Here is chapter 7! Thank you to everyone who reviewed and who has been reading my story thus far! I would also like to reply to reviewer who had some... Things to say about my story.
InARealPickle- You who is just a troll on who blatantly bad mouths other writer's fanfictions should be banned from this website. And Yes if you are wondering I did look at the reviews on your fanfiction story basically 95% of the reviews were writers complaining why YOU won't PM back on how there story is bad in so many ways. Which in reality there not. I mean don't get me wrong your review didn't make me mad but when I check out the reviews that is what made me mad. People who don't get paid for writing stories who do this for hobby and enjoy writing. Do us all a favor and stop reading fanfiction's and criticizing other's work when your story isn't that good to begin with. Other then that thanks for the review.
Sorry everybody for that. It just makes my blood boil when people talk bad about other's work when they put in hard work and do it for fun. His review to me didn't bother me until I read other's saying on how he always bad mouths there fics for the littlest things. But hey you will find people like that any place or website you go.
Enough of that. ON WITH THE STORY!
CHAPTER 7
Next day Graduation day...
Today was the day. Today was the day that Naruto finally gets to become a shinobi for Konohagakure no Sato. Naruto worked hard to get to this point through blood, sweat, and tears. The time was finally here. It was time for him to show to his comrades and the villagers he wasn't a demon and show how far he will go to such length's to protect the village. The village that his father and mother gave their live's for, which he would do if the time comes.
It was early morning two hours before the academy begun. Naruto was already awake and standing in the middle of training ground nine. There was a gust of wind and Naruto closed his eyes lifting his head up just a tad and let the breeze blow through his blond hair. Why was he standing in the middle of training ground nine and doing this? He was reminiscing. Reminiscing about all the long hours, all the hard work he put training with Kakashi and Tenzo at the training ground.
When the breeze stopped, Naruto opened his eyes and took one last look at the training ground he had spent six years training at and made his way towards the academy.
While he was making his way to the academy the villagers gave him strange looks as if they didn't recognize him. Naruto couldn't help but not keep the smirk that gradually graced his lips. It was a good feeling that they didn't recognize him and grateful of Kakashi getting his new wardrobe. Because if they did notice him, they would probaly would have tried to foolishly apprehend him to not get a shot at graduating the academy. Heh keyword tried.
Even though he will protect the villagers once he becomes a shinobi but he wasn't one yet and he will protect himself and he was not going to let the villagers bully him anymore. The smirking blond deciding not to walk anymore decided to shunshin to the academy with that said, he left in a swirl of wind and the blond was gone with no trace of him being there.
Naruto was in front of the academy and started making his way towards Iruka's class. Naruto didn't need to be there for another hour but he was just excited of becoming a shinobi he just couldn't help but be early.
Naruto opened the door to the classroom and he saw Iruka at his desk probaly grading some papers or something. Iruka looked up and saw a blond with two bangs framing his face with a blood colored red cloak with with black flames coming from the bottom of his cloak and his sleeves. Iruka looked at the boy who had alot of similarities to there deceased hokage, Yondaime.
Iruka looked at the boy with calculating eyes and one distinctive feature he saw on the look a-like Yondaime were whisker marks. 'Whiskers?' Then it finally clicked.
"N-Naruto?" asked Iruka with a perplexed look.
Naruto grinned ear to ear and Naruto replied "The one and only, Iruka-sensei!"
Naruto couldn't help but sweat-drop as he saw Iruka put his hand in the tiger seal and repeated over and over "KAI (Release), KAI, KAI! Why won't this genjutsu dispel! You can't be Naruto!" yelled a shocked Iruka.
"And why would you say that Iruka-sensei?" asked a confused Naruto. I mean sure he did change his attire but he wouldn't of thought that Iruka would do this.
"YOUR EARLY! AN HOUR EARLY!" yelled Iruka making Naruto face-fault.
