Hello Again!
For starters, I thank you for the nameless guest who read and reviewed this story. This way I'll learn on the faults and improve upon it later on and hopefully you'll continue on reading and reviewing.
And now I will answer the pointers regarding the issues behind the OC itself:
1) In the original plan, The OC was supposed to be a 24-yr-old part-timer playing GBN who ends up in Azur Lane world the same manner as Kuonji, and from there the story will proceed where he becomes the naval commander of Azur lane as he meets more Kansens along the way. However I decided to give the OC a little more room to grow on character development and more attachment to the AL world, by making him younger and landing him in a different timeline where the anime/game's story-line is currently set, so other than a few select Kansens he won't be encountering multiple voluptuous women anytime soon.
Basically, I intentionally made him a boring OC and placed him in a pre-current Azur Lane timeline to show more character development as the story progresses.
*Also, the decision to make the OC a 15-yr-old kid was a homage to the original Gundam Series, as the 0 Gundam was selected to reflect the RX-78-2
2) Admittedly, I was re-watching Gundam 00 during the time I was writing this story, so I ended up choosing the 0 Gundam as the base Gunpla. However, in this Story mission he accepted that have Secret Conditions it will also have several Restrictions on later stages, such as no beam weapons can used on a battle or only selected Gunplas are allowed on a certain stage. So he will using different Gunplas along the way in later chapters.
3) I may have overlooked this, since I intended Kuonji to be your typical straight-build level modeler, where he can only build Gunplas with nub funnels, screaming seams on connected parts and no paint at all but he can take down a national competitor using it. In a way, he is somewhat similar to Reiji of the original Gundam Build fighters and Shimon of GBF Try, a pro-level fighter but an outright newbie as a modeler/builder. The 0 Gundam he has right now was an actual straight build fine-tuned by asking help from Old man Zel, because the latter kept mocking Kuonji for his poor building skills. Kuonji loses his cool and challenged Old man Zel to a GP Duel, in which the boy loses badly but impresses the hobby shop owner by his control over the Gunpla. This battle made the store owner offer the boy to teach him building techniques so that he can perform better the next time they would duel.
In other words, though Kuonji is a talented fighter he is still a beginner in terms of Gunpla Building, and the 0 Gundam he was using is a slightly polished straight build created to test his current skill as a builder.
4) That was the initial idea, since like the Sirens she seems to have the same capabilities to travel between dimensions and timelines. However, there is very little info I have about Alterprise or code T, and their objectives are still too vague for me so I shot down the idea and opted for an OC instead, which I randomly picked an alternate Centaur(I attempted to make her design a bit different ). In the later part of this story Key Point G will be at times directly involved in Kuonji's actions, which is still in the planning stage for now.
Other choices I had were a grown-up Eldridge, an alternate Yamashiro and Friedrich der Große .
It's going to take a long time before I upload the next chapter, so for now here's a little Extra Scene:
Sometime After Kuonji have logged out...
Lowering her head she then closes her eyes and places both of her hands to her chest, much like how one would offer a prayer to a higher being.
"Please, let that boy be the one who will lead us to our salvation..." Cerea mutters in a pleading tone, "With his help, we can change our world's fate... we can save our sisters and friends... We can save Azur Lane..."
While Cerea was in her deep thoughts a human figure can be seen on the other side of the ship's deck, standing behind the setting sun and somewhat obscured by the shadow cast on her. Despite barely visible one can tell that the human figure is a white-haired adult woman slightly taller than Cerea, wearing something like a black and white shirt paired with a skirt underneath a tattered coat and scarf.
"What are you trying to pull here?" Said by the mysterious woman who began walking towards the Elf Avatar, "Dragging along someone from another world just to create your own version of Inquisitor plan?"
Slowly opening her eyes but having an angered expression she replied, "I believe I've already cut ties with all of you... and if you're going to ask me to join you 'playing games' with Observer, then I humbly refuse..." and later Cerea had her glaring eyes locked on the woman who is now beside her.
"You don't understand... It'd be better if you stop this now." The obscured woman returned the gesture with her own glare, "What you're doing is pointless. All you did was adding another wood into the fire, and it won't end well for you."
"...I will not back down." Cerea retorted with a determined look on her face, "I will do whatever I can, in my own terms, in my own power to save this world...!"
"You've been warned..." After saying this the woman jumps out of the deck and vanishes seemingly without a trace, as if she was a mere illusion to begin with.
