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So I've decided to look for someone who can edit the chapters in English, (which have already been translated with Google) you don't need to edit everything, just correct the most important errors such as pronouns, this is voluntary for anyone who wants to do it and although I can't paying with money I can give access to chapters before being published. (Although this is a bit of a cheat since I would still have to let him see the English chapters before they are published so that he can edit them.)
You only need to know English and Spanish, not too much Spanish, just enough so that you can read the original version if necessary to correct errors that google translate left.
Of course if I can't get a volunteer I'll need to find someone who can edit it for cheap.
If you're interested in helping me with that, then I'll leave the ko-fi I just did.
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I'm also an illustrator! so i can also let you see some drawings of the characters in advance if you want to see my work look me up on twitter as Xpressure_line.
Now yes, you can enjoy the chapter I hope you like it.
20: Of men and steel.
Daniel looked at the crops he was planting, they were ruined, destroyed, crushed.
Carol tried to hide her flushed face, not daring to look into his eyes. Daniel sighed.
"… I'm sorry"
Daniel waved his hand, accepting Carol's apology without issue.
"It's not your fault, I should have known that training so close to the crops wasn't a good idea" What happened was pretty silly actually.
Daniel was practicing with Carol, he had been trying to further master his new ability to shoot air currents. he needed to be able to use it in combat and Carol of course is the only person he can practice on.
Even a combat session between the two is useful to continue honing their combat skills, Daniel had already taught Carol everything he knew, she could easily master it with him as a guide and his perfect memory.
The only thing he lacked was combat experience, yet he wasn't that far behind Daniel. therefore he began to study different types of martial arts together with her.
It is much more difficult for a single person to learn martial arts moves without a teacher. trying to figure out those same martial arts without someone to practice with makes it even more annoying.
Daniel couldn't exactly go to a teacher to learn, his physique was very different from that of humans and teaching him in the same way would not get the expected results.
In the same way he could not participate in training fights with other people since they would not even move him. he would have to loosen his body completely and that was no different than throwing himself to the ground.
Besides that he wouldn't learn correctly by constantly holding back.
That's why practicing with Carol was the most effective method.
Both possessed superhuman strength, durability, and speed, both could perfectly remember anything they saw, and both could fly.
With the two of them, understanding and using the martial arts recorded by humanity was possible.
Of course they couldn't use exactly the same type of martial arts that humans use. the kind of fight that goes on between people capable of doing what they can do is very different from any human fight.
They were just using humanity's martial arts as a reference to create their own fighting style.
Complementing each other, they had made great strides.
Daniel could now fire his air blasts easily and calculate and measure the power behind them properly.
Carol had started trying to learn the same ability, only she didn't have as much control over her strength. so when her air currents are shot she tends to hit without caring about her surroundings.
And for that reason their crops ended up destroyed.
"We'll have to keep working on your control" cleaning the dirt from his body Daniel looked at the sun on the horizon about to rise.
"Your parents should wake up soon" Carol also looked at the sky and sighed, she shook her dark hair, concentrated a little and listened to her parents' breathing.
"I still have a few minutes"
"So you're going to help me clean…"
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Malibu, Calif.
Tony looked at the new armor in front of him, mark 4 had certainly been a bit of a challenge, he had optimized his energy shield system as much as possible. improving efficiency had been difficult but not impossible.
Not to mention the new melee energy weapon system he had managed to create, that was easier, he just had to modify the way the shields were formed, which had required modifying the projectors.
Tony had had a recent relief in his fight with Stane, conventional weapons were no use.
Bullets and missiles hadn't even scratched Stane, to say that all the work against him had been done by his fists was an understatement.
His fists and repulsor rays.
Only by using both had he managed to stay in the fight against Stane, of course I don't disregard the help that his cold air expulsion system gave him, without it he would now be a boiled egg.
Thus for mark 4 he had chosen to increase the efficiency of melee and medium range combat using energy beams.
First he improved and optimized the energy system so that the shields could maintain their toughness without wasting extra energy.
He also improved his repulsors and added several weapons that used energy beams. he had to harness those three arc reactors after all.
And of course the energy weapon system, for simplicity it was energy shields molded in the shape of melee weapons, of course that was simplifying it.
Tony of course wouldn't do something so basic.
He had devised three forms of energy weapons that would aid him in future combat, Jarvis assisting him with simulations to verify their efficiency.
The first was an extremely efficient five foot long blade, being made of energy its edge was shaped in such a way that it could create nanometer scale cuts.