"I'M NOT THAT BAD!" Naruto fired back which in return gave Iruka a tic-mark.
"Naruto you have the worst attendance and tardies in this academies history! I'm even surprised you get a chance to pass the academy today. But Hokage-sama was rather insistent that I give you a chance, so I am. I was actually about to leave to go get you to make sure you were here on time so you didn't get another tardy on your last day. I'm just tempted to pass you so I don't have to deal with you are your tardiness next year. But since you are here you saved me sometime to actually get some paperwork done. So I'll see you in a little bit. Oh and before I leave Mizuki should be here in fifteen, twenty minutes. Also, please do not do any pranks while I'm gone or at all for that matter." asked Iruka with a pleading voice.
"I promise I won't do any pranks today Iruka-sensei. You have my word." Naruto replied and recieved a thankful nod in return by Iruka.
"Ok, well I'll see you later Naruto. I should be back before class begins." with that said Iruka left with a stack of papers in his hand and walked out the door.
Naruto looked around the empty classroom and decided to sit in the back of the class. Naruto was excited today was the day. No more sitting through Iruka's boring lectures (even though he was hardly there), and now he gets to go on missions. He knew he had to go on D-ranks to start off but that's what Kage Bushin was for.
While Naruto was waiting for class to begin, he saw his fellow classmates started filing in either one by one or some in groups. Also like usual the brooding king AKA Uchiha Sasuke walked in with his horde of his fangirls in tow. And true to Iruka's word, Mizuki showed up twenty minutes later. About five minutes after Mizuki showed up Iruka came into the classroom.
After about ten minutes everyone was at the academy and Iruka began roll call. "Hello everyone, class is in ses-" Iruka stopped in mid-sentence after he noticed he didn't have his students attention.
Iruka cleared his throat, cracked his neck and back before using his jutsu that he created himself, The Big Headed no Jutsu. "SILENCE!" Iruka yelled and inwardly patted himself on the back seeing that everyone seemed to quiet down and were paying full attention towards himself.
After everyone quieted down Iruka started roll call and going through the names on his list until he reached Naruto.
"Uzumaki Naruto." said Iruka.
Naruto raised his hand and replied "Here."
Everyone in class jaws dropped well most had there jaws dropped. Some of the girls in the class had small blushes grace there faces. Was that really Naruto? It couldn't be.
"What are you all staring at?" asked a confused Naruto.
"Your actually here?" "Your on time!" "Your not wearing that horrid orange jumpsuit anymore!" were most of the replies he recieved from his fellow classmates. Which in return, Naruto could only sweat-drop.
"Alright, enough! Today as you know, is the genin graduation exams. There are two parts to the exam. The first, is the written exam consisting of basic knowledge you should know of being a shinobi. The second and the last part of the exam is the ninjutsu portion which consists the three basic academy jutsu. Any questions?" when he recieved none he past out the papers for the written exam.
"Ok, you have thirty minutes to complete the written portion. After the thirty minutes are up I will call time and you will stop writing. You will hand me your test and sit back down and wait to be called for the ninjutsu portion of the exam. After your name is called you will go to classroom across the hall where Mizuki and I will conduct the Ninjutsu portion of the exam. Once you pass, or if you pass, you will recieve a Konoha hitai-ate. After you recieve your hitai-ate you may leave, but you must be back here in two days for team placements, at eight in the morning sharp. AND THAT MEANS YOU AS WELL, NARUTO. That is all, you may begin." finished Iruka and was pleased to hear pencil hitting paper after he finished.
Naruto looked at his test and saw that the test was on basic knowledge of being a shinobi like Iruka said. While Naruto was writing his answers to the questions on his test he felt as if someone was watching him. Naruto looked up from his test and looked around the room. He saw his sensei Mizuki eyeing him down with an evil smirk which unnerved Naruto.
