Narootoe's eyes were like, gluded on the faraway stars, every one a small poiny lite in the endless dark sky, ya know? There on a cliff that looked all scary and stuff, with really old trees that looked spooky at night. The cliff was a place or somethin' they used in the mishion to catch a bad guy who knew stuff about som real bad jutsu. Like, really bad. They could blow up villages and stuff. It was crazy importint, they couldnt mess this up, no way.
Narootoe did some stuff with shadow clones and it was all risky and Sazucke was all strategic and stuff, but it worked out. But it was real bad too, 'cause it was all morally wrong or something. Innocent people got tricked, it made Narootoe feel all wrong inside. And Sazucke's pride was all hurt, so he was mad, too.
AN: OMG you guys don't get it! Stop complaining about the plot. It's SUPPOSED to be dramatic. And "GrammarGuru," what do you know about art? Your comments stink. Go away!
Narootoe knew it was Sazucke who was comin up to him, 'cause he knows him real well. And Sazucke was all like, "Why you always gotta beat me, huh?" And Narootoe was all sad and stuff. There were memories and stuff about Sakura cryin' and Sazucke bein' mad and feeling all weak and useless. And Narootoe was like "It's not like that," but Sazucke was all angry and grabed him and was like "You love making her cry!"
AN: Stop saying the dialog is bad. You don't get it! It's supposed to be RAW. This is MY story.
And there was more yelling and they were all like hurting each other with words and stuff, and Sazucke was all like "I can't trust you." And Narootoe was like "We're friends," but Sazucke said "Not anymore" and walked off, all cool-like.
AN: And to "ILoveProperGrammar," shut up about my spelling. This is my style. You don't like it, you can leave. I don't need you.
And Narootoe was all alone and stuff, feeling real bad and cold, and like, there was something wrong with his heart. Yeah, that's deep.
AN: Thanks to everyone who loves my work. Ignore the haters. They don't know what they're talking about. It's all about the FEELINGS. And if you don't like it, don't read it! It's real, it's ME, and it's AWESOME.