Jarvis's calculations showed that it was possible for him to cut through adamantiun due to the high temperature of the energy as well as its sharpness and hardness.
Normally such a thin blade would be brittle, of course one made of energy that was essentially a remoulded energy shield was anything but brittle. Tony had managed to keep the defensive properties of his energy shield making it extremely durable.
Of course making these cuts and maintaining that hardness cost energy and the more resistant the object to be cut was, the more energy was spent and the less energy its reactors had, the efficiency of this blade would drop.
Not to mention, he could project power outages from a distance! Only this cost even more energy and was less efficient than cutting directly with the blade.
In simple terms It was a good weapon to do considerable damage in a short period of time but useless in prolonged fights against something that could withstand his strongest cuts. it was essentially a trump card to land a killing blow on his enemies.
His second weapon was actually a pair of gloves similar to those used in kick boxing only with a more mechanical construction.
And this pair was made for prolonged fights unlike the blade.
For them he had actually done something interesting. Normally the constructions made of energy must have a security system to interact with humans.
After all energy is energy, touching it directly is still dangerous.
These wards were on his shields so he could interact with civilians and allies without harming them.
Tony had removed these knuckle guards from both gloves. This actually made him spend less energy but at the same time made them very dangerous to touch.
Unprotected power generated high voltage currents and extreme temperatures.
Every hit made with them would be like being hit by a meteor covered in lightning.
A normal person could turn to coal on contact.
These two weapons were extremely lethal and Tony had only created them for extreme situations. if something like stane appears again he would greet it with his new inventions.
And then there was the third weapon.
This was actually much less lethal, it was created to contain, essentially it was an energy whip that he would use to wrap his enemies, with the harshness of energy shields it would be very difficult to get rid of.
He did it thinking of Jarol and since he had to create an improvised cage, with this whip he could directly wrap his enemies.
Of course Tony hadn't completely given up on traditional weapons, Mark 4 still had some, but he didn't expect to use them against any real threats.
Looking at his latest creation Tony was quite satisfied, he had put his all into the mark 4 design, essentially it was armor that he would wear for a while.
No matter how smart Tony was, creating and advancing some things still takes time, Mark 4 would have to serve Tony until he managed to create that super alloy he was looking for, he didn't want to rely too much on energy shields, no matter how useful they were in the end were temporary.
His integrity, toughness and resistance depended on how much energy his reactors had, the longer a fight was the more useless it would become.
Not to mention that if he used his projection weapons, the energy expenditure would force him to end any battle Quickly.
Of course his gold and titanium alloy could still help him, it was still the hardest metal alloy on earth without counting adamantiun or vibranium.
But its toughness doesn't compare to energy shields, if something managed to hit him hard enough to disable his shields then his gold and titanium armor wouldn't last very long.
If he could create an alloy strong enough that he could opt out of energy shields then he could use that energy to power up his weapons.
Not to mention, he could combine the defense of the alloy with that of his shields when necessary.
Tony couldn't help but think on that day, how strong would Mark 5 be?
Even he couldn't imagine it correctly, after all he hadn't tried mark 4 yet, although simulations were made it was very different to see and feel it in reality than to see it in numbers on a screen.
Looking at mark 4 he wondered if Defiant would be willing to help test his new design.
He certainly wanted to see how he compared to him.
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Elsewhere, in a hidden warehouse, seemingly abandoned when viewed from the outside.
But its interior was very different, although crude, much advanced technological equipment was scattered around the place.
A young man with long dark hair looked at the screens that showed the image of a mansion seen from the sea.
"If I want to improve my creations I need that reactor…" the man frowned.
If it had been possible, he would have wanted to steal the plans quietly, the problem was that those plans were only in the hands of one person. he had tried to access the system but it was very difficult to do so without alerting him to the intrusion.
Realizing that Tony Stark had a real artificial intelligence guarding his cyber security had been fascinating.
Stealing silently had been impossible, in which case he could only do it directly.
I quickly type in an order and send it off.
[Start homework]
At the bottom of the shoreline under Tony's house.
Two humanoid figures stopped standing still, their mechanical limbs moving with inordinate power, their metal legs propelling them like ballistic missiles tearing through the seabed and shooting straight for the mansion.
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"Very well, Jarvis, I'll take a break. If something important happens, wake me up." Tony felt tired and decided to rest a bit now that Mark 4 was ready.
He got ready to leave, then all the hairs on his body stood up.
Before Tony could react two figures crashed through the walls around him, a metal fist impacting his face with enough force to shatter the metal and turn the stone to dust.
