In Two weeks this story will be deleted to be updated with a higher quality and (hopefully) better flow writing. First three chapters are done and oh my god, is it so much better and I'm happier with it.

There's going to be SOME deeper lore and a hell of a lot more CONFLICT planned. There's a GIW arc...

So, all my dear readers and new readers is there anything you want to see specifically?

It's gonna be a while but the ending will mostly stay the same, it's gonna be more than 23 chapters.

Teamwork will also be updated, just this is first.

First Chapter rewrite can actually be found here:

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