Author's note: I know I have other projects that need working on, but this has been impeding further progress on those. Blame Monika for infecting my mind. JUST MONIKA JUST MONIKA JUST MONIKA JUST MONIKA JUST MONIKA JUST-
Ahem. Sorry about that. Anyway I thought that since I'm writing a story where there aren't any voice actors that I could give some recommendations for who's voices I'm thinking of when I write these characters. Along with remix battle themes for certain characters.
(Note Player is not included because he's meant to be something that you can imprint yourself on, though a theme for him would be appreciated)
Monika- Canon voice heard during 'Your Reality', theme is simply Your Reality, but metalized. Look it up on YouTube, actually look all of these up on YT.
Flowey- The one used in 'Undertale the Musical' by Man on the Internet (MoI for short). For a remix battle theme I'll be using a Your Best Friend Remix from Kamex, so check it out!
Toriel- One heard in Undertale Genocide The Musical by Lemon Light Productions, separate from the above Musical.
Napstablook- Undertale the Musical (MoI)
Sans- Djsmell. That's kinda obvious.
Papyrus- Undertale the Musical (MoI)
Undyne- Either Man on the Internet's or Lemon Light Production's, both are pretty equal.
Alphys- Undertale the Musical (MoI)
Mettaton- Lemon Light Productions
Asgore- Either MoI or Lemon Light
Asriel- Undertale the Musical (MoI)
Chara- Khtl113
Frisk- Headcanon, do as you please.
The other Dokis- As there is few canon or fanon sources for them, do as you please. Though personally I'll be using Jacksepticeye's.
Now, it is totally fine if you don't want to use any of these voices. In fact if you have a better voice I'll update it. Also if you want to create music for Monitale I'll sponsor it all over my page, so hey if you can remix I'll take it. Anything that can be used as boss themes that combines both Undertale and Doki Doki Literature Club music, with emphasis on one or the other depending on who your creating the music for, say for Yuri or for Undyne.
For Player though, I wouldn't mind if someone created a new theme for him, not a battle theme though. More like a character theme, like sans, undyne, or His Theme. Speaking of which, Monika's character theme is 'Your Reality' but just as a piano with no vocals. Again though, I wouldn't mind if someone created music.
Art is also welcome, and I will sponsor that too.
Disclaimer: I don't own Doki Doki Literature Club or Undertale, however I do own the plot of this story.
Player looked at her as he floated next to her. He was having a bit of a lapse in Judgement. "Uh, Monika." He said tentatively.
"Hmm, oh, yes Player?" She asked, looking up at him.
"If, um, when you finish the game, I'll send us back, Ok? Unless by then you want to stay in this world, but I'll be honest, I don't know what happens at the end." He said, giving her a smile.
She returned it. "Oh, Player, whatever makes you the most comfortable my love." She said, before turning back forward, and stepping through the door.
Inside, as Player expected was Flowey. Now it was finally time to see what she would do. Mercy or Fight. Pacifist or Genocide, or maybe a neutral...
Monika
Walking into the next room, Monika noticed a small yellow flower. It had a large smile painted on it's face, and two small black eyes. "This is weird.." She whispered to Player, who merely laughed. "It gets worse." He said.
As she approached she heard soft music notes. Du du du du, they went, going both high and low. She wondered if that was going to be a constant thing.
"Howdy!" The flower said, with a pleasant. "I'm...Flowey?" He cocked his head to the side, looking quite confused. "Wait a minute.. your not Fr- Er, never mind!" He suddenly stopped his thought. "This'll be way more fun." He said, returning to upright position he was once at.
"Anyway, you don't look like your from around here, huh?" He asked sarcastically.
"You have no idea." Monika whispered.
"Well, I can't let that be, can I?" Flowey laughed. "As your new Best Friend, me, I should be the one to explain to you how things work around here!" He said, smiling. "C'mon pal, come a little bit closer!" Flowey said, gesturing toward her with his head in a very friendly manor.
Monika couldn't help the smile that crossed her face. This guy must have been the tutorial, and as such would have to be a very friendly character. Sure, basically a robot as far as she knew, but still pretty nice.
Stepping closer to Flowey, Monika noticed everything get a bit darker, except for around her chest.
"See that heart down there?" Flowey asked, and waited her response.
Looking down at her chest, to her surprise there was a small pinkish colored heart floating just a few inches past her chest. Poking it, she realized that it didn't feel like an external object, but rather like and extension of herself, her own body. Suddenly, she felt far more passionate about the things she cared about. Player, the Literature Club, her personal life, her..friends.
Sparing a glance at Player, her heart burned with even more passion as she watched him glance between Flowey and the Game's files.
"That's your SOUL! The very culmination of your being, everything you are is contained in there." He laughed. "Well not everything, but most things."
"He shouldn't be saying this. It's not in the script." Player whispered to himself, quite confused.
Monika paid him no heed right then though, she was far to engrossed in what Flowey had to say.
"Anyway, your SOUL is pretty weak right now, but don't worry. It's easy to make your SOUL strong, you just have to get lots of LV!" He said, cheerily.