His pupils shrank, but his face was not instantly destroyed, a translucent layer of blue light absorbing most of the blow, even so his body was sent flying hitting several walls and smashing through them.
Tony's figure rolled to the ground and came to a stop crashing into one of his sports cars, he coughed from the dust and tried to clear his vision.
He felt a liquid run down his face and he reached out his hand wiping the blood that came out of his nose, installing that personal shield had been the best idea he had ever had.
When Fury showed up at his house unannounced he knew he needed a way to protect himself without his armor.
That's why he created an energy shield that could be projected using the energy from his chest reactor.
Of course it wasn't as good as the one that was installed on their armors.
Mainly because he had only installed two projectors on his wrists that looked like black watches and one on his chest. this didn't give perfect coverage like the dozens of small projectors all over the frame of their armor.
It still provided enough cover for it to survive most human weaponry.
Of course, having no armor, the impact was not reduced so much, Tony could feel that that blow almost knocked out all his teeth.
Before Tony could continue patting himself on the back for such a good idea, two figures came after him at great speed.
Tony tried to resist, but even though he now had an energy shield around his body, he was still a normal human.
Another blow to the face almost made him see stars.
A knee to his stomach made the food Peper had brought him threaten to come out.
Then he felt two pairs of hands trying to scratch the reactor on his chest, they wanted to rip it off him.
Fury filled his veins and he quickly screamed.
"Jarvis deploys the mark 4!"
Jarvis acted before his scream began.
The mark 4 that was just assembled ignited, using the two reactors inside it jarvis began to control it and accelerated to match 6 in an instant.
Tony only felt a sudden movement and saw his two attackers go flying.
I take a deep breath and wipe the blood from my mouth.
He ran to his armor which began to split into several pieces, the shield sensor on his body guiding each one to reassemble itself onto his body.
In a second his armor was on his body and Iron man was ready for battle.
[100% energy, 100% shields, 100% weaponry]
When he realized how troublesome and time consuming it was to don mark 3 he had devised a deployment system that would speed this up and allow him to don the armor at any time.
Now it was showing its usefulness.
His attackers came back just as quickly and now Tony got a proper look at them.
He had to blink to see if what he was seeing was real.
Their bodies were a combination of mechanical and human parts, a word instantly came to mind.
cyborg
"jarvis scan them"
[Understood]
"Okay junkies, I don't know what made you think attacking me in my own home was a good idea, but I'll let you know why it was a terrible idea."
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"Curse!" Sinclair pounded on his desk, the images on the screens not what was supposed to happen.
That first hit should have killed stark.
It seemed that she had underestimated him.
He gritted his teeth and typed in a new command.
Now that things had reached this point he could only continue with the course of action already taken.
There was no going back.
"Come on my Reanimen tear that armor off his body and show him how useless it is to hide behind it"
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Bang!
A Mighty One resounded throughout the mansion, the walls cracked, and a tremor began to spread throughout the entire place.
Iron man shot out destroying and going through several walls.
The reanimen followed after him in rapid motion, their bodies moving wildly and unpredictably.
Each blow sending a shock wave that shook the cliff where Tony Stark's mansion stood.
"Sons of bitches! My house!" Tony clenched his teeth and dodged the blows, he accelerated breaking match 10 in half a second, his fist impacting hard in the stomach of one of his enemies creating a gust of wind that broke all the windows in the mansion.
Surprisingly he did not pierce his enemy directly, instead he held his fist with his hands and prevented him from retreating.
The second revive took advantage of this, took Iron Man from behind and began to turn his neck trying to break it.
The thrusters activated and Tony smashed through his ceiling at the same time opening his palm and activating his repulsor beam hitting the stomach of the reviver that was holding his arm, sending him flying.
He took off the one behind his back and sent it flying directly through all the floors of his mansion.
Tony looked at the state of his house sadly, barely a few seconds had passed since the fight began but it was already beginning to collapse and the cliff on which it was beginning to visibly crack.
"Jarvis destroy all the files in the mansion database and move to my private servers in new york" if his house was going to be destroyed then he would do it himself.
He pointed his palms towards the mansion and from his back energy cannons shot out.
In half a second thousands of energy beams were fired faster than any bullet.
BOOM!
An explosion engulfed the entire place, the fire rose into the sky and the shock wave ended up destroying the cliff.
Tony waited looking at the place, then at inhuman speed a figure shot out of the smoke.