'Why is he staring at me like that? Whatever I'll look into it later...' Naruto thought to himself. Naruto continued with his test before he was finished with five minutes to spare. Naruto answered enough of them right so he could pass the written portion. He didn't want to answer all of them right because he was still keeping his mask up until he graduated. He promised Kakashi so he will keep his mask up... for now.
After the thirty minutes were up Iruka called time. Everyone in class stood up and gave there test sheets to Iruka and sat back down and awaited for the last portion of the exams to begin.
Iruka begun calling out names and one by one the shinobi's in training went to the room across the hall for the last portion of the exam.
Naruto was the last named to be called. 'It's time! Finally...'
Naruto stood from where he was sitting and made his way to the room across the hall. Naruto opened the door and saw Iruka and Mizuki sitting at a long rectangular desk. Iruka smiled at Naruto and said "Are you ready, Naruto" and he recieved a nod in return.
"Ok, the first jutsu I want you to perform is the Kawarimi no Jutsu." said Iruka as he threw a chalk board eraser at Naruto's head. There was a poof of smoke and there was log that was laying where Naruto once stood.
Naruto appeared from the window that was in the classroom with a grin on his face.
"Great job! Ok next is Henge no Jutsu." said Iruka with hope in his eyes that Naruto might actually pass.
Naruto nodded without using handseals which Iruka noticed as well as Mizuki. Naruto henge into a perfect replica of the Sandaime hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen.
Mizuki seeing what was happening he mentally seethed. 'Dammit! What is going on. He could never do these techniques last week. If he passes what am I going to do about the Fūin no Sho (scroll of seals). Maybe, I can still find a different way to trick him into getting it for me..."
"Fantastic! Now Naruto, the last and final one I'll like for you to perform is the Bushin no jutsu. The minimum number of bushins I would like for you to do, is two." Iruka said.
Naruto inwardly groan. Why did it have to be a regular Bushin? Oh well, time to give a shot.
"Bushin no Jutsu!" there was a small smoke cloud when the smoke cleared it revealed a clone of some sort that looked half dead and pale as can be. Even it's clothes were pale laying next to the original Naruto who was crying anime tears.
'Or maybe not' thought Mizuki. Iruka face faulted and Mizuki had a menacing grin that went unnoticed by, Iruka but not Naruto.
"Dammit it! It seems I still can't perform the Bushin. Iruka do you mind if I do a different Bushin?" asked Naruto looking at Iruka pick his face off the ground. Literally...
"Yes you may." replied Iruka who was praying to Kami that Naruto passes. Mizuki raised and eyebrow the only other bushin he knows about was the...
"Kage Bushin no jutsu" Naruto said which shocked Iruka that Naruto knew a B-ranked Kinjutsu that could possibly kill some jounin. There was a puff of smoke when it cleared, there was ten replica's of Naruto standing there with grins that threaten to split there face.
Iruka face was gaping like a fish but he soon snapped out of it and threw Naruto a Hitai-ate which he caught and said happily "You Pass! Congratulations Naruto! We will see you in two days time for team placements!"
Naruto smirk and wrapped the Hitai-ate around his forheard letting his bangs fall from the sides and frame his face. He was a shinobi of the Leaf and he was going to represent konoha proudly. While Naruto made his way out the door he caught a glimpse of Mizuki glaring at him. Naruto just shrugged it off like he would do with the villagers.
Outside the academy...
Naruto made his outside the academy with a grin and his arms resting around his head showing off his hitai-ate proudly. Naruto saw his fellow classmates outside being congratulated by there parents and other family members. The grin on Naruto's face slowly turning into a frown once he saw that nobody was there to congratulate him. No father, no mother, or no family.
Naruto just started to walk, where he didn't know. Naruto past the parents and there children that past the genin exams and there they were again. The whispers and the hateful glares.
"How could they let that... thing become a shinobi?"
"That damn demon, maybe we will all be lucky enough that he will die on a mission."
"Ha look at that. No one came to congratulate the demon hmph, figures no one cares for the damn thing anyway."
