These updates are just me spilling my thoughts while I edit the chapters. Yeah, so I just wanna make a short ramble about something else. I've been trying to spruce up. The romance. I'm just gonna come out and say that I wanna do better with it. How so? Well, I don't want to take away every sweet moment, but I either fix upon them, or just outright remove some of them because they made me cringe.
The reason I had the romance was just for romance's sake. Now, looking at it, I just tell myself "what the hell were you doing". I say this because romance should be a commentary on the characters as people, why they got into one, and what it does for their characters. This sort of stuff is important to think about. Not only like in the aspect of, is this character unfaithful, or love triangles and shit like that, but like, growing up mentally, as people. I know this kinda sounds long-winded, but my take on it is this, "I don't just want to make a romance for romance's sake, I want to use it so I can further expand the characters".
Any two characters can hook up, but I think it's about how the relationship grows as the two involved grow as people.
So while this might not show right away, after the 30th chapter is where I can use it as a tool, at the most.
(7/14/2023) Okay, yeah! P3 reload is a thing now. And did you guys see everyone's new artwork? Pretty good, and don't even get me started on Fuukas'! In the words of Ren from Higurashi, "KYUTE! I want to take it home!" That being said, they once again changed the shade of teal for her hair, which at this point, is something I expect. Also, I know the va did Makima from CSM. Haven't watched the anime, but I am currently up to date with the manga. But for the rest of the VAs, they're fine from what I've heard of them. I wish them luck in voicing these wonderful characters.
So yeah, that's about it. With the release of P3R, I want to get through the rewrite before its release. As a celebration for the remake, and so I can just get everything up to date before then (and so I can play the game without a worry in my mind). Though, my word isn't exactly reliable, but I will endeavor to meet this goal. So until the next update log; see ya.
(8/18/2023) Well, that extended trailer for reload was disappointing. But hey, we might get some news from the people who're gonna play it at Gamescom.
Also, I put in my bio that I am searching for beta/proofreaders. If anyone is interested, please contact me on discord: Aleph#6252
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