Iron man accelerated going forward. His fist hitting the reanimate's face creating a strong shock wave that cleared all the smoke around.
Another figure came out from the side tackling Tony to the ground, smashing him hard.
Its teeth tried to bite into his armor without success thanks to its energy field.
"Do you want a part of me?!" Tony had noticed, these things wanted to take the reactor out of him.
"RRARGG!"
The answer to his question was a roar right in his face.
"Then take this!" His chest glowed from him and a bolt of energy shot towards his attacker.
The reviver reacted quickly and dodged to the side easily and hit Iron Man's face.
the sound of metal crashing against metal reverberated throughout the place.
Before Tony could strike back another figure came from the side, kneeing him powerfully in the stomach.
Then both revives began to hit him Quickly trying to rip his armor off his body.
a shower of dozens of blows impacting against his body faster than sound.
[96% Power]
"Okay, time to get serious! Activate secondary energy weapon!"
Iron man stretched out his hands, the energy projectors around them began to work quickly, and at an astonishingly fast speed a pair of gloves made of pure energy formed.
Tony clenched his fist and swung his arm hard at one of his enemies.
BOOM!
The impact was so strong that the three figures were sent flying in different directions.
The hit reviver's arm was directly destroyed and ripped from his body, sparks, blood and mechanical parts flew out and his body flew uncontrollably hitting the ground in the distance.
"Shit!" Tony looked at the glove on his hand and couldn't help but gasp.
It seemed that he had underestimated the impact power of his new weapon.
He felt his entire arm tremble, even with his armor and shields he didn't think he could land more than 3 blows like that without breaking his own hand.
"Jarvis reduces the energy of the gloves by 40%"
[Made]
The other revive didn't wait for his partner to come back, instead he ran towards Iron man quickly.
Tony swung his fist once more but this time his punch failed to land, the reviver dodged with inhuman reflexes and took his fist in his hands, his iron hand began to spark and burn his temperature rising.
Tony quickly slammed his face away from him with a thunderous impact and laughed.
"Do you think I didn't think my enemies would want to block my blows?" Tony didn't say more than this, he wasn't foolish enough to reveal the secret behind it.
He accelerated breaking the match dozens of times and his fist hit the body of his enemy again.
BOOM!
A powerful explosion followed, this time less loud than the last but still powerful enough to send the reanimate flying hundreds of meters into the air.
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"No!" Sinclair gritted his teeth, he had lost... he knew it from the moment stark pulled out those energy gloves.
He looked at the images in front of him, the camera of the revive that had lost his arm was damaged and blurry, the second revive that was still complete still held but would not for long.
"damn" it looked like his plans would have to change.
He thought that two revives would be enough, the data he had managed to analyze from the battle between Iron Man and Defiant against Iron Burn was very accurate.
But he had underestimated Tony, as a scientist he had to know better, a true genius never stops advancing.
He swallowed his bitterness and decided to improve his design before trying again.
Even so he was still somewhat reluctant, losing his first revives was certainly a heavy blow for him.
"well every advance needs one or two failures before it is successful"
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Daniel flew quickly to Malibu, just a few minutes ago he was in Chile helping to lift large debris as a recent earthquake had collapsed a building.
Fortunately, he was able to rescue all the people and clean the area. He was about to do a quick patrol throughout Chile when an alert sent by Jarvis reached him.
To keep in touch with Tony, he had given him the phone number he used for his heroic duties as well as the sound frequency he could use to get his attention anywhere in the world.
He read the message, Jarvis was very clear and concise, someone had attacked Tony's mansion and now they were fighting.
Daniel then quickly hurried over.
I'm coming soon.
The mansion no longer existed and a part of the cliff where it stood was collapsed.
Daniel was worried, but before he could look for Tony he saw a figure flying towards him at high speed.
His eyes took in her form and his eyes sparkled with recognition.
That was a fucking revive!?
Without hesitation he sped up and his fist slammed into the Cyborg's face, teeth flying out and the reanimate crashing to the ground returning to the place where he was ejected from in the first place.
Tony saw Defiant hitting his enemy back and decided to seize the opportunity, quickly accelerating his fist crashing hard into the reviven's stomach and once again sending it into the sky.
Back and forth like a ping pong ball, Iron Man and Defiant pummeled the reviver mercilessly.
Daniel landed one more blow sending the Cyborg straight at Tony.
Then the second enemy returned, without an arm and with serious damage, the reviver still threw himself with great force trying to tackle Daniel.
Of course Daniel easily noticed.
