Ok, so there will be an interlude within this story. I deeply apologize for this major inconvenience, as it ruins the reading experience for everyone.

However, the user SamsonOfOld has been abusive in the reviews. He says, and I quote, "Get good nothing about this is originally you copy and paste," and "You know its pretty pathetic the first three chapters of the story were complete trash and nothing more than trash. I skimmed over a few paragraphs next two chapters then found this story to be trash."

Firstly, you barely know sentence formation and spelling. I took the time to correct some of your spelling errors. You have no basis to try and diss my story.

Secondly, I took the time to look through your profile. You are a homophobe and a snob. You have no stories, no attempts. You are a horrible individual.

This story is an attempt at writing, my second attempt at writing something that people will enjoy. I understand that I am not perfect, nor necessarily good, but it is here for me to improve. The stories will get better as I write more.

You do not care for the feelings of others. Instead of giving constructive criticism, you try to tear people down and stop them from writing, due to your pathetic, lackluster, and outdated world outlooks.

I WILL be writing more of this story. I will finish it. I will reach my dream of entertaining people without people like you bringing me down.

What will happen to you? You will remain an incel, a useless, uncontributing member of society. You will never be successful. You will never get your way. Your jealousy will never hinder anyone else from success. If you have any significant people in your life, they will leave you.

On a happier note, I will try and update more, work has been bogging me down lately.

To the people that like this story, you are the people that encourage me to go on, to keep improving. Thank you very much. You keep me on this platform. Spread the word of this person, and mass report them. Don't let vile people like them ruin the platform for everyone else. Thank you for your time.