probably weren't expecting to see me again after I hadn't touched this story in two years
I guess you can say that I was being a slacker and I wanted to try something new, this of course means that any future references made are going to be reformatted into this new version of the story
You won't see it on of course, but you just might find it on AO3 because there are nicer people on there
If there's one thing we can both agree on, I've abandoned this story. Don't be disappointed, be glad that you got to read the most of it even if I didn't get to show off my ideas for what I wanted to show
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For old time's sake, let me tell what I had in mind:
- The next chapter was about Rhodes and a Komodo Unit squad that act like members of the G.I Joe from the "A Real American Hero" series are sent out to the jungles to take on the Dragon Marauders as well as finally meet the Infernal Jackal himself; but this of course was during a time when Mikekolt was apart of the Owl Gut Tribe rather than the Audibaurjek as I had now cemented a place for him there. Mikekolt and Rhodes are one in the same by the way. They would then fight off in a city crawling with bioweapons that was first teased when Mikekolt saw it in the distance, of course he would be forced to go on without his comrades but they would return as they fought them all off; they would appear one last time before Rhodes fell off the bridge in the forest and down into a chasm. That's when he made his escape
- There's a scene where Mikekolt would disarm bombs placed throughout the city and then a chase scene which leads him across the rooftops all the way to the Spider-Man 3 styled construction site where he would meet the Komodo Unit's power suits used by the heavy gunners. He would fight Grashunov there and become wounded, but not before he fooled them into thinking he was flying away as it's revealed to be a diversion; the wounded Mikekolt would then make his way through the backalley and over a fence where he could escape in a car with Lucitreuz and Queen
- Hervatlock would be rescued and there would be an introduction to the "Komodo Opticflectors" who wore suits were undetectable by both night and thermal vision
- They continue their mission from there on after some major roadblocks, Jackalope is revealed to be Viggo Grimborn and Adamel is killed after taking the hit for Mikekolt
- He returns to the Komodo Airships and rescues Dr. Cilian
- He fights Zero for the second time and defeats him, joining him as he's offered help elsewhere so no one can hurt him again
- Lt. Bostonswelter meets his demise on the elevator to the Silos while Mikekolt cannot stop the missile from launching, his squad takes care of that part as they sacrifice themselves
- Mikekolt and Grashunov face off against each other one last time before he's killed as he falls into a coffin that closes on him, cutting down the flag to the Komodo Unit as it drapes over him like a fallen President that passed away would
- Mikekolt removes his tattoos and strips everything that reminds him of Breyerkolt, as he believed he betrayed everything he stood for when he made his sacrifice
- The ending shows Mikekolt back at the Barbaric Archipelago and at home, as Hervatlock is well and there are no traces of Lucitreuz as a genetically engineered vampire like him could not have been killed
- Grashunov's warning about the Warlords, however, is heeded because they are the corruption in the Archipelago that needs to be destroyed
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I even had plans for a third story called "Fate of the Komodo Unit: Out of the Shadows" where Mikekolt returns to the Paraliujiaduntwa Gulf to rid the Komodo Remnant presence by the Komodo Remnant High-Rank Leaders such as Ceres (Cyan) who deals in Chemical and Genetic Engineering, Jupiter (Yellow) who deals in Weather Manipulation, Minerva (Indigo) who deals in Pyschic Ops and Vulcan (Orange) who deals in Mechanical Ops
Henric, who is revealed to be Sin Tzu, is the main antagonist and this story deals with Mikekolt whose recovery to injuries is not progressing as fast as it should be; which is frightening him with the prospect of death after being assaulted
They do come to blows on top of a train, Mikekolt discovers a machine is suppressing his healing recovery to injuries as part of a super soldier serum that he drank and clinically dies before the medic resusitates him
He even becomes a officer of the Hong Kong Police Department as the gulf is based on that location, under his guise of Rhodes Griffith III. There's even a part where he is forced into a transformation and becomes a dragon; where he is wounded by paperlings that cut him up, but he does live
End of the story, Sin Tzu is dead, the Komodo Remnant are defeated and fall, this dragon becomes apart of Mikekolt's chest as a reminder and he bids his farewell to the gulf as he reunites with Drayko Ryder at the end who tells him of Stoick's campaign made against Draconia
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I guess I just lost the drive to keep going forward, but... that's alright. I hope you enjoyed reading up to this point, and thank you for reviewing... take care