Regarding the promised update to the story structure and complete grammar overall. I've hit a snag, I am about 1/3 to 1/2 done with the initial rewrite, however, I've had a lot of things happen that have forced this to take a backseat once more. I Still plan on finishing the rewrite, but as is my custom, I won't publish any of the chapters until the whole thing is done to preserve continuity.