The comments just kept coming and to Naruto's enhance senses he heard every single one of them. Once Naruto, was out of sight he shunshin away.
The only other person who saw and heard everything was Mizuki who smirked and had one thought on his mind 'Gotcha, now all I have to do is convince him and the Fūin no Sho will be mine'. thought Mizuki leaving in a swirl of leaves. Once Mizuki left, the crowd of people burst into a puff of smoke as if they were never there.
With Naruto atop the hokage monument...
Naruto was sitting on top of the fourth's head looking over the village the frown still ever present on his face. Naruto continued looking over the village for about another ten minutes before a voice broke him out his sulking.
"What's wrong Naruto?" a familiar voice said. Naruto didn't need to turn around already knowing who it was.
"What do you want, Mizuki-sensei." replied Naruto dryly.
"Well, I came here to congratulate you on passing the genin exam and becoming a genin. It's probaly really hard not having parents to congratulate you on this special occasion. Especially with all the villagers giving you a hard time." said Mizuki with a reassuring smile and taking a seat on the ground next to Naruto.
Naruto narrowed his eyes at his 'sensei' and replied "What are you getting at, Mizuki."
"I'm not getting at nothing. I just wanted to say congratulations since no one did besides Iruka and I. There is something I would like to ask you though?" Mizuki said gaining Naruto's attention.
"Yeah, and what is that?" replied Naruto looking back over the village.
"Why haven't you tried to get revenge against the villagers that seem to spite you for even the simpliest thing such as breathing?" Mizuki ask gaining the blonds full attention.
Naruto shrugged and laid down with his arms behind his head and looked at all the puffy white clouds in the beautiful blue sky. "I don't know. If I just started getting revenge on everybody I saw or who treated me wrong there wouldn't be much of a village left and I'm not strong enough to do that."
Mizuki inwardly smirked and thought 'Hook, line and sinker. Now to reel him in."
"What if I told you there was a way for you to get this power and strength to get back at all the people who wrong your whole life." said Mizuki.
"Ok, I'm listening." replied Naruto which he recieved a sadistic grin in return that didn't go unnoticed by Naruto.
"Now I'm only going to tell you this once. In the Hokage tower there is scroll called Fūin no Sho. The scroll is on an alter in the two doors down from the hokage's office. Inside of said scroll are powerful Kinjutsu with these kinjutsu's we could bring down all of the elemental nations if we absolutely wanted to. And most importantly your revenge against the villagers that you so happily crave!" Mizuki said standing up with a menacing smirk on his face.
"Ok but if we do this we will have to meet up somewhere and leave the village. Once they find out, they will be after us as long as it takes to get that scroll back from what you said it contains. So what time do you want me to steal the Fūin no Sho and where should we meet up?" asked Naruto with a determined look on his visage.
"Here. This will tell you what time and a map where we will meet up at. It's a small shack just a little ways outside the village walls. Be there by two in the morning and we will leave this kami forsaken village, once I get there." said Mizuki and recieved a nod in return. With that said, Mizuki left in a swirl a leaves but he never notice the smirk the gradually graced his lips.
Naruto looked around to make sure Mizuki was nowhere to be found Naruto said "Did you get all that Hokage-Oji-san and Kakashi- onii-san?" asked Naruto out loud after he finished there were two puffs of smoke when it cleared it revealed Sarutobi Hiruzen and Hatake Kakashi. Kakashi and Hiruzen nodded and made there way to Naruto.
"Yes, we did Naruto. I can't believe Mizuki would betray Konoha in such a way like this." said the aged hokage in clear shock.
"Hokage-sama what should you have us do. Do you want us to subdue Mizuki and bring him in for questioning? Or do-" Kakashi was cut-off by Hiruzen raising his hand for him to stop.