"What's that?" Monika asked, crouching over the flower. She was quite interested in seeing what he had to say, this world's mechanics were super interesting.
"What! You don't know what LV stands for?!" Flowey asked incredulously. But there was something was off about the way he said it, like he was feigning it all. It put Monika a bit on edge, but c'mon, he was the tutoriel, how bad could he be, right? "Why, LOVE of course!" He laughed, as though he was chuckling at her silliness. "You want to get more LOVE right?" He asked, and Monika sighed.
"More than you know. You see, once I get out of here, there's...someone that I'm going to spend time with, someone that I love." She said.
Flowey seemed to almost be disinterested. "Yeah, well, while your down here with us, maybe I can be a good substitute for them." He said, motioning for her to get back, which she did.
"Down here, LOVE is spread through-" He suddenly winked and summoned several small white things. "Little, white 'Friendliness Pellets'!" He laughed.
"Now, catch all of these with your SOUL, you can catch them with your body, but if your SOUL catches them then you'll get even more LOVE!" Flowey laughed.
"Ready?" He asked. "Catch all the Friendliness Pellets with your SOUL!" He commanded.
Monika however squinted at him. Something didn't seem right about this whole thing. As the Pellets moved towards her, she lightly dodged them, making sure that not even her clothes touched them, she didn't quite know if she was going to find another pair anywhere around here.
After all of the Pellets whizzed past her, Flowey looked a little...confused. "Hey, lady. You missed them." He said, before suddenly shifting back to his happy look. "Let's try that again!" He said happily and tossing several more Pellets after her.
She dodged again, eliciting a laugh from Player, but only a small one. Glancing back at him, she noted that, despite him watching with intrigue, he still looked a little confused, and maybe even a bit...concerned.
"Is this a joke?" He demanded. "Are you dumb or something? RUN. INTO. THE. BULLETS!" Flowey commanded. Throwing more 'Friendliness Pellets' at her.
Monika deftly ducked beneath them. "You..you tried to KILL ME?!" She demanded, fury rising in her chest.
"Ha!" Flowey laughed, his face twisting into a demonic smile. "Of course I did, YOU IDIOT!" He cried, laughing at her. "Let me tell you the REAL truth of this world." Flowey laughed, his voice now twisting to a lower and darker tone. "In this world, it's kill or BE killed, why would anyone pass up an opportunity like this? You have someone that willingly pours their heart out to you? You take advantage and take whatever you want from them. It just so happens that what I want from you is your SOUL!" He yelled. "So, be a friend and DIE!" He said, suddenly surrounding her with Friendliness Bullets.
Monika looked around, these were going to much harder to dodge than the previous ones. These surrounded her completely from all sides, and she was too tall to duck below them and too short to get over them.
"Ha~" Flowey laughed. "Too bad for that poor FOOL that you want so desperately to get back to, he's never going to get to see his sweetheart ever again. How hilarious! I'll be sure to kill them too once I get to the surface, I'll make it slow and painful too!" He laughed madly.
Monika could feel something rise in her chest as the Bullets started after her, it was her SOUL. "This thing wants to kill me?" She thought, clenching her fists with anger. "He wants to steal me away from everything I love" She thought as her SOUL lit up in burning Passion.
Player
Looking between Monika, Flowey's pellets, and the File Menu, Player was worried. The Pellets were getting too close to his Monika, where was Toriel?
Suddenly the File Menu demanded his attention, as it was flashing a bright pink sentence that read as: *You are filled with PASSION.
"How odd." Player whispered, before shrugging. "Must be her SOUL trait." He said, before speaking a louder-
Monika
"You are filled with PASSION." Player said, and as the pinkish flames spread from her SOUL to her body, Monika had to agree. She was filled with a Passion for the things she loved like no other. SHe was filled with enough Passion to fight back.
Extending a hand out toward one of the Bullets she watched as it was lit up with pinkish flames-the same that covered her-and dissolved. Both Flowey and her love seemed to be confused.
"What!?" They both cried. Flowey, however, was the only one to continue talking. "How are you still...Oh, I see. THAT'S your power then." Flowey seemed ecstatic.
Monika didn't care. This Flowe-this weed was dead as far as she was concerned. She took a step forward, and glared at him.
"Well, girly, let's see just what you can do." He said, lifting four long vines up from the ground, and summoning a few Bullets, his face twisting into his darker look.
Also the music changed, the sound that had played previously was suddenly moving much faster than before, like it was a boss battle.
That was perfectly fine for her. Clenching her fists and charging forward, Monika dodged the Friendliness Bullets that streaked towards her, and landed a solid Punch on Flowey's face.
While this happened however, her Player was freaking out. "THIS SHOULDN'T BE HAPPENING!" He cried. "THAT'S NOT CODED IN HERE! THERE IS NO FLOWEY BOSS BATTLE!." He shouted again, before quickly calming himself down and sighing. "OK, this can all be explained by swapping Monika and Frisk's files, maybe the game is forcing a fix like in Doki Doki." He said, and was satisfied with his answer.
For about five seconds.