He concentrated his strength on his fist, before he could strike a thought came to his mind, maybe he could try something new.
He remembered that he had read about this in a story, he didn't know if it would work but he definitely wanted to try it now that his draft control was more advanced.
He opened his fist and clasped his fingers together, slightly activated his core and grew his nails a centimeter, then moved his arm at full speed, his hand shot out with a palm slash towards the reviver's direction.
All the kinetic energy was concentrated in the tips of his fingers traveling to the edge of the tips of his nails, the air was compressed to impossible measures.
A thin, semi-transparent white line shot out with incalculable speed.
Then the reanimen stopped in midair, its figure seemed to have frozen in the sky.
Slowly his body split in two and what was left of the cliff followed, a cut so clean and perfect it reflected like the surface of a mirror.
Daniel frowned, looking at the long cut line that stretched farther than the human eye could see.
Too dangerous!
once he released that attack he had no control over it, if he hadn't held back more than half his strength obstructing his own attack while doing so it probably would have spread too far.
I look at his hand, his glove was torn to pieces, the tips of his fingers were bleeding and his nails were broken. the cost of forcibly cutting off the power of his attack halfway through the process.
He quickly took out a bandage and wrapped it around his hand preventing his blood from dripping down.
He looked over to where Tony was, the revive was still flying towards him.
He saw Tony's fist covered with energy hit and tear off the Cyborg's head, the impact resounded in his ears, he could even see how part of the vestebral column was torn off along with the reanimate's head.
I go down to them and look at the destroyed body.
now I could appreciate it properly, definitely a Reanimen
Her mind raced as she contemplated what this could mean for her new life and the world.
Was Sinclair or some version of him in this world? If that was yes then there were more people from the world of "invincible" out there?
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Tony deactivated his energy weapon and looked at the revive in the distance sliced in half, his brows furrowing at the long gash that stretched as far as the eye could see.
"You're a little late, I already had them cornered D-boy"
"Please don't keep showing off after a fight, I feel like if you keep doing it something bad is going to happen" Daniel quickly interrupted the playboy.
The memories of Stane were still fresh in his mind.
Tony choked and remembering what happened he couldn't help nodding.
"What happened Tony" Daniel asked, he wanted to get an idea of the matter and why the Reanimen appeared here.
"That didn't happen better! I was attacked by two cyborgs and my house was destroyed, it was my favorite mansion you know?" Tony looked at the ruins or lack thereof, everything had been destroyed.
Tony shook his head and let out a long breath.
"They wanted my reactor, they tried to rip it out of my chest several times… whoever did these things wanted to steal me" Tony looked at the headless cyborg with disgust and fascination at the same time.
His strength and power were terrifying, if he was still using mark 3 he probably would have lost.
Daniel thought about it, if it was Sinclair then wanting to obtain the arc reactor was logical, with it he could advance his cybernetic technology by leaps and bounds.
You would have to use overwatch to search the country database.
"I'll call Fury, if we can find out whose DNA is from the bodies used to create these Cyborgs we can find a clue to whoever attacked you"
Tony nodded, under normal circumstances he could have used the Rhodes influence, but the two of them hadn't spoken properly since their previous argument and brief talk at the press conference.
Shield wanted them on his team, right? Then he would let them help, they had to be useful for something.
of course that was when the reanimen's bodies exploded.
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Note
The Reanimen are here, I hope I portrayed their strength correctly, after all one of them was enough to kick mark's ass, two of them are serious trouble.
Fortunately for Tony he is still Iron Man and he never stops moving forward.
Mark 4 is here. It's not perfect but for now it's enough for Tony to face the coming threats.
On the other hand, I recently started watching DC / marvel animated movies and series, To give myself inspiration, I have to admit that I have several new ideas, I hope I don't overload this story with everything I want to do, so I have to think it over carefully.
By the way the power level of the characters will be closer to the comics than any live action movie ever made, of course I also don't want to exaggerate like those writers of the old comics who just threw all logic out the window.
I need a level of power that I can describe when writing and something that the reader can imagine.
So the power level may be a mix of what is shown in some animated series and comic book feats.
This is not to say that the characters will be weak.
Quite the contrary, as we can witness in this chapter Mark 4 is more than anything that Tony stark from the mcu has done except for the nano armor.
And I think the nano armor is more fragile than the mark 4
So that you can get an idea, I have no doubt that Tony with mark 4 could kill Thanos from the MCU 1 against 1
And seriously damage him even if he had the six infinity gems from the mcu (remember that these work differently than the ones in the comics)