Hiruzen sighed and replied "Naruto will continue out with Mizuki's plan and Naruto will subdue him. Naruto it's time to put Kakashi's teachings to the test and see how far you've grown. Kakashi you will watch from the shadows and assist Naruto if he needs it or if there is more of my shinobi that decided to become traitors of this village along with Mizuki. This is a A-rank capture and subdue mission. Naruto can you handle this?" asked Hiruzen with a serious expression on his face that showed failure was not an option. Hiruzen knew of Naruto's capabilities and knew he could do it. Besides being trained by some of his best jounin in the village for six years he had no doubt in his mind that Naruto could defeat and subdue Mizuki.
"Hai, Hokage-sama. This is my first mission as a konoha shinobi and with my nindo on the line I will not fail!" replied Naruto which he recieved a grandfatherly smile and a eye-smile in return.
"What time does he want you to steal the Fūin no Sho, Naruto?" asked Kakashi.
Naruto opened up the paper slip that Mizuki gave to him and replied "He wants me to start the operation at ten at night and he wants us to meet up at a shack west of the village walls. It's about an hour from the Hokage tower. So I would have to wait three hours for him to get there... What the hell am I suppose to do for three hours!" Naruto said in frustration which he recieved a eye-smile in return.
"You could just pretend that you are waiting for me if you want. I'm normally three hours late so it shouldn't be to hard." Kakashi said and recieved a glare in return by said blond.
"Maybe I could learn a jutsu out of the scroll while I wait eh Hokage-Oji-san?" asked an excited Naruto which recieved a sigh in return.
"I wouldn't recommend doing that Naruto. We will see you at ten tonight alright?" Hiruzen didn't let Naruto get a chance to argue and left in a swirl a leaves along with Kakashi.
Naruto pouted for a second before a smile crept to his face. "Heheh he said he wouldn't recommend doing it. He didn't give me a direct order. So I know what I'm going to do for those three hours. Who has two thumbs and gets to train out of the Fūin no Sho, yeah you know it this guy!" Naruto said with a shit eating grin and left in a swirl of wind.
Two in the morning outside of konoha's walls...
Naruto was breathing heavy on his hands and knees with the Fūin no Sho laying out in front of him. Naruto had trained for the past three in a half hours with the complex kinjutsu out of the scroll. Which were alot harder then Naruto would have like but he still learned a new jutsu he thought would come in handy. Naruto smiled to himself with the accomplishment of learning a kinjutsu in a little over then three hours but he was cut out of his musings by a voice.
'Do you copy, Naruto?' asked Kakashi through his ear piece.
"Yes I'm ready. Is he almost here?" ask Naruto through his.
'He should be there within the next minute. Remember to ask him what we told you. We need to know who is after the scroll specifically, and we would also like to know if there are any others working with or for him. He's here I got your back if you need it.' replied Kakashi who was waiting to strike if Naruto needed him. This was Naruto's mission and it was time to see if he can handle his own against other trained shinobi. Kakashi knew Naruto wasn't going to lose knowing Naruto, but it was better to be safe then sorry.
"Copy." Naruto whispered to Kakashi while tying the Fūin no Sho to his back and awaited for Mizuki to arrive. About ten seconds later Mizuki appeared on a branch over head.
Mizuki had shoulder-length white hair with a slight hint of blue. He had green eyes and wore the standard attire of a chunin and wore his hitai-ate bandanna style. He also had two overly large shurikens on his back.
"Were you followed?" asked Naruto gaining Mizuki's attention.
"No, but I'm actually surprised you could steal the scroll without anyone noticing." said a surprised Mizuki.
"Well I can thank my pranks on that one. It taught me to become really good at stealth and hide my precense quite easily after awhile. I even gave the Anbu the slip multiple times even when wearing my orange jumpsuit." replied Naruto with a smirk on his face remembering all the pranks he did when he was younger.
"I guess that came in handy didn't it. Ok, toss me the scroll and let's head out before anyone notices the scroll missing." said Mizuki holding out his hand waiting for Naruto to toss him the scroll.