"OK THE DIALOGUE AND FIGHT CAN BE EXPLAINED, BUT THE MUSIC CAN'T! THE GAME CAN'T JUST CREATE A WHOLE NEW SONG!" He said, and then. "Well, at least it's sticking to the game's usual cheapness, this is just Your Best Friend remixed."
Monika didn't have time to hear the rest, as at that point she had already left the punch on Flowey's face.
"Hah! A meesely five damage?" He laughed, and Monika noticed a small red number five pop off of where she hit him at. "You're a WEAKLING!" He laughed, striking her with two vines, they were blocked by the pinkish flames surrounding her, but weren't burnt away for some reason.
"Keep surviving!" He laughed. "I haven't gotten to fight in this form in a while!" He chuckled, throwing several more Friendliness Bullets her way. Monika went to dodge them, but was suddenly struck from the side by two vines and was slammed into them anyway. Her shield was holding up, for now, but she knew in her heart (pun totally intended) that her one form of defense was going to break soon.
Rushing forward again and leaving a barrage of punches on Flowey's face and body, Monika smirked. Each punch was doing about five damage, and she wasn't going to let up until this flower was dead!
Suddenly she was struck from all sides by all four vines. Monika went flying backwards, and the flames around her disappeared. Landing on her back, Monika held her arm above her eyes to shield it from the dirt that had been kicked up by her fall, and saw Flowey was approaching her, the dirt beneath his stem shifting as to allow him to move. "Well, that sure didn't last very long." He laughed, summoning a bunch more Friendliness Bullets around her. "Too bad, I never get to do that anymore. Oh well." His eyes narrowed. "D I E" He stated as the Pellets started after her.
Monika shut her eyes and called out. "Player!" As she waited for something to save her.
When nothing happened she opened her eyes to see a white furry hand extend downward and launch a fireball at the small yellow Flower. "Aah!" He said in an oddly adorable way as he was knocked away by the fire.
"What a terrible creature, torturing a poor innocent girl." A soft and gentle feminine voice said with a hint of disapproval.
Monika looked up at the womanly creature. She was, for all intents and purposes, an anthropomorphic Goat-Woman. Under normal circumstances Monika would have been terrified, this would have been weird. But considering that (A. She was a sentient game character, (B. She had just tried to fight a talking flower, and (C. This woman had saved her, Monika was feeling actually kind of happy.
Her face didn't show it though, she was shocked that such a being could exist. "Ah, do not be afraid my dear." She said, giving a placating smile. "I am Toriel, the caretaker of The Ruins, I come here every day to see if anyone has fallen down. Tell me, what is your name?" She asked, offering Monika a hand to get up, one that Monika accepted.
From behind them she heard Player give a happier sigh. "Oh thank goodness, Toriel I was worried that you weren't going to show up for some reason." He said as he approached. Then he realized that he couldn't be heard by anyone but Monika. "Oh yeah, I guess you can't hear my thanks. Heh."
"My name is Monika." She said. Then, tossing a small wink to Player behind her, she added. "Just Monika." She said the words in a knowing way, like it was a special in-joke between the two. And, he supposed, that she was correct.
"Well, Miss Monika, Come, let me show you through the Ruins." She said, offering her a hand to lead her. Monika accepted, and the two walked out of the room and into the next...
Author's note: Well that took longer than expected. Sorry about that guys. I have a few other things that I need to keep up with as well, and this got put on the back burner. Do note however that I won't give up on this, I swear. Anyway, what do you guys think? Have some art? Some Music? SHare it with me and I'll add it to both my profile, and I'll sponsor it for the latest episode of Monitale! Now, onto reviews.
.great.23000: Your story will get a far way. Dear fellow Monika lover. I mean even though I may be a girl, I absolutely cherish Monika as much as you do. You shall get far, you along with Monika, stay DETERMINED!
Me: Thanks, and I'm glad to see that more people are Monika fans, makes me happy.
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Vivien2001cica1: Can I be the Vice Captain of the Monika Guard?
Me: Yes, now we must go set up some traps to capture Monika haters! So we can turn them to the light known as Monika!
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tennantApostle: Cool idea! Normally I like to leave reviews with paragraphs upon paragraphs of constructive criticism, but there's only one I can think of for this story; namely, that it's too short. Given that you only posted it 16 days ago, that can be forgiven.
Me: Thanks, and I look forward to reading your long reviews, I quite enjoy those. Don't worry about it being too short, I have plans to do Pacifist, Neutral, and a NON-CANON Genocide route, along with a possible season two if your up to it.
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1eragon33: so the player is replacing Chara right so then Frisk Chara are both in Monika's place that can go either very well or very very poorly. also I ask that you treat Chara(their just a kid one who killed themselves trying to save their friends) correctly I'm a member of the Chara protection Squad, also I agree monika deserves better.
Me: Actually the Player was just dragged along with Monika, however I like your idea of Chara and Frisk being together in place of Monika. But it comes into conflict with a plan I have for a season two if people want one. Of course I could always change it a bit, but even subtracting the Season two idea there also comes the problem of something else. Don't worry, if/when Chara appears, I'll definitely treat them with respect. Thanks for agreeing with me that Monika deserves better than what she got.
Well, that's all the big reviews so
Until Next Time True Readers!