Okay, Here I am ahead of schedule with bad new.
Gods, I hate having to write this when nothing interesting has even happened in the story.
But here we go: I had a bunch of friends read copies of this and give me feedback on what I had and what I had planned.
They were truthful about it and didn't sugar coat stuff, which I really appreciated because I get carried away with my ideas and get too into a single part and don't think everything through..
Over all, It boiled down to me not being ready for the sort of stuff I had planned and my tendency to over complicate stuff with systems when I use them (they've read a bunch of my other drafts and all said the same thing this time as well).
I don't want to abandon this idea, Since I love JJK and Naruto Crossovers, Not enough of them out there in my opinion.
But I made this story more out of impulse and in a moment for inspiration that has long since died down.
If anybody wants to Adopt the CT from this and use it for themselves, go for it.
You can Inbox me and I'll explain all I can about the idea if you want and the original idea for the Domain Expansion.
But I'm going to be putting this story on the shelf of failed Half baked moments for me.
I am working on something to replace this.
A "new" Naruto story that I sort of left to the wayside when I first got into Fanfiction about Naruto.
I wont spoil too much about it here, but there wont be a system and the MC will be taking a route I don't see taken often.
So stay tight, and for those who enjoy my writing and wish to see more.
You will, It'll just take a long time for me get to a good point, since I also have an Original story I'm doing world building for.
I might post that somewhere else like Scribble Hub or AO3, But for now, I got to say goodbye for the next few days until I get my shit together and that I'll see those who did enjoy this extremely short ride later.
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