Naruto took the scroll off his back and was about to throw it to him but before he did he asked "I have a question, before we go I would like to know where we are going after this?"
Mizuki let out a frustrated sigh and replied "We are going to Otogakure to meet someone there."
"And I'm assuming we will be giving this scroll to them when we get there. Do you mind if I ask who?" asked Naruto examining Mizuki and saw he was getting more and more frustrated with Naruto as time passed.
"What's with all the questions?! If you must know it is one of the legendary sannin, Orochimaru. He will give me, what I have most craved for the longest time since I was your age, power. Uncontrollable power." replied Mizuki losing his patience while holding out his hand again and replied "Now, give me the scroll and let's go!"
"OK, but let me ask one more question. Is there more shinobi we are meeting up with us or someone from our village or another village?" Naruto ask again and making Mizuki furious.
"NO! NOW GIVE ME THE DAMN SCROLL BEFORE I'LL KILL YOU MYSELF!" Yelled Mizuki losing his cool and holding out his hand again.
"Ok geeze stop getting mad for crying out loud. Oh and one more thing before we go you might want to take a look behind you." said Naruto with fox like smirk on his face.
Mizuki turned just in time to get a bone crushing punch to the face that sent him flying in the opposite direction by said fist. Before he could crash into something there was a black chain with red kunai-like spikes that shot out the ground and wrapped itself around Mizuki's waist. It twirled him around before throwing him back to the place where he was dealt the bone crushing punch.
Mizuki saw Naruto jump in the air above him before being heel kicked in the face and plummeted to the ground below creating a small crater where he landed. Naruto landed gracefully on his feet and waited for Mizuki to picked himself off the ground.
"That actually hurt, you damn demon." replied Mizuki while standing up on wobbly legs with blood coming out of his mouth. Mizuki spat out some of the blood that was in his mouth and said "It's to bad you have to die tonight. I was going to kill you on are way to Otagakure, but I guess right now is better then any." said Mizuki while taking off one of his giant shuriken and jumping up to one of the nearest tree branches above.
Mizuki started to spin it in his hand and threw it at Naruto. Naruto stood there with a blank face and before the shuriken could reach him a chakra chain shot out of the ground and went through the handle of the shuriken and threw it back with the same velocity.
Naruto went through a set of handseals and yelled out "Shuriken Kage Bushin no Jutsu! (shuriken shadow clone technique)" The one overly large shuriken turned into eight and headed for Mizuki. Who had a look of shock ever present on his face of what happen but recovered quickly. He wasn't a chunin for nothing. Jumping out of the way of the shurikens that threaten to tear him into pieces which instead tore away the tree he threw the shuriken from. Poor tree...
After Mizuki was out of harms way, Naruto was already pressing him back with little difficulty. Mizuki tried his best at defending against Naruto, but he was relentless. Mizuki notice that Naruto was going for pressure points to disable his limbs. Which luckily Mizuki dodge just in the knick of time on most but once he dodged he would get hit in the face, ribs, or stomach for his troubles.
Mizuki jumped back and stopped about twenty-five yards away from the young blond. Mizuki was barely standing on his two feet and if looks could kill Naruto would've been dust.
"What the hell are you.." asked the beaten and bruised chunin.
"Who me? Uzumaki Naruto we met before right?" asked Naruto with a nonchalant look.
"Don't play games with me! You can't be that demon! Someone as worthless as him who has nobody or who nobody likes could be this strong! I should have killed you already but I haven't even laid a finger on you! You were the deadlast a nobody... but how... I don't understand! I should have this power, NOT YOU" Yelled Mizuki taking a kunai out of his kunai pouch. Making his last ditch effort which he tried to kill the blond Kyuubi jinchuriki. Keyword tried.
Naruto looked at Mizuki with cold harden eyes that showed no compassion, no sympathy, no fear, just coldness. 'Worthless, I'll show him who is truly worthless.' thought Naruto.