"..." Cerea shows a bitter expression as she stares at the woman's previous location, looking somewhat lamenting on her dialogues with the mysterious woman.
"You and commander were the ones who taught me about being passionate to humanity, so why..."
"Code G, no..." Cerea then uttered, "Do you... Do you really think what you're doing is the right thing to do, Ms. Enterprise...?"
Just a few seconds after Kuonji's 0 Gundam had left...
"Illustrious-sama! Illustrious-sama!"
"Illustrious! Where are you!?"
A pair of girls somewhere between ages 5-8 years old are striding onto the water surface at high speeds. One of them is dressed as a maid, complete with a head dress and a blue hair accessory at her right side with her long white hair waving to the wind. The other one is a blonde in a bowl-cut hair style, wearing a red British Royal Military uniform paired by a mini-skirt and a red mantle covering her right arm.
Both of them also have an odd equipment similar to Little Illustrious', the maid having a triple-barreled gun coupled with Torpedo launchers connected to what looked like a ship's stern with its funnel attached to her back while the other is on the same case but on a slightly larger scale, a four-barreled version and a deck-like structure connected below it.
"I'm right here~!"
""Ahh!""
Waving from atop of her ship's deck edge the girl in white calls out to the two, by which they came over immediately to check up on her.
"Bel! Wales! Thank goodness you two are unhurt!" Little Illustrious grabs each one of their hands and asked, "How did you made out from the Siren's Ambush?"
"Ms. Hood came into our aid right after we got separated." The young maid, Little Bel as she was called, replies to her taking notice of her wounds and exclaimed, "More importantly, you're badly hurt! Are you feeling alright?"
"Those Sirens had you cornered and surrounded. How did you managed to fight them off on your own?" The young knight-like Wales asked in a curious tone.
"That is..." Little Illustrious then answers with a bright smile, "A Warrior of Light came to my rescue~"
""...Huh?"" Both Little Bel and Young Wales blinked thrice out of astonishment, and afterwards incredulously looked at each other.
"Eheheh~" Little Illustrious kept her smile, implying that her words are true and sincere.
Smiling in a satisfied look Young Wales said, "...Fine, let's leave it like that for now. Ms. Hood and the others are worried sick and waiting for us. Let's hurry back-"
"Hey Lusty, are you okay?"
"If you can hear us, please answer!"
"Illustrious-chan!"
A group of little schoolgirls and an accompanying blonde female young adult are standing on the ocean surface just beyond Little Illustrious' ship, with some of them calling out to their friends. And just like Little Bel and Young Wales they also had ship rigging as equipment.
"Oh, looks like they're here already." Little Bel stated as she glanced at their friends waiting for them, "We should go with them as well."
"After this you're going to tell us what kind of adventures you've gone through here, alright?" Said Young Wales to Little Illustrious, faintly smiling as she grabs her hand.
"Okay~" Little Illustrious replied in a cheerful tone, and goes along with her two friends joining the others.
Meanwhile...
GBN Server, Perisia Area
Returning alone to Perisia Area Kuonji had himself do some stretches and short jumps trying to psyche up his dulled mind.
"That was some hardcore mission alright, and I'm still only on its stage 1..." Contemplating from the previous mission, "Guess I'll have to thank that old man Zel, if I was just using my own Straight-Builds I'll have a harder time completing the stage, it's going to be a bit more trickier to take down all those high-level Daggers alone..." Kuonji was checking the mission results on his holo-panel, "Well, at least I have a reward for all the trouble I've gone to beat those extra enemies..." and then he opens his Inventory to check out his rewards, "Now then, let's see how they taste like..."
Starting with the round-shaped one the boy unwraps his first candy and gobbles it up in one go. After chewing and finally gulping it down he makes a creepy blissful smile.
"Mmm, this is VR but I can't believe I can taste something this good..."
Kuonji was in cloud nine feeling heavenly bliss as he munches on the bonus rewards, until he swallows up a grayish cube that can easily be mistaken for a chocolate nugget.
"A-Ack! Craack! Uuckhh...!" The boy had felt a 'cracking' sensation on his teeth and then, "Ptweeehhh! What the fudge!?"
The supposedly cube-shaped chocolate snack turns out to be a very hard Inedible Item, by which he spitted out in an instant. When the boy picks up the said cube he inspects it thoroughly, having a curious yet scrupulous face. From what he can tell it's a gray cube scribbled with golden lines that looks like electronic circuits all over its surface.
"...What the hell is this?"