Mizuki smirked after he saw he was mere inches away from Naruto's throat with his kunai. Eight inches... six inches... three inches... One inch... Before Mizuki could celebrate there was only one thing he heard, just one simple word. "Boom." 'Naruto' said before blowing up in a small explosion. It was a head on explosion so Mizuki took the brunt of the force. Mizuki was sent flying back and impacted into a tree that left a crater in said tree, before sliding to the ground unconscious. Mizuki was smoking with singes all over his body, that jutsu could've killed him if he put more chakra into the clone.
Naruto stepped out behind a tree and put a chakra suppression seal on the smoking man. Literally."Ha, worthless you should look in the mirror pal, but if I were you I would wait like a couple weeks cause you look like you came from hell and back. Heheh I need to right that one down, that was a good one." finished Naruto taking out a scroll and put Mizuki in a containment seal so he couldn't escape even if he tried to.
Naruto heard clapping and looked at his sensei of six years that was like a big brother to him. "That was amazing, Naruto. That was an excellent use of the Bushin Daibakuha. Especially, that you just learned how to do use the technique. You did well on your first mission as a genin. I am proud to proud to be called your sensei." said his lazy sensei and brother in everything but blood.
"Let's go and give our report to Hokage-sama." once he recieved a nod in return Kakashi put his hand on Naruto's shoulder and they both left in a swirl of leaves.
Hokage Tower fifteen minutes after three...
"Excellent job, Naruto. Even though you didn't listen to me and still looked in the Fūin no Sho, I'll let it pass. You did well, and as a reward your payment for a A-rank mission." said the aged hokage with a proud smile on his visage and handed the blond genin and envelope. Naruto looked inside of it and gaped like a fish. There was enough money in here to go on a three month eating spree at, Ichiraku's. He wasn't going to do that, but be responsible with his earnings he recieved.
"Thanks, Hokage-Oji-san! Not to sound rude or anything but can I go home and rest, I'm tired as hell." asked Naruto and recieved a grandfatherly laugh in return.
"Of course you can, Naruto. Kakashi and I will finish up here while you go rest. Remember to take your photo for your shinobi I.D. card tomorrow afternoon." replied Hiruzen.
"How could I forget. Well, anyway I'll catch you guys later!" Naruto said leaving in a swirl of wind.
After Naruto left Hiruzen looked at Kakashi before asking "Do you know what are my two greatest decisions I've ever made as hokage uptill now, Kakashi?"
Kakashi raised his lone eyebrow and ask "No, what are they Hokage-sama?"
Hiruzen let a small smile grace his lips before replying "One of them was, stepping down as hokage and chose Minato to become my successor."
"And the other Hokage-sama?" asked Kakashi with and interested look.
"The other one is that I let you become Naruto's sensei. Naruto was so lonely as a child but you saved him from that Kakashi. You became a brother-like figure to him, you trained him, and took him under your wing. Now look at him, you have trained him into an excellent shinobi. I am proud to say that was my greatest decision as Hokage uptill this point."
Kakashi eye-smiled and replied "Thank you Hokage-sama"
"No Kakashi-san, Thank you."
END OF CHAPTER 7!
Thanks for reading. Also tell me how I did with the fighting scene in this chapter. I only wrote a few before and I'm curious how I did. Constructive criticism would be nice as well. And I know I'm not the greatest writer not even close by a long shot but if you tell me what I could do to make the story better it will be much appreciated, Thanks!
A/N: I will be editing my story with one of my friends who will help edit all of the grammatical errors I have throughout my story. Or atleast try to get them all. When I take breaks from editing I will be working on the next update. I will start with the prolougue and so forth. Also I do agree with a couple reviewers along with InARealPickle (fu*ker) that the first chapter wasn't that well written or convincing. So I will be rewriting some if not most of the chapter. I will inform you all with each update if I edited or not.
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